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Rm w/a Vu by AngelGoddess1981 New! Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1408]
Summary:

 

Bella, a struggling student at Arizona State, returns to her dorm room one afternoon to find her boyfriend in bed with her roommate. Unable to look at either of them, she moves out of her dorm, seeking refuge at her parents' place until she can find another room to move to.

 

Since it’s halfway through the semester, there are no other rooms available, so she takes to the classifieds. Just how good is the view being advertised? 

 

AH - Bella/Edward

Romance/Humor

 

Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and later, lemons . . . because this is fanfiction after all.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 229683
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2012 Updated: June 18, 2013


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: September 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24. A Christmas Miracle

Poor Renee!  Bwahahaha!  Sorry, couldn't help myself!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4. To a New Beginning

So, who did she call?  Alice, or Edward?  Is he the favor type of guy?  How far is he willing to take said favor?



Author's Response:

Only time will tell who she called (Less than a week, to be almost exact) :P

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:

 

Edward is in the kitchen making something to eat when I finally make my way downstairs. He hears me enter the room and turns to me with a smile. “Hey. Get everything squared away?”

“Yup,” I tell him. “Um, I broke down the boxes and left them in my closet, though.”

With an arched brow, Edward turns his head toward me as I sit at the island. “Planning a midnight move already?”

I laugh, and a blush ravages my cheeks. “No. I just didn’t want to leave them lying about.”

He turns back to the stove and chuckles. “No worries. It’s recycling day on Thursday. I’ll grab them and put them out for pick up.”

“Thanks.” I push my stool back from the island and prepare to stand when Edward turns around with two plates in his hands.

His eyebrows furrow slightly. “You’re not leaving already, are you?”

“Um . . .”

Edward sets both plates down on the island, one in front of me and the other next to it. “It’s just, I haven’t cooked for myself in so long and I wound up making too much. I was thinking maybe you’d like to join me?”

xoxo,

AG1981

 

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7. Let the Interrogation Commence

Is Rosalie his dominatrix?  Nah,  I'm guessing she's his boss or partner at work!  So, apparently Edward has a thing for whipped cream too!



Author's Response:

OMG! BEST GUESS EVERRRRRRRRR! (Domme)

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It's also not right :P

Thanks for reading & reviewing! Here's your teaser for tomorrow's update:

 

Feeling refreshed, I make my way out of my room and down the stairs. When I reach the landing, I can hear Edward’s voice coming from the kitchen. I momentarily assume he’s on the phone again . . . until I hear a melodious female laugh.

While earlier I was mostly curious to see the woman, I’m feeling kind of bummed out now.

The closer I get to the kitchen, the more I can hear of their conversation. They seem to have a really close relationship, and I start to feel like I might be intruding if I go in there and interrupt them. My stomach rudely insists I keep moving forward, though.

“No! Are you serious?” the woman says with a giggle. 

As I round the corner, I catch sight of her on one of the island stools, looking at Edward as he stirs something on the stovetop. Even though I can only see a portion of her facial profile, I can tell I was exactly right about her being gorgeous. She’s got creamy white and flawless skin, and her perfect blonde hair hangs loose down her back, grazing the waist of her jeans. Even though she’s seated, I can tell she’s got the perfect hourglass figure, further cementing my earlier theory of rock star sex.

Edward chuckles, not turning to look at her, and I continue to go unnoticed. “I swear on my life, Rose. It’s unlike anything I’ve ever experienced. I really can’t explain it; you’ll just have to take my word for it.”

She shakes her head, the ends of her soft-looking hair flowing from the movement. “Well, if that’s the case, then good for you. You know I only want what’s best for you.”

That’s when he turns to offer her a smile, but before he locks eyes with her, he finds me standing in the doorway. “Hey,” he says, sounding surprised. “I didn’t hear you come downstairs.”

 

xoxo,

AG1981

 

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. Just My Luck

Her walking in on her parents, again, is too funny!  I don't think I would ever be able to look at them without retching!  Some ground, or bedroom, rules need to be established!



Author's Response:

LMAO! You know, it's bad enough I had this poor girl's boyfriend cheat on her, and to find out she was already emotionally scarred by them . . . ONLY to walk in on them AGAIN! On the same day she's forced to overhear her roomie and BF go at it?! It was harsh, but made for a good laugh . . . Wow, how twisted does it sound now?! LOL!

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I’m starting to lose all hope that I’ll find a place, and contemplate not calling the one ad I have left for fear of being disappointed, yet again. I look at the ad I’ve circled and read it again:

Rm w/ a Vu

Looking for roommate

to share 2 bdrm house in newer

Phoenix suburb.

Must be tidy. No pets.

If this is you, please call (480) 555-1367

I don’t know why I do it—habit at this point, maybe?—but I dial the number and hold the phone to my ear as it rings. The fact that it goes on ringing leads me to believe that no one will answer, but just as I am about to remove the phone from my ear, I hear a light click.

“Hello?” The voice shocks me at first, mostly because it belongs to a guy. So far, all the ads I’ve responded to have been females. I’m not sure how a male/female roommate situation is supposed to work, and I’m also not sure I’m entirely comfortable with the idea either.

“Damn it.” The irritation is clear in his voice, and I realize that I haven’t yet spoken.

Before he can hang up, I jump off my bed and begin to pace the floor before I speak up. “Wait. Sorry . . . Hi.” I run the fingers of my free hand through my hair and take a deep breath.

There’s a light chuckle from his end of the phone, and there’s something about it that forces me to sit back down on my bed, the hand in my hair dropping into my lap. “Hello.”

