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Real name: Diane
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Member Since: March 11, 2009
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A glitch is intermitently preventing TwiliteAddict and I from responding to reviews for our co-authored stories.  Please know we value and appreciate each and every one and will be replying just as soon as we can!!  Thanks for your patience and reviews!   :D




About Me:


I'm a wife, mother of two who used to be a prospective whale biologist in Washington (not too far from the Olympic Peninsula--I can see Port Angeles from here on a clear day!).


Despite having played a Vampire in a local production of "Dracula" I had not heard of "Twilight" until the movie came out.  Go figure.  My typical cuppa is Sci-Fi/Fantasy, not Romance and never before vamp fiction, so my RL friends and family find it histerical that this genre has sucked me in so deeply!  :D  I have a google search for "Best Twilight Fan Fiction" to thank for finding the fandom in the first place.


 


I came for the lemons, but have stayed for the creativity.  And boy, am I glad I did!!!


 


I chose RosaBella as my penname over on ff dot net,  because I have a classic look that strongly resembles Rosalie, I love working on my Mustang with my father (having rebuilt it with him awile back- and didn't mind smelling to high heaven of gasoline and gear oil for 6 straight weeks to do it), but am Bella to my core.





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Cougar Revolution Anonymous One-Shot Contest  sponsored by EclipsedbyJacob, TwiliteAddict, and myself!


Huge thanks to everyone who helped make the Cougar Revolution such a fabulous good time!


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Winners Were Anounced 3/31/10


 




 Auction News:


I'll be putting up an orriginal one-shot based on a very steamy dream I had for the summer edition of The Fandom Gives Back to support Alex's Lemonade Stand. Be sure to look for it!


If you contributed either a donation or a story to the Fics For Nashville, go check out my offering, "Slavery of the Heart". It's Greek Togaward and Slave-girl Bella.


Huge thanks to justjasmie for placing the winning bid for my one-shot in The Fandom Gives Back story auction and to everyone else who helped make the fundraiser such a huge success!!


Congrats to CandraJade who topped the bidding for me and the histerical emo-loving TwiliteAddict in the Support Stacie Vampire Author Auction! Stacie Holeman (truelovepooh on LJ and in fandom) has been battling Stage III ovarian and breast cancer since March 2007 without the benefit of medical insurance. The Auction ended on Monday, Jan. 18 and raised 3,500 on Stacie's behalf!


Sincere gratitude to Kassiah and radiate689 for being the winners in the Spring Support Stacie Auction for my offerings for Forbidden Desire and Last Night in Paris!  They are now enjoying special preview status for their winning bids!




Birthday Creations and Round Robins I have participated in:


Happy Birthday Bella!: Round robin collaboration for Goldenmeadow's birthday. Bella/Edward smuttake. Mature audiences only. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5621886/1/Happy_Birthday_Bella_Round_Robin_Collaboration


Lady Lix and Her Bag of Tricks: Happy Birthday SlobberMonkey! Glass toys? Cleaning products? Furniture stores and sexin’ galore? A wee get well round robin for our slobber-monkey. Very RATED M for adults only. AU, hilarious hot, so bring your funny bone and leave your panties at the door. Oneshot silliness. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5657671/1/Lady_Lix_and_Her_Bag_of_Tricks


The Chop Shop: Happy Birthday Winterstale! Sit down, shut up, and hold on! Oh, & don't forget the clean panties in the glove box. Sexcapades ensue when a hot-as-hell Tennessee stranger pushes his 1/4 ton of steel into Rosie's garage! NC-17 Can't say this didn't come with a warning... http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5717312/1/The_Chop_Shop


Eight Days A Week: Happy Birthday RowanMoon! Carlisle and Esme go to their island for some much needed relaxation from their lives. Rated M for mmm, mmm, mmm, mmm, mmm. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5766139/1/Eight_Days_a_Week


