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The Window by cullen-gal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 280]
Summary:

Bella sees a strange figure outside her bedroom window late one night. Edward is on the hunt. What happens when they meet? AU, OOC, lemons in later chapters with a rather delicious Darkward!

WARNING! This story contains content, such as extreme mature language and rape themes, or abusive sexual activity that some readers may find offensive.  Please do not read if any of this subject matter bothers you. Thank you.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 26106
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I don't hate you.

 

The chapter was hard to read.  I am confused - did Edward take himself away from her when she screamed or did Emmett pull him off?

 

Will you let us in to the red ribboned room soon?



Author's Response:

Edward had a moment of realisation as Bella screamed (that's why she noticed his shocked face), but Emmett pulled him off at that moment too.

Thanks for not hating me xxx

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

WOW!  Very hot!

 
Failure by KrysCullen Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 182]
Summary:

What would have happened if Edward had lost control on Bella's first day of school? How would the Cullens have adjusted to this new addition to their life? When Edward fails to keep his self-control, he begins a journey like nothing he could ever have imagined...

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Banner by M81170. THANK YOU!

 

 


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Carmen, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 56628
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2009 Updated: March 31, 2013


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 27, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six: Blood

Glad they're moving forward & that he stopped her

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 25, 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve: Forgiveness

Yea!!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 18, 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: Home

Cool how Bella managed the wolves.  I take it thehy are the reason that the new coven won't cross Charlie's path



Author's Response:

Well, the wolves are there to protect their home.  They aren't doing their job if they don't take an active roll in wiping out intruders, right?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Eight: Return

How will they react to the broken treaty?  I hope the pack will give them a "pass" if the Cullens help with the other vampires

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five: Laws

Oh Tanya!  She is still going to be trouble isn't she?



Author's Response:

She won't go down without a fight, that is definitely true. In her way of looking at things, if she can't have Edward, Bella shouldn't either. Thanks for reading!

 
Summary:

It's been 6 years and Edward hasn't returned. Bella is now living in Seattle as a homicide detective. The homicide rate has shot up in Seattle and when Bella's life is put on the line, she sees the person she was hoping she'd never see again. OOC.

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Excerpt from Chapter 7:
“I have to get out of here,” I said.
I walked right past Edward but stopped when I felt something cold and hard grab my wrist.
“Don’t touch me.” I said it in a way I was surprised how it came out. It came out in more of a plea.
“Bella, please…let me explain…” Edward pleaded loosening his grip on my wrist.
“No,” was all I said. I started to pull and realized my vision started to blur and I could feel a few tears fall. “Edward, please let me go!”
“Edward. Let her go,” I heard Carlisle calmly say. Edward slowly, and somewhat reluctantly, let me go and I quickly turned around and opened the door.
I ran out and down the steps of the porch.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 37717
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2009 Updated: December 02, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Bliss

Great chapter.  The make up kiss was just fine.  Too many lemons sour the story

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: White Horse

He deserved this.

 
Becoming Bella by msbond Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 118]
Summary:

After an emotionally abusive marriage Bella finally finds the strength to leave. With the help of her friends and a new mysterious stranger she starts to discover who she really is. Will she allow her past to keep her from true love or will she risk heart again?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 92425
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: April 03, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Third Time's A Charm

Just found this story today.

Why is James not occurring to anyone as the vandal?



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading!

 

I think its not occuring to anyone as much because there are several people that at the moment are not really happy with Bella. Its not her fault, she is just trying to live a normall life finally but unfortunatly things are just not going her way. (and its sad that she is not really even aware of the magnitude of the situation)

 

XOXO~MB

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: According To Him

Wow!  I hope that camera phone had good resolution!

 

I'm glad that Bella is pressing charges.



Author's Response:

Yes! The phone had great resolution and fortunately Rose made a copy of the video before taking it to Bella because there is some really dirty stuff going down at the SPD. 

Thanks fo rthe review sweets!

