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Summary:

 

Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: November 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 27: Survival

good chapter, i have reviewd on FF for a couple of chapters but since this one is up first and i was reading...

anyway, i liked the way you did this and understood completely why there were as many scenes as there were...perfectly handled...

So, i would love to read ch 27 in edwards pov...the pain and worry he must have felt watching her if his love is everything that it usually is...

so good...love this chapter and can't wait for the next!

 

 
Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4551]
Summary:

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After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

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"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: August 11, 2008 Title: Wishing Star

so good!

 
Summary:

When Jasper Whitlock and Alice Masen tied the knot, they hoped their own siblings would have the same happy ending. Jasper's sister, Isabella, was at the peak of her career, leaving very little time for love. Alice's brother, Edward, was in the process of moving thousands of miles in the name of business.

What happens when Jasper and Alice insist on accompanying Edward to Seattle while he finds his new base of operation, all while staying in Isabella's penthouse?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 77087
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2009


Reviewer: anuddaone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Flying

I signed up here just to review this story...I saw the thread in the forum...

I just finished reading it and all I can say is GREAT! 

 Can't wait for an update!



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it :)

 
Reviewer: anuddaone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree

love this so much!

I like protective Jas, but poor edward, his ways come back to haunt him! 

Looking forward to the next...

 
Reviewer: anuddaone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Torino

I feel a little spoiled...getting to read 3 chapters at once!

 Love this story..,and being a little greedy, I will say that I can't wait for an update!

 
Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: August 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

I love you! Just so you know...

 and I was all but ready to cry....

Great chapter...

 
Staged Beauty by rhea12 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary:

 

Bella is an out of work actress living in New York City, when an audition comes along that could change everything. Does she have what it takes to impress noted Broadway Director Edward Cullen? And even if she does, will his biggest secret keep her from success in her career, or worse, in love? How is it possible for real love to form out of a fantasy?

AU Human, Canon Pairings, An ExB story

*The entire story is based on my favorite quote from Shakepeare's Venus and Adonis

Thank you RedRose15 for the AMAZING banner! And thank you Shakespeare for all your inspiration!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 48558
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2008 Updated: April 04, 2009


Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: September 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: The BEST Day

love the story so far...

still think jake's a jerk no matter any explaination or whatev...but that is okay! :)

Can't wait for more!

 
Hindsight by elizabeth18 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 481]
Summary:

When Bella's roommate Alice tells her that her brother Edward is coming to stay with them she is not exactly thrilled.  In fact, she wants nothing to do with him.  Can Edward change her mind?  Or is the past too powerful?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 52590
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2009


Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: October 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Crossing The Line

i'm enjoying your story a lot...

like the flashbacks...

can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

THank you!

I'm glad you're enjoying the flashbacks! 

 
Stranded by jackbauer Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1215]
Summary:

Stranded in a strange town by stormy weather, Bella is befriended by Edward, a gorgeous man with a mysterious past. While she’s immediately attracted to him, she quickly discovers that the rest of the town doesn’t share her affections for the bronze-haired one, so she sets out to prove to them, and to Edward, that he’s anything but a monster.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 108250
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: November 28, 2008


Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: October 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Good Vibrations

this is great! i mean, really...i just stayed up til 4am reading it...so yeah- great!

bella's dirty thoughts crack me up and i am not even hating her insecurities like i often do in fanfic...you write it well and edward handles it well...so it works...

awesome...and i really hope you update this daily like you mentioned a few chapters back cuz that would be awesome as well... :)

 
Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: November 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Mine

who doesn't like to make people cry, really?

still really enjoying this... 

 
Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Two Steppin'

i totally snorted at the build-a-bear comment...  :)

fun chapter...sorry to see the story end...still can't wait to read the last chapter tho...

 
Summary:

The girls meet their dream guys and it seems like things might just be perfect. But when James, an old friend of Edward’s, comes into town and fixates on Bella, things get complicated. And dangerous. The usual pairings, all human.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 78816
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2008 Updated: April 05, 2009


Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: October 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

heh, love this so far...

their personalities are very interesting, i liked that bella actually asked alice to see about a date for her and edward... 

can't wait to read more...

 
Summary:

Edward's family hire Bella Swan to break the heartbreaker's heart in hopes to have him see the error of his womanizing ways. Bella realizes that they have a little too much in common and is having a little too much fun with this subject. EXB Lots of lemons later.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 322353
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2008 Updated: September 13, 2011


Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: October 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: The Line

fun read...looking forward to more...

 
Summary:

Bella, the youth minister at Carlisle's church, had been best friends with his children, including Edward, since she arrived in Forks.  However, one mistake can turn the tables on the lives both Bella and Edward were so sure of.  A story on the personal struggles of relationships and a crisis of faith.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 52651
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2008 Updated: September 26, 2009


Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: October 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Want To

heh, nice...but not the cliffhanger thing... :)

can't wait to read more....

