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Penname: Gelsamina [ Contact]
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Summary:  
Bella and Edward's lives have been intertwined since they were born. When Edward and his parents wind up missing, Bella's world spirals out of control. What happens when she finds him years later?
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 90775
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2009 Updated: April 20, 2011
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
Wow! Can't wait for Alice's explanation. It looks like you're reversing SM. In your story is Bella's the only mind he CAN read?
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
Good update. Looking forward to their conversation
Summary: 
Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: No
Word count: 265821
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2010 Updated: February 05, 2013
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 03, 2012
Title: Chapter 46: Grace Note
Glad the misunderstanding was short lived Author's Response: Yes, me too... I think I've tortured poor Edward enough :)
Next chapter posting soon.. xxx
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 31, 2012
Title: Chapter 43: Harmony
Great weekend. I hope they can survive the Riley roadblock you're planning on throwing them
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 21, 2012
Title: Chapter 44: Rondo
I take it Riley has arrived?
Summary: Bella Swan moved to Forks, Washington after being brutally attacked and turned into a vampire in Phoenix. She's desperately trying to put her life back together when she finds out that she's not the only vampire in Forks. Will the Cullen Family and Edward in particular be able to show there that being a vampire isn't so bad after all?
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Edward's family wouldn't care if we took off together. He wasn't a child. He was old enough to be Charlie's grandfather and well knew how to handle himself even if I was simply a seventeen-year-old girl. Edward also had more money at hand than I was even aware of; I always tried not to think about just how rich the Cullens were.
We could literally disappear for months or years on end, checking in with the rest of the Cullen's periodically and they wouldn't think anything of it other than that they might miss us. We could, quite literally, travel the world.
Forum: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=8798
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 97975
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2010 Updated: May 20, 2010
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Close Call
I really am enjoying this story. I like the whole idea of Bella & Edwrd on equal physical footing
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Treaty
I was wondering what would happen with the Blacks. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Sunny Days and Arm Wrestling
This was fun.
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Baseball Game
Nice twist on the game. Why were they specifically hunting Charlie? Author's Response: You won't have to wait for long. The answer is in the very next chapter.
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 -- The Plan
I really like how you are integrating the James thing with vampire Bella.
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - The Final Battle
I liked that Bella tore James up. She deserved to.
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Return To Washington
That's a nice twist. Can't wait to see Charlie's & the tribe's reactions.
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Interrupted
Looking forward to the conversation with Charlie
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Homecoming
Great story. I hope you continue with Victoria wanting revenge
Summary: 
"My life was an unending, unchanging midnight. It must, by necessity, always be midnight for me. So how was it possible that the sun was rising now, in the middle of my midnight?"
Many have tried to finish Stephenie Meyer's "Midnight Sun" (Twilight from Edward's point of view) and from what I've seen, none of them truly finished what she started. This ending to "Midnight Sun" starting at Chapter 13 is not only picking up where she left off, but uncovering the Edward that she created, and blending the perspectives of many to hear the rest of his story. This first book is a unique turning point in the arc of his character.
Categories: Twilight Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 81011
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2010 Updated: September 11, 2010
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Mind over Matter - Chapter 16
I really enjoyed reading that scene from EPOV
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: The Cullens - Chapter 17
This is the best EPOV I've read of the "fainting" kiss. Author's Response: Oh good! I was worried about that scene. It was confusing from his point of view.. so naturally.. it was a bit confusing for me to write and to know how much detail I should put it because it was so surprising to him. :]
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Carlisle - Chapter 18
Loved seeing EPOV of that
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Hide-and-Seek - Chapter 23
I liked how you handled the chapter.
Summary: 
Edward is content enough to see Bella a few times a year after she has chosen Jacob. Then, something not altogether unexpected happens and Edward is able to help Bella cope with her new circumstances...and perhaps able to win her heart again.
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Excerpt from Chapter Four:
She looked up at me from behind the steering wheel, her expression poised between tenderness and curiosity. “I keep thinking I’ll wake up, Edward. I hope I’m not dreaming. I don’t think I could bear waking up again.”
In an instant, I was kneeling beside her, her face cupped in my palm. The heat from her skin was a delicious sensation, the burning in my throat its inevitable price, but one I was more than willing to pay. “You’re awake, love,” I murmured fervently, willing her to trust me though I didn’t really deserve it. I would try to earn that trust back. I had to. “You are. I’ll never be far from you again, if you’ll let me stay.”
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: Impromptu Trilogy
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Word count: 44772
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2010 Updated: March 08, 2010
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: The Rest of Our Forever
Great Story.
I'd go for 8 years later Author's Response: Good morning, Gelsamina!
Thank you so much!
I'll tally your vote! Seriously, I've got this yellow pad right here. lol Silly, huh?
Thank you for reading!
LJ
Summary:
Bella Swan never thought she would return to Forks after leaving in 9th grade when her parents divorced. She remained in Arizona for college, medical school and residency, pushing herself towards an unknown goal. When she heard that Jacob had died in a motorcycle accident, Bella returned to Forks and to a world of old ties and new opportunities. The Cullen Retreat was recruiting for a new psychiatrist and Bella found herself accepting the job. Perhaps returning to her roots would be just the asylum Bella needed to find herself. But the founders of this mental health respite were quite a mystery to Bella and the people of Forks. The most intriguing part of the job was not the opportunity itself, but the benefactor’s youngest son Edward. He seemed to ensnare Bella’s thoughts and decisions from the moment she arrived....
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 110127
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2010 Updated: January 27, 2011
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Dinner and Ditchers
Is Tanya having Edward's child? Author's Response: Good guess Gelsamina!
But there will be no babies in this one! haha, well, not really....you'll see what I mean at the end ;)
but its definitely related to Tanya *yes*
Summary: This is my version of New Moon as told from Edward's point of view. The dialogue is borrowed from New Moon when Edward and Bella are together , but the rest is my interpretation of what the story would have been like if Edward had told it.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Gianna, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 121397
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2010 Updated: February 18, 2011
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 18, 2011
Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue
Well done. Looking forward to seeing Edward's version of Eclipse Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Bargaining
What I like best about Edward's POV is hearing other people's thoughts Author's Response: That's one of the things I like most about writing it as well - not only do I get into Edward's head, but I get a chance to peek into the minds of all the characters.
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Altercation
I liked hearing Jacob's thoughts on this Author's Response: Thanks! One thing I love about writing in EPOV is that I get a glimpse, not only into his mind, but into all the other characters as well.
Summary: 
AU of Twilight. What if the Cullens hadn't been living in Forks when Bella moved there? What if they'd relocated to the quiet town 18 years later instead?
Bella is married to her high school sweetheart, what happens when her son starts growing rapidly when he changes schools?
Is finding your soul mate more important than keeping your family together?
This will eventually have canon coupling.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Quil
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Word count: 98987
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2010 Updated: June 19, 2010
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
SO Quil has found his Claire. Poor kid. On top of everything else, he imprints on his friend's girlfriend Author's Response: I know, but I promise to give him a bit of a break soon.
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Good for Quil in letting any potential wolves know. Who did they destroy? It wasn't a Cullen was it? Author's Response: No, it wasn't a Cullen. Just a random vamp. Thanks for the review.
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