April's Birthday Anthology: A collection of one shots centering around mythology for our one and only Gasaway Alley on her birthday. From the ladies of the Double Wide. We love you April! Happy Birthday! (I wrote chapter 4: Artemis Rose Blooms) http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5868460/1/Aprils_Birthday_Anthology




Fic I helped edit and added a few turns of phrase to:


Finding My Forever: by TwiliteAddict and TaintedDarkInuShemeeko Edward knows just what his uptight pre-med brother Carlisle needs -- a night out with a smart, sexy co-ed! What happens when Edward and his BFF Alice set Carlisle up on a blind date? The alcohol flows, sexual tension mounts, and lemons fly! Entry for the "Will You Marry Me Contest" http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5785761/1/


 




 About My Beta:


I am blessed to have the incomparable TwiliteAddict for my Beta/Beloved Twife and best friend a person could ever ask for! My stories truely wouldn't be the same without her Emo-Loving input!! ;D  And I'm even more grateful to fan fiction for bringing us together!!


If you are looking for fabulous emotional insight into Carlisle and Esme or Edward during the honeymoon, run over and check out TwiliteAddict's work!!!  Without her my stories would not be the same, she makes me reach deeper, take things to a more meaningful emotional place, and get even more descriptive!  Huge thanks, Twife/Yoda!!  :D 




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The Face I Can't Forget


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Chapter 8 Negligee






 Where to Find Me:


I love to hang out on threads, feel free to come play!


Forbidden Desire Thread: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=7865&st=0&sk=t&sd=a


 


Follow me on FaceBook : Rosie IslandBelle (please don't friend request if you are under 18).


You can also find me at the Writer's Coffee Shop Library.  It's got all the stuff I haven't taken the time to get validated yet.  And yes, I'm RosaBella75 there too (as well as on ff.net).  ;D


Sorry, I don't Twitter. My family would mutiny if I added another electronic addiciton. They barely tolerate my ff addiciton as it is!


Thanks for reading!!


 


Latest News:


If you're worried I've abandoned Forbidden Desire, don't! I WILL finish it, but I do have to appologise for the beyond sloth-like update times! I just cleared my plate and it has my full attention now (and I think my Beta and two friends just got out the whips!) so hang in there, it's coming! :D


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Reviews by IslandWoman221
 
Summary:

Love: foundered, fraught, feverish, fought for.  Figuring it out.  Poetic, poignant, permanent, not-quite-perfection.  AH, very rated M, Edward and Bella, Emotional and Beautiful.

Warning, graphic language.

Featured on The Fictionators: http://www.fictionators.com/2009/07/comeuppance-by-golden-meadow.html

Recced on the Lickable Lustorium: http://lickablelustorium.blogspot.com/2010/02/tempting-tuesdays-comeuppance.html?zx=a6d3f89f7ac4c74f

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 40234
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: April 21, 2009


Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: May 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Tit for Tat

Okay, I  guess I'm just slow. :)  I get it.  What  bugged me before was that I wasn't reading with cadence.  This shit is like poetry.  Ya can't read it like it's Gilligan's Island and expect it to satisfy! 

This isn't a story--it's more like prose.   It's just not fluffy bunnies--and that's a good thing!

 
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: May 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Marked

Damn, Jakey!  You go,guy!

I think I really like May!  My kind of woman! 

Thanks for not leaving him hanging!  Nice perspective.

Still a bit wordy for me, but very well written.

 
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: May 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Glorious

All sorts of insightful!  Deep in immagery, philosophy, and core wrenching bliss!!!  Something for everyone--mind, body, and soul!  Has to be savored and never rushed!

Beautiful ending!

 
Summary:

 

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After talking with Carlisle, and with some insight from Alice, Edward thinks he and Bella should test the waters of their physical relationship before jumping in, head first, on their wedding night.  Will desire push them into deeper waters or will they stick to the shallows?

