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Penname: imloki [Contact]
Real name: lisa hartman
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Member Since: March 02, 2009
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i am a 26 year clrk in a office


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Reviews by imloki
 
Summary:

Set two years after that fateful night in the forest except Edward never came back. Bella is away at college trying to pick up the pieces of her life. What happens when she runs into the one Cullen she never thought she could ever have anything in common with? A Team Jasper story.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 92438
[Report This] Published: September 12, 2009 Updated: February 28, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

nice take that Edward!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'll update soon:)

 
Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

nice and yummy for my Friday!

 
Summary:

Edward may have just met the girl of his dreams, but there's something strange about Bella Swan. Maybe it's the fact that she keeps turning up dead.

AU/AH. Canon pairings.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 5621
[Report This] Published: September 12, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2009


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Alice's Intuition to the Rescue!

haha love it

 
Summary:

Edward is a teenage boy who finds his life instantly changed when his family moves to Forks, WA.  He is intensely drawn to the mysterious girl in his biology class whose mind he discovers he can read.  It doesn’t take long for him to find the truth behind her dark and painful secret but it is already too late “ his life is forever altered by his intense physical and emotional connection to the beautiful girl.   

 Innocent Heart of Darkness Banner 

My excellent banner by the talented m81170

 

My incredible new banner by BeanFlikn247.  This is her first banner!  Isn't it great?


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 120460
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2009 Updated: December 23, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

YOU HAVE NOT LET ME DOWN YET !  sorry my cat likes messing with the caps button!!



Author's Response:

I love shouty caps!  Thanks so much for the review!

 
Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Sorry!!! sorry!! I'm so sorry about reviewing the story I love the different approach you're taking and I pray you coninue!!



Author's Response:

I am glad that you like my approach.  It has been so fun to come up with this storyline.  The characters have taken on a life of their own!  Thank you for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

lovin' it keep up the good work i loke the Jake touch! but please don't let poor Edward twist in the breeze to long my heart can't take it!



Author's Response:

I wouldn't do that to you or to our poor tormented Edward.  I love him too much!  And don't worry, Jake is important to Bella's past, but not her future!  Thank you for reading and for your review.  I am so happy that you seem to be enjoying the story.

 
Summary:

Based in Brooklyn. Edward and Jasper are brothers, each dealing with grief, ego and passion.

Zigster Banner

This is a love story between a magician, a dreamer and an artist.

AH/AU

(Banner is by the ginormously talented Zigster. Brooklyn REPRESENT!)

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 180885
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2009 Updated: June 24, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

loving it you just solved a mystery why my friend's Dad gives him and his Mom crap

about his stunning good looks and eye color and sly comment s about my jumbled up gene pool! thanks!! 



Author's Response:

Lucky you for having a friend with stunning good looks! hehehe

Thank you so much for reading and sending your thoughts. Stay tuned!

xot

 
Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

We all believe that Edward and Bella are meant to be together...but what if there’s more to that than meets the eye?

 

What if there are forces at work that they don’t understand? How will they cope with events that have no discernable meaning?

 

This story starts out two weeks before Bella and Edward’s wedding. But, right away, things go wrong. They struggle with mishap after mishap, all the while wondering if they’re destined to be at the center of conflict and angst.

 

All the major characters of Twilight appear. Canon couples. Lemons in various chapters. This is a more realistic view of Edward and Bella’s relationship before the wedding. He certainly wouldn’t carry her off to a desert island alone, having never even touched her. They would have experimented a bit.

 

Eventually all characters get their Happily Ever After. I just drag them through hell before we get there. No characters die before their time.

 

And I’ve adhered to canon up until the story starts—Post Eclipse. After that, it diverges from SM’s version. So...no Renesmee. No pregnancy.

 

I’ve poured my heart and soul into this story. It took me over a year to complete. I thought about it constantly. For that hard work and diligence to form, grammar and style, I’d like just one tiny thing from you, the reader.

 

I’d like a review. If you love it, if you hate it, if you’re just indifferent and will never look at it again, I’d like to hear that. It’s not a lot to ask. So...I’ll say thanks in advance for the wonderful reviews you’ll leave after you read each chapter!

 

Maria

twilight gypsy

 

  


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Paul, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 178339
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2009 Updated: November 28, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Inevitable

o.k. i'm on the edge of my seat again!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing and giving me 5 wonderful stars!

Another reader said I am the master of the damn cliffe! I tend to do it alot. But I can't take responsibility, as the story is writing itself. What about the story is keeping you on edge? Bella's leg problems? What do you think the deal is?

What was your fav. bit or line?

