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Summary:

 

       

 

In all honesty, I knew that Jacob was better for me.

At least while I was human, anyway.

When Edward left me desolate and despairing, Jake found me.

He put me back together again. He resurrected me.

I should have been thankful. If nothing else, I should have obediently

fallen in love with him directly after, even if it was only a twisted sort

of hero worshipping love. He was my savior, my sun, my fresh air.

But Edward had always been the drug that pulled me under.

Even fresh from addiction, I can't help but be sucked in again.

One taste of Edward Cullen is never enough.

 

     Three years have passed since Edward left Bella broken in the woods. Edward never came back, and Bella never sought him near a fountain in a crowd in Italy. A friendship between Bella and Jacob has blossomed into something more, though not quite to the degree--at least for Bella--as what was between her and Edward. However, things have gone on and the passing of time has cemented new relationships and altered a different reality. But will everything crumble when Edward breaks his vow to stay away? A 21-year-old woman, Bella feels a lot like an 18-year-old girl when her past returns to claim her. With two super human men vying for her heart, Bella must find a way to make the decision that has apparently been put on hold the past several years--a decision that could change the fate of more than the three people involved. And that could very well be the least of her problems.

 

All characters and related material belong to Stephenie Meyer.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: Chosen
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 38622
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2009 Updated: July 15, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Misinterpretation

NOOOOO!  Am I a bad person for hoping for a miscarriage?

 
Love Comes by stacylambert Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 457]
Summary:

The Cullens return to Forks to keep an eye on a new generation of Quileute shape-shifters. They find this new pack of wolves to be not only large, but led by the impulsive Jacob Black. When Edward falls for Bella Swan, who just happens to be Jacob's girlfriend,what will happen between the Quileuetes and the Cullens ?

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Aro
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 79824
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2009 Updated: January 23, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Confined Spaces

Wow!  I like the idea of Charlie being changed.  He & Bella can stay together



Author's Response:

One of the few that like it! I'm glad someone does ;-)

Thanks for the review!

 
Vegas, Baby! by jslack0816 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3193]
Summary:

Bella takes a trip to Vegas with her roommates Alice and Rosalie. After one wild night, Bella's life is turned upside down. A marriage certificate, a pregnancy, and a best friend in ICU send Bella and her friends into a whirlwind of emotions. Canon pairings and future LEMONS!

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Much thanks to readergoof and annamorphos (respectively) for the awesome banners!  Also, to Project Team Beta for taking this story on!  You all are the best!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 206944
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Visiting the Past

Charlie, or one of Jake's sisters?

 

Please update soon



Author's Response:

Good guesses.  I'll try to get an update out quickly.  Shouldn't be too long!  Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Communication

Loved the text exchange.  I'm interested to see how the dinner party plays out.  I'm hoping that Bella gets dragged along!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks for taking the time to let me know!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Reveal

Great chapter.  I love how Edward is handling the situation.



Author's Response:

Oh, me too.  I just couldn't do the whole freak out and leave her thing.  I needed some good times.

Glad you liked it, too.  Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Honest

I like how they are talking with each other.  Please update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad they are on the same side of the country for a bit!

 
The Commuters by Autumn Dreamer Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

After a long, tiresome day Bella meets Edward on the commute home from NYC and spends sixty-two minutes with the handsome stranger. Written for the Support Stacie Author Auction.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, James, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 11757
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2009 Updated: August 24, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Another 62 Minutes in Heaven

I did enjoy it. Very much.  Loved Charlie's description of the side show!

 
Desiderata by kimpy0464 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 619]
Summary:

A special thanks to NaughtySparkle for the banner!

HE'S SMIRKY. SHE'S SNARKY. AND THEY'RE FLOATING DOWN THE RIVER OF DeNIAL TOGETHER!

Edward Cullen is a well-known director for an independent film company, Masen Masterworks. He is filming his latest project in the town of Forks, Washington. Bella Swan is a baker for her best friend Alice at Alice's Wonderland Cafe and Mad Tea Party, also located in Forks. Desiderata is latin for “desired things or something that is needed, wanted.” This story is meant to represent that state of feeling for both Bella and Edward. What happens when their pig-headed stubbornness gets in the way of true love and happiness? Based upon the Desiderata of Happiness by Max Ehrmann and Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 151974
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2009 Updated: November 26, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: CASTING SPELLS

I'm seeing shades of Pride & Pfrejudice here.  Great story.



Author's Response:

Oh yes, big time shades of P+P. Edward is just dying to recreate the role of Darcy, except that he doesn't know it yet! ;)

So glad you are enjoying it!!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: FAR FROM THE MADDING CROWD...OR NOT

I love E & B's interactions.



