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Penname: Marigold [Contact]
Real name: Marissa
Status: Member
Member Since: July 20, 2008
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Summary:

When Jasper Whitlock and Alice Masen tied the knot, they hoped their own siblings would have the same happy ending. Jasper's sister, Isabella, was at the peak of her career, leaving very little time for love. Alice's brother, Edward, was in the process of moving thousands of miles in the name of business.

What happens when Jasper and Alice insist on accompanying Edward to Seattle while he finds his new base of operation, all while staying in Isabella's penthouse?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 77087
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2009


Reviewer: Marigold Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?

Aww, this is so very sweet! What a shame that Jasper got to beat up on Edward, but didn't throw a few punches Jake's way. Ah well, maybe later! ;)

Please update soon!

 
Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: September 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused

Aww, no! :(

 
Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: September 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Fearless

Ugh, James never ceases to be a creepy bastard. I hope he doesn't get *really* scary, though. There's no one around to protect poor Bella!

Two chapters in a row is pretty great, please update again soon! 

 
Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: September 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Run Like Hell

*whew* Thank god somebody came to the rescue. And yay for Bella fighting him off best she could!

 He better take her home and marry her after all this, geeez.

 
Just A Moment by BellaBonnie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 66]
Summary:

Bella, Alice and Rosalie have just finished college and are headed off to the Caribean for a singles cruise. The fun vacation is overshadowed by nightmares that Bella is having about a bronze-haired boy who is trying to kill her. What will she do when she realizes the boy from her nightmares is also the man of her dreams?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, James, Lauren, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 20045
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2008 Updated: September 15, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: August 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Bruises

Ah, I am intrigued and eager for more! :)

 
Redemption by oh Ivory Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary:

Her weight had dropped. She felt frailer now, more breakable.
Her skin had taken on a translucent hue. It was strangely disturbing.
Her previously silky hair was always now a knotted, tangled mess.
Her teeth never gave her lower lip a break; It was pulsing from all the biting she'd been doing.
She stopped reading.
She drank coffee in unhealthy amounts.
She slept 3 hours a night.
God. What have I done?


Edward has to deal with the repercussions of leaving Bella.


Categories: AU, New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 10392
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2008 Updated: October 05, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: August 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Smoke

Aww, Edward doesn't want Bella to die of lung cancer. That's thoughtful. ;D

 Man, she's gonna get QUITE the talking to. And probably him too, I'm sure. Keep 'em coming!

 
Summary:

AU/AH Bella has just started an exciting new nursing job at Virginia Mason hospital. The only problem? She's hot for boss.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Athenodora
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 22667
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2008 Updated: August 30, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Two Minute Man

Woo, hot Dr. Edward! :D

 I'm glad you had her and Jake make a clean break before she met Edward. That's not to say Jake won't ever appear and make for some drama again, but I'm glad you had her go in with a clean slate to meet him.

 More, more! :D

 
Summary:

So maybe I have lost my mind. If getting my Alice was a product of doing so, then, by all means, call me crazy.

Jasper and Alice's first kiss and confession of love after they meet in 1948.

Jasper's POV. One-shot.

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Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3545
[Report This] Published: August 25, 2008 Updated: August 25, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww, this was so great! And incredibly well written, too! Thanks for sharing! :D

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!  ^^

You're welcome! I'm glad you liked it.

-LGF  ;)

 
Summary:

Life has dealt Edward and Bella their fair share of problems, but just as they begin to get their marriage back on track tragedy strikes. What happens when the only love you have ever known may be taken away? Will the guilt and memories tear you apart or is there something left worth fighting for?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 15516
[Report This] Published: August 28, 2008 Updated: December 30, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: At first sight

Aww. It's sad to think that their present is going to be so depressing, but I like the flashbacks to how they first met. Very sweet moments between them. Keep writing, please! :)

 
Trapped by CallistoLexx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

AU/AH, BPOV. A drunken game of Truth or Dare with Alice leads to Bella spending her Saturday night somewhere she never expected.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5637
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2008 Updated: September 02, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Trapped

HOT! Very well done! :D

Author's Response: Thank you very much.  :)

 
Envy? by marve Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 97]
Summary:

Frustrated by Edward's refusal to take their relationship to the next level, Bella decides to use a little manipulation to make Edward jealous.  Her plan doesn't work, but it does have some lovely consequences.