MB

 
The Runaway by rosalielinnea Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

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Edward left after the van crash but he hasn't forgotten Bella.  Living in Phoenix she has an unusual job and a complicated family life. When he finally sees her again she is a different person than he imagined she would be. Leaving her set forward events that can't be undone. Can he redeem himself in her eyes? Is she ready for love? All canon couples.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 84835
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2009 Updated: April 10, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Gardenia

Why on earth doesn't she let Edward help her?

 
Summary:

 

During a chance return to Forks, Bella Swan runs into her high school crush only to discover that things were never as they appeared.  What has Edward been waiting for all this time?


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 203247
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2009 Updated: September 20, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like this less stalkerish Edward

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Interesting development.  Was the Jake Call coincidence, or did he see the truck or somehow smell her?

 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Poor Irina. Are these the quiluette wolves?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I was afraid you were going here once Bella convinced Rose to let her drive herself.

 

Please update soon

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I loved Edward's monologue during the change.  All is forgiven

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I hope you can have Bella pull off a peaceful resolution.

I don't like the idea of them near volterra, nor the idea of killing them all.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I hope it is true

 
Summary:

A humorous one shot about an accident, at school, that caused to Cullens to have to relocate to Alaska.

Takes place 6-8 years before Twilight. 

Features; A laughing Alice, a irritated Edward, a swearing Emmett, a rude Rosalie, and an overwhelmed Jasper. 

Let the fun begin!


Categories: Crackfic, Pre-Twilight Characters: Alice
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6210
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2009 Updated: November 12, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Assembly Disaster

Loved it

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Assembly Disaster

Very funny.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it.

 
Summary:

Marriage first, then kids. That's how it goes for most people. Bella Swan isn't most people, though.

She mothered his daughter, unbeknownst to him. Now she's a small town teacher with a bestseller and a broken heart, hiding her true feelings from the rest of the world. He's America's hottest actor, cheerful for the cameras, but he doesn't have his family fooled.

She can't go anywhere without seeing his face and he can't go one second without thinking about her. They've both made mistakes, and they've both screwed up. They both wish that they could move on, but neither of them is ready to give up on the past, no matter how much pain is caused in the process.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Other Character, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 52575
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2009 Updated: January 27, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Known

No clue = are they running away from home?

 
Summary:

 

 

Giggle/Snort Awards - Summer 2011:  Best Supernatural/Vampire Small Fry - Runner Up

What happens when Bella, Jacob, and Nessie experience the Cullen Valentine Day tradition for the first time.  Laughs guaranteed!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 60376
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2009 Updated: March 24, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Nessie

I love Nessie

 
Summary:

Sequel to The Virgin Swan and the Cullen Intuition

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and in to Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward.  When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain?

 

*Rated for lemons and language

 

Thank you, Selita, for making this fantastic banner!  *muah*

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This is my first fan-made banner!!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you, dear!!!

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This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone? 

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michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 168854
[Report This] Published: November 14, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Party Time

 Bella ROCKS!!

 
Summary:

 

This story is also on fanfiction.net

Sequel to Event Horizon: Edward's side of New Moon.  This is Eclipse as told from Edward's point of view. Canon, but there are several extra scenes that were not in the original novel.  This story reference certain events in my previous story, Event Horizon, but you don't have to read it first.  Dialogue from Eclipse is used in places out of necessity. All of this is the property of Stephenie Meyer.  I do not own the characters or the situations, and I will not profit from this work.  :)  

Thanks so much to FrozenSoldier and TheTwilightAwards.com for the amazing banner. You should check out all of their work.

This story has been nominated for a Bring Me to Life award in the Red Ribbon category.

Also on fanfiction.net.

  Thank you qjmom for working so hard!  


 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 185996
[Report This] Published: November 15, 2009 Updated: January 21, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Perceptions

It's nice to hear Edward's side.  He is overprotective & jake is immature.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I agree that Edward is being  unreasonable and overbearing, but he does mean well.  He's carrying around a lot of guilt.  Jake is immature too but I understand why he acts the way he does too.  He's angry and bitter about the way Bella just sort of abandoned him when Edward came back.  Its complicated, but I think he grows up a lot in Eclipse.  Thanks again for the review.  

 




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