Banner by: Anne Cullen

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 13807
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: February 04, 2009


Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: One More Time

"Okay kids, grab your suits...we're heading to the beach!'  (Mommy needs to jump into the {icy cold} bay --for an hour or two!!!)   Yeah, probably will take all day to cool down from this one! 

Damn, girl!  Whoo!

Now tell me again why we're not locking you in a room until you lock them in a room for another 4...to 16 chapters?!  LOL  ;D

I knew I liked your writing, but now I LOVE your writing!!!  Thank-you for such a delicious end to the cockblocking!  Couln't have been more perfect!!!



Author's Response:

Awwww thank you so much D!  This was my first fic so it will always be very close to my pervy little heart!!  You are so awesome girl!!!  *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*

 
Summary:

~From the author of In Pursuit of Normalcy and Missing Dawn~



What if, during the early stages of their relationship, Edward lost some of his carefully-maintained control with Bella one night?  What if his urges were precipitated by a force mundanely human and unavoidable?


This 3-part story is complete!


This story is a part of Twilight After Dark: A Naughty Smut Anthology Series.  Be sure & check out the other naughty stories in Twilight After Dark!



Smokin' hot TAD banner & TM&TM banner by the fabulous, talented, amazing achelle131, author of Vanity and Patience!


Categories: Twilight, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Esme
Challenges:
Series: Twilight After Dark: A Naughty Smut Anthology Series
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 20519
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2009 Updated: July 04, 2009


Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Mutual Satisfaction

So I'm wondering why this hasn't been nominated for any awards yet?!!!! If I'd found it a bit earlier, I certainly would have nominated it!  This is so good it should be cannon!  I think it really could have been if Bella would have gotten to the point where she was willing to get brave about her own modesty (she certainly was lusty enough in the books!  And might have pushed E more if he had slipped even once!)

Thank-you for writing this!  I too have been less than satisfied and am sooo glad you set your imagination loose for our benefit!!!  :)  This one of the most satisfying "what if things had gone here instead" stories I have read yet!  You delt with the subject with the perfect tone.  This would be very matter of fact in their world.  I can think of a place this could have gone (him loving her "trash") that would have been sick.  You're story most definitly wasn't! Just sensual use of a vamps food source!  lol

[Pretty sure my husband wants to thank-you too!  :D ] I'm reviewing this morning because I...put the computer down and...went to bed.  ;D

Tightly written and left me tightly wound!  Couldn't have been better!



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks so much!  I'm very glad you enjoyed this fic as much as you did!

And I agree that it wouldn't've taken much to get Edward's self-control to "slip."  Lol.  Glad you liked the blood stuff - it's not normally my thing, but when dealinf with vampire's it's just hot!

Again, thanks so much!  :D

 
Windows by goldenmeadow Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 85]
Summary:

Huge thanks to Gypsylady for the banner!

 

Jacob lurks outside the Cullen residence while, inside with Bella, Edward divines his wayward wolfish thoughts. Will Edward retaliate?

 

An intimate look into Edward's own mind as he re-lives that fateful kiss between Jacob and Bella the morning after their night in the tent, and his revelation to Bella of what that kiss and her relationship with Jacob has done to him.

 

 

 

Follows on from Cake but stands on its own.  Sexy angst-ridden EPOV, in character, post Eclipse/pre BD.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 14763
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2009 Updated: March 13, 2009


Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: ...Came Tumbling Down

DAMN!! Okay, I am a total puddle of goo here in front of my computer!!!

Gotta go now...kids are at school and my hubby's upstairs.

Thanks for writing!!!!!

(and I'm with Oliver Twist...Please, mum, I want some more!)

