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Across the Years by AMayes Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 152]
Summary:

Edward Cullen receives a letter from a stranger by the name of Isabella Swan, and discovers they are separated...by two years.  He lives in 2007; she in 2009.  Through a mystical mailbox they are are able to communicate...and fall in love.  Crossover with The Lake House but movie knowledge is not required!

ATY

Thank you, katmom, for the wonderful banner!

 


Categories: AU-Human, Crossover Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 23886
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: February 23, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I hope Edward is still alive in 2009!

I must say I get a chuckle out of the fact that his dog is named Aro.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm glad you told the walk from EPOV.  I was wondering about the reaction when he dropped off the letter.



Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear that the EPOV wasn't considered redundant! 

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter!  At this point in 2007, E has already gotten the letters, right?

 
Help Wanted by jaxon 22 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3035]
Summary:

Bella Swan applies for the job of PA to the rude, arrogant Hollywood film star Edward Cullen.

Can Bella keep her feelings for her boss in check so she can do her job?

A/H, OOC, luscious and graphic lemons and bad language.

A million and one thank yous to Rachel1313 for the spectacular banner! You are my hero, bb!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 52 Completed: No Word count: 473901
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: March 28, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Playing by the Rules

Loved it!!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Drawing Lines

That was mean!

Convenient that the character is named Ella, huh?

 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: A Good Defense is a Good Offense

I'm a little torn.  I liked seeing EPOV, but after the last chapter I really wanted to see what was next with Bella. 

I would like to see EPOV of that scene with Tanya, though, but please let us know what Bella does after the party soon.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Mixed Messages

Glad the Tanya angst didn't drag out.  Thanks

 
Rabbit Hole by profmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 329]
Summary:

Summary: Edward leaves Bella in Forks before revealing that he and his family are vampires.  Bella’s curiosity gets the best of her, and she spends years researching her theories and suspicions about Edward and his kind, drawing attention from unwanted and dangerous sources.  Can Edward find a way to save Bella from the Rabbit Hole she’s fallen into?  Set at the beginning of Twilight and then alternate universe. Like New Moon, he leaves to protect her. Unlike NM, he doesn't leave her to her own devices. AU

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 107008
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2009 Updated: December 20, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I want to see where you take this.  It has potential to be really interesting.

 
Summary:

Awesome Banner by Anne Cullen!

Awesome Banner by Anne Cullen!!

 

Edward's POV of Bella's pregnancy, burning and awakening in Breaking Dawn.  Covers all the missing moments with Edward, Bella, Renesmee and the Cullens, and everything that they went through. Starts when Edward and Bella arrive home from Isle Esme and meet the Cullens at the airport. Find out what happened after Bella ran into Rosalie's arms...  

In a fraction of a second, I was at Bella's side, the rest of my family still frozen. I put my hands on Bella's shoulders.

"Let her go, Rose," I said, my voice deadly.  She just stared back at me grimly. I searched her mind, trying to get a hold of her plans.  There was a resolve, a plan to protect the baby at all costs.  And an aching desire she couldn't hide to have that baby as her own....

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Her face was so deathly still, no response.  She was unearthly pale, and there was the slightest blue tinge to her skin, the sky pale at dawn.  As I pressed my lips to hers, they were too cool.  I blew in gently twice, watching her chest rise and fall mechanically. I moved my mouth to her ear as my hands began to move again.

"Come on, Bella, love," I whispered.  "Come on, sweetheart.  I'm right here.  You did it. You've got a healthy baby. She's so beautiful. You were strong enough.  Now it's time for you to come back.  She's waiting.  I'm waiting, love.  I'm waiting for you, always...

