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Summary:

 

Banner by MegsD2

 

On the eve before the fight with the newborns and Victoria, Edward and Bella finally sit down and discuss her reluctance to marry him and how her friendship with Jacob is harming their relationship. An Eclipse "should-have-been" and beyond. E&B, AU, Canon Pairings


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 21035
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2012 Updated: July 27, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Thanks.  Interesting teaser.  I think asking to drive the Vanquish could be the ultimate test of Edward's love :)



Author's Response:

Ultimate test of his love, hmmm?  LOL  Yes, probably so.  No doubt it will be funny, because as Edward keeps saying, he may be a vampire, but he's still a man.

 

Shay

 
Summary:

I did NOT make the banner! A friend of mine did on MNI, and I'm sooo grateful :)

 

It's been 18 years since Breaking Dawn, and Renesmee has finally reached the furthest point in her growth. When her relationship with her best friend Jacob Black blossoms, she begins to experience the sacrifices of being a grown up...not all of which she was prepared for.

I did NOT make the banner. A friend of mine did on MNI, and I'm sooo grateful! :)


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 54183
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2012 Updated: August 06, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Unexpected

I wonder if Jacob will begin to understand how Edward felt about his & Bella' friendship

 
My Mate by rachaelprincess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 665]
Summary:

My Mate

She was lost in him, the taste of his blood and the feel of his skin against her mouth.  She acknowledged that from this moment on there would be no turning back.

 

Summary:  Two reluctant vampires find themselves mated, each requiring the other’s blood to survive.  She will fight it.  He will fight for her.  In the end, their blood will save them both.  

Story contains adult themes, graphic lemons, and violence.

A generous thank you to FrozenSoldier for the beautiful banner above.  I want your talent.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 103606
[Report This] Published: January 25, 2012 Updated: July 13, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'm looking forward to retribution.  I'm glad Bella's blood poisoned him

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

So glad to find out what she does with the human food.  I still can't waitt o hear about her change

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Glad Laurent is out of the picture.  Looking forward to seeing James go down

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hmm.  I really want to hear the story of Bella's transformation

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Glad to know Bella's story/  I'd really like to see Bella rather than Edward take James down.  I'd be happy if they tag teamed him



Author's Response:

Ah...interesting thought - both of them dealing with James.  You'll have to tell me if you approve of how it's going to go down.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

How well does Felix know James?  What impact does James feeding from Bella really have if they were not true mates?

I still want to see Bella take James down.



Author's Response:

The impact of James' feeding from Bella is nill since they weren't mates or mated at the time.  It's just more of a violation for Bella. 

You have excellent questions that will be answered in the coming chapters :)  Stay tuned...

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow!  As long as you promise no rape, I'll read on.  I hope Edward can track her through the blood connection.

 

How did James avoid Alice & Esme?



Author's Response:

You'll see - that's coming up.  Heidi was heavily involved. 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Sad to hear there are only 3 chapters left.  Glad to see Bella's recovery

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

They are so cute together.  Thanks for the fluff.  I imagine things will get intense in Volterra

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Glad Edward has a lead.  I hope he can get something useful off the cel phone

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I have really enjoyed this story.  Looking forward to the outtakes & I'll hope for a sequel

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

What did Alice see?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love the 2 of them together

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Out of curiosity, what does Bella do with all the food she cooks?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Still enjoying the ride.  I really want to here Bella's story

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Very interesting.  Jealous Edward is hot.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Love the interaction.  Can't wait to hear Bella's conversion story

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I wonder is Aro matchmaking?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This is going to be fun.  Glad Edward told her straight out

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I enjoyed both Bella's & Edward's confrontation with Tanya.  I can't wait to hear Bella's story

 
Summary:

ADATZ banner

Jasper, in an effort to encourage a frustrated Renesmee, tells her how Alice helped him when he was struggling with the animal diet by taking on a dinner date to the zoo.

Note: Original characters, Scott and Diane Cullen, were introduced to the fandom in my first fan fic, No Way Back.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Jasper, Other Character, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3876
[Report This] Published: January 26, 2012 Updated: January 27, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Date at the Zoo

That was fun



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. I had not written fluff before, it's not really my thing.

Thanks for the R & R.

~MA

 
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Banner by dontcallmeLeeLee 

Every Rose Has Its Thorn is the continuing story of Jacob and Bella. It picks up where Journey to a New Day ends: The Cullens have left Forks, there is a "treaty" between the Wolves and the Volturi, and Bella has chosen Jacob above all others. It would seem life should be perfect, but it isn't.

What has happened to threaten Jacob and Bella's happiness? Is this a concern only for Jacob and Bella, or is there a bigger conspiracy behind it all?

Warning: This story contains: controversial, mature and sensitive subject matter, violence, coarse language, possible character death(s) and sexual content

Banner by dontcallmeLeeLee

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The following is based on the characters, settings, and events from the Twilight series by Stephenie Meyer. All recognizable and/or trademarked elements, including, but not limited to, characters, settings, events, plot points, etcetera, are the property of their respective owners. No copyright infringement is intended. The author of this specific story (known by the pen name, light4dawn) is not associated with Stephenie Meyer, or any affiliates involved with the Twilight series. This work is intended for entertainment purposes only, and no profit is knowingly generated as a result of it. Only aspects entirely unique and original to this story are owned by this story's author.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 69744
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2012 Updated: May 05, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - Exposed

wow.  I hope the Cullens survive.  Is this the thing that had to happen before Leah met her imprint/



Author's Response:

The thing that had to happen before Leah's imprint could imprint on her is likely her stopping phasing long enough that her plumbing goes back to normal and since it's my story you can take that as fact!:)

You'll see what will happen to the Cullens in the coming chapters. This tangent won't last long. The story is getting close to the end.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - The Theft

Wow!  Why did the vampires steal the fetus?



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