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The Pilgrimage by Camilla Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 136]
Summary:

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Summary: It is the year 1353. Europe has been ravaged by the plague, and millions died. Now the scourge has ended and religion is flourishing. To thank God for their deliverance, or to atone for the sins of their dead loved ones, many people will go on pilgrimages, either to near or far away destinations. We will follow a number of such pilgrims, willing to worship at San Marcus’ shrine. But, things are not always what they seem. The handsome young monk leading them is very pale under his cowl, and he appears to be fasting all the time. Plus, all of them have secrets and very few are innocent. Will they find love or death at the end of the journey?

This is a Pre Twilight AU story. It is rather dark and there are no Edward and Bella, obviously. Feel like reading it all the same? I hope so, because I promise you a passionate love story, despite the setting. The rating is NC 17, for violence, sex and, just in one case, slash.

Each chapter will be decorated with the appropriate image. Unfortunately there is a rule I can only post the links. I do hope you will click on them. They are part of the story too.

The Pilgrimage has a blinkie

Pilgrimage Blinkie

 

Emerging Swan Award

When published as an O/S, the prologue won an Emerging Swan Award for Best Original Character (Bonizella).


Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 50170
[Report This] Published: November 14, 2011 Updated: April 05, 2012


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Prostrated

Even though she finally took the britches off, we know who wears them in this relationship!  I wonder if she will think about being turned?



Author's Response:

The issue is coming up ....

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Prologue: Confession

I'm excited that you're finally ready to post the rest! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hi dear. Chapter 2 is in the queue! (after that I'll post once a week).

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Teeth

Ice is bad no matter what shoes you have on!  Just remember to shuffle if you suspect ice, don't lift your feet!  And if you have rubber soled shoes, place a plastic Baggie on over your socks before putting your shoes on, it keeps your feet from getting wet, and keeps them warmer too!  



Author's Response:

What a good suggestion! Thanks!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Toward Siena

I'm starting to think Aligi may not be what HE seems. As for Adso, some deep and pensive wonderings for someone who believes he's evil incarnate!

Author's Response:

Aligi's secrets will be unveiled soon. And obviously Adso is falling in love, the big change factor for vampires... I have a nice image for the next chapter ... I hope to find a way to post it on Twitter (I am learning to use the damn system). Thank you so much for the review..

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Bathhouse

Ooh, things are getting interesting now! Can't wait to see what happens now! And now Vanna isn't the only one to know a secret!

Author's Response:

Indeed they are, you will not be disappointed, I hope. Thank you so much.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Alina

Poor Adso! He wanted to keep her, and he wanted to keep her safe and couldn't do both at this time! So he gets what he wishes for, but then is devastated! I'm sure a good meal will make him feel better until he can do something about it! As for his Christmas card, that is a fine pig in the picture with him! And personally, I think Guerrino might actually deserve his fate. Or was he the pig in the card? Have a wonderful Christmas! I just had my family here making the ravioli for Christmas day, and I need to turn them over (all 1200 of them) tonight so they can dry properly! Even my kids don't want to help me!

Author's Response:

My God, 1200 ravioli. I am amazed. How many people are you hosting?For Christmas Eve I only will have my son's small family of 3 so I have not a lot to prepare. (the only issue is that little Jacopo has a cold, but I hope he will be well enoght to come from Milan. Then the 25th I'll have a lot of relatives but for a Christmas tea, so there will be finger foods and drinks. Easier.

As for the boar, all will become clear two chapters  from now. Adso is in for another surprise. Thank you a lot and Marry Christmas!

 

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Doubts

I can't wait to see what he says! So, does he wonder if Aro will read Vanna's thoughts and wonder about the lie he told her? He tells many lies, true, but this one would seem peculiar to Aro.

Author's Response:

He will make sure that Aro will not be the one who dines on Vanna (In fact we already know that he will bring Bonizella to his master). But he is walking on a razor's edge .... and more dangerous secrets will be sitting in his mind, should Aro read him..

Grateful, as usual, for your reviews.

 

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Now and Forever

I don't actually think I ever eagerly awaited an epilogue before, but being that there are so many ways you can surprise us, I can't wait!  I'm glad that Alina didn't decide to live out her life with him as a human, though I could understand if she did.  Religious values and spirituality were much more ingrained to the point that people were shunned for not following them back then!  Not like the society Bella was raised in!  Looking forward to the end...



Author's Response:

Ha, but the situation was untenable, as I tried to explain. She had to make that choice and Adso is not Edward ...

All the best, until next week.

 
Summary:

 

 

Isabella Swan's battle with a near constant illness baffles doctors. Can anyone find the cure before it's too late? E&B, canon pairings, lemons to come


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 5713
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2011 Updated: February 04, 2012


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Meeting Bella

That is so sad!   It's probably the oj, since it tastes so bad to her!



Author's Response:

*shrugs* maybe...maybe not. My little one HATES orange juice :)

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: From The Very Beginning

Can't wait for another chapter. Renee and Charlie seem like fun people to hang with!

Author's Response:

See? I knew someone would like Charlie and Renee! :)  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: What's Your Name?

Aw! I'm guessing he's going to become her knight in shining armor too!

Author's Response: Hmmm... would be cute, wouldn't it? *cocks eyebrow*

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Can't wait for more! Don't torture us too bad with the angst!

Author's Response: *looks around perplexed, trying to figure out how to not lie to you* yeah...umm... Okay, so here's the deal. THis will have some angst. BUt not the kind that makes you want to flounce a story. We're talking about a sick little girl...there will be angst. But I hope I write it in such a way that you stick with me :) THanks for reading and reviewing, as always, bb.

 
Summary:

2nd place public vote winner in the Twi-Erotica Contest October 2011. After purchasing a naughty negligee on impulse, Bella surprises husband Edward one night when he gets home from work. AH. Rated for lemons (obviously lol).


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3101
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2011 Updated: December 04, 2011


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: My Idea of Heaven

Very nice! Glad this wasn't clumsy Bella!

 
Summary:

 

FGB 2011 Compilation piece, in four parts.

 

Not all HUNTERS OF THE NIGHT are golden-eyed.

 

But those that are watch out for the humans.

 

Slightly OOC, Canon Couples...might make you smile, maybe.

 

nikkipattinson is the best VB ever!


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3658
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2011 Updated: December 18, 2011


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Jasper

Like the idea, I hope they're not succubi!

Author's Response:

Dang, now that's a thought!!! I should have made them succubi!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Edward

Love the little twist with Bella's physical ability!

Author's Response:

Ah, our Bella is tricky!

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Emmett and Epilogue

I love it! Should have come with a sticker that said Some Assembly Required!

Author's Response:

I wish I had thought of that, snowgood! LOL

Merry Christmas!

Kathie

 
Family of Thieves by ADADancer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary:

"I want to talk to you about us and I prefer your husband know about this. Meet me at the top floor of the Luxor Las Vegas..."

Banner made by Mehek18


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 25241
[Report This] Published: December 25, 2011 Updated: June 28, 2012


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Let's hope they pick a place without extradition laws!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Nice sexy time!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the update.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh sweet lord!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Either Jacob is really just an arrogant ass or does he have an agenda of his own?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I didn't expect you to go there!  I can't wait to see what happens!



Author's Response:

Sare Liz

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well, let's hope she can string him along awhile and make him work for any pretend affection! 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the update.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ooh, what is she going to do?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh Jacob is such a douche!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Ha!  I wonder who could have gotten him busted?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

 




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