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Summary:

After a business arrangement leads to marriage, Bella is shocked to find her husband wishes for her to give him an heir. Will Bella consent in hopes that he will return the love she has for him or will she leave before her heart is beyond repair?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 65991
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2011 Updated: September 21, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Small world indeed



Author's Response:

Definitely small world!  Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: EPOV Outtake: The First Christmas

sweet



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Summary:

Two sets of quirky friends, one week in California, and one crazy game show.  Bella needs a push in the right direction.  Edward needs help in the girl department.  Their friends have plans that will change their lives forever.  What will happen when they all meet on a game show where they date in complete darkness?  What could go wrong... or right?  Hilarity and lemons ensue!  Fun times ahead!!

 


Categories: AU-Human, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 43881
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2011 Updated: June 24, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Reveal yourself!

Where on earth did Riley even come from?



Author's Response: ah, riley. answer to that and other questions coming up next chapter. hang in there! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Hell yes!

This is a lot of fun.  You always make me laugh



Author's Response: yay! i'm glad i can bring a smile to your life. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: June 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Let there be light!

Impressive.  Glad we found out about Riley!  Glad Bella got to beat on him & he didn't press charges. 

 
The Walls of Dreaming by hmu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 302]
Summary:

Edward left Bella in a misguided attempt to save her. Years later, Bella crosses paths with the Cullen family during her University studies and her world is turned upside down with the potential of her love's return and a renewed danger that threatens to end it all. Will Edward have to save her, or will she manage to save herself?

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 124132
[Report This] Published: August 08, 2011 Updated: March 22, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen: Novena Without Faith

Great conversatrion



Author's Response:

Thannnk you!!

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-Five: Thanksgiving, Day 1

Loved the B, C & J conversation.  Can't wait for dinner

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Seven: What Now!?

Fun paintballl game.  I'd like to know what Edward was thinking when she shot him

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: January 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Six: "Armistice"

Glad THanksgiving dinner was edible.  Looking forward to the conversaton with Rose & the paint ball

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Oasis

Glad she's forgiven him.  What's next?

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Two : On Notice

Interesting conversation.  Can't wait until Bella asks Rose to check out her stalker

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen: "The Tallest Man, The Broadest Shoulders"

Good advice from everyone, especially Emmett



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: November 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen: Clown Car Dorm

Great chapter.  So did Jacob imprint on Camille?



Author's Response:

No, no! There shall be no imprinting 'round these parts. :) He's just a guy looking at some hot girls, thinking with his pants. :)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty: In Limbo

A much nicer birthday



Author's Response:

Indeed! Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-One: The Chrononaut.

How very sad



Author's Response:

Yes, hope we (Edward and I) didn't depress you too much :)

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: December 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Three: The Woods. (I'm Never Quite Out Of)

Let's hope if Edward overreactrs everyone else gangs up on him

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: March 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty: 2+2=#$#%!

So Victoria called the Volturi down on Bella?  Interessting

 
Summary:

" 'Ness …' he breathed, 'My Ness…' and tightened his arm around me ... I leaned in closer and rested my ear against his warm chest, listening to the steady sound of his beating heart."  The imprint, Nessie's perspective.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4827
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2011 Updated: August 12, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: With Every Beat of My Heart

Beautiful and sad

 
Shattered Soul by idealskeptic Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

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Travelling to South America in search of Nahuel, Alice and Jasper end up caught and stalled by the sun in Mexico. With no other way to pass the time, Alice begins to wonder about her creator and why he might have left her alone. When she asks Jasper a question that's long nagged at her, she doesn't get the answer she expects.

But she loves it...

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Categories: Pre-Twilight, Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4352
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2011 Updated: August 13, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: August 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Shattered Soul (One-Shot)

Surprised jasper was able to keep it from Edward when Edward met Bella

 
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Incredible Banner by readergoof...she even found a white bikini!!  Thank you!!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

 

 

 

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 57554
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2011 Updated: October 20, 2011


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?

I'm glad they are giving each other space.  I do want to see them together.  I'd also like to see Bella take down Rose

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: October 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

Great story. thanks

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself

Great set up. Sneaky Alice

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story

You only need to be in witness protecgtion if you're going to take a long time to update.

Very interesting turn of events

 
Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir

Great wedding.  You have to update soon

 
My Choice by lizzybeta Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary:

 

Bree wasn't stupid. She knew Riley was lying and she didn't want to fight. She just wanted to find Diego and meet up with Fred. She meets the Cullens, will she stay or go.  Makes more sense if you have read Short Second Life of Bree Tanner.

 

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Categories: Eclipse, Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Bree, Carlisle, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Fred, Garrett, Jared, Jasper, Kate, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 75864
[Report This] Published: August 15, 2011 Updated: March 24, 2012


Reviewer: Gelsamina Signed
Date: February 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'd love an out take on Rose's & Fred's conversation



Author's Response:

I have something written, but no where near complete.  I want to focus on this story for now.

 




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