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Summary:

What do you do when the love of your life has no memory of you? Two years after they left her, Bella is back in the Cullens' lives. The only problem is that she doesn't remember them. A Bella and Edward love story.    


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 116697
[Report This] Published: December 11, 2011 Updated: June 25, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve - Absence

Edward is going to be so pissed about being banished at meal time.

I'd love to see Rose's bucket list



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Simaril

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three - Anticipation

Very good.  Can't wait for lunch



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Simaril x

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen--Celebration

hmm  is she rembering her lullaby
?



Author's Response:

Afraid not.

Thanks for the review.

Simaril x

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen-Declaration

That was sweet.  I'm glad she told Edward about her injury



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Simaril

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two � Confrontation

Intense.  I hope Bella will calm down enough to hear them out

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four - Overreaction

Poor Charlie.  I'm glad he didn't have a coronary



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Simaril x

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five - Disappointment

Great chapter.  I can't wait to see Edward dig himself out of this hole



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Simaril x

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six - Visitors

This is going to get fery interesting very fast.  Please keep the updates coming



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Simaril x

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight - Progress

Gald she gave it to Jacob



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Simaril x

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine — Knowing

I enjoyed this chapgter, especially Bella's reminder post it about her call to Charlie



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review

Simaril x

 
Hot Commodity by blueeyedcherry Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is used to getting everything he wants. Good looking, wealthy, and charming, NYC's most reputable playboy doesn't take "no" for an answer. Then he meets Isabella Swan and all bets are off ... Except for one. 

Alternate universe, all-human, canon pairs. 

Graphic sex, adult themes, lemony goodness, language, a dash of angst, and some good old-fashioned romance. 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 42974
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2011 Updated: January 17, 2013


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Business, Not Pleasure

Hmm What did he do to Jessica?

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! :)

His back story will eventually start to come up. For now I like to keep everyone on their toes guessing. Hehe.

Thank you for reading! :)

xoxo

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion

Go Bella!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! :)

I'm rooting for our girl too! Let's see how long she can go before falling...

Thank you for reading! :)

xoxo

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Playing With Fire

Very curious as to what happened with Jessica

 
Summary:

It's Christmas time and Renesmee is inspired by Tchaikovsky's Nutcracker Ballet. The Cullens, being Cullens, put on their own production of the ballet for Renesmee. Edward, Bella, Jasper, Alice, Emmett Rosalie, Carlisle & Esme ballet dancing? Jacob in tights! Best Christmas Ever!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2221
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2011 Updated: December 16, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Sweet

 
Summary:

 

FGB 2011 Compilation piece, in four parts.

 

Not all HUNTERS OF THE NIGHT are golden-eyed.

 

But those that are watch out for the humans.

 

Slightly OOC, Canon Couples...might make you smile, maybe.

 

nikkipattinson is the best VB ever!


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3658
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2011 Updated: December 18, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Edward

Quite a shield.  Loving this story.  Can't wait to see how creative they get



Author's Response:

Thanks for giving HotN a chance, Gelsamina! Hope you like their creativity...lol

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Emmett and Epilogue

Loved the creativeness.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Gelsamina!  So glad you like the way it worked out!

Merry Christmas!

Kathie

 
Secret Santa by angelz1114577 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

The holidays have arrived, and at Empire State Acadmey, a school-wide Secret Santa has everyone excited for the holidays. Will Bella and Edward finally have a chance to make sparks fly, or will the mystery of the game keep them in suspense until after the break?

 

PG-13 for possible language


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 13805
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2011 Updated: January 31, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

E & B are so cute.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Cute

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

THis gets sweeter & sweeter

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

sweet chapter.  I hope the no locks on the locker doesn't forshadow someone messing with the gifts



Author's Response:

Don't worry! The gifts are safe in this story!! I'm glad you like the chapter, so stay tuned!

 
Summary:

Banner by Morrigain

Bella and Jacob have been together since the newborn battle, and Edward has left. Many years later, they are expecting a child and celebrate Christmas with family. J/B One Shot. Rating for graphic scenes.


Disclaimer
The following is based on the characters, settings, and events that appear in the Twilight series of books by Stephenie Meyer. All recognizable and/or trademarked elements, including, but not limited to, characters, settings, events, plot points, dialogue, etcetera, are the property of their respective owners. No copyright infringement is intended. The author of this specific story (known by the pen name, light4dawn) is in no way associated with Stephenie Meyer, or any other affiliates involved with the Twilight series of books and the stories within. This work is intended for entertainment purposes only, and no profit is knowingly generated as a result of it. Only aspects entirely unique and original to this story are owned by this story’s author.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2796
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2011 Updated: December 23, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Gift on Christmas Day

I'm disappointed that Edward expressed disapointment at her not losing the baby



Author's Response: His disappointment is more about lost opportunity than the actual baby. He knows that the baby would provide something that Bella would never turn her back from. And he was happy for her. He did say that this was everything he had wished for, all the human experiences he wanted her to have.

 
Family of Thieves by ADADancer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary:

"I want to talk to you about us and I prefer your husband know about this. Meet me at the top floor of the Luxor Las Vegas..."

Banner made by Mehek18


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 25241
[Report This] Published: December 25, 2011 Updated: June 28, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Jacob is an ass.  I can't wait for the job to go down. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter.  I can't believe Jacob trusted her so easily.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Hmm I hope Jake isn't suspicious



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Uh Oh!  What is Bella planning for Jacob?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a review.

 




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