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Penname: Marigold [Contact]
Real name: Marissa
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Member Since: July 20, 2008
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Summary:

After college, best friends Bella, Rosalie and Alice have a run-in with their past. . .and maybe their future? A farcical, romantic comedy with a healthy dose of angst.  Nominated for Best Romance & Best Edward Characterization (Incomplete) at the Twilight Awards.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 144638
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2008 Updated: December 29, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: October 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Aww, they did it to a Foo Fighters song. It's funny how the anthems for generations change so much. ;)

 Good god, I wanna see how this goes! Will they be able to hold off hearing THEIR SONG live?

 
Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: October 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This was a great chapter, though as a person who paid for tickets to this very show ONLY to see Supergrass, I have to defend them a little bit here. They are an amazing band, and Dave Grohl wouldn't have asked them to play with them if he didn't agree with me.

 Anyway, off the soapbox, give us more!



Author's Response: oh I have NOTHING against Supergrass--I really enjoyed them!  I could have focused more on the music, I suppose, but I really wanted this chapter to be about the relationships developing in conjunction to the music.

 
Realize by Goo82 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 640]
Summary:

Edward is a hot up and coming actor and Bella is his ever faithful best friend and personal assistant. Bella's feeling for Edward have changed over the years, but he is oblivious to her feelings. With the help of her friends, will she get the courage to tell him how she feels before it's too late, or will she just stand by and watch him fall in love with someone else? How will Edward take the news of these feelings from the girl he has always thought of as a sister? Will the obstacles along the way ruin even the best of friendships?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 93126
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2008 Updated: November 09, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: July 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Tanya was awfully quick to forgive Edward for his indiscretion. I almost wonder if she went out and had a fling herself last night....

That being said, I think the happy ending isn't going to come for quite awhile. You heartbreaker! *sob*

But seriously, keep writing! :D

 
Summary:

 

Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: July 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Missing

Hey, this is really getting good! Hope you update very soon! :D

 
Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: July 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: College

Oh Bella, take a chance!! I hope Edward keeps working at her, in more ways than one! ;)

 
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Date: July 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Interview

Hehe, this was my favorite conversation of theirs so far. They are a bit weirder than the next, but in a very good way. At least they don't prattle on about stupid things like weather or classes.

Keep it up, please! Good stuff! :D



Author's Response: My favorite thing about Twilight was their interaction before they got together.  I am such a sucker for sexual tension.  Doing my best to recreate it in this story.  Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Marigold Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Acquaintances

Another great chapter! I really do love this story, and it's so different from any of the other fics I've read. I like how you have their progression going slowly, and I think the dialogue between them is still very much in character. Good stuff! :) 

Also, thank you so much for promising nobody from the cast of that show is showing up. ;)

 
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Date: August 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Friends

We appreciate all your research, hon, though I wouldn't know one way or the other with those shows! ;) Thanks for your hard work, and keep it up!

 

Please? ;D 

 
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Date: September 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Pumpkins

Hey, I have no complaints about the length of this chapter or the "feelings", this was great! I'm glad they got to cut together, though I wonder if some little pixie didn't have a hand in Bella's mysterious battery problems. ;)

Love this story, and I don't think I can say it enough! (though I'll keep saying so, as you deserve to hear it!) Please update soon!

 
Reviewer: Marigold Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Sparks

He’s not going to stop loving you, trust me

I really get the impression here that the "he" she's thinking of and the one he is referring to don't exactly match up. In a good way, of course! :)

 Please keep writing! :D

 
Summary:

Bella is on her way home to Seattle after visiting her mother. She is returning a few days early to surprise her boyfriend on their anniversary. What happens when she meets the most incredible man she has ever laid eyes on?

The usual pairings, a B/E story!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 19586
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: August 12, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yay, she's on her way to meet Edward again! Or at least I hope so! Great story so far, please keep it up! :D

 
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Date: July 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yay, she's there! I was wondering if they'd meet again this go around or you'd wait until next chapter. I'm still happy to know it's happening either way!

 And aww for the family dynamic, and Rose being the sweet, caring sister! :)

 
Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: July 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Aww, so sweet! :) I just hope stupid Mike doesn't come back and mess it all up!

