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Summary: On Bella's first day of college, she's seated next to mirror image of her dead mother. In her quest to find out the truth behind the resemblance, she's drawn into a world she never knew existed
Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Word count: 28116
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2011 Updated: January 28, 2013
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 26, 2012
Title: Chapter 17: Ambition should be made of sterner stuff
I kind of like this POV. I really want to see this family meeting
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Say as you think and speak it from your souls
Great first kiss. not too concerned with B & E's v status.
What does Alice want? Author's Response:
Teaser’s on the way...
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Tis better to bear the ills we have than fly to others that we know not of
Very interesting. Always glad to see an update
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 08, 2012
Title: Chapter 18: By That Sin Fell The Angels
Great chapter
Summary: Bella and Alice were best friends, which made Bella the only girl off limits to Alice's brother Edward. When a party the summer after graduation gets out of control, Bella's world is turned upside down. "He doesn't know. I don't want him to."
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Riley, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No
Word count: 340608
[Report This] Published: January 12, 2011 Updated: April 17, 2013
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 08, 2013
Title: Chapter 35: The Storm
I'm glad Charlie is more or less ok & I hope Bell will be too. Can't wait to hear the rest of James' story Author's Response: Hi,
James' story is coming. Poor Edward. :o\
Thank you so much for reading and for reviewing. The next chapter has been submitted and should be up soon.
xoxo
~LC~
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 06, 2013
Title: Chapter 34: The Calm
Glad you let us know that James & Tanya are in this together. I hope you let them get caught before either of those clowns does something to hurt Charlie Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I haven't been very good at replying, but I do want you to know how much I appreciate it.
Just submitted the next chapter, so it shouldn't be too much longer. xoxoxo
~Lc~
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 24, 2012
Title: Chapter 29: Arresting Developments
So Luke did it? Where does James fit n? What will it take to get rid of Tanya?
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 13, 2012
Title: Chapter 28: Family First
Great Thanksgiving. Oh Tanya! I loved the way Edward handled it.
Who is the mystery stalker? When will we find out about Edward's test? Author's Response: Hi!
I've been terrible about replying to reviews, but I very much appreciate that you are reading and reviewing. Thank you so much.
Edward certainly isn't going to let the bane of his existance ruin what he has. That in itself shows just how much he's grown, right? :oD
Next chapter should be submitted soon.
xxxx
~lc~
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 09, 2012
Title: Chapter 26: Have a Little Faith.
Cammy's place caught fire or Cammy set a fire?
Good for Edward for saying no to Amber.
Loved that he & B are communicating
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 29, 2011
Title: Chapter 25: Just a Little Patience
It looks like Bella reacted well to Cammy's surprise
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When Bella opens her dance studio right next to Edward's bar, will Edward hate her...or will he fall for the girl next door? BxE, AH, OOC, rated M for naughty language and behavior.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 161165
[Report This] Published: January 16, 2011 Updated: May 08, 2012
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 17, 2012
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Great Christmas. I hope Edward can make Aro an offer he can't refuse
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 05, 2012
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Good introspection Edward.
Summary: 
It is now six years since the Volturi left the battlefield in Forks. Existence is sweet for the Cullens. But Alice hasn't been feeling well lately. Edward knows that Carlisle is worried and with good reason. Because they both know Vampires Don't Get Sick!!
"After Sunset" is rated 'PG-13' for teens and older. This is the PG-13 version of my story, "Sunset Riders."
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Amun, Bella, Benjamin, Carlisle, Chelsea, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Gianna, Jacob, Jasper, Kebi, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie, Stefan, Tanya, Tia, Vladimir
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Word count: 29459
[Report This] Published: January 19, 2011 Updated: March 07, 2011
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Rivals
I can't wrap my mind around Nahuel working at Newton's. What does Mike think, I wonder?
