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Penname: falconcranelove [ Contact]
Real name: Cat
Status: Member
Member Since: August 14, 2008
Website: http://angelus-buff.livejournal.com
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Married, 32 yr old, mother of two who loves to read, and sometimes write fic. I also do graphics, and run a few websites for other fandoms.
I fell in love with the Twilight books in June of 08, and haven't looked back once. I love Edward, and am mildly obsessed with Robert. LOL
Maybe one day I'll try my hand at writing for Twilight, but for now, I'm very content with reading all the wonderful fics here at Twilighted.
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Summary: Bella has a nightmare about someone other than Edward chasing her.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 449
[Report This] Published: May 17, 2008 Updated: May 23, 2008
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: September 06, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow, I really liked this little fic. Especially love the last paragraph. Can't explain why, but I do. Great job! ~Cat~
Summary: Edward Cullen, just finished his senior year in highschool, decides to spend his summer vacation in Phoenix, Arizona. He's not expecting much - all he wants is to get away from the gossiping residents of Forks. He's certainly not expecting the beautiful girl next door. But can he trust her? After he's already been hurt once? And how much can three little months really change? AU All Human. Canon pairings. 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 30394
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2008 Updated: February 21, 2009
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed 
Date: August 25, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Inevitable
I just found your fic tonight and read all the chapters so far. I'm loving it! Especially this last chapter. I'm a sucker for angst fics, and so this last little bit -I loved. Poor Bella! *smacks Edward* Get your stuff together boy! LOL Anyway, just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this, and can't wait to read more. Keep it up! :) ~Cat~
Summary: Edward is a hot up and coming actor and Bella is his ever faithful best friend and personal assistant. Bella's feeling for Edward have changed over the years, but he is oblivious to her feelings. With the help of her friends, will she get the courage to tell him how she feels before it's too late, or will she just stand by and watch him fall in love with someone else? How will Edward take the news of these feelings from the girl he has always thought of as a sister? Will the obstacles along the way ruin even the best of friendships? 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 93126
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2008 Updated: November 09, 2008
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: August 14, 2008
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I've spent the majority of my freetime the last 24 hours reading all 16 chapters (stayed up literally all night last night lol), and OMG! I love this fic!!! My best friend rec'd it to me, and I'm so glad she did, this has to be my fave WIP right now! LOL I'm a BIG angst lover, so this fic has been perfect for me! LOL That was the one thing she said to me, that the angst would be right up my alley. And you've done it so well, I've found myself in tears several times. And I LOVE IT! LOL I can't wait for the next chapter, this fic is just too good! Love everything about it. Keep up the amazing work! :) ~Cat~
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: August 16, 2008
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Oh wow! Awesome chapter! Their love making was so sweet! Loved it! And wow, only one more chapter then epilogue... I'm excited to see the way this ends, but also sad, cuz I love this fic so much! LOL Can't wait for the next update. Keep it coming! :) ~Cat~
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: November 09, 2008
Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue
Awwww, what a wonderful ending! Definitely left me with a big smile. Great job! :D ~Cat~
Summary: Bella feels both strangely attracted to and repulsed by the standoffish boy who sits next to her in English. She and her best friend, Alice, are looking for love, and they refuse to settle for anything less. ExB, JxA. A modern 'Pride and Prejudice.'  
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 12361
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2008 Updated: October 14, 2008
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: August 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Just read all nine chapters, and I'm really enjoying this fic. Pride and Predjudice is one of my faves, and I think you're doing a good job of getting the main parts of the story into the fic. I can't wait to read more of it. :) Good job! ~Cat~
Summary: Edward has made his name in the merger and acquisition business by using a key advantage: he can read people's minds. Reading people is a great talent to have, unless you can't turn it off. Then it is a lonely talent. What will Edward do when he meets a woman whose mind is closed to him? All the usual suspects will show up in this AH, AU fic, canon pairings.
