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Penname: imloki [Contact]
Real name: lisa hartman
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Member Since: March 02, 2009
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Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

We all believe that Edward and Bella are meant to be together...but what if there’s more to that than meets the eye?

 

What if there are forces at work that they don’t understand? How will they cope with events that have no discernable meaning?

 

This story starts out two weeks before Bella and Edward’s wedding. But, right away, things go wrong. They struggle with mishap after mishap, all the while wondering if they’re destined to be at the center of conflict and angst.

 

All the major characters of Twilight appear. Canon couples. Lemons in various chapters. This is a more realistic view of Edward and Bella’s relationship before the wedding. He certainly wouldn’t carry her off to a desert island alone, having never even touched her. They would have experimented a bit.

 

Eventually all characters get their Happily Ever After. I just drag them through hell before we get there. No characters die before their time.

 

And I’ve adhered to canon up until the story starts—Post Eclipse. After that, it diverges from SM’s version. So...no Renesmee. No pregnancy.

 

I’ve poured my heart and soul into this story. It took me over a year to complete. I thought about it constantly. For that hard work and diligence to form, grammar and style, I’d like just one tiny thing from you, the reader.

 

I’d like a review. If you love it, if you hate it, if you’re just indifferent and will never look at it again, I’d like to hear that. It’s not a lot to ask. So...I’ll say thanks in advance for the wonderful reviews you’ll leave after you read each chapter!

 

Maria

twilight gypsy

 

  


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Paul, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 178339
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2009 Updated: November 28, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Inevitable

o.k. i'm on the edge of my seat again!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing and giving me 5 wonderful stars!

Another reader said I am the master of the damn cliffe! I tend to do it alot. But I can't take responsibility, as the story is writing itself. What about the story is keeping you on edge? Bella's leg problems? What do you think the deal is?

What was your fav. bit or line?

Maria

 
Lost by julierae Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Three sisters are stolen from their father's farm by three enigmatic, inhuman captors.  As they begin to unravel their kidnappers' tragic past, they learn that there is a dark side to eternal youth and beauty.  Loosely inspired by Twilight and set in an indeterminate past, this creepy little fable explores another side of the Cullen boys.


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 7274
[Report This] Published: October 03, 2009 Updated: November 05, 2009


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I loved it sad and bitter sweet an excellant example of what if?

 
Bundle of Joy by lilac17 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 185]
Summary:

Married for three years and expecting their first child, Bella and Edward were ready for their happily ever after, but that seems to be threatened when someone from the past reenters their lives, holding secrets that could break the couple up.

Thanks to MintKiss for the banner!

Bundle of Joy 2

Bundle of Joy


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 62261
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: November 28, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Page Six doesn't lie, does it?

grrrrrrr!!!! go git her bells please don't make Edward a compelte nit!!!!

Being I've got the male version of Tanya on my friggin' six and it's a future in-law!!!ugh!!!

P.S. I did nothing with this manwhore!!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!

 
Summary:

When a completely innocent Bella has her life turned upside down, she finds herself hardened, angry, and refuses to take it anymore. She used to pine for Edward, but is now indifferent.  Edward, once a slightly cocky jock who set out to humiliate Bella, finds some truths to the loss of his parents, making him slightly rebellious, stand-offish, and completely detached.

 

Will they fall in together, and find a way to mend each other? Or will it all fall to pieces?

 

 

 

As such, the sun was up before the night was down, and I couldnt pin my eyes open and empty any longer, my lips searched for words, but they only found yours, I was broken, alone...

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 59253
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: June 23, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Cliche Boombox Serenade

still loving it!!!

 
Summary:

 

Bella is betrayed by her husband Edward and her best friend Tanya.  During her divorce, Bella writes a novel based on the plan for revenge she wishes she could enact against Tanya and Edward.  Bella moves away and her novel becomes a best-seller.  How will Edward react when he sees Bella again and realizes that he is the inspiration behind the best-selling fictional bastard?  

Thank you to the lovely RoseArcadia for the banner! 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 12509
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2009 Updated: February 06, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Hell Hath No Fury Part 1

AAAH !!! SWEET REVENGE

 

 
Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Hell Hath No Fury Part 1

SORRY ENJOYED THAT TO MUCH!!

 
Summary:

Modern Affairs by NeuroticMuse413
Entry for AngstGoddess003 and PastichePen's Slash Backslash Fanfiction Contest.

ONE-SHOT. A drunken night in Rome breaks up a lifelong friendship. Four years later, Jasper is about to get married and asks his once best friend, Edward, to be the best man. Edward’s refusal leads to a life-altering revelation and sparks a dangerous affair.

MATURE, HORNY AUDIENCES ONLY! (I mean it!)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 19255
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Modern Affairs

yeah i enjoyed it a lot!

