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Summary:

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A NYC barman views his mind reading as an isolating cancer, until he meets the lonely 28yr old trying to escape her heartbreaking reality.  Edward has had a life full of harsh lessons.  He trusts nobody.  Bella is faced with an uphill battle in her day-to-day existence.  She never complains about the hand life has dealt her, including when a beautiful boy treats her badly, because she doesn't believe she deserves anything better.  AH ExB

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 173858
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2011 Updated: July 28, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Who Framed Roger Rabbit

I'm glad Carlisl pulled Jenks out of his hat.  I hope he doesn't let the agents get him & Bella



Author's Response:

Jenks was pretty cool.  Thanks for reviewing. There is a picture teaser over on the Twiglithed Forums for ch 21.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Gonzo The Great

I would love to see Carlisle offer Edward his help

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Shrek

I'm glad Em's going to be ok.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. There is a teaser over on the Twilighted Forums.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 24: The 80s Will Never Die

I really enjoyed this.  Thank you

 
Summary:

In canon exploration of the nights between Eclipse and Breaking Dawn as Edward & Bella push the boundaries of their physical relationship. How did Edward end up shirtless in bed in the beginning of Breaking Dawn? Did they reach a compromise along the way?


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 34876
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2011 Updated: July 12, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Poor Edward :)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

very nice practice session



Author's Response:

Thanks fr yur review :)

 
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After a fight in school lands Bella in a summer camp for 'Youths with Emotional and Mental Instabilities,' she is forced to face her demons while trying not to fall in love with the beautiful, but clumsy, mentor Edward. Hilarity ensues. AU/AH Warnings: Future lemons, sensitive content, possible triggers.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 44301
[Report This] Published: September 24, 2011 Updated: July 01, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Manic Monday Part 1

Very interesting.  Looking forward to more

 
Summary:

EAC: The Journal of Edward A. Cullen

 

 

FIRST PLACE WINNER in THE CANON TOUR CONTEST.

What if Edward, through Alice's visions, knew about Bella before he met her? 

What if he had a chance to avoid the bloodlust? Would he take that chance? 

PRE-Twi AU


Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 44204
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2011 Updated: December 31, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: January 18, 2001

Interesting for him to know it is coming



Author's Response:

He's getting a little peek...I think it really would have changed things for him...giving him TIME to get used to the idea of BELLA!~

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: February 28, 2005

I'm glad it's not the end



Author's Response:

Yes, too many plot bunnies hopping around!

Thanks for reading, sweetie...

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: January 18, 2005

That was a good first day.  I'd love to see Edward have the vampire conversation with her - after a few dates I guess



Author's Response:

Coming up!!!

Great minds and all that...lol

Thanks for reading, Gelsamina!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: January 25, 1981

Thirty years? A mere blink of an eye



Author's Response:

EXACTLY...at least he's going to tell himself that...!!!

Thanks for reading, Gelsamina!~

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: March 12, 2005 The Meadow

Great day at the meadow



Author's Response:

It certainly was nice..and cheerful!

Thanks for reading, Gelsamina!

Kat

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: January 1, 2005

I like the preparation.  Can't wait for biology



Author's Response:

Preparation is GOOD...so he doesn't kill her.  THAT would shorten this story by a LOT...lol

Thanks for reading Gelsamina!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: June 20, 2005 Edward's Birthday

Waht a great present for Edward.  Go Bella.



Author's Response:

It was a good one!!! Alice is a good sister...and Bella has a mean right hook!

 Glad you liked it!

Thanks for reading, Gelsamina!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: May 30, 2005 Prom

Sounds like a better prom than SM wrote



Author's Response:

LOL...Well, SM inspired me!!! And the dancing in BD1 helped too!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: June 20, 1976

Emmett :)



Author's Response:

Hi, Gelsamina!  Thanks for reading EAC!

Ah, Emmett...he's just SO much fun...

Hope you enjoy the rest...there will be MORE Emmett ;)

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: March 8, 2005 11:32 p.m.

THis is really great



Author's Response:

Thank you, sweetie...I do appreciate your support!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: September 13, 1987 & March 7, 1989

Loved the tossing Emmett around part



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, Gelsamina!

I think they thought that was fun too!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: March 15, 2005 Dinner at the Reservation

I love fiesty Bella.  I wish I could have seen the look on the elders' & wolves' faces



Author's Response:

That would have been fun!

Thanks for reading, Gelsamina!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: March 13, 2005 a Charlie Extra

Nice scene



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Baseball is coming up next...along with "Math with Nomads"...lol

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: March 14, 2005 Let's Play Ball

I like how you handled the nomads



Author's Response:

Good morning, Gelsamina!

Thank you, nice to hear!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: March 13, 2005 Meeting the Family

I love that Rose is friendly in your story



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Sometimes Rose really can be a good girl!

But not often...lol

Thanks for reading, sweetie!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: April 3, 2005 What Does Alice Know?

HMM.  Looking forward to dinner with the Blacks.  I hope Jake doesn't phase during.



Author's Response:

Not to worry, no dinner phasing!

Thanks fo reading!!!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: April 11, 2005 Dinner with the Blacks

I was afraid Jacob would phase during dinner



Author's Response:

THAT would have been BAD!!!

Thanks for reading, Gelsamina!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: August 29, 2005 Bella Writes

Great Entry.  I hope Edward journals about his reaction to it



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, Gelsamina...E is going to talk about it in his epilogue!

Kathie

 




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