The corners of my lips turn up into a smile, and I exhale a relieved half-sigh-half-laugh. “Hey.” I can’t help but let the smooth sound of his voice envelope me like a warm blanket.

“Can I help you with something, Miss . . .?”

xoxo,

AG1981

 

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17. Offside

Poor Edward!  I have a feeling that many household items are going to have double meanings for him!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: August 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22. Another Well-Taught Lesson

Haha! Turn about is fair play. Isn't it Edward?  Now will Esme invite Bella?  That will be a hoot!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14. To Give & To Receive

I think I can use a cold shower myself!  This should have come with a don't read in mixed company warning!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27. Recipe for Romance

Are you posting that somewhere?

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2. Classifieds

I can't blame her for wanting to get out of the house!  I'd be carrying disinfectant around to take care of all surfaces!  Kitchen counter, table, clothes dryer....

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13. Staking Claim

She's going to fail her classes if he keeps making her lose her mind like that!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16. FaceTime

Oh my!  Who needs fifty shades when you can read this?

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11. Bad Timing

I can see how lunch will go.  Well, Mr. and Mrs. Swan, Bella accused me of being gay, and then I had to prove I wasn't.  Perfectly reasonable!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: July 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21. A Whole New Level of Awkward

I really hope Renee didn't do the family Christmas shopping with Carmen!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19. One New Experience After Another

Knowing Renee, it was probably a sex toy party!  This was a very difficult chapter to read on vacation with the family all in one little room...definitely could have used some privacy!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15. Waiting . . . with a Side of Worry

Quick!  What rhymes with STD?  No doctor Cullen, I didn't say STD, I said nasty pee.  But now that I think about it, it was probably those asparagus we had with dinner last night.  Sorry to bother you....

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25. The Mile High Club

That was fun!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26. Keeping me on my Toes

Poor Bella!  To get so jealous after their fun on the plane!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5. The Truth Always Comes Out

Well, friends get to know each other, so I'm sure they will!  Love to be a fly on the wall after Bella left the dorm!



Author's Response:

I'm writing an outtake of the Edward/Jake interaction, but we'll hear a little from Edward in chapter 7 after Bella deduces a few things after seeing Jake at school the next day ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser to next week's update:

 

 

Finding an available table, we sit down while we decide what it is we want to eat. Naturally, Alice keeps the conversation flowing. “How did everything go last night? You didn’t call, so I assume it went well?”

My face scrunches up, and Alice’s expression falls. “Oh no. What happened?”

I begin to tell her how I found Jake lurking outside my old room. She was a little hurt that I didn’t call her . . . until I explain how it wasn’t anything personal; I just didn’t want to talk about everything that had happened between Jake and me.

“So what did you do?” she asks.

“I called Edward,” I explain. “I guess I figured maybe he could act as some sort of buffer, and was hoping Jake wouldn’t talk about what he and Leah were doing behind my ba—” I stop talking instantly when my eyes find Jake less than thirty feet away. I’m immediately irritated, and I can feel the fury over his unwavering persistence beginning to bubble in the pit of my stomach.

Alice turns around to see what’s distracted me, scowling the minute she sees the source of my ire. “What the hell is his deal?” she demands, glaring daggers at him.

He’s just standing there, which confuses me a little. Up until yesterday, he’d have come over to try and make me forgive him. All of a sudden, he turns on his heel and takes off, but something still lingers in my memory. Then it hits me like a . . . well, like a fist to the face.

 

xoxo,

AG1981

 

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10. Liquid Courage

Blocker you!  But is Edward going to let her kiss him when she's drunk?  Or worse, is she the kind of drunk who can't hold her alcohol?  I know I am!  Can't wait to see I f she passes out, pulses out, or gets pushed to the cheek!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12. One Step Closer

That was so a double date!  I think he probably has the parents green light now.  So. Will Edward's parents like Bella?  

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: September 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23. 'Tis the Season

Very cute!  I wish I was going there!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3. Truth in Advertising

So, how old is Edward?  What does he do for work?  Why is he away so much?  Is he single?  Does he want children?  Boxers or briefs?  Favorite position?  In yoga, of course!



Author's Response:

Okay, the first three of your questions will be revealed in the next chapter. The rest . . . well, they will be answered in due time :P

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:

 

“Hey, honey,” Dad says as I lean down and kiss his cheek first, then Mom’s. “Your mother tells me you went to look at a place today?”

I take a seat next to Mom, nestling up against her as she wraps her arm around me and hugs me close. “I did. It was beyond perfect . . . and the price was more than reasonable. I probably won’t even need you guys to help out,” I tell them excitedly.

“Oh?” Mom inquires.

“Yeah, it’s only four hundred a month. For a house. It even has a pool . . . and my room has a balcony that looks out toward the desert. It’s stunning.”

Dad’s inner-cop is showing all of a sudden. “Sounds a little too good to be true, don’t you think?”

What I think is he just likes having his baby girl home again. “That’s what I thought, but that’s what the guy said he wanted,” I tell him, shrugging slightly.

Mom squeezes me supportively. “Well, that’s great, sweethear—”

“Wait a minute,” Dad interrupts, his voice low and interrogating. “He?

Shit.

 

xoxo,

AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 21, 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31. Decisions, Decisions

Oh please!  Anyone who could resent a child is a moron!  They are the innocent party!  As for the story, I'm still enjoying!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 21, 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30. Snapping Back to Reality

If he keeps the baby, Bella will be having babies up the wazoo between Edward's and her parents'!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: July 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20. Touchdown

How these two ever get a meal in is a miracle!  I'm guessing a laid back vacation for the two of them! 

 




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