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Turning Pointe by Viridian1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 264]
Summary:

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Edward's life was a non-stop party – the drinking, the drugs, the girls – he was completely out of control. The night he woke up in the hospital with a broken arm, two broken ribs, cuts, scrapes, bruises and charges of felony possession of a controlled substance his father gave up trying to save him. Determined to get back in his father's good graces, Edward befriends Isabella, the only daughter of Carlisle's close personal friend who has come to live with the Cullen's for the next year while she fulfills her scholarship to study contemporary ballet under the prestigious Victoria James at the Washington Academy of Performing Arts in Seattle. Edward's plan backfires when Carlisle forbids his son from being with Bella, but can Edward keep his distance now that he's found his new addiction?

- AH/AU/Canon Couples
- Romance/Angst
- Main Characters = Bella/Edward, Told from EPOV with some BPOV thrown in as needed.

Rated NC-17 for Language, Lemon, References to Drug Abuse


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 200763
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2011 Updated: March 09, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I was really hoping to avoid New Moon

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm glad of the phone calls.  Thanks for updaating

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Loved Edward's talks with Jake & Carlisle

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm glad there won't be any unplanned pregnancies

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Very nice

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great chapter.  Looking forward to their conversation

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

It never occerrred to me that Charlie wasn't in on the video.  I wonder what's giving her nightmares?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

He really needs to have a conversation with Bella

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow.  Edward needs ro come clean with her

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Jake and Edward need to talk

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

wow.  I'm glad he told her.  I hope Bella goes somewhere safe to process it and doesn't get in an accident

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue

Great epilogue!  Thanks for writing

 
History Lessons by Carson Dyle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Something is making it difficult for Edward to concentrate in class. Will turning to his siblings for help do any good? Will history repeat itself, or is it possible that the only history that matters has yet to begin?


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alice, Edward, Emmett, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3536
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2011 Updated: October 02, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story



Author's Response:

Nice Christmas Eve present - thanks!

 
Forever by monkeymoe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 135]
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Five hundred years. Four past lives. Three lost souls. Two lovers. One last chance.

Bella has spent the last twenty-five years of this life knowing of her soul's past quests and heartache. When passing a familar stranger on a busy New York street has her spiraling into the past, she must push through to insure a future with her soul's counterpart.

To fail would be to die.

 

Rated for some dirty time in the beginning and probably later on, language, violence. Also a heads up if you're touchy on slight religion about reincarnation.

One more note - There will be some talk of suicide. Nothing too detailed, but there none the less.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 28554
[Report This] Published: September 18, 2011 Updated: April 26, 2013


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Edward

So, Edward is starting to remember.  Can't wait for more.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: In The Air Tonight

OOH  I hope it's Edwardd

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 14: The Hunted

Wow!  So he's been tracing her throught time too

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 15: The Hunter

WoW

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: The Knight

Yes!  I'm so glad Edward got to be her knight again

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Closing In

Can't wait until she tells him

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 19, 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Heart Shaped Box

Loved the research boxes

 
Summary:

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A NYC barman views his mind reading as an isolating cancer, until he meets the lonely 28yr old trying to escape her heartbreaking reality.  Edward has had a life full of harsh lessons.  He trusts nobody.  Bella is faced with an uphill battle in her day-to-day existence.  She never complains about the hand life has dealt her, including when a beautiful boy treats her badly, because she doesn't believe she deserves anything better.  AH ExB

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 173858
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2011 Updated: July 28, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: The Wombles

I love the Love Shack!  What's happening with Charlie?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. Don't worry Charlie is on his way.

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: The Incredible Journey

Great update.  I hope they can spring Charlie with no trouble.  I also hope that Carlisle will relocate eventually and take a shot with Zafrina

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Looney Tunes

Yikes!  Don't leave us hear.

 

Great chapter.  I love Carlisle.  If you do an out take, I/m curious as to what C did to Mike

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: The Groovie Goolies

Nice.  I hope they can work on a way to get rid of Mike

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Hidden Identities

Loved the code names.  Also loved Emmett's quick thinking.

 




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