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Member Since: March 08, 2009
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I love a good story and have a tendancy to read too much.  I don't have a team when it comes to the Edward v Jacob debate.  My favourite Twilight character is Alice - well this month.


 


If you want to know anything else just ask but be prepared for me to answer honestly.


 


oxoxoxo


Ashmerlin


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Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4551]
Summary:

WRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN

After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

Thanks to Mrs C for the above Banner and my beta readergoof for the below Banner!Wishing Star Banner Readergoof

Thanks to Sleforever for below banner!

Wishing Star Banner Sleforever


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed
Date: June 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Bet

Cliffy SOOOOOO NOT fair!!!  *pout*

 

OXOXO

Ashmerlin

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed
Date: June 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Thankyou.  I really enjoyed this chapter the way Edward was showing how much he really cared and how much he had changed. 

Anyway feed my addiction and write again soon.

 

XOXOXOX

Ashmerlin

 
Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: December 23, 2008 to January 4, 2009

Loved it. Thankyou for continuing this story.

 
Summary:

*An explanation for my recent behavior*

So... it's been a while.  I'M SO SORRY!  I started a new AU-H fic called Primary Colors and it has taken over my fic-writing life.  I know you're never supposed to do that.  It's not cool to start a new story when you already have one going, it's not fair and people hate it.  I'm sorry that I have no self-control, I'm sorry I left you hanging.

The good news is that I AM going to finish this story.  I'm not giving it up.  I have it mapped out in my head and it's going to happen.  I just can't seem to focus on it and my writing really, really, really, sucks when I try to force it.  Primary Colors is just pouring out right now, so I'm taking advantage of that.  I really am sorry.  I've been consumed with guilt over this.  I hope you won't hate me, and I hope you'll still be here when I come back.  If you delete this fic from your favorites list right now I'll completely understand.  Please accept this apology.  Thank you so much for reading, have an excellent twilight. :)

It's page 449 of New Moon.   Bella is running across the plaza in Italy.  She has to get to Edward before the clock chimes.  Before the Volturi do.  His life depends on it. 

fanficbanner2.jpg picture by Jaxidy

This time Bella stumbles and doesn't get there in time.  What will happen to Edward now?  Will Alice make it out of Volterra and keep her promise to Jasper?  Will Bella be able to survive, thinking she's failed... alone in Volterra?

Thanks to MrsC for the banner!


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 38464
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2008 Updated: May 10, 2009


Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I know I read the draft but reading it here as the final copy made me cry.  You are an awesome writer!  I don't know how you do it but you always make it amazing.

 

XOXOXOXOX

 

Ashmerlin

 
Summary:

Leah 

Leah Clearwater is someone who has always been left behind. Her father is gone, her Sam has moved on and her body has betrayed her. Where is her happily ever after? When dawn broke the Twilight world changed, but not for Leah. Thanks to the Cullens she is stuck in limbo between barely a woman and sort of a wolf. Will she ever find a way to live in peace with the vampires she has come to blame for her unhappiness? Will an unexpected friendship save her when she finally finds love in the most desperate of circumstances? Can you ever truly be fixed once you've been broken?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Leah, Nessie, Other Character, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 38177
[Report This] Published: October 26, 2008 Updated: May 04, 2009


Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed
Date: May 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Being Immortal Ain't Easy

Wow.  I love this story I think it is one of the best stories I've stumbled across.  I really love how sarcastic Leah is.  You are really talented.  I am completely envious.

Anyway feed my addiction and update soon!

 

XOXOXOX

Ashmerlin

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen made Bella Swan’s life a living hell from age ten to twelve. Finally fed up with the torment and teasing, she moved to Phoenix. Now she’s seventeen, beautiful, and has a new sense of confidence. When her mother sends her back to Forks for her senior year, she is determined to shake things up.

NC-17 for sexuality, underage drinking, and language. OOC, just to be safe. Some canon pairings, some absolutely the opposite.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 55461
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2009


Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Edward and Drunk!Bella

I love this story.  It's well written with wonderful characters.  I love the fact they (the characters) are believable and not just two dimensional.  Definitely one of my favourite fanfic’s ever.  Write more soon.


OXOXO


Ashmerlin.

 

 
Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses

Love it.  Love the Angst.  Love the reality of the characters reactions.

Feed my addiction write more soon!