 
Summary:

Seeking a vaccine for vampirism, Edward and Carlisle created another type of monster - someone they love who can't remember how to be anything but deadly. With love, science, and murder in the air, the ultimate outcome is
anyone's guess. Mature themes for mature readers.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Bree, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, James, Jane, Jessica, Laurent, Leah, Mike, Paul, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 41008
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2009 Updated: August 28, 2013


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Tables in the Wall

i love it thanks for something different!



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it!  I will send Chapter 3 in for approval over the weekend, so you should have another installment to read next week.

 
Loner by Nilla Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9906]
Summary:

Edward Cullen was a loner, an outcast. He clearly hated everybody, including himself. He was not a nice person. So, why was I so drawn to him? And why did I get the crazy feeling he felt the same way?

WARNING: This story will deal with the aftermath of child abuse and rape. If that bothers you too much, I strongly recommend that you don’t read.

 

 

Banner by steffyxxface



Thanks to steffyxxface for the lovely banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 115 Completed: Yes Word count: 365612
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2011


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

lovin' it every bit you made my Tuesday!!!



Author's Response: So happy to hear that! *lol* Thank you!

 
Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

wow did'nt see that coming!!!



Author's Response: Good! Would've been kinda disappointed if you had. :) Thanks for the review.

 
The Watcher by Forever_Liz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Edward suffers from clinical paranoia, and has always has the crippling feeling that someone is watching him. Is he losing his mind or could there be something to his fear? LEMONS, Language OOC/AU


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10373
[Report This] Published: November 14, 2009 Updated: November 19, 2009


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Watcher

I like I love it I want more of it!

 

 
The Other Foot by twighlit Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 139]
Summary:

 

What if the shoe was on the other foot?

What if Bella was a Cullen, and Edward a mere human?

Bella Cullen has been living with her vampire family in a small town in Washington state for nearly four years - since she bridged the divide being life and undeath.

When a slip in judgment forces the Cullens to move to Chicago, she finds herself juxtaposed with Edward Masen: impossibly beautiful, impossibly tempting, impossibly human.

How would Twilight have played out if everything was backwards?

 

*Rated for potty mouths and lemons.

Canon pairings, even in the most alternate of alternate universes.

Mild to moderately OOC for Edward and Bella, switching things around really messed them up.

SM owns, I pepper in the debauchery.

 

Mkystich is taking over my page with all her banners. She's delicious.


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 8732
[Report This] Published: November 19, 2009 Updated: April 05, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: La Bella Italia

enjoying so much hit wrong button!!



Author's Response:

lol thanks im so glad you like it!

 
Reviewer: imloki Signed
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: La Bella Italia

i'm likeing it plese don't leave me hanging!

 
Downward Spiral by crmcneill Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary:

Post-BD AU, One-Shot.  Captured by the Volturi, Edward faces a nightmarish choice as Aro enacts a diabolical plan to break him.  As Edward’s hold on his sanity weakens, he has only his memories of Bella to help him stay strong as he faces the ultimate test of his control and his morality.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 16937
[Report This] Published: November 25, 2009 Updated: April 16, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

welcome back I did'nt know you were gonna continue but I'm glad you did!!!

 
Summary:

When Edward flees to Volterra after learning of Bella's death, he is coerced into staying as a member of the Volturi guard. When he becomes hopelessly lost, will he allow the person he least expected to find him? Sometimes redemption can be found even when it is not being sought after.  Contains slash and some dark themes.

 

trackingredemption.png Tracking Redemption Banner picture by shoefreak37

Thank you so much to ms_ambrosia for the beautiful banner! 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Demetri, Edward
Challenges:
Series: The Volturi Series
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 107870
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2009 Updated: July 21, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Unveiling Antiquity

liking it so far please go on .



Author's Response:

It's always nice to hear when someone is enjoying it!  Thanks for readng and commenting. :)

 
Reviewer: imloki Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Absence of Fear

sorry I have'nt review but was sick a little better love the story just alittle heartbroken over how quicklr Edward seems to be getting over Bella murder

so not like him hmmm..



Author's Response:

I hate to hear you've been sick, but I'm glad you're feeling better! :)  Hope everything is alright.  I'm glad you like the story.  Edward does still feel bad over Bella's murder, but it's different than still being hurt over Bella.  This version of Edward is coming to realize that the attraction he had for Bella wasn't necessarily for her, but for what she could offer him (i.e. her silent mind).  So, he still feels guilty over her murder, but isn't suffering so much from longing for her anymore.  You are correct that it is not like canon Edward, but this Edward has had many different experiences that have brought him to where he is now. 

Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

 
Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Difficult Affirmation

i stayede even thoughh i'm not happy with gay Edward but I'm stickin' I LOVE DEMITRI I think Edward's a immature jerk for hurting both Bella  AND Demitri!! 



Author's Response:

Ha ha, I love Demetri, too.  Edward has acted immature several times throughout the story but from here on out he's going to be much more mindful of those around him.  Thank you for sticking with me!  I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.

 
Hide and Drink by Savage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7581]
Summary:

Now Complete!