 
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: May 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Windows

Nice change in voice from "Comeuppance".  You really are a very versatile author.  I'm impressed (and completely dripping!).  That's not to say that I prefer this story to the other, this one is just more easily accessible.  Both are totally hot and I like how your mind works!  lol  ;) 

My hubby will likely send you his appreciation later!  :D

 
Insomnia by demeterloves2 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 608]
Summary:



Alice Cullen has been having visions involving her brother, Edward, and his soul mate for the last five years and yet he refuses to believe her. Her last vision brings the Cullen's to Forks, Washington and Alice knows that the girl in her vision is there.

Bella Swan has been plagued with strange dreams and nightmares for the last five years, causing her to develop a small case of insomnia. She has grown tired of her friends and her boyfriend. She views her life as boring. Then the Cullen's arrive.

Edward wants Bella more than life itself. At first it was just her blood but now it is so much more. He knows he should leave but his family won't allow it. He wants to believe Alice when she tells him he won't hurt Bella, but the monster inside him says differently.

A HUGE thanks to psvtiger for the banner...You're freaking amazing and I mean it when I say that I'm your biggest fan for life, girl!! :HUGS:


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 108753
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2009


Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: July 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Sorry to hear about how RL is sucking for you right now.  Hope it gets better for your sake!

Tantalizing (and yes, frustrating!) end point.  Is Bella going to go to Votera on her own?

Love where you've taken things and on tinder hooks to see how it works out!  Bet all the clues are there for me to recongize when I eventually look back at the end!

Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the kinds words, hun :HUGS:

Bella is going to be making a lot of unusual decisions, but I won't be confirming anything as of yet ;) lol. 

Thank you!!!

 
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: April 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Please don't ever apologize for a long chapter!  The short dinky ones drive me mad!  The longer the better!!

Back to voraciously reading this lovely take on our favorite story!!!



Author's Response:

LOL...I'm with you on the long chapter. It's just another excuse to suck people in!!! :D lol. 

I'm so glad you're reading this story, too. I hope you continue enjoying it!

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: April 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

ch 4

LOVE IT!!!!!

I love how in depth your characterizations are!  It truely feels like we're getting more of a window into their private interactions that SM left to the immagination.  A lot of these that I have read are fun, but not really in keeping with SM's characters for me.  Not the case with your story!

Thanks!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much. That's one of the best compliments I have received. I want the characters to still be what SM created, but I want them to be my own as well. I'm hoping that I've found a happy medium and you make me think that I might have! :) Thank you so much :) 

There are going to be some noticable differences to this story and I hope it still holds your interest :)

 
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: April 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

The dream sequence was great.  [ch 6]

What happened to Edward being able to watch Alice's visions in her mind as she's having them.  That's part of their special connection and her power over him.  (And why he doesn't fight her on things--he sees them too!)

Otherwise I love your characterizations, and wouldn't call the pace slow since I didn't have to wait for the posts.  The pace is perfect for the story.  Nice depth.



Author's Response:

Thank you...The dream sequences are REALLY hard to write for some reason :) lol

Actually, Edward and Alice have a special connection and he CAN see her visions IF she lets him. My Alice is VERY good at blocking Edward. I wanted it to be that way so that Alice wouldn't betray Bella's need to keep Edward in the dark about certain dreams and memories. That, and I think it is just rude for Edward to probe her mind so freely without Alice putting up a fight :D LOL.

I'm super happy that you're enjoying the characters and the pace. I am really enjoying myself :)

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: April 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thanks for spelling out how Edward and Alice's connection is different in your story!  I noticed this time that he seems to have to almost concentrate on people to hear them--or at lest he does to a larger degree than in the books.  Makes a nice tool for this story.

Liking the whole Firestarter meets the Cullens thing.  Still very much intruitged to see where you go with this!



Author's Response:

You are most welcome! :) I don't want y'all to be confused in any way so please feel free to ask questions. I will answer to the best of my ability :) Oh, and yes, Edward does have to concentrate more. I liked that, too :D lol.

I'm so glad you are intrigued because that means you'll keep reading.

