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Real name: Rachel
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Summary:

Three very different women, with one thing in common, must deal with life, love and betrayal.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 71422
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2008 Updated: February 16, 2009


Reviewer: pwtf Signed
Date: November 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Damn Him!

Oh wow!

 The shit is hitting the fan...

 Edward sure didn't want Ang to find out in his interview...but Tanya took matters into her own hands!

 I can't wait to see what happens there...

 
Reviewer: pwtf Signed
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- Confrontation

Um. Wow. I'm still in shock now...so I can't exactly leave a coherent review...

 We'll see if I can come up with something on the thread later.

 Poor Angela. Edward's such a douche bag. Ugh. You guys are making it REALLY hard not to hate him. It gets harder and  harder each chapter...

 
Reviewer: pwtf Signed
Date: December 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Oh, Shit!

"Oh, shit" indeed. Whoa.

I'm glad that Bella held it together so that she didn't upset Angela...SHE finds out, but Ang doesn't have to be hurt again...at least right now.

But at least A/M/E is FINALLY being confronted! Tanya let it out on Angela...but neither of them confronted him. I'm glad he'll finally have to explain himself!!!

 
Reviewer: pwtf Signed
Date: December 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - I Tried!

Aww...that wedding was so perfect for them!

I love how hard Tanya tried to return the check...but Angela's been a bit busy, now, hasn't she...

Wonderful chapter, absolutely loved it!!! I completely love this Tanya!

 
Reviewer: pwtf Signed
Date: January 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Confession

Whoa! Well, I am surely heading to my death between all the craziness of this fic and all the late nights that become later because I just can't seem to wait until morning to read the updates...

This chapter was...competely intense, yet again.

She tried, poor dear, she really tried. But that douche had to keep up with things, didn't he?

I love that Ben has been bonding with the twins...but he's dating Samantha now...so who is there for Ang?!

Edward's proclamation of semi-truth cleared a little bit for Ang...but now he's steadfastly denying anything else. Which leads to some interesting questions...ARE there really twins or something here? Or is A/M/E just a very, very determined lying bastard?

Oh, and I love you hard for that GWTW reference.

You write Angela so wonderfully, I could feel myself getting more and more angry and exploding at the end right there with her! The emotions come across incredibly well!

And now Bella and Angela shall meet again...and everything shall come out into the open...or will it? Good thing HB's next...I'm not sure I could handle waiting another chapter to find out what happens!

Great job...another brilliant chapter!!!

 
Reviewer: pwtf Signed
Date: February 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - The End

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

I'm laughing like Angela right now...and oh so excited to know we were right...they ARE twins!!!! All our hoping beyond hope that they WERE twins despite all the evidence otherwise...actually paid off! Oh my goodness....

Sorry for being so late to this update...epsecially knowing that this was the big reveal...it nearly killed me every day I found myself too busy to read.

Wow...I've definitely loved the ride. It's so crazy...knowing now...it's like a huge weight has been lifted off my mind. No more worrying about Secrets. Gosh, what'll I do with myself now?

I do have one question, but I'll head over to the forum to see if it's been asked yet, or else ask it there.

 

Just gotta say though, I've loved every minute of this story, even when you guys tortured us so!!!

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: pwtf Signed
Date: December 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: May 4 - May 15, 2008

Hey there! I loved it, of course!

The swimming lessons are so sweet...

And I love the Esme/Bella interaction in this chapter! It's great for Bella to see she's cared for.

And the flashback at the beginning was great...seeing how she became involved with the Volturi is very intriguing!

Yet another great chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review!

Glad you liked the Esme/Bella bits... I waffled on those.

 
Reviewer: pwtf Signed
Date: December 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: May 17 - May 18, 2008

Okay, I'm now completely in love with tequila, truth or dare, and hot tubs. When it's Bella and Edward, of course. Or me and Edward. It'd be worth the splitting headache.

That...was absolutely incredible. Love it, so much.

And at the end, there, I loved how Edward was telling Emmett that he knew Bella better. Emmett means well, but I have to admit, it looks like Edward is right here...

