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The Vial by daenaira Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary:

The Vial contains three items: a strand of hair, a small piece of cloth, and an eyelash. All three items belong to Bella's Maker, her Vampyre. She is tracking him down and she will find him if it takes her until the end of time. Bella is intent upon revenge but her plans go awry when she finally does meet her Vampyre. She is caught between two choices; will she finally kill him for all the pain he has put her through?

Or will she finally learn to love?

An Angsty fic with a streak of romance. Rated M for violence, language, and sexual scenes.

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 30780
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2011 Updated: May 03, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Square One

So the mother is still alive?  Can't wait to see wht's up

 
Lost Soul by WhitePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 231]
Summary:

What if your soul mate is born seventy years after your death?  Could you wait?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 91981
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2011 Updated: December 29, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Rival

Just found this today & read it all.  I can't wait to see how you resolve this.  Will Edward somehow gain a body?  Will Bella die young & they'll kive ghostly ever after?

Poor Bella.  After seeing the message on the medicine chest, she must think she's found another Jake.

 
Summary:

On Bella's first day of college, she's seated next to mirror image of her dead mother. In her quest to find out the truth behind the resemblance, she's drawn into a world she never knew existed

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Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 32168
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2011 Updated: May 13, 2014


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: The lunatic, the lover, and the poet are of imagination all compact

I'd guess Alice was singing about Tanya.  What's up with Bella?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Ambition should be made of sterner stuff

I kind of like this POV.  I really want to see this family meeting

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Say as you think and speak it from your souls

Great first kiss.  not too concerned with B & E's v status.

What does Alice want?



Author's Response:

Teaser’s on the way...

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Tis better to bear the ills we have than fly to others that we know not of

Very interesting. Always glad to see an update

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: By That Sin Fell The Angels

Great chapter

 
Summary:

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When Bella opens her dance studio right next to Edward's bar, will Edward hate her...or will he fall for the girl next door? BxE, AH, OOC, rated M for naughty language and behavior.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 161165
[Report This] Published: January 16, 2011 Updated: May 08, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great Christmas.  I hope Edward can make Aro an offer he can't refuse

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Good introspection Edward.

 
After Sunset by twiharder2 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

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It is now six years since the Volturi left the battlefield in Forks. Existence is sweet for the Cullens. But Alice hasn't been feeling well lately. Edward knows that Carlisle is worried and with good reason. Because they both know Vampires Don't Get Sick!!

"After Sunset"
is rated 'PG-13' for teens and older.  This is the PG-13 version of my story, "Sunset Riders."

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 


 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Amun, Bella, Benjamin, Carlisle, Chelsea, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Gianna, Jacob, Jasper, Kebi, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie, Stefan, Tanya, Tia, Vladimir
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 29459
[Report This] Published: January 19, 2011 Updated: March 07, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Rivals

I can't wrap my mind around Nahuel working at Newton's.  What does Mike think, I wonder?

 

And Chelsea was married to Vlad?  That is wild.



Author's Response:

I thought if I were a 150 year old half-vamp hanging out in the forest [used to hangin' out in the amazon jungle sooo...] a place that sells camping gear might be a fairly comfortable fit for me. Nahuel looks like a teen, and has a pulse, so if Mike could accept Edward & co. he should take fairly easily to Nahuel. Chelsea and Vlad might make a better match than you'd think after reading 'History' tell me what you think!! LOL!! Thanks for thinking about this stuff and for giving me your honest review!! Hope you like it enough to finish!! KC

 
Summary:

This is a series of limericks based on Twilight.  Sheer fun and silliness.


Categories: Twilight, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Marcus, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 542
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2011 Updated: February 04, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Cullens and Twilight in Rhyme

fun



Author's Response:

I thought so  :)

 
Summary:

While out hunting, a mysterious fog somehow sends half of the Cullen family back to the year 1687.  In their attempts to return to their own time, they learn of a plot that might ultimately endanger the very future of all mythical creatures.

 

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 60229
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2011 Updated: May 09, 2014


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: The Life Contract

Cool stroy about the hands

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: The Best Laid Plans of Mice and Men

Very interesting

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: The Life Contract

Interesting flashback

 
Bloodlust by WriteforLove Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Ever wonder what was going on in Edward's mind while Victoria was on the loose?  While Bella was running away to spend time with Jacob? During that epic battle?  Bloodlust is Edward's chance to tell his side of the story, Eclipse as told from his point of view.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 13966
[Report This] Published: January 26, 2011 Updated: February 26, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Visions and Vacations

Great chapter.  Looking forward to Florida

 
Rosebud by Arabella_ Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 304]
Summary:

Rosebud by Arabella_

 

Millionaire Edward Cullen fell quickly for small town Bella, and their dreamy romance soon led to wedding bells. But their relationship’s foundation is anything but sturdy.

When their new marriage is about to fall apart, Bella inexplicably goes missing. Edward is determined to search for her, but does Bella want to be found?

~*~

A time-jumping romance filled with love, heartache and intrigue. Rated for language and some sexuality.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No Word count: 44664
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2011 Updated: May 13, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Very curious about her captor

 
Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1688]
Summary:

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A recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Upon reconnecting with her friend Alice Cullen, Bella meets her brother and business partner, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for two years, what will happen when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to the sexy new Bella that Alice helps create?
**WINNER OF 5 SUNFLOWER AWARDS: Best Bella, Best Alice, Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance**
**Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011**


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes Word count: 435439
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2011 Updated: December 11, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 40: 40 - The Chase

Glad Quil admitted the pretense.  Pleae update soon.  Renee is sick

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 39: 39 - Mise en Place

Please update soon.

 
Teacher's Pet by Red Koolaid Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1120]
Summary:

Bella is in her senior year, studying fine arts at a Minnesota University. Edward is the hot new professor on campus. Bella is shocked when Edward asks her for a date -- spend the weekend with him at his lake home -- even though they barely know each other. From mirrors on the bedroom ceiling, to people who show up at the most inopportune times, they are in for a wild ride. Can they find love in all the right places?   

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 63 Completed: Yes Word count: 272670
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2011 Updated: June 15, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55: Compromises

Great chapter.  I liked how they are working things out for the boys

 
Permanent Twilight by Laural Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

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All Human: Bella is a depressed drug addict sent to Forks to heal after "a bad... breakup." Instead, she meets Edward and gets him into things he isn't ready for. All-canon ships; rated Nc-17 for drug use, cutting, and mild lemons.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 48854
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2011 Updated: May 26, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Zesty

Glad to see they're makinf progress. I love Charlie



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Ditching gym again

It will be interesting to see how their relationship goes

 
Summary:

Whatever is left of me

When Edward returns to Bella of his own accord, he does not realise that just a few hours earlier she nearly drowned in an attempt to hear his voice. He soon finds that the girl he came back to is indeed very much altered from the girl he left behind, and that it takes more than saying sorry to rebuild their lives.

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Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 82053
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2011 Updated: April 05, 2013


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I don't understand.  Did the Volturi poison the tea?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Hmm I haven't read Vanity Fair.  What exactly did Bella see?



Author's Response:

All that will become clear in the next chapter :-) Thanks for reviewing!!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm sorry that Edward is still reluctant to change her.  I hope he gets over it.  I want a HEA

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Uh oH Did the Volturi come to visit?



Author's Response:

It seems probable, doesn't it ? ;-) Thanks for reviewing!! I hope you liked the chapter.

 




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