 

OXOXOXO

Ashmerlin

 
Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed
Date: August 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The Snow Ball

I've really been enjoying this story and I am very glad you're updating again.  Thankyou.

 

XOXOXOX

Ashmerlin

 
Breathe Again by Ysar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5440]
Summary: Feature

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards  


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010


Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed
Date: April 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Curiosity: Jacob's POV

Please forgive me for not reviewing earlier.  I have a tendancy to watch and not participate.  Talk about vouyeristic tendancies. 

On to the story - I love that you are writting a story where Jacob is not the bad guy or treated poorly.  I love how he is so personable and I believe true to how he was in the books.  I love how you leveled the playing field between Jacob and Bella. 

In this chapter I really enjoy how Jacob responded to Bella's jealous freak out.  The way Jacob is so observant and can read her so well is sweet and endearing.  

Please keep writting and feeding my addiction.

P.S.  On another note I'm using your favourites to find some great stories.  You have realy great taste.

 

XOXOXOX

Ashmerlin



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I think part of what I loved so much about Jake in the books was that he really could read Bella and figure out what she needed.  It wasn't always what he wanted, but he had a knack for figuring her out.  I have to say I've been disappointed with the way so many fics have completely vilified Jake.  In the books, he was Bella's friend, he would do anything for her, and he was never a true threat to Edward.  Sure, he wasn't terribly mature in the way he handled things, but what do you really expect from a sixteen year old who thinks the girl he loves is making a huge mistake?  As far as making anyone out to be the bad guy, I just don't know if I'm capable of that.  Even bad guys have feelings and reasons for doing what they do, and just writing a character as completely evil seems sort of one-dimensional to me.  I prefer to understand why they do what they do and still hate them for it :)  But I could never hate Jake!

 
Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Mischief: Bella's POV

I love this chapter.  I love how Embry is looking out for Jake & Bella.  I think it's a really sweet move but also as the title suggests mischievious. 

PS.  I have read all you've written over on ff.net and still love re-reading them here.



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

 
Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Questions: Jacob's POV

Thank you Ysar I just adore your writting and this chapter is wonderful.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed
Date: June 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 47: Union: Bella's POV

I loved it.  I especially loved it when Billy put his foot down about Bella being one of them.

I'm a greedy person so please update soon.

 

XOXOXOXOXOXOX

Ashmerlin



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 52: Quiet: Jacob's POV

You really are amazingly talanted.  I adore the way your work just flows naturally as you read it.  The only bad thing I can say about your work would be that I always want more, but I somehow think that no matter how much you wrote I would always want more.  So unless you manage to clone yourself (let me know if you figure out how) I will have to settle for showering you with love and praise and practicing that virtue that is patience.

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOX

 

Ashmerlin



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I'll keep you posted on the cloning ;)

 
Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 55: Overwrought: Bella's POV

Wonderfull.  I love the way you write, everything just feels so real and natural.  I love it as always.

 

Big loves.  Feed my addiction and update again soon.

 

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOX

Ashmerlin



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 59: Panic: Bella's POV

Thankyou this chapter was wonderfull as always.  I love your writing and I love this story.  I missed you soo much.  Please never leave me again or I'll end up in a zombie state with no Jacob there to pull me together again.

 

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOX

Ashmerlin



Author's Response:

LOL! Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 65: Unexpected: Bella's POV

AHHH!  I have no idea what to say except you are evil for leaving it there!  I'm divided on what I think of Bella's reaction to the vamps showing back up I don't know if I want her to react out of hurt as the 17/18 year old she is and flay them all alive (metaphorically speaking) or if I want her to just be pissed at Edward and verbally tear strips off him for what he did and how her life was affected by his actions.  She definateley needs to tell them about Victoria & Jacob.  Also I don't want her to to break up with Jacob even for a short while.

 

All in all I love this sory you have my vote!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOX

Ashmerlin

 
Summary:

It's been three long years since Edward left Bella, and things within The Cullen family have changed epically. After Edward's final stand off with Victoria, Emmett is left heartbroken and alone. A chance vision sends him back to Forks, and into the healing arms of the one person he never expected. Why fight with fate?

 

 New Moon AU - Bella/Emmett.

 


Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 64433
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2009 Updated: February 22, 2011


Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed
Date: May 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Not Meant To Be

Loved it.  Adored it.  I love the fact it seems like edward has finaly gotten it through his thick skull that Bella is with Emmett now and they are happy.  I think Ilene is awesome and just what Edward needs a swift kick up the backside!

