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Downward Spiral by content1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 270]
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Banners by Dr Twilight PharmD and Frozen Soldier  - my many thanks to these two awesome ladies!!!!!!!!

Post-BD EU. Captured by the Volturi, Edward faces a nightmarish choice as Aro enacts a diabolical plan to break him. As Edward's hold on his sanity weakens, only his memories of Bella help him stay strong as he faces the ultimate test.  And when his family rescues him, what will they find?  The man or the monster.

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 124111
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2012 Updated: February 03, 2013


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Love seeing Edward regain himself.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 04, 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Dead Man

That was fun!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great chapter.  I'm so happy Charlie, Renee & phil know.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Very well done!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Awesome fight.  I ike the thought of Marcus & Tanya together

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I was curious about how they trapped him.. Thanks for clearing that up.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter.  I really want to see Aro go down

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 18, 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Wolf Pup

Awesome chapter.  I love Colin.  Definitely interested

 
Summary:

Edward told Bella that if it had not been for Alice's visions, she would have become a complete savage.  With no memory of her human life, and no one to guide her in this new life, Alice searches for her future family and Jasper.  Along the way she meets interesting people and learns of the Volturi.  But her heart yearns for Jasper, and when he finally walks into a diner one rainy day, he had already kept her waiting for years.  This story is true to canon.


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 12998
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2012 Updated: July 25, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Family

Love the visions.  So Philadelphia next?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: France

Interesting story.  Will Alice go after the vampire who got Gene?



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Thank you for reviewing Gelsamina.  I'm glad you find the story interesting.

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Edward Masen: Bounty hunter. Isabella Swan-Hunter: Bail jumper. He’s hired to bring her back for trial, but he’s not prepared for what happens once he gets a taste of her. Death, lies, betrayal, toxicity, hope, desire. Who will survive? AU/Lemons Rated MA

No copyright infringement is intended. I just like to play with mythical creatures.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 116980
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2012 Updated: April 26, 2013


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 ~ Lacrimosa ~

I'm glad she'll be reunited with Hannah soon.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 ~ Scream ~

WoW!  Glad Emmett got him out.  I hope Carlisle comes through

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 ~ You Raise Me Up ~

Uh oh!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 26, 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 ~ The Pull of Destiny ~

I like Bella's ability to "smell"

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 20, 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 ~ Butterfly ~

Not nice to leave us hanging here

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 ~ Lions and Tigers and Bears ~

I'm surprised Edward can read animals

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 ~ Origin ~

Glad Billy recognizes the bond & Jacob will follow his lead

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 ~ Impetus ~

Glad they've come up with a plan for Hannah.  I hope Bella is pregnant and can survive it

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 ~ Hope ~

wow.  I love Edward & Bella together

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 ~ Mortal Bonds ~

Poor Edward.  I really hop Carlisle is able to pull off a miracle.  I really want both mother & baby to survive

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 ~ She ~

Hmm What does he find?  Please update soon.  I'm glad Demetri is being a good guy.  How did he hide it from Aro?  Does Aro not have the ability to read every though with a touvh in this fic?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 ~ Alarming Revelations ~

Wow.  I hope Em is ok & that Edward can pull this off

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 ~ Thorns of Crimson ~

Oh no!  Did she miscarry?  I guess it's for the best if she couldn't have survived the pregnancy

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 ~ Such Sweet Sorrow ~

Yikes!  I hope Emmett comes out of this ok

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 ~ Coming Home ~

Wow.

 

I wonder how Bella will feel about Edward's dietary preferences?

 




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