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Summary:

Edward leaves Forks and Bella behind after the incident with Tyler's van. Now, five years later, he finally returns to his family and the Pacific Northwest. While picking up his latest Swedish automobile, he is confronted by a very familiar scent. Will Edward be able to fight the pull his singer has on him a second time? Or will he stick around long enough to find out What Drives Her?

AU after Chapter 4 of Twilight, Original Characterizations, Canon couples.  

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Embry
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 246355
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2010 Updated: November 13, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Fire & Icy Water

Great chapter.  Bella is going to be pissed

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Decisions- Part 2

Good chapter.  I'd like to know Jacob's thoughts

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Eye to Eye

Interesting reunion



Author's Response:

Was it what you expected??  There is more to come next chapter, stick with me!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Ghosts of the Past

So she knows he's a vampire?  Will you fill us in on how Embry & co saved Bella?  Did they take out James, Victoria & Laurent?



Author's Response:

Answers are coming.  Yes you will be filled in.  I think that Edward will want to know all about Bella's adventures at some point very soon! ;-)  Thank you for your review!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Decisions- Part 1

I hope Sam decides to be reasonable

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: The Cullens Part 1

I enjoyed this.  Can't wait to see how you write Rosalie.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Victoria

Loved the way the got Victoria

 
Summary:

Edward is desperate to keep Bella away from La Push, and specifically away form Jacob Black. Much to Edward’s dismay, Bella made her move while he was busy hunting and went to see Jacob. Now Edward and Alice have devised a scheme that is sure to thwart Bella’s wayward travels in the future, but what do the rest of the Cullens think of the plan?


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 12719
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2010 Updated: February 14, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 ~ Resolution ~

I liked hearing the details of the scheme.  Thanks for writing

 
Summary:

 

 

Edroar the Angry Lion, frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?   AH/AU OOC 


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 104784
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2010 Updated: July 07, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 You Give Me Fever

That was fun

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The Hungry Games

The next kick boxing lesson should be interesting

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

Great chapter.  Please update soon.  I really want to see how dinner goes

 
Summary:

Broken Promises is an alternate ending to New Moon.  Edward comes back the day Bella goes cliff diving.  He plans to just check up on her, but he can't stay away.  Then Jacob phases and hurts Bella, and Bella must decide what she's going to do with all of the broken promises (both Edward's and Jacob's).  The story is told from Edward's POV.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 5032
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2010 Updated: July 20, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Conflict

Very interesting.  I hope Edward doesn't stay hidden too long

 
Summary:

 

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes Word count: 115917
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2010 Updated: January 15, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - And It All Comes Tumbling Down

Not a good situation for anyone

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 - Not Again

Glad to see in the AN thst Edward would have presumed the pregnancy was from before they got together.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - Something is Up with Bella

Yikes!  Esme's mince meat pie sounds scary.  Pood Charlie

 
Made to Live Alone by JustTry Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1399]
Summary:

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All Isabella Swan ever wanted was to be noticed; to be remembered, to be happy, and hopefully, one day that someone could love her. But as a twenty-eight-year-old virgin with only one true friend, Bella has started to come to the stark realization that maybe she's just made to live alone.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 160009
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2010 Updated: April 21, 2013


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Friday, July 30th

I really hope she dumps james & tries Dr. Cook

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 - Saturday, July 31

I don't know why she is worried about Alice & Jasper.  Did I miss something?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 - Sunday, August 1st

Great party!  I want Edward to meet Charlie at some point.  Maybe he can be her date to Jacob's wedding?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 13, 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34 - Thursday, August 5

NO!  She should have been firm about not wanting to see James again & called Dr. Cook

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 - Monday, August 2nd

Welcome back.  Always glad to see an update.

 

 
Summary:

If Vampires could not get human women pregnant... And Edward had refused to turn her...


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 9161
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2010 Updated: June 27, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: ONE SHOT

Very moving.

 
Summary:

Bella is a first time drinker sitting in the bar where her three-year relationship was ended. Edward Cullen is a 109-year-old vampire who is suspected of being gay by his family when he is dragged to the same bar. Both feel an attraction to each other and act on it like normal people would. The product, however, is not so normal.

Scared and confused Bella has no choice but to accept the help only Edward and his family can offer. A B/E prego romance. Vamps. AU. Twilight, New Moon, and Eclipse never happened.

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Excerpt:

Bella didn’t tell him to stop as he laid her down on the queen sized bed in the middle of the room. Bella didn’t move as he took off her clothes hesitantly, revealing her skin slowly. Nor did she stop him when he took off his. She didn’t stop to ask his name, or how old he was, or why she was so attracted to him.

And she certainly didn’t ask him to put on a condom.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 17921
[Report This] Published: July 02, 2010 Updated: September 08, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six: About A Girl

I was wondering how Jacob would track her



Author's Response:

was it good?

 
Summary:

Edward's point of view concerning the first full day he spends back in Forks.

"All in all, this was not how I pictured our second night of reunion. Screaming, tears, and guilt. And then she threw her arms around my neck, and I stopped caring. She was here, she was mine, and I would never leave her again."


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5127
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2010 Updated: August 06, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice

 
Summary:

After Bella imagines what her life could be like with Jacob, she begins second-guessing her decision to marry Edward. Something clicked during that second kiss with Jacob. Where will this lead for her and Edward? What lies ahead when Bella Swan chooses Fire over Ice?

 

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Sam
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 25778
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2010 Updated: July 07, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Death

I'm sorry jane got jacob



Author's Response:

haha Me too! I really didn't think it was going to go that way BUT I wrote these last few back when I was on like chapter 3 or 4. So I've known all along, but it wasn't what I planned when I started. 

I'm glad you read it and gave it a chance!

 
Summary:

Breaking Dawn as seen through the eyes of a little girl. Beginning just before Edward 'hears' her in the womb. Book4 Banner


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 64391
[Report This] Published: July 28, 2010 Updated: September 14, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Stage Fright

I enjoy Nessie's perspective very much

 




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