 
Merger of Two Hearts by limona Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 330]
Summary:

Edward has made his name in the merger and acquisition business by using a key advantage: he can read people's minds. Reading people is a great talent to have, unless you can't turn it off. Then it is a lonely talent. What will Edward do when he meets a woman whose mind is closed to him? All the usual suspects will show up in this AH, AU fic, canon pairings.

--ON HIATUS UNTIL OCTOBER 2009--


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 54803
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Playdate

Or....indeed! :D Oooh, I wanna see how soon Alice's vision becomes a reality!

Author's Response: Haha, I can't tell you that. But thank you for reading. :)

 
Their Singer by SarahJayne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 498]
Summary:

In Twilight, Edward told Bella that if her blood sang to James like it had to Edward, it would've meant a fight right there in the field. What if this was the case? Follow Bella as she is kidnapped and turned by James, and the Cullens' fevered attempts to get her back. Features James/Bella, but this is ultimately an Edward/Bella story. "NC-17" for language, situations, and eventual sexual content.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 34456
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2008 Updated: November 01, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: July 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am so stoked to see where you go with this. Update soon if you can, please! :)

 
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Date: August 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh my god, you can NOT leave us hanging there! Sooo excited to see what happens next, please update soon! :)

 
Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: August 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Aauuugh, please update soon!!!

 
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Date: September 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oooh, I didn't expect this at all! Oh, the angst! But it's good that you mention that Bella's heart still belongs to him after 6 years of being with James.

 

Alright, now gimme more! :D 

 
Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: October 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Holding Edward as ransom for reviews, for shame!!

 (I would totally do the same thing in your case.)

 Aww, I feel for poor Bella. As much as I knew James would never willingly let her go and that it had to happen, I feel bad that she's lost her only lifeline for the last few years. But I'm sure it'll get better. :)

 
Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: November 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Aww, yay! Sweet ending, thanks for the story! =D

 
Summary: To Bella and Charlie's surprise, Edward shows up looking to spend some bonding time with Chief Swan.  Will a fishing trip alleviate Charlie's dislike of Edward?
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Charlie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2876
[Report This] Published: July 28, 2008 Updated: July 29, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Fishing

Aww, this was really great! I think you kept Edward very much in character, and probably Charlie too for that matter. I enjoyed it very much! :)

Author's Response:

I always wonder what the heck Charlie is thinking, which is how this particular story came into existence.  Not to mention I really wanted to see Edward reach out to Charlie.  I mean, he wants to marry Bella, but he knows she has reservations about marriage mainly due to the fact that her parents would flip out.  The common sense solution is to try and dazzle her parents into loving the idea!  Not exactly how this story ends, but hey, it would be a start.

 

Thanks for the review! 

 
Blind by jaywood Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 96]
Summary: Just because you're disabled doesn't mean your not able. Edward is a blind music major from Chicago, starting out at college in the south. When he meets Bella, an English major from out-of-state, sparks fly, in a few different ways. Will Edward do all he can to become whole for her? AH AU, slight OOC, just in case. Also, I'm rating it NC-17, just in case later chapters advance in that direction. Enjoy!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 23607
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2008 Updated: September 09, 2008


Reviewer: Marigold Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Dammit, Jasper! ;) I'm so glad they are getting along so well, and that she's letting her inhibitions not get the best of her. I think it helps that he can't see her doing what she probably thinks is making a fool of herself; that seems to make her more brave around him. It suits her, too! Keep it coming! :)

 
Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: August 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love this story - please update soon! :)

 
Reviewer: Marigold Signed
Date: August 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Woo, hot!

 
Summary:

When Jasper Whitlock and Alice Masen tied the knot, they hoped their own siblings would have the same happy ending. Jasper's sister, Isabella, was at the peak of her career, leaving very little time for love. Alice's brother, Edward, was in the process of moving thousands of miles in the name of business.

What happens when Jasper and Alice insist on accompanying Edward to Seattle while he finds his new base of operation, all while staying in Isabella's penthouse?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 77087
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2009


Reviewer: Marigold Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?

Aww, this is so very sweet! What a shame that Jasper got to beat up on Edward, but didn't throw a few punches Jake's way. Ah well, maybe later! ;)

Please update soon!

 




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