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Penname: Cullen Concession [Contact]
Real name: Robin Parrish
Status: Member
Member Since: March 10, 2009
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Reviews by Cullen Concession
 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist.  Why did Edward leave Bella?  And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?

Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?

THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010


Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation

 

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar

I love that your Alice is thinking for herself!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Closet Living

Love this chapter. Glad nbella has help!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: December 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet

Loved this intro!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

 

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: December 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail

Wonderful chapter! You did so great even with all you were going through

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: December 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Enough

What an intriguing point of view!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary

Loved the last sentence!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: December 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 - No

Wow just wow!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: January 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up

Carlisle is right. Bella did wrong as well.

 
Summary:

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Edward and Bella are reunited after the tragic events of New Moon, but things just aren`t the same. One night Bella finds Edward at his piano, will a tragic song from a broken heart be enough to mend the wound?

Songfic, Oneshot.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1220
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2009 Updated: April 26, 2009


Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: April 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Oneshot

Intriguing! Going to check out the song now.

 
Summary: Feature

AU version of the "New Moon" reunion scene. Bella is not quite as quick to accept Edward's explanation for his actions in leaving her.

 
Banner credit goes to addicttwilight2, who is the most awesome person on the planet!!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 45075
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: June 30, 2009


Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Saviour

Love it love it love it

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: May 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Sorrow

I really enjoyed Edwards apology.  Hopefully she will give him a chance even if it is rocky.  I didnt like the way they just reunited in Nm/Eclipse, without problems.  Bella's response here is more real.  I hope the soulmate aspect of it will bring her back to him.

Another great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed :)

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: May 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Seeing Through You

Impressive!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: May 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Remembrance

Great EPOV!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: May 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Hope

Oh no!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Follower

I am not okay with imminent destruction! Come on Jacob be an alpha and make this right!
Another fine chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks a million! :)

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Blind

Maybe it is Victoria? Probably not but patience was never Edwards strong suit! Please update soon!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Rest

Dirty cliffie. But I guess the clue in the note makes it ok! Great job!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Alive

Love it! You really captured how he makes her feel! Especially how he as a vampire still lures her but as lovers they are utterly captivated.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, so glad you enjoyed! :)

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Belonging

Loved it! Great job!

Author's Response:

Thank you!! :)

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Belonging

Loved it! Great job!

Author's Response:

Thank you!! xx

 
Summary:

Based upon Hagen of Baljan, Autumn Knights' Dream is a retelling of a Germanic fairy tale. It's an epic adventure involving intrigue, kidnapping, and finding true love.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 163407
[Report This] Published: April 19, 2009 Updated: October 19, 2009


Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Aro is terrible!

Author's Response:

He does have one or two redeeming qualities. They just aren't readily apparent. Thanks for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love Esme. Such a caring mom!

Author's Response:

I love Esme. She's such a joy to write about and write in her pov. Thanks for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I am sad to be all caught up!  You have really created a great story.  Can't wait to see how it all plays out!



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you. It's almost finished. Only a couple more chapters left now.

 




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