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Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3033]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

ALSO POSTED ON FANFICTION.NET


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: War in a Waiting Room

u REALLY need 2 update this story faster!!!!!!!!!

other than that is great!!! eeven if i don't like the thought of jake not being in love with bella

 
Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Control

im happy u finally updated!!!!!

my only problem is that i read the chapter one fan fic first only because i didn't no how long it would take to update this one!lol

ur story is great!!!! i love it and can't wait to read the rest

 
Perspective by ekimmuh Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2527]
Summary:

Edward seeks out the counsel of his father and brothers after agreeing to be with Bella after their wedding. What will Edward do with that advise and how will he and Bella prepare for their upcoming wedding night.

Thanks to Anne Cullen for this beautiful banner.

Perspective Banner

Shimmer Award


Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 132792
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2008 Updated: March 17, 2010


Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - (J)

for the love of god speed it up a little please (i means this in a good my not tring to be mean about it)



Author's Response:

LOL. When I read this I burst into laughter so loud my husband asked what was wrong with me.

 
Breathe Again by Ysar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5438]
Summary: Feature

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards  


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010


Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Retribution: Jacob's POV

OMG!!!!!!! there has to be more!!!!!! ive never done drugs before but if i had this would beat ALL of them!!! (i no that sounds dramtic but i just really love ur writing n i can't get enough)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  And yes, there's lots more to come!

 
Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Dilemma: Bella's POV

wen r u going to add more!!! i really need to no! r u even going to add more?



Author's Response:

Yes, I will add more.  Until you see the words "the end," it will continue.

 
Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Questions: Jacob's POV

TO BE HONEST I DON'T GIVE A DAM WHERE ITS GOING AS LONG AS U KEEP WRITING!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

 
Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 50: Unrest: Jacob's POV

OMG!!! plz if u bring edward back she can't leave jake!!!!

im so tried of reading edward/bella stuff (not that i don't love edward)

i just really want jacob to get his chance he was cheated in those books!!!

 



Author's Response:

Well, Jacob's getting his chance now.  We'll just have to see if he plays his cards right...

 
Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 51: Quiet: Bella's POV

omg!!! awesome twist!!!
can't wait to see the drama with Jessica!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 53: Nuisance: Bella's POV

lol funny note

dude wat happened to jake? n wat is differnet bout the house?

plz explain



Author's Response:

Jake will tell us where he ran off to in his POV.  As for the house, it's not really different at all.  It just feels empty after spending the night with Jake.  I mean, wouldn't we all hate to come home to an empty bed after that sofa? ;)

 
Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 54: Nuisance: Jacob's POV

i love you story!!!! its absolutely great!!!!

but if u don't mind update faster!!! its like hell waiting

 
Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 54: Nuisance: Jacob's POV

i love you story!!!! its absolutely great!!!!

but if u don't mind update faster!!! its like hell waiting



Author's Response:

Thank you, but I'm afraid it's just not possible to update faster.  Every free second I have is already spent working on this story, including several hours each night that I should be sleeping.  Unless I win the lottery tomorrow and can hire people to take care of everything for me, this is as good as it gets.

 
Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 55: Overwrought: Bella's POV

omg!!! ur story is amazing!!!!

i no im going 2 b sorry 4 asking this but how many chapters r left????



Author's Response:

I honestly don't know.  A few posts back I said in the author's note that there would be at least 20 more posts (so ten chapters from each POV), but I haven't been counting since then.

 
Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 58: Discovered: Jacob's POV

omg!!! y so short?????



Author's Response:

Because I'd rather concentrate on the story development than count words.

 
Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 59: Panic: Bella's POV

wow! emotional!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Summary:

FanFiction Banner -- If One Day

 

Emma is a terminally ill patient, under Carlisle's care. What happens when they form a bond? What happens when a Psych patient threatens everything? How does Edward take to the girl? And How will it effect Edward when she dies?
BETA'D by my lovely Emily

 

Finished... but the sequal "Will You Have Gone Forever" will be posted soon!


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alice, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 12849
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2008 Updated: March 13, 2009


Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prelude:

ITS WELL WRITTEN BUT I NEED MORE!!

 
Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

u should defenetly write more!!!!!!!!!!!!! (sry if i spelled that wrong im not good at spelling)

 
The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13645]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

in so sad to see the story come to an end but at the same time im happy. (if that makes sence)

i want another story plz!!!!! im so happy to have found someone who understands how to detial such amazing sences!!!!!! i absolutly love it n i could never get enough.

GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!! actually great doesn't even come close to how i really feel.

 
Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

this was one of the best stories i have read!!!
is there more or was this the end?

if so please write more!!!! ur amazing

 
Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

U HAVE TO FINISH!!!! LPEASE THIS IS TORTOURE!!!!

 
Unwanted by bloodredlust Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1577]
Summary:

Edward couldn't bear to watch his beloved Bella being torn apart from the inside by his baby… so how might things have turned out for our favourite couple if he had taken the steps to ensure Bella’s survival, rather than let his spawn kill her. Very dark, Angsty little 'what if' story.

twilight,edward cullen,bella cullen,edward and bella,fanfics

A HUGE thankyou to Emerald-Rosalie for the amazing banner.  I love it!


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 85602
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2008 Updated: September 15, 2009


Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Unwanted

HOW DO U KILL JACOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HOW IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE!!!

GREAT STORY BY THE WAY = )

 
Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Intervention

WAT THE FUCK!!!!!

WAT HAVE U DONE!!!!

THIS IS LIKE A TRAIN WRECK YOU LOOK AWAY FROM NO MATTER HOW HORRIBLE IT LOOKS!!!!

FOR THE LOVE OF GOD PUT THEM BACK!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Benevolence

LOL LOVE UR AUTHORS NOTE.

UR RIGH WAT BETTER WAY

 
Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

ME!!! ME!!! I WANT A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!! LOL I THINK THATS A GREAT IDEA!!!!!!

 
Summary:

It's been three long years since Edward left Bella, and things within The Cullen family have changed epically. After Edward's final stand off with Victoria, Emmett is left heartbroken and alone. A chance vision sends him back to Forks, and into the healing arms of the one person he never expected. Why fight with fate?

 

 New Moon AU - Bella/Emmett.

 


Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 64433
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2009 Updated: February 22, 2011


Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Not Meant To Be

i need more!!!!

like wat the fuck happened to jacob and leah?
n no offense everything was great but i really don't want to read the ending of the second book all over again i didn't like that part of the book.

other than that it a GREAT story n i look foward to reading the rest of it

plz hurrywith it i can't wait!!!

 
Reviewer: misscullen112108 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Run

i think bella with emmett's child is great!!!!!!

 




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