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Sins of my Past by content1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1934]
Summary:

Banner by the awesome angelgoddess1981!  You rock babe!

Bella was left by Edward to clean up the ruins of her life after his betrayal. What happens when Edward finds out that not all was as it seems. What are the consequences of his sins and what will he do to get her back?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 91 Completed: Yes Word count: 421991
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2011 Updated: January 14, 2013


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Peace

Wow!  I really hope Edward pulls through.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Hole in the Heart

Wow!  Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter



Author's Response:

I'll do my best!  I actually have to write it!

:)  Edward to you directly.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Whiplash

Lots of stuff happening.  Is Bella going to tell him the truth about Swan Song?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Freedom

Glad he's home & Bella & Carlie are with him

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Seth Outtake

I love Seth

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I love Seth

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Waking

Love how Edward's making progress

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 81: With this Ring

Sweet

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 70: Forgiveness

Glad Alice & Bella spoke

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Vixen

Very nice.  I love how Carlie reacted to Samantha.  Who is this Robert?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Foundation

I'd love to hear Carlie's reaction to the Chess game

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 57: SOMP outtake - Elizabeth and Demetri

Off to  hot start

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Under the Old Oak Tree

Great wedding

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Unafraid

I enjoyed every bit of this story.  Thank you

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Confessions

Great chapter.  I'm so glad E & B talked.  Looking forward to seeing him court her

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Memories

Loved Bella's walk down memory lane

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Creation

Loved it!  I love how Edward & Carlie can bond over music.  Can't wait for the penthouse

 
Summary:

It's the 1930s. Carlisle and Esme are ready to spread the love by welcoming a fourth member to the Cullen clan. She's young. She's blonde. She's beautiful. What could possibly go wrong? And would a fifth addition make things better or worse?


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 12163
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2011 Updated: October 27, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Art of Sibling Rivalry

Great Story



Author's Response:

Great review!

 
Atlantic City by PhoenixRN Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 268]
Summary:

Bella and Japser have been best friends for years, and together fled a difficult home life.  For three years they have been making a living off the grid, rounding at casinos across the US and barely getting by.

Edward is a reluctant casino manager, living to please his father.  When he discovers that something sinister is going on behind the scenes of Volterra, he finds himself in danger.  When he meets Bella at a bar one night, he becomes completely captivated by her, but unwittingly draws her in to the danger he faces.  Now they both must fight for thier lives as they figure out what's really going on in Volterra.

Rated NC-17 for violence, language, and maybe a lemon or two...

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 113577
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2011 Updated: March 07, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Alternate Ending: Long Walk Home

Great ending



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review!

 
Summary:

***WINNER: Judge's Choice in the Hot Summer Nights contest!!***

Even though this is a one shot, there are 2 versions of this story. The shortened contest version (ch1) and the full thing I wrote to begin with (ch2).

Bella is a seventeen year old South Carolina native. Edward's family is on vacation for two weeks. Will their summer lovin' last? Or was it just a fling? (Loosely based on the song/video for Kenny Chesney's Anything But Mine)

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This AMAZING banner was made by MariainNYC before I decided to submit the story for the contest. Didn't she do a beautiful job?

Rated PG-13 for teenaged foul language. NO LEMONS. Slightly OOC.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 29281
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2011 Updated: December 03, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Anything But Mine - FULL VERSION

I love a happy ending



Author's Response: i do, too :)

 
In Perfect Time by ravenbeauty Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

In music, in poetry, in life -- timing is everything


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 13016
[Report This] Published: October 23, 2011 Updated: January 02, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Interesting relationship



Author's Response:

Yes! Haha I've always thought that that's what made twilight so different -- Edward and Bell's love is supernatural. Even though Edward's human in this one, I wanted to include that element of intense supernaturality. Is that even a word? Oh whatever, you ge the point. Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Cute



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 
Damn Kid by light4dawn Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

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*** If you are extremely attached to your favourite characters, be warned, you may consider this pro-wolf and anti-vampire. For a vampire sympathetic story please look elsewhere. ***

 

Did you ever think Breaking Dawn was a bit of a cop out? What happened to all those consequences Bella had to muddle over during Eclipse when she thought about what life as a vampire would mean? What was the point in having an entire book to tell the story of an ensuing battle with newborn vampires - along with a long story about Jasper and his experience with newborns - if Bella was never going to actually be one?

And what is with imprinting? If you want everything to fit into a nice, neat package, couldn't it at least have some semblance of believability? Was this all SM could come up with so Jake could be happy in the end, and Bella could still get her happily ever after?

Well, if all that irked you, then this is your story (I hope)!

The story begins close to where book two of Breaking Dawn ends. The birthing scene is done and over. Edward is upstairs frantically trying to save Bella. Rosalie is downstairs with the new baby and Jacob is about to pounce on it. This is what I think should have happened if the characters followed the rules of their own mythical beings as outlined by the original author. Oh yeah, and if Jake didn't imprint on his one true love's daughter (because that's just not right!).


Warning: Violence, death, some coarse language and a not so HEA ending.

Disclaimer
The following is based on the characters, settings, and events that appear in the Twilight series of books by Stephenie Meyer. All recognizable and/or trademarked elements, including, but not limited to, characters, settings, events, plot points, dialogue, etcetera, are the property of their respective owners. No copyright infringement is intended. The author of this specific story (known by the pen name, light4dawn) is in no way associated with Stephenie Meyer, or any other affiliates involved with the Twilight series of books and the stories within. This work is intended for entertainment purposes only, and no profit is knowingly generated as a result of it. Only aspects entirely unique and original to this story are owned by this story’s author.


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob, Leah
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4061
[Report This] Published: October 25, 2011 Updated: October 25, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Damn Kid

That was harsh.  Good, but harsh.



Author's Response: Thanks for the honest review

 
Summary: Feature

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Bella and Jake have been married for fifteen years. They've worked together in Jake's company ever since. When they move from Phoenix to Seattle to run the Washington office, there is no job for Bella. She has time to think and realizes that her marriage has been over for a long time. Why did she ever promise to stay when they agreed the passion was gone? At the same time, she meets the young driver Edward Cullen, who works for her husband. He distracts her from her thoughts with his gorgeous presence. They grow close in a very short time, but what will Bella do when she finds out Edward's humiliating secret? What will Jake do when Bella insists on leaving him?

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 106649
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2011 Updated: January 18, 2013


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Not just another Friday evening

Very interesting.  What a devious Esme.



Author's Response:

Well said ;) Thanks for revieweing. Here's a little teaser for the next chapter.

 

BPOV

 

"I know only part of what happened between you and Edward, and in my mind, you were this ugly, cruel monster who broke my son's heart." I swallowed and looked away. "Now that I've met you, I can see that you're anything but that. I like you, Bella, and I know that Edward is still completely crazy about you. I was hoping you still felt something, too. I thought if I could get you both in the same room..." She trailed off, shyly looking at her hands on the table.

"He's crazy about me? Did he say that?" It might have been the only thing I'd heard.

"No. He refuses to speak about it. Can't fool his mother, though," she said with a hint of a smile.

"You're playing match maker... for your son?" I stammered in a half whisper. Esme chuckled.

"I guess you could call it that. I've seen him suffer, Bella. He has suffered a lot over the last year. I can't judge you; I don't know what your motives were, but you reacted to me in such a way that I couldn't let go of the idea that there's still...something."

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: A Duet of Flowers

I knew she was pregnant



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting! Was I that obvious? ;) I hope you liked it XO Chantie

 




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