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Horse Play by AngelGoddess1981 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 817]
Summary:

 

When Charlie goes over Bella's head and hires a gorgeous and cocky new employee for the ranch, will she be able to fight her growing attraction to him as much as she fights with him?

 

Rated NC-17 for language, UST and future lemons.

 

AH OOC

 

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Horse Play was nominated for several Sunflower Awards and took home

Thanks to all who voted! It was truly an honour just to be nominated and congrats to all my fellow nominees and winners!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 332731
[Report This] Published: February 09, 2011 Updated: October 18, 2011


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Full of Surprises

Well, it's good to see that Bella is going to be okay, no matter what the outcome of their blackout night!

Author's Response:

Yes, it was important for everyone to know that, even though she'd have to give up competing, she'd accepted the possibility.

Hope the whole chapter is a good trade for the teaser I'm not going to send with this reply ;-)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Playing House

Well, since they can't have sex yet, seeing Edward in his naked glory will have to suffice. Though, maybe she can touch it, to make sure it's real and not a figment of her imagination! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

"Though, maybe she can touch it" BAHAHAHA! ROFLMFAO!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue: What Happens in Vegas

So sweet! I'm glad they didn't get married dressed like Trekkies! Can't wait for the sequel!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: August 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Payback Doesn't Always Have to be a Bitch

I'm glad Bella finally got some, she was just torturing herself there for awhile! And I would not be happy about James being around the farm!

Author's Response:

LOL! she was just torturing herself! Silly girl!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! Here's your teaser!

 

 

When the bucket was full I turned the water off, picked it up and turned to leave the wash stall, only to be startled when I found James standing there watching me. The bucket was back on the floor, tipped on its side and soaking the concrete and my shoes, leaving me cold, wet and severely pissed off.

 

“What the hell are you doing here?” I demanded, righting the bucket so I could fill it again.

 

“It’s good to see you again too, Bella,” he said, probably trying to sound more playful than creepy. “You know, you could have gotten me in a lot of trouble.”

 

Laughing dryly, I shook my head and looked down at the water still flowing from the hose, unable to hold his menacing stare. “You can’t be serious?” When he didn’t say anything, I knew he was. Not wanting to get into it with him, I sighed. “What do you want, James? I’m trying to finish up here before locking up for the night.”

 

“Well, I was here to ask your dad about something but couldn’t find him.” He took a step into the wash stall and I grew a little nervous; it was almost like he was cornering me. My panic only seemed to rise when his eyes moved up and down my body as he took another step and licked his lips. “Maybe you could help me out instead?”

 

xoxo,

AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: September 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Caught in the Crossfire

Ugh! When will Bella learn to be cautious? After Edward gets her safely home he should put her over his knees and spank the crap out of her! Okay, maybe that's dramatic, but he should be really, really mad!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: July 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: One Thing at a Time Here

So, I'm disappointed that Bella would use other people's opinions as an excuse for not marrying him! If she wants to be his wife, she could have just said yes and dispensed with the ring and the plans until she was ready. Regardless of when they marry after they have a child together, people will always have an opinion of he finally did the right thing or something like that! Now, I know you were expecting to hear stuff like this, so I don't feel bad about saying it! It doesn't change how much I like the story, I just like to spout my opinion! Wouldn't be much fun if you were predictable! So, was it Alice who found the pregnancy test?

Author's Response:

LOL! Yes, I was expecting it. Some people accepted her reasoning and other's didn't. I knew writing it that that would happen.

Alice is the popular guess at this point, and the answer is coming up in the next chapter!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:

It didn’t take much longer to finish my packing, and Edward came to the bedroom to grab our bags so he could take them to the car.  After making sure the alarm was set, I locked the front door and turned to see Edward loading the bags into the trunk as Charlie approached from the barn with Bones by his side.

 

“You kids drive safe,” Dad said, stopping by the car as I stepped off the cement walk.

