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Summary:

This is a series of limericks based on Twilight.  Sheer fun and silliness.


Categories: Twilight, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Marcus, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 542
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2011 Updated: February 05, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Cullens and Twilight in Rhyme

fun



Author's Response:

I thought so  :)

 
Summary:

While out hunting, a mysterious fog somehow sends half of the Cullen family back to the year 1687.  In their attempts to return to their own time, they learn of a plot that might ultimately endanger the very future of all mythical creatures.

 

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 65434
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2011 Updated: October 14, 2014


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: The Life Contract

Cool stroy about the hands

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: The Best Laid Plans of Mice and Men

Very interesting

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: The Life Contract

Interesting flashback

 
Bloodlust by WriteforLove Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Ever wonder what was going on in Edward's mind while Victoria was on the loose?  While Bella was running away to spend time with Jacob? During that epic battle?  Bloodlust is Edward's chance to tell his side of the story, Eclipse as told from his point of view.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 13966
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2011 Updated: February 26, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Visions and Vacations

Great chapter.  Looking forward to Florida

 
Rosebud by Arabella_ Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 304]
Summary:

Rosebud by Arabella_

 

Millionaire Edward Cullen fell quickly for small town Bella, and their dreamy romance soon led to wedding bells. But their relationship’s foundation is anything but sturdy.

When their new marriage is about to fall apart, Bella inexplicably goes missing. Edward is determined to search for her, but does Bella want to be found?

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A time-jumping romance filled with love, heartache and intrigue. Rated for language and some sexuality.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No Word count: 44664
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2011 Updated: May 13, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Very curious about her captor

 
Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1690]
Summary:

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A recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Upon reconnecting with her friend Alice Cullen, Bella meets her brother and business partner, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for two years, what will happen when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to the sexy new Bella that Alice helps create?
**WINNER OF 5 SUNFLOWER AWARDS: Best Bella, Best Alice, Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance**
**Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011**


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes Word count: 435439
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2011 Updated: December 11, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 40: 40 - The Chase

Glad Quil admitted the pretense.  Pleae update soon.  Renee is sick

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 39: 39 - Mise en Place

Please update soon.

 
Permanent Twilight by Laural Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

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All Human: Bella is a depressed drug addict sent to Forks to heal after "a bad... breakup." Instead, she meets Edward and gets him into things he isn't ready for. All-canon ships; rated Nc-17 for drug use, cutting, and mild lemons.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 48854
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2011 Updated: May 26, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Zesty

Glad to see they're makinf progress. I love Charlie



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Ditching gym again

It will be interesting to see how their relationship goes

 
Summary:

Whatever is left of me

When Edward returns to Bella of his own accord, he does not realise that just a few hours earlier she nearly drowned in an attempt to hear his voice. He soon finds that the girl he came back to is indeed very much altered from the girl he left behind, and that it takes more than saying sorry to rebuild their lives.

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Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 82053
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2011 Updated: April 05, 2013


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I don't understand.  Did the Volturi poison the tea?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Hmm I haven't read Vanity Fair.  What exactly did Bella see?



Author's Response:

All that will become clear in the next chapter :-) Thanks for reviewing!!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm sorry that Edward is still reluctant to change her.  I hope he gets over it.  I want a HEA

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Uh oH Did the Volturi come to visit?



Author's Response:

It seems probable, doesn't it ? ;-) Thanks for reviewing!! I hope you liked the chapter.

 
Summary:

Drinking only the blood of animals, Edward Masen fought to keep his humanity in an existence that always craved death and human blood.  But after ten years of suppressing the monster that rules his instincts, Edward believes that you can't hold on to what you don't have.  As he struggles with his ideals over right and wrong, Edward must decide if his humanity is a fair price to pay for a decent meal.

This story covers Edward's "rebellious years" when he left Carlisle to prey on humans.  But only the bad ones, so it's okay.......he thinks.