Maria

 
Lost by julierae Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Three sisters are stolen from their father's farm by three enigmatic, inhuman captors.  As they begin to unravel their kidnappers' tragic past, they learn that there is a dark side to eternal youth and beauty.  Loosely inspired by Twilight and set in an indeterminate past, this creepy little fable explores another side of the Cullen boys.


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 7274
[Report This] Published: October 03, 2009 Updated: November 05, 2009


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I loved it sad and bitter sweet an excellant example of what if?

 
Bundle of Joy by lilac17 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 185]
Summary:

Married for three years and expecting their first child, Bella and Edward were ready for their happily ever after, but that seems to be threatened when someone from the past reenters their lives, holding secrets that could break the couple up.

Thanks to MintKiss for the banner!

Bundle of Joy 2

Bundle of Joy


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 62261
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: November 28, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Page Six doesn't lie, does it?

grrrrrrr!!!! go git her bells please don't make Edward a compelte nit!!!!

Being I've got the male version of Tanya on my friggin' six and it's a future in-law!!!ugh!!!

P.S. I did nothing with this manwhore!!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!

 
Summary:

When a completely innocent Bella has her life turned upside down, she finds herself hardened, angry, and refuses to take it anymore. She used to pine for Edward, but is now indifferent.  Edward, once a slightly cocky jock who set out to humiliate Bella, finds some truths to the loss of his parents, making him slightly rebellious, stand-offish, and completely detached.

 

Will they fall in together, and find a way to mend each other? Or will it all fall to pieces?

 

 

 

As such, the sun was up before the night was down, and I couldnt pin my eyes open and empty any longer, my lips searched for words, but they only found yours, I was broken, alone...

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 59253
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: June 23, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Cliche Boombox Serenade

still loving it!!!

 
Summary:

 

Bella is betrayed by her husband Edward and her best friend Tanya.  During her divorce, Bella writes a novel based on the plan for revenge she wishes she could enact against Tanya and Edward.  Bella moves away and her novel becomes a best-seller.  How will Edward react when he sees Bella again and realizes that he is the inspiration behind the best-selling fictional bastard?  

Thank you to the lovely RoseArcadia for the banner! 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 12509
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2009 Updated: February 06, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Hell Hath No Fury Part 1

AAAH !!! SWEET REVENGE

 

 
Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Hell Hath No Fury Part 1

SORRY ENJOYED THAT TO MUCH!!

 
Summary:

Modern Affairs by NeuroticMuse413
Entry for AngstGoddess003 and PastichePen's Slash Backslash Fanfiction Contest.

ONE-SHOT. A drunken night in Rome breaks up a lifelong friendship. Four years later, Jasper is about to get married and asks his once best friend, Edward, to be the best man. Edward’s refusal leads to a life-altering revelation and sparks a dangerous affair.

MATURE, HORNY AUDIENCES ONLY! (I mean it!)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 19255
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Modern Affairs

yeah i enjoyed it a lot!

 
Summary:

Seeking a vaccine for vampirism, Edward and Carlisle created another type of monster - someone they love who can't remember how to be anything but deadly. With love, science, and murder in the air, the ultimate outcome is
anyone's guess. Mature themes for mature readers.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Bree, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, James, Jane, Jessica, Laurent, Leah, Mike, Paul, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 41008
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2009 Updated: August 28, 2013


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Tables in the Wall

i love it thanks for something different!



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it!  I will send Chapter 3 in for approval over the weekend, so you should have another installment to read next week.

 
Loner by Nilla Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9906]
Summary:

Edward Cullen was a loner, an outcast. He clearly hated everybody, including himself. He was not a nice person. So, why was I so drawn to him? And why did I get the crazy feeling he felt the same way?

WARNING: This story will deal with the aftermath of child abuse and rape. If that bothers you too much, I strongly recommend that you don’t read.

 

 

Banner by steffyxxface



Thanks to steffyxxface for the lovely banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 115 Completed: Yes Word count: 365612
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2011


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

lovin' it every bit you made my Tuesday!!!



Author's Response: So happy to hear that! *lol* Thank you!

 
Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

wow did'nt see that coming!!!



Author's Response: Good! Would've been kinda disappointed if you had. :) Thanks for the review.

 
The Watcher by Forever_Liz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Edward suffers from clinical paranoia, and has always has the crippling feeling that someone is watching him. Is he losing his mind or could there be something to his fear? LEMONS, Language OOC/AU


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10373
[Report This] Published: November 14, 2009 Updated: November 19, 2009


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Watcher

I like I love it I want more of it!

 

 
The Other Foot by twighlit Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 139]
Summary:

 

What if the shoe was on the other foot?

