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Full Circle by Jenny Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 663]
Summary:

Full Circle by Jenny Cullen

Full Circle by Jenny Cullen

Edward left Bella in New Moon to keep her safe. Not all monsters are immortal, and fate usually gets its way, no matter how hard you fight it.

 


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 105862
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2012 Updated: October 20, 2013


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great scene.  I'm glad Edward listened to Alice



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Always love siing updates.  The meeting went well.  I'm glad Rose is being nice.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Can't wait for the Bella & Edward confrontation



Author's Response:

Thank you. :) I don't know that it'll be exactly like what people are expecting, but I hope you will enjoy it just the same! :)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I think it will be interesting for Bella to meet the Denali's, especially if Irina was involved with Laurent



Author's Response:

Hehe Well...It will be interesting to see if she even gets to MEET the Denalis. ;)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Darn.. I was hoping Bella would be the one to off Victoria.



Author's Response:

Haha Remember, Bella is a newborn, with no experience whatsoever. She did well to hold Victoria off as long as she did. ;)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Outtake 4: Disney World

Awesome



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great conversation.  I kind of thought that Lizzie was named for Edward's mom



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)  And yes, she was. :D  It was Bella's way of having a part of Edward close to her.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Nice lemons



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

That went well.  I'm glad Charlie is taking things as he is.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Epilogue

Great story.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

It was good to see the wolf pack.  Nice twist with Leah



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I think Charlie took that rather well, all things considered.  Can't wait for him to be filled in on the rest of the story



Author's Response:

LOL Yup. :) More on Wednesday! Thank you. :D

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'm hoping Charlie will take it with good grace



Author's Response:

I'm sure he will. Charlie's a pretty cool guy. :) Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I see a lot of guilt and angst coming his way and an inmate in jail dying a mysterious death



Author's Response:

Hahaha  We'll see. :)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hmm.  Looking forward to Bella reuniting with the wolf pack.  Glad the Volturi are being kept out of the loop



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! :)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Even so, that went ok.



Author's Response:

It did. :) Better than Bella thinks it did. ;) Thank you!

 
Scissors - One Shot by evieeden Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Bella isn't the only person who has a problem with Lauren's attitude.

 

   

Thank you to the lovely FrozenSoldier for the banner.


Categories: AU, New Moon Characters: Angela, Jessica, Lauren
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3066
[Report This] Published: January 12, 2012 Updated: January 12, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Scissors

Great Story!

 
Sunday In New York by metalheart Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

 

On a rainy Sunday in New York, Bella finds herself dateless by her fiancee-to-be, Jacob Black. But as they say, New York is full of possibilities. Bella just happens to bump into one on her way home.

This is loosly based off the movie Sunday In New York. Just some components are taken out of it.

B/J, eventually B/E.

Romance/Drama, NC-17


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1397
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2012 Updated: January 14, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Rain, Rain, Go Away.

Hmm I'm not sure I like what Bella's doing here.  Interesting start

 
Summary:

Edward always arrives at the train station early despite the cold, one day it's worth it though when he meets the girl that will change his life forever.

banne

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4653
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2012 Updated: January 23, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So sweet and so sad



Author's Response:

thanks! :D

 
Summary:

Okay, so my Friday morning started off just like every other fricking day; verbal editing, hallway hookers, dirty looks, and humiliation. Pretty typical. What wasn’t quite planned for was the rather public break-up … or the walk through the meadow that followed. Did not see that coming!

trippin'

Amazing banner thanks to: Enchanted-mind


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Lauren, Paul
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3826
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2012 Updated: January 20, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Trippin' Through the Daisies

very nice



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you liked it.

~MissJanuary

 
Crash & Burn by TwiStar_Junkie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Summary:

 

After suffering through the death of a loved one, Bella Swan packs up her things and moves back to Forks, needing a change of scenery. A few weeks after settling in, she reconnects with Alice and Emmett Cullen. Life really starts to look up, but something is still missing. More like someone, and Bella just can’t let it go.

 

Edward Cullen has become the black sheep of his family. Living a life plagued by drug addiction and violence, he is now a walking shell of the highly educated and accomplished man he was three years before. His own family has turned against him and would rather have nothing to do with him. With no one to turn to, no one to care whether he lives to see another day, Edward is utterly alone.

 

Until Bella Swan turns up at his doorstep.

 

Will she be able to break down the walls he’s built around himself? After being burned by everyone he’s ever trusted, will he allow Bella in or keep her at arms length?

 

And more importantly, can Bella restore hope and love in the life of a man who’s completely given up?

WARNING: Contains drug addiction, violence, and LEMONS!

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 11940
[Report This] Published: January 16, 2012 Updated: March 09, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very interesting please update soon

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I like Bella & I want to see her re connect with Edward

 
Summary:

 

Banner by MegsD2

 

On the eve before the fight with the newborns and Victoria, Edward and Bella finally sit down and discuss her reluctance to marry him and how her friendship with Jacob is harming their relationship. An Eclipse "should-have-been" and beyond. E&B, AU, Canon Pairings


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 21035
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2012 Updated: July 27, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very nice.  I'm glad to see Bella recognizing things.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter.  Very entertaining, until the end, when it just got tense

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Thanks.  Interesting teaser.  I think asking to drive the Vanquish could be the ultimate test of Edward's love :)



Author's Response:

Ultimate test of his love, hmmm?  LOL  Yes, probably so.  No doubt it will be funny, because as Edward keeps saying, he may be a vampire, but he's still a man.

 

Shay

 




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