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Summary:
Bree wasn't stupid. She knew Riley was lying and she didn't want to fight. She just wanted to find Diego and meet up with Fred. She meets the Cullens, will she stay or go. Makes more sense if you have read Short Second Life of Bree Tanner.

Categories: Eclipse, Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Bree, Carlisle, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Fred, Garrett, Jared, Jasper, Kate, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 75864
[Report This] Published: August 15, 2011 Updated: March 24, 2012
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 03, 2012
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I know this is Bree's story but I hope you'll let us know what's up with Fred & Rose Author's Response: I do touch on Fred and Rosalie's chat a little in a later chapter. As this is mostly from Bree's POV it's hard to get the whole conversation with out her eavesdropping or Fred repeating the whole chat. I was considering a few outtakes, so that may be one of them.
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 14, 2012
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Epilogue
I'm glad that Tanya & Fred found each other Author's Response: So pleased you have enjoyed my story and are happy to see Bree and Fred with a new family.
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 24, 2012
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Outtake
That was fun
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I like the idea of Bree & Fred meeting the others. I don't know how they're going to take to animal drinking Author's Response: The animal blood is a big deal. Bree and Fred are happy hunting traditionally. The Cullens find it hard to stick to their diet even though it's their choice. Imagine how hard it would be without any real motivation. I don't think acess to hot showers will be enough of a motivation for Bree right now.
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Very interesting. I have a hard time seeing Em & Rose taking on 2 newborns Author's Response: Well, Fred is almost a year old. Just kidding. Rose has no intention of taking on 2 newborns.
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Did Seth just imprint on Bree? Author's Response: No. I know this is fantasy, but I couldn't stretch my imagination to let a werewolf imprint on a human blood drinking vampire.
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 21, 2012
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
So Bree & Fred drank animals. Will they consider converting? Author's Response: Well, it's not so easy to resist human blood, but it does give Bree some options.
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 04, 2012
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Wow. Interesting about Bree's dad Author's Response: Bree's dad's being in prison is not my idea. It was in Bree's bio in the illustrated guide. I've tried to keep Bree and Fred's humann life as close to the guide as possible.
Summary: 
When Tanya Denali's movie is in trouble of meeting its deadline for compeletion of filming, can she count on her wayward niece to come in and bring them out of danger? Will Bella be able to help without her baggage getting in the way? Or will a certain green eyed co-star be more than she can handle? Last nerves, over protective-brothers, energetic pixies, and a cast of characters thrown in the mix makes this story anyone's call!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 39339
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2011 Updated: July 02, 2012
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 24, 2012
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Confessions Part 2
Wow. Looking forward to what Kate left behind
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 12, 2012
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner
Wow! Never saw this coming
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 19, 2012
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Tiny Steps
Dinner should be great
Summary: Bella and Mike wed four years ago and their marriage hasn't exactly been the picture of bliss. A carefully guarded secret surfaces, destroying an already fragile Bella. Everything she knew was a lie, everything she wanted for her life, wiped out with the click of a mouse. An E x B story.
Warning: There is mention of past sexual assault, crappy childhoods, an even crappier marriage, and some very prevalent social issues (that I’m not going to mention here, because it would defeat the purpose of reading the story).

Banner thanks to Forthelongestday
Excerpt: I looked at the clock again, 5:44. Jesus Christ, did time stand still? Those fourteen minutes felt like fourteen hours. As the moments ticked by, my palms began to sweat and a nervous pressure mounted in my chest. It's not the end of the world Bella; just the end of your marriage...and everything you knew. God, how was I going to do this? People up and left their spouses on a daily basis and never looked back. Of course, how many of them were under these same circumstances, I wondered. How many women were faced with leaving the man they loved because he'd woven a lie so hurtful? When it finally surfaced, did it kill them?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Word count: 171435
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2011 Updated: November 27, 2012
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 22, 2012
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19; On The Line
Hmm. That's going to be interesting. Author's Response: Wow, I think your the fourth new person I've heard from today. Always glad to hear from the lurkers.
~MissJanuary
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 29, 2012
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: A Small Town Hate
I'm glad Mike seems to be out of the woods. The perps were extremely stupid not to think of security cameras.
I love Carole Newton. Author's Response: Carole Newton is kind of kick ass in her own school teacher way. Thanks oodles for reading and taking the time to review.
~MissJanuary
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: July 16, 2012
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Of Blood and Fire
It was fun, Especially the wedding dress Author's Response: The blood, tortured wedding dress. I'd love to do something like that to mine. Hhehe. Thanks for reading!
Summary: As Nessie gets older, Edward just wants Jacob to be safe with her. The inevitable sex talk. A humorous one shot from Jacob's point of view.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1294
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2011 Updated: September 22, 2011
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 25, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Be Safe
Cute
Summary: Bella and Edward were ready to become parents as seniors in high school, but tragedy ended their dreams and pulled them apart. Ten years later, they reunite, but all is not what it seems. ExB

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: No
Word count: 169508
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2011 Updated: November 11, 2012
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 02, 2012
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Ryan has a lot to thin about. Bella is very lucy to have Alice & Ang
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: May 15, 2012
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
I hope it's I'm so sorry i dodn't get there tomight and not I'm so sorry I can't be there tomorrow
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: April 04, 2012
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Every time I read an update, I am grateful that I actually met my daughters' birth parents and know that they were making the adoption plan of their own free will
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 19, 2012
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
Nice wedding. Glad Edward made it. Renee is a pill
Summary: "Bella and Renée Attend a Yoga Class." Angst, but only teen-angst. This one-shot takes place in Phoenix, shortly after Bella's sixteenth birthday.
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4504
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2011 Updated: September 23, 2011
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: LuluBella (One-Shot)
Nice story
Summary: 
Edward's life was a non-stop party – the drinking, the drugs, the girls – he was completely out of control. The night he woke up in the hospital with a broken arm, two broken ribs, cuts, scrapes, bruises and charges of felony possession of a controlled substance his father gave up trying to save him. Determined to get back in his father's good graces, Edward befriends Isabella, the only daughter of Carlisle's close personal friend who has come to live with the Cullen's for the next year while she fulfills her scholarship to study contemporary ballet under the prestigious Victoria James at the Washington Academy of Performing Arts in Seattle. Edward's plan backfires when Carlisle forbids his son from being with Bella, but can Edward keep his distance now that he's found his new addiction?
- AH/AU/Canon Couples - Romance/Angst - Main Characters = Bella/Edward, Told from EPOV with some BPOV thrown in as needed.
Rated NC-17 for Language, Lemon, References to Drug Abuse
Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 200763
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2011 Updated: March 09, 2012
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I love Edward
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I love Esme
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 27, 2012
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Well Happy New Year. I'd love to hear the conversation between Edward & Charlie
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I'm so glad Jacob is gay
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 18, 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I was really hoping to avoid New Moon
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