Can't wait to see what happens...if Emmett does end up telling her about the deposition date or if Edward is able to stop him...and if he tells, how Bella responds.

Oh, and I still love the beginnings, the little flashbacks, seeing how Bella got involved since she's still not telling Edward!



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the flashbacks... I've been struggling with how to convey all that data.

To be fair to Emmett, we don't know how much time he spent with Bella when she was in need of protecting. He could safely assume he does know Bella better... Bella and Edward haven't really had that many heart-to-hearts.

Thanks, as always, for your review. I really appreciate you taking the time to write a thoughtful review.

 
Reviewer: pwtf Signed
Date: January 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: May 18 - May 20, 2008

So glad the chapter got up tonight...and what a chapter it was!!!

It's SO Bella for her to be more upset about Emmett interfering in her relations with Edward than the news of the deposition. And I love that she stood up against Emmett and hit him. And that Edward finally admitted to someone besides himself that Bella is special.

That description of Rose's overnight french toast cracked me up...because I tried to make it once with a friend, but we were out of the right kind of bread, so we decided to make our own bread. An hour later, we'd finally managed to make the dough...another half hour later it still wasn't rising...we finally just cooked it, and by then it'd been so long that we didn't even end up making the french toast. I can never think about it the same way again.

I thought it was so cute and so funny that Emmett corrected Libby's grammar.

I love that Bella is trying to keep herself from worrying about the deposition and that, even though she's upset with Emmett, she still trusts him to keep her safe.

The Bella/Alice interactions were awesome! I'm so glad that they're bonding a bit. Bella's adamance against inviting Jessica, Lauren, and Tanya was priceless, but Alice would never understand since she only knows the surface lie...

And you HAD to mention chocolate cake didn't you? I've been fantasizing about cake on another thread...especially luscious chocolate cake. mmm...is 9:20 too late to run to the store to buy a cake?

Alice shall be staying with Edward and Bella, hmm...a lot can happen there...I won't bore you with all my predictions of thoughts of potential...

Oh, and we came SO close to finding out more about the Volturi...I didn't want that section to end where it did!

I can't wait to see what the next chapter shall bring!!!!!

 
Reviewer: pwtf Signed
Date: February 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Hey Limona! I'm so sorry that it took so long for me to get to this chapter. Life's been a bitch...

This was such a wonderful chapter! On a random note, I love that Edward likes his steak rare. Yum! (yes, I'm very hungry right now).

That makeout session at the table was perfect! Lucky Bella! I don't blame her for taking advantage of the moment!

And then they're sleeping together...quite literally! Sigh...it just makes my heart fill to the brim!

I'm right there with Bella though, very curious about the whole Occhi thing.

And Laurent is such a creeper.

June 6 now, eh? We're getting quite close to a certain person's birthday...

I understand how busy you are, and I'm glad you'll still be updating! I still have to say it, though: I can't wait for the next chapter!!! See you on the forum!!!

Loved the chapter!!!

 
Sanctuary by Jfly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2144]
Summary: Feature

Edward faces a monumental crisis and finds Sanctuary in the one place he refuses to look for it. All Human.

This story contains Religious themes and Mature themes: Edward is a priest struggling with his role in the Church and as a man.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 99900
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2010


Reviewer: pwtf Signed
Date: December 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Game

Hey! Loved it!

The little green man!!!! (Sorry...long story...)

The baseball scenes are so cute...though I find it hard to imagine scoreless after 4 innings with the way my younger brother's ball games have gone! haha! I won't lie, that gets rather painful to watch...

Edward talking with Matthew was so adorable, even if he wanted to be alone with Bella. The Transformers talk!!! And then getting into the seven dwarves! So cute!

I loved Edward and Bella's bantering, especially at the end! And I love that he misses her already!!!

Basically, I loved everything!!!!

 
Reviewer: pwtf Signed
Date: January 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Cellar

Oh, they're gonna be sexin' it up next chapter for sure, haha!!!!!!!

I love how it seems like Bella is finally starting to see him as a man. How she finally seemed at ease calling him Edward...and the joking around with the knife...

I also love that Edward brought her up to his room...the first woman to be there!

