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Penname: beaandmarco [Contact]
Real name: bea
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Member Since: March 02, 2009
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well my name is bea, im a senior in high school and i love to read... thats all i can say for now... lol...


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Breathe Again by Ysar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5438]
Summary: Feature

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards  


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010


Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 56: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

lol.. wonderful chapter... i wonder how far the two are really going to go.. lol.. knowing bellas hormones.. i can only imagine.. well like you said im not going to write about how sorry i feel, so im going to congradulate you.. you are a strong and brave individual... it takes alot of courage living with this illness... and it seems as though u have found the perfect way to vent your fustrations.. through amazing chapters... i offer you endless support in all of your work... its amazing and so are you..



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: May 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Moments: Bella's POV

yes i am going postal on jacob.. how could he do that... then again you are right... the author is always right... love the story so far...

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: May 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Dilemma: Bella's POV

oh my gosh... you need to update... i love the story..!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hopefully the companion story I submitted will be validated soon, then I can add the next chapter.  It just won't be the same if I post the next one now when no one has had a peel into the workings of Embry's twisted little mind!

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: May 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Retribution: Bella's POV

well how can we help it... the story is just so dang wonderful... lol... i love it...



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm still just amazed at how much everyone loves it!

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 50: Unrest: Jacob's POV

lol.. well i wonder who jacob is going to imprint on.. speculation is going to kill me.. lol.. and i cant wait for the sequal to be up.. this story is so good it should be a book.. lol... i would buy it.. lol..



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: July 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 52: Quiet: Jacob's POV

oh my goodness so my guess is that jessica is embrys imprint.. interesting.. I LOVE IT.. lol..



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 53: Nuisance: Bella's POV

lol.. well i made it.. but my disaster was i was camping and didnt read this sooner.. lol.. its awesome..



Author's Response:

Oh, yes, camping would definitely be a disaster if it was me doing the camping.  Me and the great outdoors...we don't get along so well.  I'm too much of a whiner!

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Distractions: Bella's POV

oh my gosh... what a twist.. but obviously it had to happen.. lol..

 
Eight Years Later by jmeyer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1238]
Summary:

It has been 8 long years since Edward left Bella on their wedding day. Bella has finally come back to Forks to visit Charlie, only to find that Edward has also returned, and he has been keeping a big secret from her.

Banner by allycubed

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 115303
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2008 Updated: August 05, 2009


Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY HEAD IS GOING TO BLOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue

oh my gosh i cant make the tears stop.. lol.. it was a wonderful ending... im going to get married on may 23 now.. lol... i wonder what edward died of.. old age?? i hope so... thats what they have wanted in the end... it was awesome!! i love it.

 
The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13645]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

holy crap... im very patient.. when i want to be.. please update very very very very very very very very soon. i cant take it anymore... my head is going to explode and then how will i read the story..

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

awwwww... *sniffle* its awesome!!! and congradulations on ur novel!

 
Summary:

It's been three long years since Edward left Bella, and things within The Cullen family have changed epically. After Edward's final stand off with Victoria, Emmett is left heartbroken and alone. A chance vision sends him back to Forks, and into the healing arms of the one person he never expected. Why fight with fate?

 

 New Moon AU - Bella/Emmett.

 


Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 64433
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2009 Updated: February 22, 2011


Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: November 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Please Don't Go

holy crap... update soon... i just saw the new moon movie.. it was massively awesome!!!

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Run

holy crap balls!!! i never saw this coming... this is the best... please update soon!!! very soon!!!

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Stand By Me

adrianne... thats what i wanted to name my baby girl...

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: October 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Mess I Made

awesome...

 
Fall For You by Live720 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 672]
Summary:

 

Banner made my the wonderful, my hubby is no edward.

 

What if Bella never jumped off that cliff?  This story picks up from that part in New Moon.  It gives Jacob his chance, finally.  If Edward decides to come back, who will Bella choose?  Who is Cole and what are his motives? Bella/Jacob and Bella/Edward

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 128687
[Report This] Published: March 10, 2009 Updated: October 12, 2009


Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Traitor

holy crap.. thats all i can say.. my fingers are too shaky....

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Sense of Recognition

poor jacob... im and edward fan but i love jacob too... so sad but awesome chapter...

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Unsolved Mysteries

holy shit.. im trying so hard not to scream in the library...

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Never Forget

ahhh.. i feel like bella in choosing... its so hard...

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Confrontation

holy crap... my heart is going a 1000 miles an hour!!! please update soon!!!



Author's Response:

Awesome! That means I did my job, then. Thanks a lot for the review. :-)

 
Tainted Love by hellacullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 410]
Summary:

Bella has a very protective, religious father. Edward suffers from an abusive home. They meet at school and seek comfort in each other's arms. What happens when life becomes too intense? Not every story ends with happily ever after.

"She was both the angel and the devil on each of my shoulders. The angel was dressed in a sexy Catholic school uniform. Of course, the devil was wearing the exact same thing."

Banner created by the very talented porche911turbo


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 68661
[Report This] Published: March 21, 2009 Updated: November 22, 2009


Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: June 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Shopping

what if edward had an actual alter server past... lol.. that would be interisting...



Author's Response:

That would be interesting, but that is not the case here. However, I think that Edward in church is a good possibility.

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: June 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Shopping

what if edward had an actual alter server past... lol.. that would be interisting...

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - When the Moment is Right

this is so good.. lol.. i love the way your mind works.. lol..



Author's Response:

You know they say that great minds thing alike!

 
Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Meet the Parents

holy penguins!!! this was great!!!! i loved it.. update soon please..



Author's Response:

Your excitement is awesome! Thank you.

 




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