 

“We always do, Dad,” I assured him. “Thanks for watching Bones again.” Kneeling down, I pulled my dog into my arms and nuzzled him. “You be a good boy, and no barking in the middle of the night.”

 

As if on cue, Bones woofed and took off down the driveway. “It’s nice to see you listen,” I muttered after him sarcastically, at first mistaking his actions for enthusiasm. It wasn’t until after I heard a vicious snarl come from him, mirroring another from a dog—a pitbull—I’d never seen before, that I took off after him.

“Bella! Stop!” Edward called after me, and I could hear his heavy footfalls behind me as I reached Bones at the same moment that the bigger, slightly older dog lunged.

xoxo,

AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Lullaby & Goodnight

Aww! I love that Charlie came to the rescue! So sweet!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: This is Me

I'm thinking these two better get to know each other in a hurry before they end up getting it on in a frenzy of lust for all to plainly see! What's the worst that could happen?

Author's Response:

LOL! Yeah, they're pretty heated, huh?

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: September 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Rescue Mission

Well, that was very smart of Edward! And I think he was able to get his point across, with some backup from dad! And it did inspire some good makeup sex...

Author's Response:

LOL! Yeah, a lot of people harped on him for being too harsh, and maybe he was, in hindsight, but inthe moment? I think he was totally justified. And Bella knew she messed up, so she understood why they were losing it on her. Glad you got that ;)

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“How on Earth did I let you talk me into … holy shit! That’s cold!” Edward cried out as I trailed some frozen yogurt just above his belly button before promptly licking it off. The minute my tongue touched his skin, his complaints soon turned to erotic moans and I had to fight the urge to shake my head and roll my eyes at him.

Licking the remnants of my dessert from my lips, I looked up at his sex-face. “Oh, don’t be such a baby,” I teased, kissing my way down his abs until I had come face to face with his erection. Taking a moment, I pondered my next move. 

If cold showers helped to kill off arousal, then I can only assume putting a cold dessert on it will do the same thing… 

Though, I’m sure that if said dessert was promptly removed with, say, one’s tongue, it should cancel the cold out, right? Seems logical. I think even Spock would agree…

“Bella…” Edward warned, watching me with one arched eyebrow as I sat up and dipped the spoon into the carton, all-the-while eyeing his lower half’s best impression of the Washington Monument. “That would not be wise.”

“No?” I asked playfully, tilting my head to the right as I lifted the messy spoon from the tub of frozen yogurt and looked at him. “Have you tried it before?” Edward shook his head slowly, holding my gaze the entire time, and I smirked. “Then, how can you be so sure?” 

 

Before he could stop me, I tilted the spoon slightly...

 

xoxo,

AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Campfire Tales

Oh, I love the thought of them becoming a family! Though, I'm sensing that things aren't going to be so smooth! So, who's in the woods? Mike Newton?

Author's Response:

Your senses aren't exactly wrong ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser to this week's update!

I was barely through the door before Edward’s arms were around me in an almost bone-crushing hug, and my surprise for him forgotten.

“I’m so glad you’re back,” he breathed into my neck, kissing below my ear several times before lifting his head to look at me. “Why didn’t you call?”

“Uh... I forgot? Sorry...” What the hell was going on with him? Something definitely wasn’t right.

“I asked you to let me know when you were on your way home,” he stated firmly, his eyes flashing what looked like mild irritation, before turning from me and heading for the kitchen where he had started to prepare dinner.

Following him, I set the bag on the island and crossed my arms across my body defensively; my frustration had finally reaching its peak. “I said I was sorry. Had I known it was such a big deal, I’d have called.” Were we seriously fighting about me not calling when he knew I wasn’t going to be gone long? For crying out loud, he’d made the trip into town before, it’s not like he had no idea as to an approximate timeframe for when I’d return.

I was staring at his back as he placed his hands flat on the counter in front of him, slumping his head and shoulders almost like he had been defeated. “I was just ... worried,” he confessed, his voice soft and barely audible.

