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Shelter by moirae Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 317]
Summary:

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Fantastic banner by enchanted-mind

 

In her junior year of high school, Bella Swan was days away from moving to Forks, WA.  Fate intervened, and she never made the move.  Now entering her second year at Emerson College in Boston, Bella is passionate, smart . . . and desperately lonely.

Meanwhile, Edward Cullen is empty after years of slogging through the charade of life.  In Alaska following his latest round of high school hell, he spends most of his time avoiding his family and their pitying thoughts.  Seeking a change of pace, he enrolls at MIT and makes his way to the east coast the summer before school begins.  When he catches the scent of his singer on the air, he follows it—and her—to his destiny.

 

This story is nearly finished, and I plan on updating weekly. 

Shelter is rated NC-17 for language, violence, and lemons.  Please don’t read if your momma still checks on you at night.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 103059
[Report This] Published: March 28, 2012 Updated: August 08, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Ch 14 Little Talks

I think there's hope for Edward yet



Author's Response:

There is!! I'm glad you see the hope!

xoxo,

moirae

 
In Justice by middlewife Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Reeling from a sudden and inconceivable loss, Bella Swan struggles to make sense of it. Convinced all is not as it seems, her search for answers uncovers a far darker instability than ever anticipated.

In Justice Story Banner by LaPushStarlight


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 33196
[Report This] Published: March 30, 2012 Updated: August 02, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Untimely End

Wow!  Will Bella fight Phil for the boys?  Did Renee OD or did someone kill her?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Going Through the Motions

I'm glad Edward didn't take the picture.  What exactly is his role in this?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: To Think the Unthinkable

I'm convinced that Phil did it.  I hope Edward can help Bella prove it.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Vexed Question

Intense.  I think Phil arranged her death.  What's up with Edward?  Sleazy journalist or something else?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Another Nail in the Coffin

Phil seems overly eager about the cremation.  I'm pretty sure he murdered her

 
Summary:

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Bella Swan & Edward Cullen have been friends for years when they in London. They both had feelings for each other but they have never have acted on them. Tragedy strikes and Bella moves back to the states where her life isn't at all like she makes it seem.What will happen when they come back together & brush the fine line of friendship.

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 37586
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2012 Updated: May 27, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm glad that in the author's note you mention Bella will have a flight companion.  She is nuts for thinking she can face Riley on her own

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Looking forward to the first date.  If that is Bella's house in DC, she should just make arrangements to evict Riley while she's gone

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Okay, Bella needs to find the courage to give Riley the boot, ASAP



Author's Response:

She will find the courage eventually with the help of a certain someone.  Thank you for the review.

~Pen

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow!  She really needs to get out. I hope she presses charges against Riley

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I haven't even met Riley yet & I already want him gone so B & E can have a serious talk



Author's Response:

-laughs-  He will be here for awhile and he isn't a very nice person at all.  He's an evil person.  B & E will get their talk eventually. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.

~Pen

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I really hope Bella goes to London straight from NYC.  I don't want her to have to face Riley

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great day out.  I hope he gets over his nerves soon

 
Summary:

Summary: Sometimes when your life is all going downhill, the only place left to go is up.  What if that place isn’t exactly where Bella thinks? Perhaps, a more heavenly destination instead? A story about life, love and redemption. 

 

Thanks to VBFB1 for the lovely banner!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 17281
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2012 Updated: May 22, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Better in Time

Can't wait to hear more from Edward.



Author's Response:

Soon enough.  Thanks a lot

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: I Can See Clearly

AHA!  Dr. Masen has been in to visit his patient!  Why won't he come back now that she's conscious?



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review.  You may want to check out the story on FFN since they gave me a new validation beta here who has rejected my last chapter, so I'm not sure when/if it will get posted over here.  Here's the link if you are interested in finishing the story there.  It's complete on FFN 

 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7992642/1/Celestial_Countenance

 
Summary:

 

Summary: Time is too slow for those who wait, too swift for those who fear, too long for those who grieve, too short for those who rejoice, but for those who love, time is eternity.  ~Henry Van Dyke

 

Lovely banner made by EddieBell69

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6520
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2012 Updated: April 14, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Great story

 
Destined by teamedwardrulesall Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

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Bella was one of the newborns in the army trained to kill the Cullens. Will Edward have the strength to kill her even when he feels something for her the second that they touch if it protects his family? Can one touch change everything?

Thanks to AlleyjandroJacobie for the awesome banner :)


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4787
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2012 Updated: May 22, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm glad they convinced Jane not to destroy her.  Looking forward to B & E having some alone time

 
Betrothal by Abimaddevil17 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

Banner made by CrimsonIceGoddess - she's truly amazing! :) 

The agreement was made; Edward, the Crowned Prince of England would be wed to Isabella the Princess of France, upon her sixteenth year. 


Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Benjamin, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 16645
[Report This] Published: April 11, 2012 Updated: May 22, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: A Night to Remember

Not bad for a first time

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: A Long Time Coming...

very interesting.  I'd love to hear Edward's thoughts

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Earning her Favour

Good job Edward.  I love lady Weber

 
Summary:

Isabella Swan is a twenty-two-year-old woman living with her high school sweetheart and childhood best friend. She's sheltered and hardly ever leaves from apartment 24b. Edward Cullen is convinced she's keeping secrets, and he's determined to find out what it is.

Warning - this story talks about: abuse, self-harm and suicide. It also contains lemons and bad language.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Quil, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 18367
[Report This] Published: April 19, 2012 Updated: December 06, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: One Lonely Brown Eye

Loved how Emmett was spot on about Jake.  Also enjoyed the Kaitlyn story



Author's Response:

I think Emmett is definitely a people person and a good judge of character. I'm glad you like it, but I'll be honest, it isn't an idea from my head! It's just one of the funny stories with the trolling meme face that I've seen online :).

 

Thanks for reviewing! 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Manwhore Chronicles, pt. 1

Welcome back.  I'd love more on what exactly happened to Edward & Chelsea as wellas what's up with Jacob



Author's Response:

Hey,

thank you! More on all of them will be coming soon, but it's a few chaptpers in. It won't be very long, though.

Thanks for the review! Next chapter is almost done and will be up soon.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: A Stranger To Me, pt. 1

wow.  Can't wait to find out what made Jake this way.  How long will they be able to hide it from Angela?



Author's Response:

That will be talked about soon. Jake being the way he is, I mean.  Not long, but the most important question is: how long will Bella put up with it

 
Summary:

 

Big adoring thanks to Lisa254 who surprised me with this little beauty:)

Bella's parents die and suddenly her world is upside down. A beautiful, clearly insane man claims she's a wealthy heiress and he's her personal, very efficient butler and that she's his world. What's a girl to do? Inspired a bit by Mei-Chan No Shitsuji


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 29162
[Report This] Published: April 29, 2012 Updated: March 05, 2013


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

very interesting



Author's Response:

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

This is very interesting.  How does Lauren know of Edward?  Are the butlers trained at this school as well?



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Lauren (and everyone else) know of Edward due to his high rank, it's like he's the popular kid and everyone wants to be him or be with him. He's the standard all the other butlers strieve to, the one the girls secretly(or not in lauren's case) want to have as their butler.

But the butlers decide for themselves and Edward didn't want her so she's bitter;)

As for the schooling,  there is a butler academy and Edward has gone to it alongside a few of the others, They're not all the same age so he hasn't gone with them all.

 

Hope that answers a little of your questions, if you want to ask more feel free to do so;)

 

Thanks again!

 




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