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Summary:

"Should a man be sentenced to hang, he may be saved by a virtuous maiden who agrees to marry him." -Early French Colonial Law 

E/B, AU, AH

Passing By


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 79344
[Report This] Published: June 24, 2009 Updated: November 17, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Assumtions (v)

I'm glad she was talking about Charlotte.  I hope E & B can make up easily.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue (v)

I really enjoyed this story.  Thank you.

 
The Affair by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 423]
Summary:

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Thanks to m81170 for the great banner.

 

Bella is married to her favorite Cullen. What happens when she tries to connect his past with his future? Will their marriage survive? AH/AU rated M for some language and lemons.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 55814
[Report This] Published: June 27, 2009 Updated: September 11, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

How long before everything comes out?  I'm guessing J & V will talk about their friends hooking up.



Author's Response:

We get a bit of happiness first so enjoy it while it lasts. : )  Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Interesting story.  Will it all be BPOV or can we get an occasional C or E POV?



Author's Response:

The story will all be BPOV but I have done a couple of outtakes that go with later chapters. One in Emmett POV and one in CPOV. But we won't hear from Edward this time.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great!  I was afraid that the B / E / J triangle was about to come up.  I'm glad Jacob found his Nessie so he can truly be Bella's friend



Author's Response:

Yeah, I didn't want any complaints about their friendship so I threw in Nessie right away to alleviate any worries.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I liked Bella's epiphany. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. I am glad you are enjoying.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Very well done.  I like how you've written Bella



Author's Response:

Thank you so much I am glad she is relatable even when she did something horrible.

 
Summary:

 

Nothing could prepare Jenks for what would happen four years after meeting Bella, when Jasper came back - with company.

"Four long glorious years where my life was relatively stress free. I still had to deal with criminals, but not having to worry about Jasper and his family really did make a difference.

Until now."

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Emmett, Jasper, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: The Forger
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2594
[Report This] Published: June 27, 2009 Updated: July 12, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Forger, The Pixie and The Giant

This was fun.  Thanks for writing it



Author's Response:

No worries, I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for revewing.

Alice.x

 
Hunting You by Purple Akua Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 182]
Summary:

hunting you

Thanks to Tellytubby101 for the fantastic banner!!!

 

Edward’s vigilante days have come a little later in his existence. He lives in solitude, the rest of his family dwelling in Alaska and hunts the truly evil across the US.

Bella knows nothing of the vampire world, and although she was never involved in an icy car accident, she is still a magnet for trouble.

If he had met her alone in a dark alley, say, after saving her from creepy guys in Port Angeles, would it have been different?


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 21246
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Vigilante

Very interesting.  Please keep going.



Author's Response:

Thank you! The next chapter is already in the queue!!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Alice's Unsolicited Advice

Loved the Edward & Alice conversation



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!! :)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Connections

Loved the E & B conve.  Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I'm really glad you liked their conversation; it was tricky to write! More is on the way soon!!

 
Summary:

Bella is a recent nursing school graduate, working for Carlisle's practice. After several bad dates, she has given up on dating all together, until she meets Carlisle's son, Edward.

Edward is a divorced father of two that is satisfied with his life, not really looking for a relationship, until he meets Bella.

They have an instant connection when they meet, but will their relationship be strong enough to face numerous problems along the way? Jealous ex-wife, bratty daughter, etc... Will their love be strong enough to survive?

Very special thanks to heatherdawnc for making me an AWESOME banner!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes Word count: 309990
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2009 Updated: February 09, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It was Felix & not Edward who left the note, right?

 

It's actually refreshing for the bad guy NOT to be named James

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Hmm  Any way that Felix is James?

 
Summary:

He loved her so much, even then, that he'd tried his hardest to hold them together. Tried to talk, and when that hadn't worked, he'd tried to keep his mouth shut. To patiently bear her rebuttals and her undeserved scorn, to put up with her insults and her barely-veiled jibes, poking at his manhood, his family, his former and present life - poking holes into the fabric of his very existence until he was brought to his knees under its weight.

He'd tried. But in the end, it hadn't mattered.

She'd left anyway.

 

Banner credit goes to addicttwilight2 - words cannot express how uniquely fabulous she is!

