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The Loving Kind by thimbles Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 119]
Summary:

 

 

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There were nine words on the square of paper.

Nine simple words that I have waited over a year to hear: "I was wrong. I miss you. I love you."

 

My biggest mistake was falling in love with Bella. My second was telling her.

 

Please be advised: this story contains language, sex and will deal with themes of severe depression and suicide.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 76253
[Report This] Published: March 27, 2012 Updated: September 03, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Breathe Me

What was Leah thinking?



Author's Response:

We'll have to wait a while before that question gets answered.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

 

Shell x

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Ghosts

Very nice  Looking forward to the party



Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope you'll enjoy it.

 

Shell xx

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Big Eyes

Can't wait until Bella opens up about herself. Is it me, or is Edward taking Jasper's divorce harder than Jasper is?



Author's Response:

No, you're spot on. Edward's taking it very hard. Jasper's a more easy-going personality: while we know he was devastated, he deals with things in his own way. In contast, Edward's just not dealing with it at all. 

Bella ... well, we'll get there ... eventually ...

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Shell xx

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Brother

Glad she's back. Can't wait for the reunion

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: A Stranger Song

I'm sorry Bella feels the need for a ine night stand.  I hope she doesn't pick anyone horrible



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. We'll have to see if she can bring herself to go through with it.

 

Shell xx

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Between the Bars

I like that they are letting each other in.



Author's Response:

Yes, they're opening up to each other - despite the "fake" relationship, their frienddship is very real.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 

Shell xx

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Breathe In Now

Glad they spoke.  I'm hoping for the best

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: The Fear

Can't wait to meet bella



Author's Response:

It won't be long ...

Shell xx

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: My Only One

What meds does Edward take & why?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Weightless

I guess I can understand Bella's reaction.  I hope she rethinks it soon

 
Shelter by moirae Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 317]
Summary:

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In her junior year of high school, Bella Swan was days away from moving to Forks, WA.  Fate intervened, and she never made the move.  Now entering her second year at Emerson College in Boston, Bella is passionate, smart . . . and desperately lonely.

Meanwhile, Edward Cullen is empty after years of slogging through the charade of life.  In Alaska following his latest round of high school hell, he spends most of his time avoiding his family and their pitying thoughts.  Seeking a change of pace, he enrolls at MIT and makes his way to the east coast the summer before school begins.  When he catches the scent of his singer on the air, he follows it—and her—to his destiny.

 

This story is nearly finished, and I plan on updating weekly. 

Shelter is rated NC-17 for language, violence, and lemons.  Please don’t read if your momma still checks on you at night.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 103059
[Report This] Published: March 28, 2012 Updated: August 08, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Ch 10 Say It To Me Now

Intense!



Author's Response:

Right? ;)

xoxo,

moirae

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Ch 9 Home

This was a fun chapter.  Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you, dear! More coming soon!

xoxo,

moirae

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Ch 11 Bloodletting

Wow!  I;m surprised Tanya changed her!  Are the Cullens going to burn her or let her reassemble?  I can't wait for Bella's reaction



Author's Response:

I don't want to be too spoilery, but I think it's safe to say Tanya will not be making a return. ;)

moirae

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Ch 3 I Will Possess Your Heart

Glad he's getting acclimated.  I'd love to hear Bella's thoughts.



Author's Response:

Bella's thoughts up next!  Thank you for reviewing.  :) moirae

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Ch 8 Let Go

I enjoyed this chapter.  I wonder if Edward will 'fess up to his super hearing.



Author's Response:

Good question!  I have a feeling he wants her to know everything . . . just not all at once. ;-)

moirae

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Ch 17 Lovesong

very nice.  I'm glad his journal worked

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Ch 4 All I Want

Glad they "ran into" each other.  What is Bella thinking?  What does she suspect about the sun?



Author's Response:

Thanks for writing, Gelsamina!  Basically Bella is remembering that Edward sparkles in the sunlight, and she figures he can't go running around on a sunny day.  That's all.  :) Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Ch 2 - I Want You

Greatr chapter.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Gelsamina!  So nice to hear!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Outtake - Angie

Great chapter.  I wish that Bella ^ Angela could still connect via email or phone



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I know, lots of people would like that.  I won't close the door entirely on them, but I think it's important for Angela to have realistic expectations about what the future holds.

xoxo,

moirae

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Ch 6 Eyes On Fire

Impressive chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Glad you liked it!

xxx,

moirae

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Ch 7 Starlight

Alice is very useful with her timely texts



Author's Response:

That she is.  Useful little bugger, isn't she? :-)

moirae

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Ch 16 Go Slowly

That was fun.  I'm glad she's mellowing towards Edward.  Can't blame her for not wanting to meet T's sisters

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Ch 5 Falling Slowly

Glad they talked.  I hope Bella learns to focus



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, sweetie!  I would have a hard time focusing around Edward, too.  Wouldn't you? ;-)

xxx,

moirae

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Ch 12 Cinder and Smoke

Oh no!  Poor Bella!  Does she realize that Tanhya turned her?  What happened to Tanya?  Is she a pile of ashes or was she mailed back to Denali to reassemble?



Author's Response:

I'm sorry I didn't reply to this sooner, but I assume your questions about Tanya have been answereed.  I love your passion!

thanks for the review,

moirae

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Ch 13 Ever-Living Ghost

Wow! 



Author's Response:

:) moirae

 




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