What if Bella was a Cullen, and Edward a mere human?

Bella Cullen has been living with her vampire family in a small town in Washington state for nearly four years - since she bridged the divide being life and undeath.

When a slip in judgment forces the Cullens to move to Chicago, she finds herself juxtaposed with Edward Masen: impossibly beautiful, impossibly tempting, impossibly human.

How would Twilight have played out if everything was backwards?

 

*Rated for potty mouths and lemons.

Canon pairings, even in the most alternate of alternate universes.

Mild to moderately OOC for Edward and Bella, switching things around really messed them up.

SM owns, I pepper in the debauchery.

 

Mkystich is taking over my page with all her banners. She's delicious.


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 8732
[Report This] Published: November 19, 2009 Updated: April 05, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: La Bella Italia

enjoying so much hit wrong button!!



Author's Response:

lol thanks im so glad you like it!

 
Reviewer: imloki Signed
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: La Bella Italia

i'm likeing it plese don't leave me hanging!

 
Downward Spiral by crmcneill Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary:

Post-BD AU, One-Shot.  Captured by the Volturi, Edward faces a nightmarish choice as Aro enacts a diabolical plan to break him.  As Edward’s hold on his sanity weakens, he has only his memories of Bella to help him stay strong as he faces the ultimate test of his control and his morality.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 16937
[Report This] Published: November 25, 2009 Updated: April 16, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

welcome back I did'nt know you were gonna continue but I'm glad you did!!!

 
Summary:

When Edward flees to Volterra after learning of Bella's death, he is coerced into staying as a member of the Volturi guard. When he becomes hopelessly lost, will he allow the person he least expected to find him? Sometimes redemption can be found even when it is not being sought after.  Contains slash and some dark themes.

 

trackingredemption.png Tracking Redemption Banner picture by shoefreak37

Thank you so much to ms_ambrosia for the beautiful banner! 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Demetri, Edward
Challenges:
Series: The Volturi Series
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 107870
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2009 Updated: July 21, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Unveiling Antiquity

liking it so far please go on .



Author's Response:

It's always nice to hear when someone is enjoying it!  Thanks for readng and commenting. :)

 
Reviewer: imloki Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Absence of Fear

sorry I have'nt review but was sick a little better love the story just alittle heartbroken over how quicklr Edward seems to be getting over Bella murder

so not like him hmmm..



Author's Response:

I hate to hear you've been sick, but I'm glad you're feeling better! :)  Hope everything is alright.  I'm glad you like the story.  Edward does still feel bad over Bella's murder, but it's different than still being hurt over Bella.  This version of Edward is coming to realize that the attraction he had for Bella wasn't necessarily for her, but for what she could offer him (i.e. her silent mind).  So, he still feels guilty over her murder, but isn't suffering so much from longing for her anymore.  You are correct that it is not like canon Edward, but this Edward has had many different experiences that have brought him to where he is now. 

Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

 
Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Difficult Affirmation

i stayede even thoughh i'm not happy with gay Edward but I'm stickin' I LOVE DEMITRI I think Edward's a immature jerk for hurting both Bella  AND Demitri!! 



Author's Response:

Ha ha, I love Demetri, too.  Edward has acted immature several times throughout the story but from here on out he's going to be much more mindful of those around him.  Thank you for sticking with me!  I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.

 
Hide and Drink by Savage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7581]
Summary:

Now Complete!

Bella’s blood was just too tempting to be ignored.  In this version of Twilight, Edward takes Bella on a sadistic journey with his monstrous side.  While Edward drags her around the world, barely keeping a step ahead of his frantic family, Bella battles the monster for possession of the gentler vampire inside her captor.  EPOV.

Winner of the Faithful Shipper Awards for best Alternate Universe.

Winner of The Vampies, Twilight Vampfic Awards for Best Dark Vamp.

Winner of the Immortal Sin Awards for Best Darkward and Hottest Dark Vamp Fic!

Thank you Lace for the Banner!

“There was no other blood like this.  Once she was gone, it would no longer be within my grasp.  But if I stopped now, she would heal.  Her body would make more.  The blood would replenish.  I could drink again.  The promise of more – it was the only incentive that could have caused me to stop.”

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 249263
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2009 Updated: August 28, 2010


Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Regret and Redeem

ain't nothin' like new love huh kids!My mom saw this and said your Dad was this bad and still is, SO SAYS THE RESULT OF THAT RELATIONSHIP MEAN WHILE MY BROTHER IS BEING ALL POUGHTY!!!!HA IN YOUR FACE BRO!!!

 




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