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Penname: Kas_Cullen [Contact]
Real name: Kasandra
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Member Since: August 10, 2008
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I'm not really a writer, I just want to be able to review some of the stories here.
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Summary:

What's the farthest thing from The Cleavers? The Cullens. How will Bella fair being a human, in a house full of vampires, with a past that might come back to bite her?

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Categories: AU Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 49288
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2008 Updated: January 02, 2009


Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This story is awesome!  I love the snappy dialogue.  It had me rotfling several times.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen, just finished his senior year in highschool, decides to spend his summer vacation in Phoenix, Arizona. He's not expecting much - all he wants is to get away from the gossiping residents of Forks. He's certainly not expecting the beautiful girl next door. But can he trust her? After he's already been hurt once? And how much can three little months really change? AU All Human. Canon pairings.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
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Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 30394
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2008 Updated: February 21, 2009


Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Like a Morning Fog

Oh yeah, you did just fine with the angst, my dear.

This is getting really good.  Update again soon please!

 
Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3033]
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AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed
Date: August 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: The Truth

WOW!  My heart is in my throat!  Very well done! Sooo...are you back yet???

 
Summary:

After college, best friends Bella, Rosalie and Alice have a run-in with their past. . .and maybe their future? A farcical, romantic comedy with a healthy dose of angst.  Nominated for Best Romance & Best Edward Characterization (Incomplete) at the Twilight Awards.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 144638
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2008 Updated: December 29, 2008


Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

ROTFL!!!  Tears streaming down my face.  This is sooooo good!!!

 
Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was sooooo...awesome!



Author's Response: Thanks Kas!  Looks like you're all caught up now!

 
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Date: September 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Poor Alice!  I wanted to kick Jasper's butt for her!  But I was also hoping to read about Bella & Edward's lunch rendez-vous...

Keep up the good work.  Can't wait for more!

 

 
Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Whew! That was so hot!  I hope we get to see some E&B action next...

Personalized panties oh yeah, I'd buy 'em...

 
Realize by Goo82 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 640]
Summary:

Edward is a hot up and coming actor and Bella is his ever faithful best friend and personal assistant. Bella's feeling for Edward have changed over the years, but he is oblivious to her feelings. With the help of her friends, will she get the courage to tell him how she feels before it's too late, or will she just stand by and watch him fall in love with someone else? How will Edward take the news of these feelings from the girl he has always thought of as a sister? Will the obstacles along the way ruin even the best of friendships?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
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Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 93126
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2008 Updated: November 09, 2008


Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed
Date: August 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm so glad he's finally being a man about this.  Now if Bella will just listen...

 
Summary:

When Jasper Whitlock and Alice Masen tied the knot, they hoped their own siblings would have the same happy ending. Jasper's sister, Isabella, was at the peak of her career, leaving very little time for love. Alice's brother, Edward, was in the process of moving thousands of miles in the name of business.

What happens when Jasper and Alice insist on accompanying Edward to Seattle while he finds his new base of operation, all while staying in Isabella's penthouse?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 77087
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2009


Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: The End

Stupid, stupid woman! She needs therapy!
Good job, can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: The End

There has to be more!  Please update soon. 

 
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Date: November 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Aftermath

Wow! I did not see that one coming!  That girl needs slappin'!  I hope she wakes up to what an idiot she's being soon.  Either that or Edward should give up on her and let me console him...:P

 
Warmth by KatieBelle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 857]
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A running smutline of Edward and Bella's honeymoon . . . and everything afterwards.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 100790
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2011


Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Warmth

LOVED it! It was perfect!  Please do the pillow biting scene. Though it's probably a downer because he's berating himself I'd still like to read it.

 
Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Light

Dang, that was good!  Can't wait for EPOV on this one!  Then... Raping of Edward???!!! hmmmm That sounds interesting.

 
Summary: My take on Breaking Dawn - or atleast how I think it should have went. Including most of the Pre-breaking dawn characters and a few new ones.
Categories: AU, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 3116
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2008 Updated: August 15, 2008


Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed
Date: August 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Norton Kramden

Looking good so far!  Can't wait for the rest!

 
These Dreams by jbluvs2sing Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 954]
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It's been three years since the day Edward left Bella in the woods...she is moving on but is still plagued by nightmares from time to time. Will someone from her past help her get through her difficult times? What danger lies ahead for her? Will her dreams eventually come true? Please read and review!

Dream sequences based on the hit song by Heart.

Thanks to the fabulous Mrs.C for the banner!

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
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Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 70891
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: April 05, 2009


Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

That was really good! I hope Edward gets to read it somehow.  I love Jasper in this. 

