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Penname: Cullen Concession [Contact]
Real name: Robin Parrish
Status: Member
Member Since: March 10, 2009
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I adore Twilight Fan Fiction.  I love to beta read. 


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Seventeen Again by Ledybug Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1051]
Summary:

What if Edward and Bella acted like regular seventeen year olds? With all the passion, lust, and curiosity that comes with being a teenager. Would Edward be able to keep both monsters in check? And will there be other more disturbing consequences to his lack of control besides just giving in? Can their new love handle anything?

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A somewhat OOC re-telling of Twilight (with a few small plot changes) until Port Angeles, AU after that. Canon Pairings, Alternating POVs of Edward and Bella, Rated NC-17 for violence, language, a little alcohol/drug use, sexual acts and assault. If those topics offend you, please do not read.

Beautiful banner by: AchelleDenaliCullen


Categories: Twilight, New Moon Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Collin, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Liam, Marcus, Mike, Phil, Quil, Renata, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Siobhan, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria, Vladimir, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 82752
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: March 11, 2010


Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away

Very nice chapter!

 
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Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot

VERY WORTH IT!  SHe still has faith in him!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Hypothetically Yours

I can't wait to read his answer!  great chapter!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Mannequin

Love it!  Alice is an Awesome sister!

 
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Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Self Inflicted

I can only imagine that wet Edward would be difficult to control ones self around!!!

Please update soon. 

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Self Inflicted

CONGRATS ON THE BABY!



Author's Response:

Thanks! *HUGS*

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Building A Mystery

ROTFLMAO! THank you for pursueing the Bella/Alice relationship.

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame

Go Charlie!  Great chapter!

 
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Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal

Loved it!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family

WoW!  I can't wait to read about Edward dancing!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: August 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Leather & Lace

Is Edward wearing leather??

 
Summary:

Three months after Edward leaves Bella is still a zombie. She has not yet developed a friendship with Jacob. But one day she finds a human Edward at her door. How does their relationship handle Edward's newfound humanity? 

Another Edward turning human story, but it's different. Things still can never be easy for love. AU. 

Rated NC-17 for underage drinking and later on, violence. No detailed lemons. 

But fluff galore. 

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"The doorbell rang once again and I turned the knob to greet the person. I don't know what happened after that. I only remember a pair of beautiful emerald green eyes looking directly at me."

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 60446
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: April 22, 2010


Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Green Eyes

Intriguing!

 
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Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Shaving and Cake

Loved the CHarlie bit at the end!!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Brotherly Love

I hope that he tells Bella that he loves her enough to marry her!

 
Redemption by Lillie Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 94]
Summary:

James wasn't always evil. What made him this way? How did he know Alice? Maybe he didn't always hate her...maybe he loved her. My take on what their history might have been. Don't worry, I didn't break up Jaz/Alice.

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, James
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 23082
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2009


Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: April 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Dancing

Can't wait to read the next chapter! Where is Victoria during this?

 
Summary:

A hot day in Forks, in more ways than one.  How much damage could a little Sharpie really do?  Find out... 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6468
[Report This] Published: April 12, 2009 Updated: April 20, 2009


Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: April 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it!  Thanks for keeping it tasteful (no pun intended)!

I loved how Edward walked backward, emphasizing his grace.

It was a pleasant surprise to have him "mark" her and then erase the marks seductively.

Great story!



Author's Response:

Hahahaha!  Tasteful, indeed!  Well, I tried to keep it in character, so Bella would have a certain way of describing what she felt and what they did in a particular manner.  Hence it wasn't full of swear words or "vulgar" descriptions.  That's not how she would see it or describe it.  I have nothing against swear words or "vulgar" descriptions.  I love them when they express a character correctly.   Just sayin'. ;)

Thank you for picking up on the graceful bit there.  He didn't want to stop looking at her for a second, but he didn't want to carry her either. Go figure. *shrugs*  I just wrote what he told me to write.

I have always liked how Edward and Bella are so possessive of each other, and this was another way for them to show that.  Edward really likes his sharpie and has now decided to buy stock in the company.  He plans on using their product much more often! ;P

Thank you for reading and reviewing!  I am so pleased that you liked it! :D

 
Wild Thing by strangegreen Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 186]
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Bella seriously needs a break from Alice and wedding planning, and all that entails, so Edward packs her up and takes her camping in the wilds of Montana.  Hilarity may ensue!

 

Canon pairings.  Canon compliant plot. 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 21466
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: June 01, 2009


Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: When Life Gives You Lemons

Cute! 

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Itsy Bitsy

LOL!  Well he does like older music!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: How To Own A Lake

I thinkest this be good!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: What Dreams May Come

I loved the dream montague!  Funny stuff!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: The House of the Good Doctor

Ok, why did he walk so far out of the way?

Great, creative plot!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Afternoon Delight

Edward is just too much.  Very nice indeed!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Clouds on the Horizon

AWWW! They are going to play dress up.  As to the visitor, Edward didnt recognize the scent, so it has to be someone we have never met before.  Very interesting!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Scenes From a Daydream

Nice! 

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Itching to Explore

interesting!

 




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