 
Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: November 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Fearless

great chapter...

i liked tonya being nice...

it is all jealousy that spurred on the tonya hatred...she wanted our edward, right!? can't have that...haha...

anyway...carlisile being excited about being a grandfather is a good reaction...and realistic i think...

cant wait for more!

 
Summary:

So, can men and women really be friends?  Edward Masen thinks so, and he's determined to prove it to the new woman in his life.  Edward Masen is a professor at the University of Oklahoma who is dedicated to his work and his family.  His niece, little Lilly Whitlock, is a first grader with a particularly pretty teacher named Isabella Swan.  Edward then struggles to keep his relationship with Isabella strictly on the friendship level, which proves to be difficult the more they get to know each other.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 66524
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2008 Updated: November 30, 2009


Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: November 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can

enjoying this so far...

can't wait to read more

 
Summary:

Edward is a lonely homesteading cowboy in northern Nevada, Bella is a mail order bride full of secrets.   What happens when Edward discovers her lies?  Can he forgive her? Can she measure up?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 85364
[Report This] Published: November 01, 2008 Updated: December 09, 2008


Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: November 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Lazy Days and Goodbyes

my mind totally didn't go there...but now it is and i have to snicker a little...

i am enjoying this story alot...can't wait for more



Author's Response: Thank you! :)

 
Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: December 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Moving Day

heh, i read the line about angela being more excited than alice, and i had to think about who alice was in this story and snorted when i remembered she was a horse...i love that the others are all animals...

the last line made me laugh too...

can't wait for more...

 

 

 



Author's Response: Glad you liked it, the last line was my favorite too.

 
Summary:

Based loosely on the movie Return to Me.  Bella received an organ transplant and a chance at life she never thought she'd have.  Edward's world ended when the love of his life died, but he's finally ready to try and live again when he meets the strange and amusing waitress at his new favorite restaurant. 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 114468
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2009 Updated: March 27, 2009


Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: February 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Crashed

heh, the threats are a nice touch...tho this one is a bit disturbing  :)

just found this and am really enjoying the story.

can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: February 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Confessed

i am with you on the angst! forget the tears and sadness...Bring on the happy times and fluff...unicorns and rainbows...  :)

great chapter...gotta love Rosalie's save, i mean, come on, what better way to reveal big news like that...

and no one can resist a good looking banjo player really...

can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Have you read Wide Awake?  I can never think of unicorns the same. 

 
Summary:

Bellas been burnt in her past, so to get over it she pours herself into her work as a chef.  Shes gotten her own show and Edward, the worst cook, is set to be her cohost.  Bella's not looking for love, but she just cant resist the heat Edward has caused in her kitchen.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 65394
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: May 06, 2009


Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: March 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chopsticks

I am really enjoying this! it is the first new story i have read in a while and i am glad i did...

look forward to more!



Author's Response:

Aw I'm so happy you chose mine to read then!  Thank you so much for the review.  Next update should be up soon.

 
Summary:

Reclusive computer prodigy Edward Cullen needs a personal assistant and single mom Bella Swan needs a job. What happens when their worlds collide? Will Bella learn to trust the shy genius and will he be willing to open up to her as well?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 17994
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: April 08, 2009


Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: April 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

my new favorite story!

love this edward and bella...very cute...

cant wait for more...



Author's Response:

thank you

 
Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: April 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

well, he got her to stay with just minimum effort...can't wait to see what it takes to get her to stay...

can't wait for more!

 

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is Big Man on Campus at his high school in Port Angeles. Bella Swan is a quiet, sarcastic, marches-to-the-beat-of-her-own-drummer girl at Forks High. A part-time job brings them together, and an unlikely friendship and surprising feelings develop. Neither is brave enough to do anything about it, however, and they part ways when Edward heads off to college. Their paths cross again after a year of no contact, and Edward is determined to not only rekindle their friendship, but to man up and actually do something about his ever-present feelings for Bella.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 144739
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2009 Updated: October 08, 2009


Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: May 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

humph, well now I caught up...so now i have to wait...

good stuff, looking forward to more...  :)

 



Author's Response:

Hee! Thank you and sorry. ;-)

 
Reel Life by sandyk199 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 386]
Summary:

Used to feeling lonely in a crowded room, international film star Edward Cullen meets a certain journalist that captures his attention.  Soon afterwards, she's gone ... or so he thinks. 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Mike, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 115100
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2009 Updated: March 29, 2010


Reviewer: anuddaone Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Fantastic story!

Can't wait for more...

Author's Response:

Hello

Hee hee - thank you so much for reading and liking!  The next chapter will be up sometime soon, and I hope it satisfies you as much as this one did!

Cheers

Sandy

 




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