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Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 55326
[Report This] Published: July 01, 2009 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Echo

I'm so confused!  Keep writing so I can figure this out



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing! :)

 
The Taste of Sin by emarroquin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

After living on the blood of humans for decades Edward returns home to his family. He finds things are very different from when he left. Can a brown eyed orphan help him cure his thirst once and for all? Or make him hunger for more than blood? B/E OOC/AU lemons-

 

 

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Banner by the amazing Anne Cullen


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charles, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 26830
[Report This] Published: July 02, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Blood On Her Hands

Very intersting take on the story.  I relly wnt to see where you go with it.

 
Summary:

A story about pain... patience... depression... desire... addiction... passion... healing... hope... and above all, love.

Bella moves to Alaska after a devastating accident tears her life apart, leaving her depressed and alone.  Consumed by her loss, she spirals into a deep depression.  At her new high school, she meets Edward Cullen and her life will never be the same. 

Edward moves to Alaska to start over with his coven - as he has been doing for the past four centuries.  Spending hundreds of years alone on the fringes of society has turned him into a pessimistic, sarcastic rebel who has lost hope of ever finding a mate.  The moment he sees Bella Swan, his life is turned upside down.

As friendship and obsession grow into love, Edward helps Bella overcome her crippling grief and teaches her how to live again. 

 RFTA Alternate

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**Warning** This story deals with mental health issues. Please be warned if this is a theme which may bother you in any way.  

 

Nominated for an Indie TwiFic - AU story that knocks you off your feet

Indie TwiFic Awards


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 71573
[Report This] Published: July 03, 2009 Updated: June 22, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Falling Angel

I can't wait to see where this is going.  I love your Edward



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Edward is most definitely my favorite POV to write, so it must show!
-NK-

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Libraries are for Lovers

I really like the way you've written Edward

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Friends. Right. Okay.

Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one

 
Summary:

 
Banner done by the incredibly talented annamorphos.

Bella is a half-immortal with a secretive past that haunts her still. She has to keep an eye out for the dangerous burning flame on the horizon. The Cullen’s are still vampires, but they don't know what Bella is... Or what she's capable of.

|| AU | A little OOC | Canon Pairings ||

Rated R for mild violence and some graphic scenes. 
Not too bad, but rated R to be on the safe side. No sexual content.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 53028
[Report This] Published: July 05, 2009 Updated: October 18, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Stormy Night

I enjoyed the sleep over.  I can't wait for Bella & Edward to come clean to each other about what they are - & of course about how they feel

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: School Reunion

Loved the food fight



Author's Response:

Haha, thanks for reviewing! I like food fights, too.

From Tubby. :-)

 
Summary:

When another realtionship goes wrong, Bella decides it’s time to take fate into her own hands. That’s why a month later she ends up at the sperm bank... looking at the file of E.C. Colab between Sweet Ciccio and shellyfish! AH/AU OOC

 


Categories: AU-Human, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 53777
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2009 Updated: August 09, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Mission: Cowboy hats

This is so funny!  Thanks for the laughs



Author's Response:

You´re welcome!! THanks for reading and reviewing!!!

 

Love, Sweets

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Mission: Delicious Cookies

I'm hoping only minor injuries herre.  I can't wait to see how you handle Bella finding out about EC

 
Violet by bondgirl, bondgirl, edieswan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2156]
Summary:

 

 

Playboy Edward Cullen owns the most notorious and prestigious strip joint in the whole of New York: Violet. When Edward's left one girl short, he begins his search for the next dancer. Who he meets on his search is not only the best dancer he has ever come across, but also a contender for his heart. Can someone finally tame this bad boy?

ExB Rated for drugs, language and sex from the very start.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Leah, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 69545
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2009 Updated: May 03, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Cinderbella

I'm not liking clueless Bella.  She really needs to kick Mike to the curb

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Oh Mike God!

LOVED Edward getting the wrong apartment.  Angel, indeed!  I also loved Bella stndnig up to Edward.  I want Bella to find out about Mike & Tanya and I'd love to see her damage Mike as she threatened to damage Edward!

 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Dancing with the Devil

I was so hoping she'd get bck to her apt early & catch Mike!

 

I like how Edward seems gto be smitten with her.  Interesting to see him try to figure out what to do.

 




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