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Summary:

Edward left Bella almost a year ago, upending her whole world. What happens when Bella receives a phone call that just might shatter it? "Wait, Alice…Edward is dying?" I choked out.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 74206
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2011 Updated: March 13, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Eight: As Long As We're Here

Actions may speak louder than words, but they still need to talk

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve: What Do I Do Now?

Oh Edward.  Still thinking you know what is best for Bella

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen: I Won't Let You Go

Glad she finally told him.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen: Rescue Me

Intense chapter.  I hope he makes it.  If he doesn't I hope she tells him about the baby

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: Not Enough

Go Bella!  THey definitely needed to hear that.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Ten: A Little Bit Stronger

I'm glad Edward showed up.  I hope your mom's surgery goes well

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Fifteen: Scratch

I'm glad he knows.  I want to hear the E/J discussion

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen: Heart of the Matter

Loved the talk with James

 
The Dogs of War by mikael911 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

 

The Dogs of War is Twilight, reimagined. It is a darker reimagining, in which the vampires and the werewolves are locked in a war to eradicate one another. Edward is assigned by Carlisle, who is a leader for the vampires in the war, to tail Bella because she is close to Jacob Black, a wolf of high importance to the vampires. But, he falls for the young woman he is assigned to get close to, which will cause problems when the war inevitably reaches new heights. 

Content is Mature; includes harsh language, violence, and explicit adult material. The mood or 'atmosphere' for the story is dark at times.

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 26493
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2011 Updated: January 26, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Human Problems in a Supernatural World

Hmm How did Blake die?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: The End of the Beginning

Oh Edward.  You are falling.

 
Summary:

In Human History

Seven chapters, one for each Cullen, based on the lives they lead as humans. Why is it that neither Carlisle Cullen, Jasper Whitlock, Esme Platt, Edward Masen, Alice Brandon, Rosalie Hale, nor Emmett McCarty had happy, carefree lives before they became immortal? Is it the times they lived in?

Amazing banner by the amazing evieeden.


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alice, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 13554
[Report This] Published: November 15, 2011 Updated: February 22, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: A Week In The Life

I love Emmett

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Counting The Days

wow.  I really enjoyed this

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Rights of Women

That was heartbreaking



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Letters From War

What a great series of letters.



Author's Response:

Thanks so very much!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Great Expectations

Wow

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a doctor in the Pediatrics ward. After moving in to a new apartment, he finds his new neighbors really enjoy to party. What will Edward discover when he tries to get his neighbors to turn down the music? E/B


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3117
[Report This] Published: November 15, 2011 Updated: December 19, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (oneshot)

Sweet



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

 
What I Wished For by thimbles Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 290]
Summary:





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Bella and Jacob married young, and their life together has been much more of a challenge than Bella had anticipated. She’s battling depression and he’s increasingly frustrated that his wife is no longer the same girl he married. Bella is able to find brief moments of peace and happiness in the music she surrounds herself with. She finds particular joy in the raw and powerful music of Edward Cullen, and when she takes the opportunity to see him perform live, the pair strike up an instant friendship.

As Edward and Bella become closer, it throws her struggles in her marriage to Jacob into sharp relief, and Bella begins to daydream about being romantically involved with Edward.

Banner by the AMAZING enchanted-mind! Visit: enchanted-mind-artist.blogspot.com


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 168722
[Report This] Published: November 15, 2011 Updated: May 08, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 15: May - June 2011

That was sweet.  I'm sorry Rachel called before Rebecca.  I'd like to hear what Rebecca has to say.

I also want to read about the hearing.  I'm wondering if Jacob can hold it together or if he'll betray his true colors.

 

I'm glad Bella will go on tour with Edward.



Author's Response: Rebecca's making an appearance soon, I promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Shell xx

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 20: March 2012

YES!! I'm so glad she came to her senses.  No preferences for outtakes.  I'm just glad to read whatever you write for this story



Author's Response:

Thanks lovely.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 26: December 2013

Great wedding!.  I'm sorry to see the story coming to a close.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I'm sad to have finished it :( I'll miss these two.

Shell xx

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 24: October - December 2012

Loved the diner scene!  Go Bella



Author's Response:

Thank you! It was very satisfying to write.

Shell xx

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8: August 2010 Part 3

I'm glad Rose and Bella hit it off.  I can't believe Jacob is so dismissive towards his wife.  i wonder if he only married her because he thinks her looks are sub par and no one would bother to steal her away from him



Author's Response: I think that's definitely what Jake would tell Bella, but it's definitely not the truth. It will take time, but Bella will eventually get more self-aware. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Shell xx

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 17: June 7th, 2011

Grear eulogies.  I'm so glad Bella didn't read Billy's.  I love Sarah & Rebecca



Author's Response: Thank you. xx

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Sept-Nov 2010: Another Unexpected EPOV

Great chapter.  I think Edward & Alice should go in together on a hit man.  Seriously, I was glad to hear Bella say that she has moments of clarity where she sees how hard she is working for his happiness.



Author's Response: Yeah, Bella needs a few more moments of clarity I think. Hopefully she can get some perspective soon. Thanks for the review xx

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 13: March - May 2011

Not that I really want a Jacob POV, but I wonder what he was thinking when he was stuffing pills in Bella's mouth.  Was he hoping for a fatal overdose that he could make look like a suicide?  I imagine it is preferable for his macho ego that his poor depressed wife kill herself than divorcre him



Author's Response: Yeah, I'm not going to write a JPOV, I think that would completely screw with my head. I don't even want to try to delve into that mind. We'll find out some more eventually, but is there ever a reason that makes sense of abuse? I'm not so sure. Thanks for the comments, I appreciate when reader's challenge me beyond the scope of the story :) Shell xx

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7: August 2010 Part 2

The way things seem to be shaping up with Edward & Jake, I think I am sorry that the prologue shows Jake dead and Bella taking blame.  I think I'd much rather see Bella divorce him.

 

Can't wait to see where you take this story



Author's Response: We've still got a long way to go in time before we reach the point that the prologue corresponds with. I hope you'll keep reading! Cheers, Shell xx

 




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