Bella’s blood was just too tempting to be ignored.  In this version of Twilight, Edward takes Bella on a sadistic journey with his monstrous side.  While Edward drags her around the world, barely keeping a step ahead of his frantic family, Bella battles the monster for possession of the gentler vampire inside her captor.  EPOV.

Winner of the Faithful Shipper Awards for best Alternate Universe.

Winner of The Vampies, Twilight Vampfic Awards for Best Dark Vamp.

Winner of the Immortal Sin Awards for Best Darkward and Hottest Dark Vamp Fic!

Thank you Lace for the Banner!

“There was no other blood like this.  Once she was gone, it would no longer be within my grasp.  But if I stopped now, she would heal.  Her body would make more.  The blood would replenish.  I could drink again.  The promise of more – it was the only incentive that could have caused me to stop.”

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 249263
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2009 Updated: August 28, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Regret and Redeem

ain't nothin' like new love huh kids!My mom saw this and said your Dad was this bad and still is, SO SAYS THE RESULT OF THAT RELATIONSHIP MEAN WHILE MY BROTHER IS BEING ALL POUGHTY!!!!HA IN YOUR FACE BRO!!!

 
Forever by AwesomeSauce76 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 113]
Summary:

 

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Edward and Bella are recently married, and it's time for him to live up to his promise and change her. However, what would happen if his venom had a slightly different effect on her? How will Edward handle Bella in the throes of the most powerful aphrodisiac in the world? (EPOV, Written for The Fandom Gives Back Auction)


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 12674
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2009 Updated: December 23, 2009


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: (One Shot)

oh hecky yeah!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked it! Thanks for the review!

 
Summary:

No more tears now; I will think about revenge. - Mary, Queen of Scots.

When Edward cheats on Bella, she can't think of anything but getting away from him. When he won't let that happen, she starts thinking about ways to get back at him. To make him feel the pain she felt. Hell hath no fury like a women scorned.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 3277
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2010 Updated: February 06, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh this looks promising i'm a big fan of a women scorned although this is a

little different!i'm pullin' for you!!!

 
Summary:

BITLBanner.jpgThe sequel to A Light in the Darkness. Basking follows Carlisle and Bella as they begin their lives as husband and wife. What awaits them in their new life?

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Carlisle
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Completed: No Word count: 189280
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2010 Updated: January 05, 2011


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: La Bella Luce

whoohoo!! I'm awake now!!!

 
BRONZE by mothlights Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary:

BRONZE

NOW COMPLETE

Edward is a rebellious newborn lashing out at those who try to help him. At his wit's end, Carlisle asks Isabella,
the woman who was once his mentor, to take Edward in until his bloodlust cools.  ExB AU


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 69391
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2010 Updated: January 13, 2011


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Delivery

I 'm liking it so far!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! And thanks for the rating.

 
Summary:

Bella Swan was always awkward and never quite knew where she fit in, but she always had a best friend in Alice Brandon.  Edward Cullen was hopeless since the first grade, branded a geek and bullied every day of his life.  It's years later and Bella has just returned to Forks after graduating college.  She's desperate for a job and grabs the first thing she can find working at Forks Pharmacy with none other than Edward Cullen.  Follow their budding friendship as it evolves into something more, where Edward and Bella discover a little something about themselves as well as each other.  In the end, can Bella find where she belongs, and can Edward find someone who accepts him for who he really is?

Thanks to monamour for the banner!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 126299
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2010 Updated: August 26, 2011


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow I thought Jane was gonna be a mean spirited tranvestite I don't like what happened to poor Edward but it was better than what I feared cuase my fake boyfriend buddy way worst took place!!

 

 
Summary:

What if Twilight were twisted around a bit? What if Edward already had Bella? What if Carlisle was the odd-man-out?

Esme Allen is an Architecture Instructor at Forks High School. When Emmett Cullen and Rosalie Hale chronically ignore the school's PDA policy, she decides that it's time for a parent-teacher conference.

Carlisle Cullen is the father, for all intents and purposes, of six perpetual teenagers: Edward and Bella, Emmett and Rosalie, Alice and Jasper. His children have found love, but Carlisle in 350+ years is still without a mate. He has no idea what Emmett and Rosalie could possibly have done to merit a meeting with their teacher. Little does he know, fate works in weird ways.

Added side note: I will not end this story until I've created a happily ever after for them all!

Rated R for violence.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Carlisle, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 65031
[Report This] Published: February 01, 2010 Updated: July 30, 2012


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Parent-Teacher Conference

Wow! First let me compliment you on the twist  and my favorite vampire Dad

just icing on the cake keep going please!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Chapter seven is up for validation!

 
Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Parent-Teacher Conference

Me again Every romeo has his Paris may I suggest a certain Chief Swan or aunder used character Casius hmmmm.. just saying!



Author's Response:

I haven't decided about that yet, but I don't think I will have someone else vying for Esme's love. The Jacob situation in Meyer's version was created because Edward left. Carlisle isn't that stupid! They'll have other problems, but I doubt that will be one!

 




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