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Summary:

 

Cimmerian Dawn

Thanks, yet again, to the wonderful frozensoldier for my banner.

Edward and his family are vampires who feed off the emotions of their human victims. Over time they have learnt to control their feeding so that they can live undetected. The arrival of a new student at Forks High School is the catalyst for a change that will shake them to the core.

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 31284
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2011 Updated: September 30, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Awakening

Glad to see she's responding



Author's Response:

Yes, we're almost there :)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Change

Sad chapter indeed.  What IS going on with Bella?  Please update soon



Author's Response:

Well ...

Actually, I think you'd better wait for the next update!! lol

Thanks for reviewing :)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Inferno

I really like this twist on Twilight



Author's Response:

Thank you. We will still get a few iconic moments from the book, like Port Angeles and the meadow, but they will have a very different take on them. Glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for taking the time to review.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Beginnings

Interesting.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I hope it gets even more interesting for you as we progress. :)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Decoy

I was wondering how you were going to work in J & V



Author's Response:

Well, Victoria is no more, but unfortunately James has Bella. :(

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Pursuit

I hope you go with vampirism.  Edward will have to adjust



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! It would be a really rubbish story if she died :(

Don't worry - vampirism - even a souless, emotionless monster - is better than death. I think. ?

 
Summary:

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There's only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet.  Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemons and language

*thanks to mkystich for the amazing banner*


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 18320
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2011 Updated: October 03, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Playbook

This is going to be interesting

 
Summary:

 

One seconds loss of control and all is ruined. Trapped in her own body Bella needs to find a way to make herself heard.

A tale of love, loss and family.

Jasper/Bella Friendship. Eventual Edward/Bella romance.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Leah, Paul, Rosalie, Sam
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 112104
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2011 Updated: December 27, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen - Every Little Thing

Go Jasper



Author's Response:

 

Thanks for the review.

Simaril x 

 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve - I Should Have Known Better

Can he damage himself beyond a werwolf's aility to heal?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen - A Beginning

Loved hearing Bella's side of things.  Can't wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

 

Thanks for the review.

Simaril x 

 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter Thirty Three - You're Going to Lose That Girl

I'm glad Bella survived.  Where is Edward?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter Thirty Eight - I Don't Want to See You Again

I hope they can stop her



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Simaril x

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty Four - The Long and Winding Road

Can't wait for more info on Rose's gift.  I hope Bella communicates soon.  Where is Edward?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen - How Do You Do It?

We need Edward back stat



Author's Response:

 

Thanks for reviewing

Simaril x 

 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty Eight - Watching Rainbows

I'm glad they all believe Jasper.  How are you going to get Edward back?



Author's Response:

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Simaril x 

 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven - Crying, Waiting, Hoping

Yikes!



Author's Response:

 

Thanks for reviewing.

Simaril

 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty Six - Let It Be

I'm glad Rose had her talk.  What did Alice see?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine - A Hard Days Night

Loved Jared's POV.  I hope Jake won't cause too much trouble



Author's Response:

 

Thanks for reviewing.

I am very fond of Jared.

Simaril x 

 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen - She Came in Through the Bathroom Window

So Victoria made a new friend and convinced him/her Bella did it? Hmm.  Edward, where are you?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing

Simaril x 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Devil In Her Heart

Please update sonn.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. 

Simaril x 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty Two - Hold Me Tight

ARGH!  Don't leave us hanging for too long



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. 

Simaril x 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty Seven - Do You Want to Know a Secret

I loved Rose's talk.  I can't wait for Edward to show up



Author's Response:

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Simaril x 

 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter Thirty -- You Can't Do That

I'm glad Bella got her story out

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter Thirty Two - Soldier of Love

GO Esme

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter Thirty Four - It's for You

No.  Don't go.  Looking forward to the next chapter



Author's Response:

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Simaril x 

 

 




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