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Penname: Cullen Concession [Contact]
Real name: Robin Parrish
Status: Member
Member Since: March 10, 2009
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Brotherhood by blondie, Roo Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 98]
Summary:

The Cullen boys go hunting. Jasper can't stop quoting the Princess Bride, Emmett can't stop quoting Monty Python and the Holy Grail, and Edward, rather put out, responds with Shakespeare. Hilarity ensues! Cowritten with the awesomely funny Roo and the Edward-centric blondie!

Amazingly in canon - believe it or not!


Categories: Eclipse, Crackfic Characters: Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 9835
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2008 Updated: August 04, 2008


Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: March 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Five, no, Three, Sir

What a riot!  Thank you guys I needed this!

 
Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3033]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

ALSO POSTED ON FANFICTION.NET


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: War in a Waiting Room

Nice chapter! I was good to hear Jacob vent. Can't wait for the outcome!

 
Their Singer by SarahJayne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 498]
Summary:

In Twilight, Edward told Bella that if her blood sang to James like it had to Edward, it would've meant a fight right there in the field. What if this was the case? Follow Bella as she is kidnapped and turned by James, and the Cullens' fevered attempts to get her back. Features James/Bella, but this is ultimately an Edward/Bella story. "NC-17" for language, situations, and eventual sexual content.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 34456
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2008 Updated: November 01, 2008


Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice beginning!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hopefully she will have newborn strength and break is neck!!!!!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Goodness, James is a little liar isnt he?

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Awesome!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I am with you! How exciting!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OME!  Seriously, poor Edward.

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Your story you can do or say whatever you want.  I love what you are saying in this story.

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

loved it!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

HOME! HOME! HOME! HOME!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love it when they purr!

Great Story!

 
Summary:

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Bella went cliff diving, but it didn't turn out so well. She broke her back. A decade later, Edward reappears in her life on the same night she loses her best friend and husband to a freak accident. Now a graduate student in Women's Studies, Bella isn't thrilled to see him. But when the Cullens re-enter Bella's life, they bring change, hope, and a new joint project that will require all their expertises.

Also, you can find a SPANISH version here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4829851/1/En_un_parpadeo

AND you can find images for various things like Esme's house, Edward's piano, Bella's wheelchair and Rose's car on my ff.net profile page:

http://www.fanfiction.net/~thatwritr

OR in my LJ gallery:

http://pics.livejournal.com/that_writr/gallery/000010z2

Special Update:

For personal reasons (a ridiculously full teaching schedule and being recently put in charge of a bi-annual local conference and ongoing project), I am no longer able to reply to reviews and questions. But that said, I wanted to give a BIG THANK YOU to EVERYBODY for the wonderful feedback and kind words that have been sent my way since the completion of this story in August 2009. I do still check my messages about once every 1-2 weeks and read *every* review. I just have too many to reply to anymore, but I didn’t want anyone to think I was ignoring her/him in particular, or didn’t appreciate readers taking time to leave a review. Writing this story was tons of fun and I’m thrilled readers seem to enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed the chance to write it. I can’t tell you how flattering that is!!! As I used to reply to all reviews, I feel a little badly about this decision, but work has been requiring virtually all of my time since the new (academic) year began.

Best to all of you in 2010 and beyond!

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 68 Completed: Yes Word count: 221619
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2008 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Hmmm...sometimes I think of Bella preaching from a pedestal.....what she says is right, but she seems to always be right.

I love the plot here.



Author's Response:

As you'll see in the very next chapter, she's not always right. Ha.  It's just that here, they are dead in her area of expertise -- although even at the end, Bella has to have Edward explain why the venom won't cure her.  So there are still things she doesn't know/get/understand.

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow.  I am enjoying this so far.  I like how youi are taking things slow.

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

here it comes!!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

GREAT GREAT Chapter!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loved the last sentence!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Sweet!  This helps solve her financial issues.  I wonder if Alcie saw this coming?



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews!  And yes, as you'll see, Alice did see this coming. :-)

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great career choice for Rosalie!  I am very excited to see where this is going.  Of course I know I have like 40 chapters to play catch up with!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  And yeah, there's a lot, but the "chapters" are really more scenes/parts, so it's not *quite* as long as it might seem!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love the pace of this story!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Sweet!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I wonder if ignorance will be bliss for Bella?

Love it!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Awesome. Awesome! AWESOME!!!!



Author's Response:

Again, thank you for all the reviews!  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and the pace of it!

 
Reviewer: Cullen Concession Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thank you for not dumbing down the conversations.

Author's Response:

You're welcome!

 




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