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: May 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I seriously heart long chapters too!!!  This makes me heart you too!  :D



Author's Response:

Thank you! I heart you, too! :D

 
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: May 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I can't tell you how thrilled I was when the chapter finished loading and I saw how wonderfully tiny the scroll bar was (meaning a really long chapter!)!  I love how you keep us guessing.  Can hardly wait to see what happens with Irina, but can't help thinking she may be arriving a little late.  Feels like the voice is the 'devil' himself.  intruged to see how the yellow eyes play in with it all!

Damn, wicked, evil cliffie by the way!!!

I knew her room would be on fire, but the whole house is gonna go up if she waits for Edward to arrive to put it out! (Hell, the whole room whould go up while she calls him!) But it is a lovely literary tool--so I'm not REALLY complaining!  Now he'll have to tell her and face her wrath for holding out on her.  That boy should start learning that waiting is just gonna bit him in the ass when it comes to Bella!!

Hope you're enjoying your summer...I think I will be more than I would have without this gripping tale!  :D



Author's Response:

I just knew you would love this chapter just because of how long...I know you have a thing about those lengthy chapters and have been begging for it :D LOL. So you're most welcome :) lol.

Irina is going to be an interesting character to play with, since I'm winging it with her. She's whatever I choose her to be :D lol. I am going to make sure that she helps Bella, though, regardless of what she really thinks ;) lol. It's never too late!! :D LOL. Oooo...The eyes are gonna have to wait quite a while ;) lol.

I know this is silly and insane...But I threw Bella calling Edward first in there because I honestly would have done that, too (blush, blush) :D ROFLMAO. It was a quick conversation, I swear. Then she screamed for Charlie :D lol.

I wish it were Summer here!!! I still have a month :P It's too cold and I need Sun!!! Hope you're enjoying yours, though :)

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Damn!  Clifffie worthy of Hollywood!  :D

Adore the very satisfying length (of course!).  :)  This is one of the few stories that really keeps me guessing--it has tremendous depth of plot.  So I'm guessing that Bella was the infant (or is it Renesmee?), the Volturi are the ones in the dungeon and they want her to choose between staying human and becoming a vampire.  The most obvious reason I'm guessing that B would remain human is that a Volturi would change her and she would only want E to do it and that she's afraid that E will leave if she becomes a vamp. 

Eager to learn more about Lava Girl.  (is the litteral Satan involved?)  HA!  :D  That could be fun litteral battle between good v. evil.

Sorry to hear about school.  I can definitly empathise!

We appreiciate you writing!  Hope all goes as it should.



Author's Response:

LOL...I so LUV your theories! All wonderful, but will remain unanswered until I decide ;) hehehehe. I knew you'd love this chapter as well for the length AND the cliffie ;) hehe

Thank you so much for the kind words and support! :hugs:

 
Summary:

Things get interesting around the Cullen household when Rosilie and Jacob's verbal agression becomes physical. One-shot. Lemon. Humor ensued!


Categories: Crackfic Characters: Jacob, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1981
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: March 03, 2009


Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: May 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: "One-Shot"

Well, other than Emmett would wonder why Rose smelled like sex and dog, it worked for me.  Kinda wish you would have gone into more detail with the buildup when they felt the urge to quit fighting and start sexin'.  It felt rushed and kinda glossed over.  I totally could see an AU where the tension came to a head and they let it out "physically."  Jake can't deny that he's physically attracted to Rosalie at several points in the story.  Liked that you touched on the difference between their body temps.  Would think that would be an unexpected turnon for them.

Liked it, just wish it hadn't been so rushed.  Totally believe that they'd go right back to being annoyed with eachother.  Thanks for the different scene.

 
Summary:

At long last, the epilogue for Turning Dust into Gold.  There's a marriage . . . a bun in the oven and someone waits patiently (or not so patiently) for a proposal.  Three couples and three chapters.  AH.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 10097
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: April 13, 2009


Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Still loving that this fairytale has very RL currents and tones to it!!!  Lovely twists!