 *Awesome banner created by the amazing Tkegl.  Go read her stories.  Now.*


Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 31312
[Report This] Published: February 06, 2011 Updated: June 04, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

oh Edward



Author's Response:

Haha. I wonder how often Carlisle thought that during Edward's "upbringing". Thanks for leaving a review.

 
Love Story by EveryDayBella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 99]
Summary:

Twenty-two year old Princess Bella Swan thinks she knows what she wants out of life, a handsome prince to sweep her off her feet and rescue her from a life of service. When quiet, intuitive, pianist Edward Cullen is invited to Court though, Bella's world is a thrown a curve ball. Love may come easy, but life in Court, modern though it maybe, is never easy. Surrounded by scheming lords and power hungry men, Bella and Edward may be doomed to the same fate as every other star-crossed lover in history. As Bella learns more about herself she's pulled between choices far greater than simple lovers, because in her hands rests the fate of an entire kingdom.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 114840
[Report This] Published: February 09, 2011 Updated: April 02, 2013


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Crack the Shutters

Sounds like it's going to be a great vacation.  I feel badly for Cynthia being the only single



Author's Response:

I know right? Something tells me that Cynthia can take care of herself though. ;-) Thanks for the review!

 
Summary:

These are a collection of outtakes and deleted scenes from my story, For Whom the Bell Tolls.  There will probably be around half a dozen chapters in this submission, including Alice and Jake POVs.  And some vampy lemons.


Categories: AU Characters: Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 6456
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2011 Updated: February 08, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Before the Crash

Nice out take

 
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***BANNER BY BABISTARR - THANK YOU!!!***

What’s a girl to do when she determines that there aren’t any good men left?  She creates them.  Bella Swan was unlucky in love, so she started creating dream men in fiction.  She wrote about the kind of man she’d love to meet and fall in love with, and for the amount of time it took to write her romance novels, she felt like she had a love of her own.  It wasn’t real, but in her opinion, real love wasn’t something that was within her grasp, so the fantasy was better than nothing. 

One day, suffering from writer’s block, she went to the corner café for a change of scenery.  When a cowboy tripped over her purse, she was so captivated by his appearance, that she had inspiration for a new character in her latest book.  He walked away with only a few words in her direction, and all she had was the visual of his green eyes and wild hair to go on, but for her, it was enough to fuel her imagination.

The stars at night are big and bright…deep in the heart of Texas.  Life holds mysteries that one can never fathom, and maybe there’s such a thing as fate.  Maybe, every once in a while, fate gives a hand to a lonesome cowboy and a romantic at heart…sometimes with a little help from a rabbit.

AH/OOC.  Canon couples.  Rated NC-17 for a reason like always.  Saddle up…we’re going for a ride.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Completed: Yes Word count: 354691
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2011 Updated: February 26, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54 - Days Go By

Things are looking pretty good for the Cullens.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 - Friendly Competition

Nice anniversary

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 - Love of a Lifetime

Great chapter.  have fun with your hubby tomorrow

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51 - Second Chances

Great.  I hope Edward makes it home safely

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53 - The Love of Family

Great chapter.  What is Baby Girl Cullen's name?

 
Resent by sistergrimm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 234]
Summary:

AU Post-New Moon. NOTE- AU Hybrid Vamps:

Tony Swan

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Set in 2010, the supernatural world is in a crisis unprecedented, its' very structure challenged by a force yet to be seen. As this new threat sends ripples of discord and panic throughout the ranks, a young vampire and her two children, twin beings as different as light and dark, struggle to remain hidden in the shadows; away from the world they belong to.

But not for long: Embittered by the desperate state his father left him, his mother, and his sister in five years prior, Tony Swan yearns for purpose; an opportunity to let out who he truly is. No more lies. No more veils. He won't have to wait long-as his sister grows normally, he inches closer and closer to adulthood, mind and body rapidly maturing despite the few years he has walked this Earth. And yet, throughout all this, one key fact remains forgotten by the young hybrid: fate's plan is never simple.

And in a world where monsters of human and marble flesh exist, how can it be?