 

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 191547
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2009 Updated: August 18, 2010


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Justified

Loved Edward's reactions during Bella's confrontation with Jacob

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Justified

Loved Edward's reactions during Bella's confrontation with Jacob

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Paternity

Loved hearing Charlie's thoughts via Edward

 
daybreak by SirenSongx Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1100]
Summary:

It's basically a retelling of Twilight, with a few twists. Edward isn't the only one who can hear thoughts. Bella can also, but like Edward there is that one exception...him. What happens when she learns their secret? And what happens when the Cullen's find out that she already knows? Written from Bellla's point of view.

daybreak

Set during early 2006.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Daybreak Saga
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 89577
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2009 Updated: October 15, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1: Gifted

I like this!  I think it's great how E & B can read everyone else but each other.  This is a good twist.  Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 2: Lapse

This is  lot of fun.  I can't wait until B & E start comparig notes on what it's like to read minds.  Comparing "impure thoughts" ought to be fun.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: 5: Souls

I am really enjoying htis story.  I like your Bella's attitude.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: 7: Three

Great chapter.  I loved Bella telling Mike off!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: 18: Prey

I like Cancun!  Please update soon

 
Summary:

Set after Edward leaves Bella in “New Moon”.  After Edward leaves her in the forest, Bella is still determined to fulfill Alice’s vision.   After all, the Cullens aren’t the only vampires on the planet.  What happens when she meets another vampire in the hospital where she works? Why did she fight so hard to forget the past?

Not a usual ‘Bella meets the Cullens again’ story – concentrates more on Bella’s story and her journey to acceptance.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 14533
[Report This] Published: June 02, 2009 Updated: August 19, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: The Memories that Haunt Us

Can't wait for Bella & Edward to meet.



Author's Response:

Glad to see you are enjoying it. Edward and Annabella / Bella meeting is a few chapters away but please stick with it, its a beautiful moment.

Thank you for the review as well!

 
Summary:

An unusual storm descends upon Forks, and Bella and Edward are caught in the middle. When the dust settles, nothing is the same …

Takes place post-Eclipse, then becomes a little AU.


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 27769
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2009 Updated: September 04, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 -- Poppy Fields

Grest idea!  I like the way you are weaving Wizard & Twilight together.,

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 -- Broomsticks

That was an evil place to leave us.  You will update soon, won't you?   I enjoyed the battle scene.

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a hot, bad, gangsta fella who is a new kid in the Chicago underworld. But refusing to pay his respects to the big, ruling Godfather, his arrival is not welcomed. Bella is said Godfather’s estranged daughter who fled his father’s world in an attempt at a normal life.

Both men keep clashing and bumping heads, Edward’s power grows rapidly, men are tired of the old regime, and so a sort of gangster war ensues. Bella is caught in the mayhem when she becomes a prisoner in the hands of her father’s most hated enemy and rival. With Bella as a prisioner, Edward knows her father will have no choice but to do as he is told.

But does Edward have other motives to capture Bella?

**There is rape involved in one of the later chapters. If that topic offends you, please do not read** 

 

Thanks to the awesome Caius for my banner! I absolutely love it!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 61861
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2009 Updated: July 29, 2014


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- Trust

Charlie is the only one I still hate.


Thia explains a lot about Edward's treatment of her.



Author's Response:

I do hope everyone is getting closer to having sympathy for Edward. BUT, I don't think one could ever truly excuse what he did, you know? Anyway, thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

Interesting!  I wonder - is the sex about proving Edward's dominance, or is he hoping for a child to come from it - either to unite the "families" or to gain another hostage?  Why is Joseph opposed?



Author's Response:

Well I can't very well answer your questions without giving the whole story away, now can I? I'm glad you find the story interesting! The next chapter is submitted, let me know what you think! :)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Jealousy

I want to know if Bella got into Edward's studio & what she did if she got in there.  E arrived 2 days after Joseph gave his "not tomorrow" comment.  I took that to mean that the studio would be unlocked.

 

Judging by Mary's answer to the "collectibles" question & by Bella's thoughts about her fagther, I think that E is after an heir from Bella.

 

I'd love to see a chapter in Edward's, Mary's or Joseph's POV

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Surrender

Daddy to the rescue when rescue is unwanted??

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Surrender

I suppose it is also possible that Joseph got fed up with Edward's treatment of Bella & staged a revolt



Author's Response:

Hmmm, everything is possible, I guess. Joseph does love Edward though. Thanks for reading! :)

 
Summary:

Emmett has teased Edward and Bella about their quiet sex life and framkly they have had enough. What do they young couple do to get Emmett to cringe and run screaming for the hills?

Bella is a vampire...Nessie does not exist.

 

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2179
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2009 Updated: June 08, 2009


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you!! I really needed a laugh after the day I had today.  This was perfect!

 




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