 
Bella's Hope by texbelle Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 46]
Summary: Feature

Where this moment fits in Breaking Dawn:  This would pick up after page 138, before the start of book 2.  It's my interpretation of what SHOULD have been expressed regarding Bella's pregnancy.  This moment takes place during Bella and Edward's flight home after their honeymoon.   

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Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1089
[Report This] Published: August 17, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2008


Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Hope

Yes, I do feel better.  I needed Bella's thoughts about the pregnacy, too.  Good job, Thanks!

 
A Changing Heart by blondie Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 73]
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WINNER:  Best Angst/Drama AND Best Missing Moment at The Twilight Awards 

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SPOILERS FOR BREAKING DAWN

Edward's experience during Bella's change - while she was unconscious.  Parallels pages 355-378.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Renesmee, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4636
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2008


Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: A Changing Heart

Thank you, thank you, thank you!  This is exactly what I needed...more Edward, some bonding with Renesmee and his thoughts while Bella changed.  It's pitch perfect, too.

Author's Response:

I really missed Edward in Breaking Dawn... so glad you liked my fill-in version!

thanks for the nice review!
blondie

 
Summary:

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At a pivotal moment in New Moon, a simple choice alters the course of Bella's future, and she is forced to endure several more weeks before Edward's eventual return to Forks.  Victoria, a pack of young werewolves, and the blossoming of an undeniable bond become the least of Bella's concerns as she undergoes her own supernatural transformation. It turns out vampires and werewolves aren’t the only things that go bump in the night.  Edward/Bella/Jacob

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A huge thank you to placeofthunder for the lovely banner!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Kim, Leah, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
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Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 145984
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2008 Updated: August 30, 2010


Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Crutch

Interesting start.  Good writing and I think you've got the essense of the characters.  Can't wait to see where this goes...

 
Summary:

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Bella attempts to live a normal life after Edward and the Cullen's leave her. Finding herself face to face with an Edward look a like, Andy Masen, she hasn't a clue how he will lure her back into the world of the undead. She will learn how the vampire came into existence, and the political war that is stirring in the bowels of the vampire world. She must chose her side, either with her newfound friend, Andy, or the love of her life, Edward. Where do her allegiances lie? Join Bella on the painstaking journey, and the ride of her life, that may just lead to the end of it. 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Other Character, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 67272
[Report This] Published: August 31, 2008 Updated: February 24, 2009


Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Anthony Masen

Hmmm... shows promise.  I'm interested to see where this goes. 

Keep going, please...

 
Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Secrets and Lies (1)

Wow, this is a turn I never expected!  The  plot thickens!  Can't wait for more!

 
Summary: Bella Swan, a resident, is struggling with the realities of a medical career when she mets attending Dr. Edward Masen, a real life Dr. Love. Can he save her from her own self doubt? AU Human, OOC.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 14862
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: October 15, 2008


Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is...WOW! Your writing is sooo...vivid. And this Edward is seriously the sexiest in all of fanficdom!  Can't wait for dessert! it's gonna take an ice shower to cool me down...

 
Summary: Bella never knew how strong a love could be between Mother and Daughter.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 626
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2008 Updated: September 13, 2008


Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

This is pretty good.  I wished for a bit more of Bella's thoughts about Renesmee in BD.

FYI, there is one error though. In paragraph 5 you say Renesmee's eyes are amber.  Her eyes are actually chocolate brown like her mother's were before she was changed.



Author's Response: Was going for a one-shot type thing. But appreciate the input! And I'll get on changing that eye color issue :P Details flee my mind most days, I suppose. I'm no vampire with photographic memory , unfortunately. :)

 
North Star Rising by spaniard Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]
Summary:

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Bella has set her sights on immortality, and finally, Edward has bent to her will. What could possibly go wrong as they plan for their own private eternity?

The best laid plans…

The ripples of the destruction caused by James’s coven have not yet settled, and the Cullen’s are about to understand exactly how much one moment in time can alter their fragile piece of perfection.


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Tanya
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Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 91120
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2008 Updated: August 29, 2011


Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: 10: El Huerto de la Niebla

Well, you're doing great so far! Looking forward to the rest!



Author's Response: Thanks!  Dispite my current misgivings, I'm pretty sure that the next one will be out by the weekend!

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Thursday, March 20, 2008

This is looking REALLY good!  Can't wait for more!  Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it. :)

 
Reviewer: Kas_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: March 22, 2008, part 2

I love this story and your writing is excellent. Can't wait to see where this goes!



Author's Response: Thanks!

 




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