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Pulling to re-write:

Well, technically not pulling, but definitely re-writing.

I’ve given it a lot of thought. I was actually going to do this once I got the 13th chapter of my main WIP out (So it wouldn’t that bad of a shock, after all I already warned of a hiatus on its way), but so far I haven’t been able to churn out anything that could pass as a chapter that’s “in- character” in regards to the present version of my fic. It’s just…not working. No matter how hard I try to write ch.13, I keep going back to my old copies of chapters one, two, and three and re-writing them. Hell, I’m already on ch.4.

I’ve looked at my early chapters, compared them to the most recent ones, and realized that the flow, the tone of the writing itself, doesn’t match. I had a completely different mindset when I began, still figuring things out, still not setting things in stone, and throughout the experience I learned a lot. More so if I hadn’t posted in the first place. A huge learning experience, I guess you could say.

It made me remember why I wanted to write this story in the first place, and that because I was under the impression I had to conform to a framework because it was fan fiction, I put what I really wanted on the back burner in order to write/focus on what I thought was supposed to be written/focused on.

And then I finally had an epiphany: I don’t have to follow any sort of guideline. I can write what I want to write. I don’t have to have the story closely tailored around Edward and Bella, or any of the other canon characters, I don’t have to write from certain POV’s in the first place because the truth is, my story, as someone commented after looking over a past chapter I’d written, is “not really about Twilight.”
And that’ s the truth. Resent isn’t about Twilight, at least, not completely.

To the person who commented, thank you, by the way. You know who you are.

Now, you may ask, “why post a wip in the first place?” well, the truth was, I didn’t think the fandom would still be around once I completed Resent. It was 2010, the twi-craze was already dying down somewhat, and I thought it would be risky to take my time and finish the story first before posting. I thought I was working on borrowed time. Plus, I wasn’t sure if the twist I had going with my main oc’s. would be received well.

The reviews and the fact that a good number of us are still here kind of blows those pre-conceived notions out of the ballpark, to my sweet relief.

What I said in past thread posts still stands: as long as the story is posted, it is not abandoned. Hiatus maybe, but not abandoned. The fact that it is still there means that I’m still a part of the fandom. If I ever decide to flounce, there is no way in hell that I would ever leave any of my writing’s unmonitored on the internet. If I ever decide to discontinue, you readers will be the first to know.

I’m leaving the current copy of Resent on ff.net, twilighted, and twcs for these reasons, and also because I know there are some who still enjoy re-reading the posted chapters. I’m sorry if this is upsetting. I know the update schedule for this fic has been somewhat tumultuous and nail-biting, especially with how things were left the last chapter, but I feel like if I don’t say something now, I’m going to end up posting something bland and soulless. Once I’ve written enough of the new version (or completed it) I’ll pull the old version and start re-posting.

I won’t hold it against you if you flounce, just don’t tell me that you are.

Again, I’m sorry about this guy’s, but my gut is telling me this is something I have to do.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 81816
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2011 Updated: August 24, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Cannibal Glow

VEry good conversation between Tony & Bella.  I wish I coud have heard bella & Edward



Author's Response:

You might get a glimpse...later on. :D

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The life it seems

Good to see an update.  I still want to know how Bella found Nahuel, survived the birth and became a vampire.



Author's Response:

All in good time :) thankd for reviewing...

 

 
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Summary: One Bride, One Groom… One Huge Lie. Edward and Bella get together at a party hosted by Mike Newton, but by the end of the night, something's come between them. Fast forward four years to Edward's wedding to Tanya. Bella learns the truth behind what happened on that long ago night. Can she convince Edward to listen to the truth before it's too late?

Authors: SaritaDreaming and Wendy73 (wmr1601)

Loosely based on the song 'Speak Now' by Taylor Swift.

Lemonade will be served, eventually.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No Word count: 178534
[Report This] Published: March 02, 2011 Updated: November 11, 2014


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24 ~ The Price of Admission ~

Glad Becca called the calvery

 




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