--ON HIATUS UNTIL OCTOBER 2009--
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 54803
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2008
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed 
Date: September 17, 2008
Title: Chapter 12: Too Much
WOW! I just found this fic yesterday while I was home from work sick, and it's taken me til just now to get to finish all 12 chapters, and WOW! I love this fic!! It's been great so far, and these last two chapters were even better. I love angst, so I'm thrilled with this new little twist. I can't wait to see what happens. I look forward to the next chapter, keep it coming! :D ~Cat~ Author's Response: Wow is right... this story is getting long to read all at once. Thanks for your review! The new chapter won't be out until this weekend, I don't think. :)
Summary: In Twilight, Edward told Bella that if her blood sang to James like it had to Edward, it would've meant a fight right there in the field. What if this was the case? Follow Bella as she is kidnapped and turned by James, and the Cullens' fevered attempts to get her back. Features James/Bella, but this is ultimately an Edward/Bella story. "NC-17" for language, situations, and eventual sexual content. 
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Word count: 34456
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2008 Updated: November 01, 2008
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: September 25, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Just found your fic and read all 10 chapters. I really loved it until I read the chapter and found out Bella stayed with James for YEARS and ducked out every time one of the Cullens got close to them. It really made me mad, how stupid she was being. I honestly almost stopped reading right there, cuz while I can easily believe she would have run after seeing Edward holding Tanya, I can't believe that they wouldn't have actually gotten to her sooner (than years later), and it just seemed a little too OOC to me. *shrugs* Just my thoughts, but it's your fic, so however the characters are is how they are, whether we like it or not. LOL (No offense intended, I tend to ramble sometimes. lol) Anyway, I kept reading, and really enjoyed this chapter. Love that she flung herself into Emmett's arms, that made me smile. Can't wait to see what happens next with Jasper and Alice showing up. Can't wait to find out why Alice's visions have been all screwed up, and can't wait to see Bella and Edward reunited -somewhere down the road. LOL Keep it coming! :D
~Cat~
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: September 26, 2008
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Nice chapter! Disappointed that it wasn't what we thought it would be, but it was good non-the-less. Loving it! Can't wait for the next one though! Ready for some major drama!! I love drama in my fics. LOL ~Cat~
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: October 17, 2008
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Great chapter! Love it! Can't wait for the next one! :) Sorry I don't have time to review better, but I'm doing this from work (shhhh lol)and have to get off now. Keep up the amazing updates!
~Cat~
Summary: Summary: Welcome to the Twilight series… set in the world of modeling and fashion! When Bella Swan, the most prominent manager of Twilight Runway, is almost forced to manage the gorgeous, sexy and extremely obnoxious Edward Cullen of Cullen-McCarty Enterprise…. Well, things just couldn’t have gotten worse! Aside from the conceited way he behaves, he also has something against her number one model: Jacob Black. With romance, fashion, angst, humor and some major drama, “Twilight Runway” is definitely a story that Twilight fans would like to read! [AU-Human] 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 47418
[Report This] Published: July 28, 2008 Updated: September 01, 2008
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: September 01, 2008
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Dinner and a Girlfriend
LOL Loved the end of this! OMG too funny! LOL Just read all the chapters, and gotta say I'm enjoying this fic. Can't wait to read more of it. Keep it coming! :) ~Cat~
Summary: Just because you're disabled doesn't mean your not able. Edward is a blind music major from Chicago, starting out at college in the south. When he meets Bella, an English major from out-of-state, sparks fly, in a few different ways. Will Edward do all he can to become whole for her? AH AU, slight OOC, just in case. Also, I'm rating it NC-17, just in case later chapters advance in that direction. Enjoy!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 23607
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2008 Updated: September 09, 2008
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: September 12, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Awwww, that was so great! I've just read all nine chapters, and am loving this fic. I can't wait to read more! :) ~Cat~
Summary: When Jasper Whitlock and Alice Masen tied the knot, they hoped their own siblings would have the same happy ending. Jasper's sister, Isabella, was at the peak of her career, leaving very little time for love. Alice's brother, Edward, was in the process of moving thousands of miles in the name of business.