“About what? You knew where I was...” I was growing more and more confused as time went on.

He snapped his head around, his eyebrows knit together. “Did I?”

Whoa. What?

xoxo,
AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Upside Down

All I can say is that Charlie is THE BEST father! Can't wait to see how she reacts!

Author's Response:

HAHA! And some people questioned his sanity on WHY he'd shack someone he barely knows with his baby girl... THere is a reason, though. It's ok, if you're panicking now :P

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I hope to update in the next couple days!!

xoxo,
AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Grounded

Hmm, so what is it with Edward and his obsessive worry over her injury? Seems as if there is something he's not saying. And I can't wait for more of Bella on truth serum!

Author's Response:

Yes, there is a reason that Edward is a little more protective...we'll learn his reasoning soon enough.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! See you next week!

xoxo,

AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Going Back to Move Forward

I really enjoyed hearing Edward's view on things! I'm glad he's over Kate, and of course, Bella is right about the wedding photos! Can't wait for next chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed hearing from him! It was important he get a voice to show he was really over Kate and has been for some time.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:

With my fingers at home back in Edward's soft and unruly hair, I felt the zipper travel over the curve of my ass. I shuddered when Edward finally reached the end of the line, and the entire dress loosened around my body. Placing one last, lingering kiss on his lips, I dropped my hands from Edward's face to allow my dress to fall to the ground at my feet.

Silence shrouded us as he gazed upon my near-naked form. His hands found my thighs, resting them directly below the curve of my backside, and his fingers started curling and clawing into the muscular flesh there.


"You're so fucking beautiful," he told me, moving forward to pepper my naked upper body with dozens of feather-light kisses. His voice so low and gravelly I almost didn't recognize it.


A sharp gasp escaped me when they started moving inward where he proceeded to gently stroke and tease me over the lacy blue fabric of my panties. The pressure he used switched between tender and firm as he continued to run his fingers back and forth between my legs before slipping beneath the lace.


xoxo,

AG1981

 

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Does Love Really Conquer All?

Encore! Encore! Can you write them another? That was amazing! And the outing of Kate was both awkward and necessary! No one will say they can't remember that wedding!

Author's Response:

Oh, don't worry, I'll write them another!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

A familiar warmth bloomed within my body as his hands moved over my hips and slipped into the back of my shorts to grip my ass firmly as I rocked against him eagerly.

Needing to take a breath, I pulled my lips from his, smiling and meeting his burning stare as I reached for the hem of my tank top and lifted it over my head. It confused me when I lowered my face back to his and he pulled back slightly.

"What are you—?"

His head shifted to the right slightly and he smirked. "Just making sure there's no knocking at the door ... no phones ringing. It seems we're prone to being interrupted."

Shifting my hips softly, his eyes fluttered and his fingers dug into the flesh of my ass. "It's almost midnight," I said with a light laugh, leaning forward and pulling his earlobe between my teeth before whispering in his ear. "I assure you there will be no further interruptions. Make love to me, Edward. In our bed."

xoxo,

AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: The World Needs to Stop Running Interference

Poor Jess! Her hopes dashed after only seconds to start them! I hope Bella isn't going to torture Edward for the next few days, that would be mean!

Author's Response:

LOL! What do you think the chances of Bella NOT torturing Edward are going to be? Yeah... it'll happen :P

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:

When I stepped out of the barn, I was shocked at just how stifling it was. It could have been due to the fact that I had just moved several pieces of heavy equipment inside, but it still caught me off-guard. Using the back of my arm, I wiped the sheen of sweat from my brow, not relishing the long walk over to Charlie’s place.

The sight before me as I rounded the corner of the barn didn’t help my rising body temperature—at all. I stopped dead in my tracks, completely stunned into silence as I took in the sight before me.