And Bella may even ease up on the hyper-cleanliness!

Can't wait for all that the next chapter may bring!!!

 
Summary:

Witching Hour

 

After Edward leaves Bella in New Moon, life goes on, and she decides to start making the best of what she has. Now in her junior year at Endicott College in New England near Salem, MA, Bella is living a copacetic existence. She loves her job at the local coffee house/bookstore, is doing well at school, majoring in English, and couldn't ask for anything more. Even someone new enters Bella's life, leading her to hope that there can be (love) life after Edward. Unfortunately for Bella, she hasn't totally left trouble behind in Forks. Previously unseen forces have been set in motion, eager for her to fulfill certain destinies. And when a certain vampire family comes back into her life, will it push her in the wrong direction, or be her salvation? Can time heal all wounds or bleed them dry? Bella will soon find out as she nears the Witching Hour.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 32887
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2008 Updated: February 28, 2009


Reviewer: pwtf Signed
Date: January 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Shame

Wow...I was very intrigued by your banner when I saw it in the Rob thread...and the story did not disappoint on intrigue!

I'm already hooked and looking forward to the next chapter. I'm so curious as to what happens!!!

 
Summary:

Edward is running from home, tired and lost he saves a beautiful hitchhiker from a terrible fate. They decide to travel the road together. Unknown to them there is a trail of brutal murders left in their wake.  The killer is closer to them than they think.  Lemons in future chapters

 Banner by the talented dazzlemebetch

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 89315
[Report This] Published: December 03, 2008 Updated: August 01, 2010


Reviewer: pwtf Signed
Date: December 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Insert Coastal City Here

Wow! I love this!

Reading both your stories shows how incredibly talented you are. They're such different characters, but you write them both so wonderfully. You have great variety in your writing!

James is a bastard.

I love how both Bella and Edward are quite like they are in the book, but they're willing to follow through on their impulses more than you usually see in stories. I love how Bella ran her hands through Edward's hair and then he kissed her - just because they wanted to at the diner. I don't see it as moving too fast at all.

I love the characterizations already and am eager for more!!!

 
Summary:

We always want what we can't have, but their love for each other was so much more than just temptation. He was the eager young teacher, Bella's friend and her inspiration in a high school world where she didn't quite fit. She was the bright young woman who took Edward completely by surprise, his saving grace after years of closing himself off from life and love. When their days are turned upside down by their secret relationship, will they find a way to be together?

 

 

Rated for subject matter and sexually explicit material in later chapters. Huge thanks to Anne Cullen for the awesome new banner and to m81170 the beautiful fan art/banner below! You are both amazing!  

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 64999
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2008 Updated: May 07, 2010


Reviewer: pwtf Signed
Date: December 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Words of Wisdom

I don't know about not as heartbreaking...reading Edward's thoughts through that has my own heart bleeding. And I'm shaking right along with him. Though that might be the cold...

 He's definitely between a rock and a hard place. Although that phrase just makes me laugh now ever since the Simpsons movie...

 Probably a good thing since your chapter was so beautifully depressing that I'm completely heartbroken. Great job.

 I am so addicted. I'm already needing another update! Love it!



Author's Response:

rofl!!! As inappropriate as this probably is, that is EXACTLY what I was thinking about when I wrote that line. hahaha. I'm so sorry you were extremely heartbroken. I really didn't think it would be that bad and I chalk it up to reading over the chapter so many times and falling asleep at the computer when I posted, haha.

Thanks so much for the awesome review and the next chapter will be posted by sunday at the VERY latest. ^_^

 
Summary:

He died. She was Devastated. In a desperate attempt to join her late husband, Bella's life is turned upside-down as she realizes that everything she thought she knew was all wrong. In the battle for power, protection and control, the fate of her one true love rests in her hands as she fights to save him from more than just himself.

Extended from One-shot. Formerly titled Probably Wouldn't Be This Way and, later, Second Chance at Forever. Rated R for Dark Themes/Violence/Slight Sexual Content.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2354
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2009


Reviewer: pwtf Signed
Date: January 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Probably Wouldn't Be This Way

Hey! Loved it...so sad...but so good!!!





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