What happens when Jasper and Alice insist on accompanying Edward to Seattle while he finds his new base of operation, all while staying in Isabella's penthouse?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes
Word count: 77087
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2009
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: September 11, 2008
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Run Like Hell
Awww, good chapter! Loved it! :) ~Cat~
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: October 13, 2008
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
O.M.G! *sobs* WHY?! WHY BELLA?!?! My heart is broken for Edward right now, and I just want to smack Bella upside the head about a dozen times. The chapter was great, and I was all happy for Edward and smiling like an idiot, and then BAM! you pulled the rug out from underneath us all. DAMN! LOL Absolutely GREAT twist there! I wasn't expecting her to say no. WOW. I'm going to have to read the next chapter once I get to work, so expect that feedback later in the day. Loving this so much right now! Keep it coming! :D ~Cat~
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: October 13, 2008
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: The End
Oh damn. This is getting extremely angsty... I love it!! I love the angst, so this is wonderful. (yeah, I'm crazy for loving angst lol) My heart's broken for Edward, but surprisingly not Bella. I'd still like to smack her. Great job, and I can't wait for more! :)
~Cat~
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: November 23, 2008
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Aftermath
WoW! Damn Bella, you totally screwed up sister. *shakes head* Can't wait to get to the next chapter. LOL Good stuff! :)
~Cat~
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: November 23, 2008
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Sisterly Love
Hmmm.... I'm not sure I like Edward thinking he's the one that fucked up. Seems to me like he's taking the blame. :/ I think they both made a mistake, but I don't want him beating himself up too much over his leaving. I think they both needed the space, even though they're both hurting. End the end, it will help things more. Anyway, good stuff, I can't wait to see what happens next! Gotta love Alice! :D ~Cat~
Summary: It's been three years since the day Edward left Bella in the woods...she is moving on but is still plagued by nightmares from time to time. Will someone from her past help her get through her difficult times? What danger lies ahead for her? Will her dreams eventually come true? Please read and review!
Dream sequences based on the hit song by Heart.
Thanks to the fabulous Mrs.C for the banner!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 70891
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: April 05, 2009
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: September 29, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Just read all nine chapters, and I'm enjoying this so far. I can't wait to read more of it. :) ~Cat~
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: October 01, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Good chapter, even though it was short. (sorry, I tend to like longer chapters :/ ) Looking forward to the next chapter, keep it coming! :) ~Cat~
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: October 11, 2008
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Nice. It's a lovely letter, too bad Edward will never get to read it. Can't wait for more! ~Cat~
Summary: Bella Swan meets a beautiful stranger, lawyer Edward Masen on a holiday in Rome. The chemistry is palpable, the sex passionate - and a physical relationship grows into something more. The days fly in a whirlwind of clothes, sand, sex and wine. After a painful realisation that the fantasy has come to an end, Bella returns apprehensively to Seattle, heartbroken at the loss of her love.
But, little does she know that the 'beautiful stranger' isn't such a stranger, after all.
A surprise awaits Bella Swan in Seattle.
Rated for explicitly detailed sex scenes and language.
Beautifully accurate banner by the beautifully talented MrsC. Thank you!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 65735
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: September 09, 2009
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: August 23, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: Incoherency and Milk Are NOT My Friends
I'm really enjoying this so far, and can't wait to read more. Keep it coming! :) ~Cat~
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: September 07, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Blue Kitchens and Hot Kisses
Great chapter! I love the conversations they have in their heads, they make me LOL. Can't wait for the next one. :) ~Cat~
Summary: Edward Cullen, an Olympic swimming star, goes to Beijing with winning gold medals on his mind, but is distracted by the beautiful but clumsy reporter he meets on his way. All Human AU.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 86569
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: May 09, 2009
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: September 15, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
OMG! I just read the first four chapters early this morning, and was about to leave some feedback for it, when I see that you updated with chapter five! I *squeed* when I saw it, that's how excited I was. LOL I'm LOVING this fic! I can't even begin to mention all the parts I've loved, as the review would be longer than one of the chapters! LOL I can say that I absolutely ADORE this Edward! He's great! And so's Bella. They're so cute together too! When he linked their fingers.... *sigh* adorable! LOL I can't wait to read more of this fic! You're doing an amazing job with it. I'll be rec'ing this at my LJ the next time I do a rec post (which could come as early as the end of the week if I find more great fics like this one lol). Keep it coming guys, this fic ROCKS! :) ~Cat~
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: September 19, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Excellent chapter! Loved Edward standing up to Carlisle, and then feeling good about having done so. Can't wait to see Bella's reaction to being "chosen" as his reporter. LOL Keep up the amazing job guys! This fic rawks! ~Cat~
Reviewer: falconcranelove Signed
Date: September 25, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I was so excited to see another chapter updated! Love this fic so much right now! Keep up the amazing work guys; this just gets better and better! :) ~Cat~
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