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Shelter by moirae Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 317]
Summary:

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In her junior year of high school, Bella Swan was days away from moving to Forks, WA.  Fate intervened, and she never made the move.  Now entering her second year at Emerson College in Boston, Bella is passionate, smart . . . and desperately lonely.

Meanwhile, Edward Cullen is empty after years of slogging through the charade of life.  In Alaska following his latest round of high school hell, he spends most of his time avoiding his family and their pitying thoughts.  Seeking a change of pace, he enrolls at MIT and makes his way to the east coast the summer before school begins.  When he catches the scent of his singer on the air, he follows it—and her—to his destiny.

 

This story is nearly finished, and I plan on updating weekly. 

Shelter is rated NC-17 for language, violence, and lemons.  Please don’t read if your momma still checks on you at night.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 103059
[Report This] Published: March 28, 2012 Updated: August 08, 2012


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Ch 12 Cinder and Smoke

Ow-ch!  Can't wait to see what happens next.  Will she leave?  Or will he?

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Ch 13 Ever-Living Ghost

Too bad Bella is so averse to everyone else in the family.  It's clear she might need an outside perspective on some things.



Author's Response:

She could really use a friend.  But the vamps represent everything she wants space from right now, so she can't really turn to them.  It won't always be that way.

:) moirae

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Ch 14 Little Talks

Good to see some humor coming back!  She will find those buried feelings for Edward, they're pushing at her even if she doesn't seem to realize it!



Author's Response:

You've got it, chica.  Things just keep getting lighter from here on out.  Not out of the woods yet, but she's making progress...

xoxo,

moirae

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: July 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Ch 15 History Books

Hmm, maybe she should think more on Alice's choice of words.  Or the word choice!

 
Summary:

Summary: Sometimes when your life is all going downhill, the only place left to go is up.  What if that place isn’t exactly where Bella thinks? Perhaps, a more heavenly destination instead? A story about life, love and redemption. 

 

Thanks to VBFB1 for the lovely banner!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 17281
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2012 Updated: May 22, 2012


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: I Can See Clearly

Yes, I'd say Bella might be a little put out that the mystery man hasn't visited now that she's awake!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Tappa, Tappa, Tappa - Ballet Studio Prompt

That was cute, she could've at least appreciated how cute she was!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review.  I really appreciate it.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Better in Time

I think she should ask him to make it up to her!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  If you want to read the rest of this story, you probably should check it out on FFN.  They switched out my validation beta & I'm not sure when the next chapter will be allowed to post over here.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7992642/1/Celestial_Countenance

 

Thanks again for reading!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Ghost of Me and You

I wonder just how many things we have all missed that were right in front of us?

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Sweet Dreams are Made of These

Edward is a doctor?  Nurse?  Candy striper?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all your reviews.  You're so sweet.  You'll find out all the answers soon enough.  Thanks again for taking time to review all the chapters.  I really do appreciate it immensely.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Time of My Life

Ah, the burdens we place on ourselves.  I'll bet Emmett is lamenting the same thing!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Hit the Road Jack

She's brave.  And loyal.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: I'll Stand By You

I think that one was just natural for her, she's not going to think too much on that!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Strangers in the Night

Theory?  She's in the hospital, perhaps waiting for an organ?  And so is Edward?

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Pomp and Circumstance

So, who is Alistair?  And is Bella going to be pissed at him?  Can't wait to meet the doctor!  Answers are coming!



Author's Response:

Ah, all will be revealed in the next couple of chapters.  :)  Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Where's the Light? Tropical Isle Prompt

Can't wait to see what happens, and what it's going to take for her to figure things out!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the kind review.  If you are in a hurry - FFN has it up to chapter 8.  :)

 
Summary:

 

Big adoring thanks to Lisa254 who surprised me with this little beauty:)

Bella's parents die and suddenly her world is upside down. A beautiful, clearly insane man claims she's a wealthy heiress and he's her personal, very efficient butler and that she's his world. What's a girl to do? Inspired a bit by Mei-Chan No Shitsuji


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 29162
[Report This] Published: April 29, 2012 Updated: March 05, 2013


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Hmmm, can't wait to find out what that was all about!



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting! As for finding out about things, this story is a little confusing in terms of backgrounds and stuff, but I'm very slowly working my way towards some answers:D

 

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

He just wants to be loved!



Author's Response:

yup, but until Bella either realizes that or he plain out says it, things are gonna get awkward hehe. Aw, love comedy in the morning;D

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I hope she at least finds the guy a place to sleep!



Author's Response:

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Sounds a bit like she moved into the home of the Adams family and maybe met some of their cousins!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: August 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Aw, maybe she could give him a little kiss for luck?



Author's Response:

lol, he wishes;) Thanks for commenting!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: August 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Well,  thank goodness for Rosalie and Emmett. Now when is that girl gonna figure some things out?



Author's Response:

Hi,

sorry for the absense!

Rosalie and Emmett needed to be introduced more for upcoming plot lines and who dares to go against Rosalie Hale, eh?

As for Bella's cluelessness, it's still gonna be there for a while yet, she's still pretty shellshocked about the events that's happened to her lately and would you blame her? hehe.

 

Thanks for commenting!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Too funny!  The gangs all here now!



Author's Response:

lol. yup:) happy you liked it!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Can't wait to see how this goes!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: July 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Well, let's hope Edward finds out just what transpired!  I'd love to hear his version of events sometime!



Author's Response:

:D Thanks for the comment!

As for Edward's pov...well, I haven't really considered it much because then it would subtract from Bella's pov I think, but maybe later on, down the line I could be persuaded. But later though....

 

Anyway, thanks again! It really makes me smile when I see a new comment!

 
Summary:

O/S - originally written for FandomAJD: Looking to spice things up a little, Edward & Bella play a delicious little game where, if she's a good girl, Bella will get her just desserts! BPOV, AH, rated NC-17 for sex, language, & BDSM elements.

**WARNING** Story contains moderate BDSM elements and references. If you are even remotely hesitant about these factors, do NOT read. **WARNING**

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8333
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2012 Updated: June 04, 2012


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Bella & the Chocolate Peen Stalk

Love it!  Of course, LOL!



Author's Response:

Love that you love it!!! LOL =P Thank you for the review! =)

~Artemis

 




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