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Legendary by nomdeplume Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 284]
Summary:

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Edward Cullen used to be invisible. But all of a sudden, after summer break, he's back and unrecognizable- gorgeous, confident and irresistable to any woman he looks at. As Bella Swan delves into what exactly changed Edward so drastically and investigates his power over the females of Forks, she begins to realize... she might not like the answers she gets.   A fun, naughty little quasi-mystery.

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Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 44004
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2010 Updated: June 08, 2010


Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: April 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Myth

One of the best non-descriptions (but demonstation) of sex I've read. Excellent.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and reviewing multiple chaps! answers will be revealed soon enough. and yes, I'm not really a smut writer. I prefer to just point your dirty little minds in the right directions and let you create the details ;)

 
Some Life In Me by Pixiechick Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 530]
Summary:

He was a happy, successful family man, until a single instant changed everything and he lost everything he held dear. Unable to deal with his loss, he walked away from everything else.  She was the average small town girl, and in a staggering instant her life changed. Fate threw them together.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 146963
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2010 Updated: February 24, 2011


Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: April 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Awaken

Another great chapter - your descriptions and writing style pulls me right into the story - love it!

 
Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Chaos

Wonderfully written as always, nicely done! I so enjoy getting pulled into their world - thank you!

 
Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: April 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Normal

Uh-oh, who's going to see the photo in the paper? Nicely done as always.

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is an anomaly as far as Bella Swan is concerned, defying all her preconceived notions about the whorishness of hockey players. Through incessant stalking and persistence, can Edward wears down Bella's resistence and teaches her to embrace her inner hockey hooker? A ridiculous love story.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 14519
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2010 Updated: August 19, 2010


Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: April 28, 2010 Title: The Misapprehension of Bella Swan Regarding the Inferior Intellect of Hockey Whores

I chuckle-snorted and then laughed out loud through this entire chapter. Sea Monkies? Neato? Snuffleupagus? Oh. My.

 
Summary:

It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Manwhoreward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 29 Completed: No Word count: 174756
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2010 Updated: September 16, 2010


Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: March 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Love the banter and dialog between these two - very sexy and intimate in both a sexual and friendship manner - hard to do!

 
Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

"How do I take care of you? How do I make sure I give you what you need?"

Gah - this is almost better than an 'I love you'...wait...I think it IS better. It makes me want to do rude things to him. Nice.

 
Summary:

An unexpected discovery reveals that Edward lied when he left Bella.  Now, Bella is determined to find a way to contact him, and in the process she learns more than she ever knew about Edward Cullen.

An Edward and Bella love story.

Thank you Mothlights for the fantastic banner!!


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 178682
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: November 12, 2010


Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: April 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Gothic Romance

Loved how you told Edward's rebellious history through Callum - very clever and a really interesting way to do that.  I'm really enjoying this take on canon.

 
Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: March 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Look Out Below

Nicely done canon, and I love her "ah-ha" moment. I've always felt she should have that sort of realization, so thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you liked it :)

 
Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: March 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: And So It Begins

Oh, the Vogue subscription, very clever! I'm really enjoying this take on canon - just great so far!

 
Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: April 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Serious Intentions

What?! He knows? Argh - must know more! Great chapter - loved the part with the photos and how she actually sees how much he loved her. Nicely done.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much, glad you're enjoying :)

 
Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Sentimental Vampire (angelicwish)

I really like the memories she relates - especially enjoyed the one with Edward's act of looking older, the glasses, and the car show.

 
Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: June 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Gift Box

Oh, the tickle-fight...love it. I think I might have mentioned it before , but it's worth repeating - I 'm really enjoying the flashbacks and the glimpses into their everyday lives. It's a refreshing look at their relationship. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: June 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Bandage

I don't know why, but the thought of him racing her in her truck was just so...awww...

Very mean way to end the chappie, but I'm excited to see how you handle their reunion. It's been fantastic so far! 

 
Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Very Good Wrist Action

I love how you addressed and "fixed" so many of the things in canon - the relaizations, the communication, the details - Thank you!

 
Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: August 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Presents

This just completely sucks me in every time I sit down to read - and I love it. I know I'm repeating myself, but this is so how I wish canon would have gone. :)

 
Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: September 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Getting There

So glad he's sharing and not keeping things from her. Love the idea of them buying land and building. It seems so...normal. Such great interactions between the two of them - I enjoyed it!

 
RPGs by Twilightzoner Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 92]
Summary:

 

A continuation of Midnight Desire and ExB's, er, growth and explorations.  The monster comes along on the journey, too!

Thank you to Anne for the amazing banner! 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 27846
[Report This] Published: February 28, 2010 Updated: January 30, 2011


Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: February 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

If that's rusty, we'll probably all go up in flames when you really get lubed up...so to speak...So glad to see the monster getting a little action again. 

 
Summary:

 

 

 

A camping expedition goes awry when Bella's friends disappear after a hike. While searching for them, she stumbles upon the manor of Edward Cullen, unaware that she is about to become a pawn in his dangerous game - a game she can't afford to lose.

 

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Horror/Suspense

 

--WARNINGS--

Violence, Language, Dark themes

(no rape, no cutting)

 

--ADDITIONAL--

AU/OOC/Vamp&Human/"Darkward"


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 39019
[Report This] Published: March 05, 2010 Updated: July 28, 2010


Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: April 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Start of Something Horrifying

Yikes! Intriguing first chapter, and well written.

 
Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: April 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Big Fish, Little Fish

Rut-roh. Looks like the big fish found lunch...



Author's Response:

hehe

Fishing. Oh, yeah. =)

It's late, so I'm out of it. Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: June 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: A Human Counterpart

Wow, shades of Hannibal Lecter - nice! Great job on the Edward-crazies - talking to himself in the library. This is a good old-fashioned horror story, and I'm really enjoying so far!



Author's Response:

Yes, definitely shades of Hannibal going on here. I'm thrilled that you're enjoying it!

♥ Raggdoll

 
Reviewer: m7707 Signed
Date: August 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Poisoned Devils

This was wonderfully wicked. What a great example of Twilight horror. The quote at the end was just perfect - I could almost hear the words spoken out loud. Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you, m7707!

I'm thrilled to see that you enjoyed the story! I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave your thoughts. I thought the end quote would be a good way to finish the story because several things could happen from that point on. I wanted to leave the reader guessing what would happen. I will be writing an epilogue, though, but I'm unsure of when it will be posted.

Thanks again!

♥ Raggdoll

 




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