 

XOXOXOX

Ashmerlin

 
Summary:

All trace of torment fled from my body the moment I thought of Jake. Of course. Jake was the one good thing that had been given to me after Edward had left, again, for the second time. But then...hadn't he been here all along? Each day Edward had been missing from my life Jake had reached out with his hands, as well as with his heart, and had taken a hold of mine without hesitation, without a second thought as to how it could have affected him. He didn't realize just how much that little deed had done for me, how even those small signs of affection had meant so much.

 

Emptiness. The one thing Bella thought she would never feel again - but she did. Edward has left for the second time, and for the same reasons he had before. He backed out of their plan once and for all and has refused to turn her into a living blood-sucking monster. Bella is miserable, and she is positive this time that she'll never again feel the touch of happiness. But with Jake still in her life to patch things up, maybe things won't be so bad after all. Edward may have had the power of an eclipse, but sun can shine through almost anything...including a shattered heart.

A story in which Jake finally gets his happy ending.

 

Special thanks to Anne Cullen for the banner!

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Angela, Bella, Billy, Edward, Embry, Emily, Eric, Jacob, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Quil, Renee, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 42188
[Report This] Published: January 18, 2009 Updated: November 18, 2009


Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue: Shadows of the Sun

I've thoroughly enjoyed this story.  I Loved the ending.  Also the scene where Bella was telling Jacob off for snitching batter sounded so much like my mum telling me off for doing the same thing it was wonderful.

 

XOXOXOX

Ashmelrin

 
Summary:

It's been nearly ninety years since the Cullens called Forks their home and now they've decided it's time to return.  They're confident that there is no one left in the small town that will remember them.  Bella finds out that they are wrong, one of her old friends is still alive (just barely). 

Bella decides to visit her old acquaintence, and this is the story of that visit.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1775
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2009 Updated: February 12, 2009


Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Link (One Shot)

That was really sad and beautiful Jaxidy.  Thankyou.

 

XOXOXOX

Ashmerlin

 
Summary: Feature

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Alice and Jasper awake in the same hospital, scarred, broken, and searching for meaning.  She gives him peace; he gives her joy.  They are each other's hope.

 

AH/AU/OOC.  Rated for graphic descriptions of wounds, language, and eventual sexual content.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 151997
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2009 Updated: January 20, 2010


Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed
Date: March 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Trying to Say

OMG I LOVE this story!  I'm hooked.  I can't wait for more.  I love your Alice and Jasper.  Just they way they interact with each other and react to things is wonderful.  I really have to thank mummysmonster for recomending it.

 
Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed
Date: March 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: And Yet Afraid

 

This chapter was so beautiful and so sad.  It made me cry with how sad it is that Jasper thinks so little of himself when he really is beautiful.  As for what Alice means when she says her brother is beautiful I think she means his soul is beautiful.

 

OXOXO

 

Ashmerlin

 

 

 
Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Seamless

Aww that was wonderful.  I loved it.  I loved the emotions it evoked.

So I end with the standard heartfelt plee; feed my addiction and post again soon!

OXOXOXOXO

 

Ashmerlin

 
Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Adjusting

I read a fair bit of FanFiction (my husband says too much - LOL) and I really think this is a wonderful story.  I find it to be a perfectly balanced story, never too much but never too little of anything.  It is well written with wonderful characters reacting in a natural way to some really messed up situations.  It is definitely a rose in a bed of violets.

OXOXOXO

Ashmerlin

 
Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed
Date: May 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Lessons in Longing

I keep trying to come up with different ways of telling you how beautiful this story is with out repeating "I love it" over and over while squeeing in delight like a complete fangirl.   Maybey I should just say I smile everytime I see an alert in my inbox letting me know you've posted another chapter and after reading it I practically glow with happiness.  You truly are wonderfully talented.

So I say in closing please feed my addiction and post again soon.

 

XOXOXOX

Ashmerlin



Author's Response:

Haha, I'll try to post as soon as possible!  This story was up on ff.net a long time before it was up here, so updates were coming pretty quickly.  Now everything's caught up, and I have to actually write the silly chapter before I can submit it (who knew!?), so things might be a little slower.  But I'm definitely gonna try to be as fast as possible!

Thanks for the reveiw!

 
Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed
Date: June 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Waging War

Another wonderfull chapter.  Thankyou.

 

XOXOXOX

 

Ashmerlin

 




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