 
Summary:

Edward is a very troubled teen who moves with his family to the small town of Forks for a fresh start. What happens when he meets the shy Bella?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 31746
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2009 Updated: April 01, 2009


Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: May 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Declarations

Gotta love Dad's who can legally carry guns to the 1st meeting of their daughter's boyfriend!  lol


Different, good.  Interesting enought to want to know more.

Nice writing style!

 
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: May 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: The End

I think I can see why you didn't go into more detail with the end, but I really felt like it was rushed (thanks for skipping the angst!).  Very powerful slightly more FL end (and this was a slightly more RL late) so it fit better than the HEA ending.

I've known a few people who would probably feel like this paralelled aspects of their lives. 

I actually thought it was kind of a really dark HEA, since she had his baby and it made her mom step up.  Sucks that Edward had to die, but is kinda fitting.  Wish it hadn't been so abreviated.

Thanks for writing!  I'll look for more of your stuff as I have time.

 
Summary:

Edward is adopted by the Cullens after living a nightmare.  He meets Bella, and she tries to fight his inner monster.  AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 104014
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2009 Updated: April 06, 2009


Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: May 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hmmm, seems that the roles are going to be reversed between B and E in this one.  Different take on his feelings of being a monster. 

Well written with deep imagery.  Interested to see what happens with the rest of the story!

 
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Well, I'm guessing the other shoe is about to fall, and that the eyes from the dark belong to either Mike or the Stepfather out of jail.  Can't wait to see what happens, but sadly must sleep now!  :)

 
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I'd love to see Mike have to fess up to helping pass the letter to Edward, to have to admit aiding in the crime!  To admit HE helped the monster almost commit murder.

A sequel from alt POV would be great.  So many people really live this type of life (without magical cullens and Bellas to rescue them).  It brought a new flavor to our favorite characters--better depth.

Hard to read because of it's reality, I think I liked it beause it wasn't sunshine and roses.  Poignant and rewarding.  I liked that B and E didn't feel the need to push the physical aspects of their relationship in a misguided attempt to "heal' him.  He really wasn't ready for more intimacy, I think.  Made their love for eachother deeper in my eyes.

Thanks for writing!!!

 
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Alternate Ending pt. 2

Wow!  You are a fabulous writer!  I haven't cried like this in ages.  I can't help wondering if you have experienced something like this or are just really able to empathise with people who have.

Powerful!!!  I'm so glad I didn't miss reading this amazing journey you created!  Thanks!

I deal with death often in my line of work. This really helped me see different facets I might not have on my own.  Helped me deal with some of my own griefs as well.  

I like the HEA ending better just because I can't stand the idea of Bella being alone, but I'm glad you wrote in the angel visit and that she will find a way to go on into this one.  This end is much more powerful and sadly what more often really happens when you give yourself over into the power of the monster rather than risk trusting others to help you protect what you love.

 
Summary:

Breaking Dawn from Leah's Point of View.

Prelude: The bitch was pregnant? I snorted out a callous laugh. Here I was, a mutated genetic dead end. Having kids for me was completely out of the question. And this leech loving whiny ass vampire wannabe was going to have a kid!?

Life is completely and utterly unfair.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Leah
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 68 Completed: Yes Word count: 225124
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: April 06, 2009


Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: April 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 52: What the hell is a shield anyway?

Gah!  I haven't laughed so much in AGES!  Thanks!

I'm really glad I didn't find this story sooner, it would have killed me to wait for the updates!

Enthralling!

 
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 Signed
Date: April 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 53: Things are getting really freaking weird

By the way, did you figure out that "Volturi" is plural and that a Foltura is the singular?  It was bugging me a bunch of chapters ago.  I'm assuming I'm not the first to have pointed this out, but thought I'd mention it anyway.

Thanks for the gripping story!



Author's Response:

Actually, I had no idea. It's always intriguing to learn new things.

 




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