 One-shot


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 8256
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2008 Updated: September 12, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*fans self*

 Hooo boy! This was so sexy - please tell me there will be more! :D

 
Reviewer: Marigold Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Guh, buh...Christmas came early this year. I could not be more delighted to see that you added another chapter to this. :D :D

 
Summary:

A masquerade ball, an amazing dance, and a heart pounding moment. Cinderbella meets her Prince Charming but where in the fairy tale did it say he wasn't single?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 31279
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2009


Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: October 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Truth Hurts

Dammit! I can't stand these cliffhangers and Edward being such a dork. Gah, how long is all this wedding planning nonsense going to go on, REALLY?!

*breathes*

Having said that, I'm enjoying this story. Please update soon! :D

 
Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: October 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Horror Tale

I wonder if Edward couldn't possibly be the father of this child? hmm....?

 
Summary:

Full Summary: "Forever is not a word... rather a place where two lovers go when true love takes them there."- Unknown. It has often been said that one never forgets their first love. What happens when the memory of that love haunts you? Bella and Edward have spent years apart, each living a semi-contented life. When fate unexpectedly brings them together once more can they find a way to heal the wound's they've inflicted on each other and find a way to be happy again?

 

AU/AH Story.

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Thanks to the incredible MrsC for the faboulous banner!! 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 67563
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: July 09, 2009


Reviewer: Marigold Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Preface

Ooh! I wonder what the history is there! Nice buildup, please update soon!

Author's Response: thank you! i will try to update as soon as i can : D

 
Summary: Bella Swan, a resident, is struggling with the realities of a medical career when she mets attending Dr. Edward Masen, a real life Dr. Love. Can he save her from her own self doubt? AU Human, OOC.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 14862
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: October 15, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: September 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Argh! Stupid pagers!!! :P

 

Update soon, please! 

 
Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: September 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

SCORE!!!

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: October 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: March 24-27, 2008

Aww, this was really sweet. I was hoping we'd be getting to their "first date" soon. It's progressing along nicely, and we've learned a little more about her.

 

Please update again soon! :) 



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)

 
Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: November 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: April 19 - April 26, 2008

The sex was very nice, but I wish Edward would stop being a dick already! ;)

 Love this story, and really hope you see it through 'til the end. 

 
Summary: One-shot--Bella comes home and observes a special moment between Edward and Renesmee.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1203
[Report This] Published: September 15, 2008 Updated: September 15, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, a very sweet one shot. Thanks! :)

 
Can you save me by Goo82 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary: Done for the sexy Edward contest. Edward was recently crushed by the love of his life. What happens when his brother and friends throw a party and a tipsy Bella walks into his room while he is sulking. Lemon ExB
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3106
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2008 Updated: September 21, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

UNF indeed. Now I need a cold shower. ;)

 
Summary:

Bella works for the Volturi as chief interrogator.  She passes her nights toying with the souls of the lost, hearing their confessions before wiping them away.  At night she toys with the heart of a fellow member of the elite Guard.

 

But soon she will meet a vampire that will change her life forever.  Is she willing to accept these feelings? Can finding love cause Bella to leave behind the only world she'd ever known, or will some things never change? 

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 66195
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2008 Updated: January 28, 2009


Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: October 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Brothers

Yay, more Cullens! :)

 
Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: December 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Shark

What a great chapter! I really liked the idea of her and Emmett shark-fishing, and your descriptions made it very vivid.

And you don't need to apologize for the long wait. Life does get in the way, and you needed to get well first anyway. Glad you're feeling better, and just update when you can. :)

 
Summary:

Jasper Hale has been telling people that Bella's his girlfriend for years. What happens when she moves to Forks? Rated for seriously naughty stuff, so please be warned!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 11848
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2008 Updated: November 17, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: October 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Mercy

What a saucy bitch!

I hope Edward doesn't fall out of the tree again, not sure his skull could take it. HAhaha! 

 
Forget Her by wish_girl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 156]
Summary: AU - Edward left Bella in the woods four years ago. What happens when he runs into her and she's completely changed? Rated for later chapters.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 8225
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2008 Updated: December 01, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: October 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Can't stay? NOooO!!

 

Please update soon, this is really good! :) 

 




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