There, on a patch of grass about mid-way down the outer wall of the building, was Bella and Hayley. Hayley was tethered to the old hitching post there and Bella’s back was to me as she held the hose over the large mare’s back. The sound of Bella’s laughter rang out whenever the spirited horse would throw her head up and splash her. Of course, because I was a man, I immediately noticed that the white tank top Bella was wearing was absolutely soaked through; it reminded me of our water fight in the wash stall a couple weeks ago and was just as physically stimulating as it was then.

Something primal stirred deep within me, and I found myself behind her in a matter of seconds.


xoxo,
AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Something to Celebrate

So, he never got to pop the question! Poor Edward, seems as if he just can't find the right time!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: And Baby Makes Three

Memories.... How I remember thinking that I wanted to go home and maybe just try again another day! Terrifying to hear those women screaming their heads off! So, finally! I hope they don't plan on a long engagement!

Author's Response:

Haha! I thought the same thing too :-P

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While it probably would have been easier to keep Carlie in her seat and just unsnapped it from the base before taking her inside, I had gone far too long without holding her in my arms. I knew I would love her, but I didn’t quite realize just how all consuming that love was. It was wonderful.

Edward carried our bag to the house while I carried Carlie, and he opened the door before deactivating the alarm and flipping on the light. 

“Okay, Carlie, welcome ho—” My words died the minute I stepped inside and saw all the balloons and flowers that were scattered throughout the front entry and kitchen, only getting thicker the further we went into the house. “Well,” I told Carlie in that same voice Ali used earlier, “this isn’t always how it looks. I think your grandparents, aunts and uncles may have gotten a little carried away. While we appreciate everything, sometimes they have a tendency to go a little over-board.”

 

xoxo,

AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: The Next Step

Well, I think that Edward is owed some world rocking! Let's see if they can manage it before the next omelet!

Author's Response:

Lol! Isn't he though? Poor bastard!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser for tomorrow's update:

The air was infused with the heavenly scent of my vegetarian dish by the time Edward re-emerged, wearing nothing more than his black flannels and a white t-shirt.

"Just in time," I told him happily, pulling dinner out of the oven. "The bread will take about ten minutes. Would you mind setting the table?"


"Not at all." I soon regretted asking for his assistance when I stood from putting the bread in and felt his body brush up against mine.


Everywhere his skin connected with mine was like a live wire, crackling and sparkling to life. My heart raced and I felt warmth spread all over my body as it flushed. Then, he was gone and putting the plates on the table. He was toying with me; testing my willpower. Well, two could play at that game.


"Is it me, or is it hot in here?" I asked, opening the freezer and grabbing an ice cube from the freezer. It wasn't a total lie; it was warm in here what with the unseasonal warmth outside and the rising temperature from the oven being on.


"Yeah, I guess a litt—"


By the time he turned around, I had started running the ice cube over my neck.


xoxo,

AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Mending a Bridge I Thought I'd Burned

So, he's breaking all the rules! Will he do what she's thinking, or will he have a different surprise for her? The whole family is there...

Author's Response:

Yeah, could go one of two ways at this point... The answer to his actions will be in today's update!!

"Stop. Please... Don't do this..." I pleaded softly, hoping that I wouldn't have to out-right tell him no. I loved him—I did—and I wanted nothing more than to spend the rest of my life with him; to marry him and give him his three (I'd even consider his original five!) kids. But not yet. Our foundation wasn't as strong as I knew it could be with a few more months (or years) under us.

Edward reached around into his pocket, his eyes still locked on mine and registering his confusion with my pleas. "Bella," he started, his hand reappearing from his pocket, closed around something.

"Don't," I whispered, tears stinging my eyes because I hated doing this in front of everyone. "Please."

"Bella..." he repeated, holding his hand out in front of him. Slowly, his hand began to open as my eyes locked on it, waiting to see some extravagant ring being presented to me.

Unable to tear my eyes off his extended hand, I dropped to my knees and awaited the inevitable. You know the saying 'a watched pot never boils'? Well, a watched hand never opens. Time seemed to slow even more as I came face-to-face with...

