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Inevitable by Lilly9999 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 165]
Summary:

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An accident prevents Bella from moving to Forks her junior year of
high school. As she prepares to start college in Seattle, to finally bond with
her father, will she still meet Edward and the Cullens? Is their story just
inevitable? AU, OOC

Thanks to Readergoof for the banner!


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 39622
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: June 19, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 17

Please update soon.  I want to see how Jake acts with Edward

 
Wonderwall by tuleangel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 297]
Summary:

This takes place after Edward leaves in New Moon.  Jacob and Bella get married and then after 5 years together, Jacob imprints and leaves Bella heartbroken. While at her dad's house Bella finds the items Edward left under her floorboards that Bella thought were gone forever.  All of this drives her to take charge and go after Edward.  But after 5 years, what will happen when she finds him?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Sam
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 25624
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2009 Updated: November 23, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Imprinting and Other Disasters

Very interesting story line.  I want to see where you go with this.



Author's Response:

Gosh that was fast it just went up lol!  Thank you so much for the support!  I'm glad your enjoying the story.  I am trying to time this so my chapters update weekly so look for Chapter 3 next weekend.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not

Very interesting chapter.  I was so confused at the  beginning



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the support!  Sorry you were confused at the beginning, but that was my evil plan :)  I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway

 
The TA by wuogkat Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 330]
Summary:

The three black and white photographs that hang on Bell's apartment wall.  The lights from a police cruiser, a flower, and a man cliff diving.  These represent the three men she loves.

Bella Swan has spent the past four years excelling at school as a way to insulate herself from her past.  She finished her bachelor's degree early and is about to start her first semmester as a TA in the literature department of a small heavily wooded school in the northeast when her past finds her.  Bella finds herself thrust back into the world of vampires and werewolves and she has to decide which path her life will take, if she can survive that long.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Brady, Carlisle, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Quil, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 65421
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: February 21, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Time

Congratulations on the baby.  Glad you are doing well



Author's Response:

Thanks, it's good to be back.

 
Good Enough by jackbauer Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 540]
Summary:

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Edward is a Forensic Psychologist for the FBI.   He’s the best in his field and the worst at relationships.  He has a habit of falling in love quickly but falling out of love just as fast when the women don’t measure up to his ideal.  When he gets shot by a criminal he’s been profiling, his nurse will take care of more than just his medicine, but is she good enough?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 44593
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: September 30, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like this story line.  I was convinced that Whitlock was Jasper until the visit.  I'm looking forward to Edward & Bella getting to know each other.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

"teenage mutant ninja nurse"?  I love it.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great chapter.  I'm really liking how you've written them

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Very interesting.  I hope during their time in the safe house Edward actually tells her what he's feeling.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great story.  Loved the proposal.  Thank you to all those who wouldn't let you go with your other ending.

 
Summary:

Edward Masen is a former NFL football player who was injured and could not return to playing. After taking some time off to figure out what he wanted to do with his life, since playing football was out of the question, he decided to go with coaching high school football. He leads a simple, quiet life with his friends in Forks until he meets the woman that will change his life forever. Bella Swan decides to move back home with her younger brother when she gets a teaching position at her old school in Forks. AH/Canon Couples/alternating between Edward and Bella POV. Rated M ;)

Huge thanks to Jessica1971 for being my beta once again.  I could not do this without her. :) 

Disclaimer: SM owns Twilight.

Thank you to Heatherdawnc for making another terrific banner for me. =)

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 170353
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Moving On

Glad to see Bella recovering.  I really wnt to see Lauren & Garret get punished.

 
Hidden by SirenSongx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1161]
Summary:

There are more secrets to the ‘new girl in school’ than even a family of vampires could have foreseen. What could the irresistible Bella Swan be hiding? There is more to the golden eyed girl than anyone could have expected.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 95376
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: January 28, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 2: Unexpected Revelations

That was fun!  So, Jasper has a "sister"

 
Summary: Feature

 Thank you, hellacullen, for the awesome banner!

Edward’s rebellious period didn’t last a few years; it lasted seventy.  A solitary hunter on the fringe of society, he stumbles across a young woman praying. Can he seduce her away from everything she's ever known? And will he be willing to fight for Bella instead of fighting against her?

AU, a bit OOC, canon couples.  Rated for lemons, violence and adult subject matter.

Banner by Zesty_T, awesome!

Banner by n7of9 Thank you!

Banner by readergoof, thank you!

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 129165
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2009 Updated: March 27, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Prodigal Son Returns

Very interesting story!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Hope you enjoy!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 I Will Not Be Denied

Loved the "you are what you eat " line.

 

Can't wait for the next date

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Lazarus Rising

Interesting.  What is with Edward & the monsignor? It isn't Marcus, is it?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Raven's Reflection

A Volturi spy?  I didn't see that coming

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Burning

Great chapter.  I like how their relationship is developing

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Seeds Of The Whirlwind

What a way to find out!!

I'm curious as to the Volturi's relationhip with the priest.  If he informs them about Bella, then he breaks the confidentiality of the confession.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Delivering The Wind

Yikes!  I hope Alice at least sees the Monsignor's letter coming.

 

Please update soon.  As intetresting as the Volturi response may be, I really want to see Bella & Edward talk.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Before The Fire

Very glad she's talking with him.  Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 1743

Poor Edward! I hope he & Bella will come to an understanding.  I wonder why he didn't tell her about the priest / Volturi mole?  I thought that was where he was going when he said it wasn't safe when she spoke of going to church together.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 This Is My Blood

Very good. Can we please eliminate Aro?  I'm sure you can make it look lije an accident.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Amen

I really enjoyed the story.  Thnak you for writing it



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

 
Questions by morganlizard Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 118]
Summary:

What would happen if Charlie figured it out? It never seemed like he knew enough. Was it too much for me as a reader to wish that Charlie know about Bella and Vampires, how Edward saved her life, that Renesme IS his granddaughter and why they stay so close to Forks if anonymity is so important? Maybe, but it's fun to pretend...


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 39582
[Report This] Published: August 21, 2009 Updated: October 16, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Carlisle

I guess Jane & demetri have been snacking & hoping to get the Cullens to expose themselves?



Author's Response:

Hi, Gelsamina! You're half right! Keep reading! I have two more chapters almost finished!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Summary:

Edward is dared to do something stupid by his older cousin, Emmett.  Jasper and Emmett stand back and watch.

"Yeah, but do you think we should've told him that she's the police chief's daughter?"

One dare, one purse and two unsuspecting vicitms lead to a series of pranks and events that will change their lives.

 

 

 

Photobucket banner created by heatherdawnc


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 87422
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2009 Updated: May 16, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Dare

Very funny!  Dinner should be interesting



Author's Response:

Yay! You're my first reviewer.  Here is a preview of the next chapter.  From Edward's POV.

Mystery fuckhot woman tightened her hold on the gargantuan purse and then swung and hit me with it on my back with it.

“OW!” I cried out like a bitch.  “What the hell do you have in that purse, lady?”

“A brick, you asshole!” she screamed.  Though I wish I had two more!" She whacked my back again, causing me to buckle slightly. 

The mystery woman suddenly brought up her knee up, meeting my boys.  Oh God, pain…tears… 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Purse

This is fun.  I can't wait to see Bella's revenge

 




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