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Summary:

Bella's first encounter with Edward instantly leads to a mutual dislike. She is the new girl in town that has attracted more than one admirer and he's the boy who usually gets what he wants. So how will one evade when the other is set to conquer? AH

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 85062
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2010 Updated: February 01, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - tmr

WElcome back.  Drunk Bella really had Edward going.  I can't wait to see Jane's reaction to the phone call

 
Summary:

An unexpected discovery reveals that Edward lied when he left Bella.  Now, Bella is determined to find a way to contact him, and in the process she learns more than she ever knew about Edward Cullen.

An Edward and Bella love story.

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Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
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Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 178682
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: November 12, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Epilogue: A Winter's Day (angelicwish)

This was a great story. Thank you

 
Beyond Time by tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1728]
Summary:

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 286468
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: June 05, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality

Wow!  Can't wait for their talk

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan

Loved the Carlisle encounter



Author's Response:

Thank you - glad you liked it! :-)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue, Part II: Of Marriage and Memories

Lovef the whoke story.  Really enjoyed CPOV

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties

Was that a real request for a date or a strategy to make her mess up?



Author's Response:

Hmmm... Bella has that same question! It will be answered in the next chapter... :-)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends

That was fun.  I'd love to know what Alice sees.



Author's Response:

As would we all... ;-) The Alice situation will be explained, but not for a little while longer...

Thanks for reading! :-)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Of Making Peace and Meeting the Parents

Loved B standing uo to Mr M



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it - thanks! :-)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Of Squealing Fangirls and Surprise Visitors

Alice is there?? THings are certainly getting interesting.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future

Great story.  Thank you for writing it

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Of Chocolate Syrup and Charity Balls

So who changes James?



Author's Response:

As far as canon is concerned, we don't know. It's not mentioned in any of the books nor has SM said.

As far as this story is concerned... *zips lips*

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Of Announcements and Assumptions

That was fun.  I can't believe it took her so long to figure out what they thought.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Of Announcements and Assumptions

Considering how worried Bella is about changing the future, I'm surprised she hasn't had any qualms about Edward not having his vigalante period.  He killed a lot of criminals and saved a lot of people in that time.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust

Delay in posting? NO!!!

Please update as soon as you can.  This is great.

 
Summary:

When Bella has a tragic accident, it turns her entire world upsidedown and forces Edward to come to terms with her change sooner than he'd hoped.  As Bella says goodbye to friends and family, the Cullens are faced with coming up with a plan to get Bella out of the hospital without drawing unwanted suspicion on their family. Not to mention they have to talk the Quileutes into allowing an exception to the decades old treaty. On top of everything else, Victoria threatens to turn the hospital in Seattle into a killing ground. Can the vampires and the wolves come to an agreement before the Volturi descend on the Olympic pennisula?


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 60739
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2010 Updated: October 21, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Goodbye, Hello

Good timing on the imprint!



Author's Response:

Hehe...I thought so. Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Interlude: Charlie's Determination

Poor Charlie!  Thre was never an easy way to do this.



Author's Response:

No, there isn't. Thank you for the review!

 
Summary:

 

 

Bella has the gift of second sight. After a tragic accident her world collides with Edward's. She is expecting him, but he is not ready for her.

An exploration of Edward's growing feelings for the woman he is, at first, salivating to consume.

*** A/U Mostly Canon pairings. Vampire/Human/Wolfpack *Will contain Lemons in later chapters*

**Indie Twific Nominee**

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Completed: No Word count: 218209
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2010 Updated: February 18, 2014


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40 ~ A Future Unwritten ~

Well, at least fainting at the sound o Edward's voice may make jane think her power works on Bella?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 ~ Amnesia and Velvet Wine ~

I hope Bella can find Alice before james bamages her too much more

 
Full Circle by WynterC Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

Bella and Edward have defeated Victoria and wedding plans are in motion.  Unfortunately, an unforeseen accident causes Bella to put her life on hold, and the problems keep coming month after month.

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 108595
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2010 Updated: January 22, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 October

THe Volturi?? Please update soon

 
Entwined by La_Tua_Cantante_83 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary:

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Six months ago, Edward Cullen left Forks, trying to escape the bloodlust that was sure to be his downfall. Now he's returned, only to find that he can never truly escape what the Fate's have destined for him. Together with the one whose fate is twisted with his, he must find a way to protect what matters most. Rated Mature. Vamp, AU.    


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 220424
[Report This] Published: February 28, 2010 Updated: November 18, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Rolling Burn, Eat Me Like A Forest Fire

Great chapter. Stay strong, Bella!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: You've Had A Taste, So Now Spit It Out

Glad Bella resisted.  Is anyone in the states coming up with a rescue plan?  Igt may be time to call in the calvery

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: So Sorry To Burst Your Bubble

YES!!!  I'm so glad Bella proposed.  Even happier she was able to knock them all out

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: On Our Own Deserted Island, Let Us Be

I hope this means they can get away now

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: A Fine Distinction Between the Welcome Wagon and the Meat Wagon

Oh Aro!  I hope that Marcus will turn out to be an ally

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: A Little Bit Like Ending

OK!  Can't wait to hear Marcus' story

 




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