And Chelsea was married to Vlad? That is wild. Author's Response: I thought if I were a 150 year old half-vamp hanging out in the forest [used to hangin' out in the amazon jungle sooo...] a place that sells camping gear might be a fairly comfortable fit for me. Nahuel looks like a teen, and has a pulse, so if Mike could accept Edward & co. he should take fairly easily to Nahuel. Chelsea and Vlad might make a better match than you'd think after reading 'History' tell me what you think!! LOL!! Thanks for thinking about this stuff and for giving me your honest review!! Hope you like it enough to finish!! KC
Summary: This is a series of limericks based on Twilight. Sheer fun and silliness.
Categories: Twilight, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Marcus, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 542
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2011 Updated: February 04, 2011
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: The Cullens and Twilight in Rhyme
fun Author's Response: I thought so :)
Summary: While out hunting, a mysterious fog somehow sends half of the Cullen family back to the year 1687. In their attempts to return to their own time, they learn of a plot that might ultimately endanger the very future of all mythical creatures.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No
Word count: 47478
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2011 Updated: March 23, 2013
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 22, 2012
Title: Chapter 7: The Life Contract
Cool stroy about the hands
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 10, 2012
Title: Chapter 10: The Best Laid Plans of Mice and Men
Very interesting
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: The Life Contract
Interesting flashback
Summary: Ever wonder what was going on in Edward's mind while Victoria was on the loose? While Bella was running away to spend time with Jacob? During that epic battle? Bloodlust is Edward's chance to tell his side of the story, Eclipse as told from his point of view.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 13966
[Report This] Published: January 26, 2011 Updated: February 26, 2011
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Visions and Vacations
Great chapter. Looking forward to Florida
Summary: 
Millionaire Edward Cullen fell quickly for small town Bella, and their dreamy romance soon led to wedding bells. But their relationship’s foundation is anything but sturdy.
When their new marriage is about to fall apart, Bella inexplicably goes missing. Edward is determined to search for her, but does Bella want to be found?
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A time-jumping romance filled with love, heartache and intrigue. Rated for language and some sexuality.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No
Word count: 44664
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2011 Updated: May 13, 2012
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Very curious about her captor
Summary: 
A recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Upon reconnecting with her friend Alice Cullen, Bella meets her brother and business partner, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for two years, what will happen when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to the sexy new Bella that Alice helps create?
**WINNER OF 5 SUNFLOWER AWARDS: Best Bella, Best Alice, Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance**
**Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011**
Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes
Word count: 435439
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2011 Updated: December 11, 2011
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 40: 40 - The Chase
Glad Quil admitted the pretense. Pleae update soon. Renee is sick
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 19, 2011
Title: Chapter 39: 39 - Mise en Place
Please update soon.
Summary: 
Bella is in her senior year, studying fine arts at a Minnesota University. Edward is the hot new professor on campus. Bella is shocked when Edward asks her for a date -- spend the weekend with him at his lake home -- even though they barely know each other. From mirrors on the bedroom ceiling, to people who show up at the most inopportune times, they are in for a wild ride. Can they find love in all the right places?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 63 Completed: Yes
Word count: 272670
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2011 Updated: June 15, 2012
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 01, 2012
Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55: Compromises
Great chapter. I liked how they are working things out for the boys
Summary: 
All Human: Bella is a depressed drug addict sent to Forks to heal after "a bad... breakup." Instead, she meets Edward and gets him into things he isn't ready for. All-canon ships; rated Nc-17 for drug use, cutting, and mild lemons.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No
Word count: 48854
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2011 Updated: May 26, 2012
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 15, 2012
Title: Chapter 23: Zesty
Glad to see they're makinf progress. I love Charlie Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 13, 2012
Title: Chapter 22: Ditching gym again
It will be interesting to see how their relationship goes
Summary: 
When Edward returns to Bella of his own accord, he does not realise that just a few hours earlier she nearly drowned in an attempt to hear his voice. He soon finds that the girl he came back to is indeed very much altered from the girl he left behind, and that it takes more than saying sorry to rebuild their lives.
Thanks to Annamorphos for providing the banner!
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 82053
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2011 Updated: April 05, 2013
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 17, 2012
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I don't understand. Did the Volturi poison the tea?
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