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Forks and Vampires by Wayfarer Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 57]
Summary:

New Summary!

"What if I'm not a superhero? What if I'm the bad guy?" He smiled playfully, but his eyes were impenetrable.

Bella comes uninvited to a strangely twisted Forks shrouded in a mystery that seems to revolve around Edward Cullen. What if Edward was the bad guy?

AU.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 9472
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2008 Updated: May 04, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Blood Typing

This is an interesting spin on the story.  I'm not used to seeing the Cullens as the bad guys.  I'm eager to see where you go with it.

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: September 4 - December 13, 2008

Yikes!  Will we hear how Bella is doing next?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: September 4 - December 23, 2008

How did Edward find her before the "grandpa'?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: December 23, 2008 to January 4, 2009

Welcome back!  I'm glad they are on their island

 
This Warm Rush by rydia Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary:

Edward never returned to Carlisle, his "rebellious years" stretching into decades. Bella is in Seattle, avoiding a dance and buying books. But she's a danger magnet, and ends up attracting something she never expected.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 31630
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2008 Updated: July 14, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Please continue.  What happens next?  Is Bella creating a kinder, gentler, Edward or will this end badly for her?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thank you for updating!  This was great.  Please don't leave us hanging for so long.  I want to see what happens when he returns her bag.

 
Blue Moon by Porcelain Mortal Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 599]
Summary:

Edward finally gives in to his desire to "check up" on Bella after he left. He vowed only to watch her from a distance, but how can he resist the force of the love that brought him back in the first place? When Bella's life is in danger again, will Edward be able to save her one last time?

This is a story that's been bouncing around in my head so much it finally demanded to be written. Edward's POV.

Blue Moon Banner

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 51875
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: 20 - Sweetness (vjgm)

Welcome back. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!! Good to be back. :o)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: 22 - Awakening

THe End?  You're not going to let us see the conversation with Charlie?  Oh well.  Thanks for writing



Author's Response:

I was kind of thinking it would go about the same as it did in "Eclipse" .... I have considered a couple of epilogues, but none have had a strong pull for me to write them.

 
Summary:

Bella Swan is twenty-seven years old, newly single, and mom to an adorable Kindergarten student with a knack for accidents. On a typical, fall afternoon, she experiences the shock of her life during a casual conversation with her son. When an unexpected revelation leads to the most emotional reunion imaginable, how will Bella reconcile the path her life has taken with the past she never chose? Takes place nearly ten years post New Moon. Canon - AU. ExB


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 61197
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2008 Updated: November 27, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Welcome back

 
Summary:

Edward's family hire Bella Swan to break the heartbreaker's heart in hopes to have him see the error of his womanizing ways. Bella realizes that they have a little too much in common and is having a little too much fun with this subject. EXB Lots of lemons later.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 322353
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2008 Updated: September 13, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Serious Sunday

Loved the Jacob in a tree story!  Also loved the Susan Blake story!

 
Summary:

 

 

 

After weeks of Emmett teasing Bella, she plans to give him back a little of what he's been dishing out.  This time, Emmett may have bitten off more than he can chew.

 

 

Family humour.  Various POVs. 

 

 

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Thank you, Blondie, for the awesome banner . . . and the instructions on how to use it!

 

 

 


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 31879
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2008 Updated: November 21, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Busted

This story rocks!  Thank you for enabling me to start my day with a laugh.

 
Cloven by McQueen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 381]
Summary:

Bella never thought things would get this way. It had never crossed her mind. The hurt and betrayal from all parties stung like constant bee stings, but something more important is at stake.

 

**Rated for violence and rape and takes place between New Moon and Eclipse.**


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 39771
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2008 Updated: July 29, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Hello Charlie

I'm glad that Bella came clean to Charlie about Jacob.  I hope that Charlie will believe it!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: When it Rains

Why hasn't Charlie arrested Jake?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Tears

I can't believe Charlie would take Jake's word over Bella's!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Crash

I'm sorry the baby didn't make it.  Keep the updates coming.

 
Summary:

Bella has never had luck at finding friends, and now that she has exiled herself to one of the most prestigious schools in the country, it doesn’t look like that luck is going to change. But what happens when Bella, with some help from the incredibly hot new guy, decides to finally stop being Miss Invisible? Canon Pairings

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 27072
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2008 Updated: September 09, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Great story.  Can't wait for Alice's surprise

 
Summary:

AU/Human, EPOV

 

While trying to run away from his future, Edward gets into a car accident.  He is bruised, broken, and covered in bandages from head to toe.  His disdain for the hospital staff extends to the woman who saved his life; a new nurse he won't even talk to, let alone look at.   

Though when Edward finally does meet his savior, he feels an inexplicable pull towards her.  Without the aid of his good looks, can he charm her?  Is he sure he wants to charm her?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 40103
[Report This] Published: December 10, 2008 Updated: November 27, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: You Tell A Tale

Very interesting story.  What's up with Jake?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Smile Like You Mean It

I get the feeling Bella is bothered by something more than the crooked smile

 
Summary:

Bella Swan changed her life and ideals for a guy . . . who then dumped her in the middle of a mall. Even if she's happier now and her life is back on track, she still needs to realize that the past is the past.

Enter Edward Cullen, devastatingly handsome and hopelessly in love with Bella after knowing her for only a short time. Can he prove to Bella that she's not the type who should be loved and left? Can he help her get over her past and put her self doubts behind her?

 Rated M for later chapters.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 84444
[Report This] Published: December 16, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2013


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 20, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Shadow of a Doubt

Loved the chapter.  I'm wondering if we've seen the last of Mike



Author's Response:

So happy you liked the chapter. I was nervous because I actually combined a few chapters into one and was hoping it wasn't too much. Hmm...we shall see about another Mike appearance. You never know who will pop up again. ;)  Thanks for reading!

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward find that they share a common love before they fall in love with one another.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 18381
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2008 Updated: July 16, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great chapter!  Please don't wait so  long between updates.

 
Rescue me by venomousgal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2836]
Summary:

 

 Bella Swan is accident prone and always in need of rescuing. Sexy neighbour Edward Masen is an EMT and more than willing to handle the job.

 

THANKS TO FALCONCRANELOVE FOR THE WONDERFUL BANNERS!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 100511
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2008 Updated: November 10, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 (vjgm)

Tanya & James, hmmm?

 
Summary:

“No trumpets sound when the important decisions of our life are made.  Destiny is made known silently.” –Agnes De Mille

After walking away from Bella in September 2005, even in his numbed stupor Edward goes to great lengths to ensure Bella’s safety and happiness as a human.  A gracious Romeo, he is prepared to remain backstage until Paris’ scene is over—and Bella keeps reluctantly carrying out the lines she has been given.  But they must both learn that they cannot control destiny... and each silent, calculated decision brings them closer to an unrealized, unexpected fate.

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 29015
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2009 Updated: October 10, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: May 2008

Can't wait to see the reason behind Bella's pregnancy!

Interesting story



Author's Response:

thank you!! 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: April 2009 (V)

Congratulations on the diploma.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: June 2009 (V)

I loked the interventions & the proposal

 
Summary:

The much anticipated sequel to A Lesson in Release.  Jasper has won the girl of his dreams and they are beginning a new life together at college.  But what happens when fate intercedes?  Will he be able to hold onto her or will fate return her to Edward?

A Lesson in Fate


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: The Lessons Saga
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes Word count: 171842
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: October 28, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40: Morta

I hate Jasper so much right now.

 




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