Author's Response:

Just wait...it's gonna get better and better! Or worse and worse, depending upon your perspective! ;)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: IT'S RAINING MEN

Loved the flustered buns conversation.  Getting the moleskines back to their right owners will probably be just as entertaining



Author's Response:

It will be very entertaining. Promise.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: STRANGE THINGS ARE AFOOT AT THE CIRCLE-K

The fun begins!


I think James makes  perfect Mr. Wickham



Author's Response:

Oh yes, it does. The plot thickens substantially! And thank you, I think James makes a perfect Mr. Wickham myself...:)

 
Summary:

The Cullens leave Forks after Edward encounters Bella, but he never forgets her. Meanwhile, Bella has vivid dreams about a man whose face she cannot see. Does destiny have something in store for them? AU, OOC. Co-written by Fantasy Mother and Lilliput.

 

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Perchance to Dream is an Indie TwiFic Awards Final Round Finalist for
Best Collaboration

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 94664
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: August 03, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I like where the story is going.  I hope Edward can "man up" & face her soon!



Author's Response:

Well, we're about to start in that direction.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yay!!!  They had a converstion & made a date!  Can't wait to see how that goes!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the delay and, hopefully by now, you know how it went :-)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great chapter!  I'm very eager to see what happens when Bella puts it together!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Hmm...maybe they just need some time to enjoy right now?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Am I wrong to hope for a life threatening illness where Edward will have to change her?

 

I love this story.  I love how you have B & E communicate.  Please update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you, and the next update should be tonight.  Otherwise, our collective mouths are duct taped shut, lest we give away secrets...

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

YES!



Author's Response:

LOL, yes, and thank you!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

He'll really change her?  Cool!



Author's Response:

Well, he really wants to change her.  Quite a turnaround, don't you think?

 
Heart and Soul by edward_bella Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 105]
Summary:

Edward is nearly broken when he loses a dear friend in an accident. When he meets Bella at Forks High, not only is his heart healed, but his soul as well. However, Bella has a secret that could make or break them. AU/AH Twilight with a few twists.

 

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***Nominated for Best AU-Human at the Sparkle Awards. Thanks to all those who nominated!***


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 41085
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: June 10, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Out of Body Experience

Yikes!  The sad part about this type of orgn transplant is someone must die for another to live. 



Author's Response:

Very true. Few people realize that it is also the families of the donors who are the true heros in this kind of situation:)

 

ebhg:)

 
Summary:

AH AU When Edward finally gets the chance at getting the girl, he has no idea what to do, so he turns to a message board call The Red Strings of Fate.

This is a story told in e-mails, texts, and message board posts.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 32372
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2009 Updated: December 12, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Love the format.  Interesting story.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loved the coincidence.  This is fun.  Will you keep it in this format all the way through?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

FUn!

 

Will we ever get to know who everyone is?  I'm assuming Hungry like a wolf is Jacob & sommth criminal is Mike.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

OK - So I'm guessing DRHB is Carlisle, Jake is Hungry Like a wolf.  I haven't figured out Emmett yet

 
Summary:

What happens when you turn your back on honest pure love, for the darkest most sinful obsession there ever was?

AH/OOC.

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella
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Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 26948
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Ambush

Very interesting.

 
Immured by Viridis73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 127]
Summary:

Lone woman crying on stone steps, head in hands.  Immured by Viridis73

 

Immured  1 a: to enclose within or as if within walls b: imprison  2: to build into a wall ; especially : to entomb in a wall

A departure from First Time & Invasive Thoughts. Bella is an adult living with her significant other in Forks after leaving college early. The Cullens, after putting down their metaphoric feet, are pursuing careers rather than high school.

After much behind the scenes maneuvering by Alice, Edward and Bella meet at the bake sale from hell. So we begin.....

Rated NC-17 for dark themes of depression and anxiety. This is a story that has sexual content. It does not contain rape or sexual abuse. AU and somewhat OOC at times.

 

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 26766
[Report This] Published: June 21, 2009 Updated: October 18, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Patesco

I like the story.  I'm not liking Mike - although he doesn't seem mean, just cleuless & self absorbed.  I hope Bella decides to move back to Charlie's



Author's Response:

Yep, Mike is truly an imbecile. Edward's hit the nail on the head with that one, at least as far as Bella is concerned.

I'm really happy to hear that you're liking the story. Thank you so much for taking the time to read & review.

 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Catalyst Part 1

Good chapter.  Please update soon.  I want to see how her session with Rose goes.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading & reviewing. I have part two about half way done. Currently working getting her through the door to her session. I do have the beginning & the end done though.

 




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