"What the hell?" I asked
.

xoxo,

AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Happy Birthday, Indeed

You definitely had me going! I'm glad there was no disaster in the making of this birthday party!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Riding Bareback is Always Risky

Well, let's hope that Bella can figure out his fears and put them to rest! Then they can worry together over the same thing!

Author's Response:

they'll talk it out! Don't worry!

Sorry for forgetting teasers before posting. My week has been insane!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Back in the Saddle

I get Bella's feelings, but I think they need to talk about things a little before their hidden anxiety ends up in hurt feelings! I'm glad they reconnected physically, no need to shut the barn door after the horses left, so to speak!

Author's Response:

They do need to talk about it... but that would take the morbid fun out of my little bit of drama I've decided to add to this story :-P

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

A slender hand wrapped around my wrist, pulling me roughly through the main door to the new barn. Before I could question what was happening, Bella had me pressed against the wall, her lips ravaging mine while her hands rapidly worked to undo my pants.

“Mmm,” I mumbled against her voracious mouth. “Bella, what are you doing?”

Bella pulled her face back and smiled up at me. “I’ve been watching you all damn morning, and I just can’t take it anymore,” she confessed, her voice soft and breathy as she yanked my pants open and slipped her hand inside.

My head fell back against the wall with a soft thud as her delicate fingers wrapped themselves around my cock and began to move up and down … up and motherfucking down. “Shit, baby,” I moaned, my hands reaching out and cradling her face to draw her mouth up to mine.

Our lips united passionately as my fingers worked their way into her loose hair, pulling her closer to me in an effort to deepen our already fevered kiss. As our lips assailed one another almost violently, she moaned and whimpered into my mouth, each one sounding even more glorious than the last … and I hadn’t even touched her yet.

That was when I realized: I hadn’t even fucking touched her yet! Without another thought, I pulled my hands from her hair, moved them down her body and cupped her ass to lift her off the ground and turn her around. Having no other choice when her feet left the floor, she withdrew her hand from my pants, leaving my dick shrouded behind my underwear as my jeans started to fall down my legs.

In order to ensure she didn’t slide right back to the ground, her legs wrapped around my waist as I pressed her against the wall and I pushed my hips forward against her. Panting breathlessly, she broke our kiss as she rocked her hips eagerly against my straining erection and pressed her face into my neck.

“Oooh,” she moaned, her hips moving persistently against my ever-hardening cock; the only thing keeping our bodies from joining being my boxers and her yoga pants—and I was hoping to rectify that right fucking quick.

“Oooooh… Shit…” As the sounds of her pleasure echoed in my ears, her long, precise movements against me changed slightly and her arms tightened around my neck. Her fingers began tugging at the short hairs at the base of my neck, and prickles of pleasure shot through my entire body until they settled in my groin. “Oh God!”

I couldn’t believe what was happening; save for my jeans now being around my ankles, we still had most of our clothes on and I was pretty sure Bella just fucking came. Her arms and legs began to tremble around me slightly, informing me that my assumption was likely correct, and I pulled my face back. “Did you just—?”

xoxo,
AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Unexpected Liaisons & Commitments

You, you...you know what you are! That's all you're gonna get now!

Author's Response:

*hangs head in shame* I know...

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When we were within hearing distance of the other four, we stopped talking about what was going on and I joined Alice and Rose on their cozy little blanket set-up while the guys started the fire. Within fifteen minutes, the fire was roaring and we were all holding hot dog sticks with our veggie dogs over the fire.

 

“I’ll prepare the buns,” Edward offered.

 

Before Emmett had a chance to say anything, Alice, Rosalie and I spoke together. “We know, we know; that’s what she said.”

 

Pushing his bottom lip out, Emmett pouted. “You girls just sucked the fun right out of it.”

 

I choked on the sip of water I had just taken, holding out the hand that held my bottle and pointed at him. “And that is what he said!” Everyone, including Emmett, roared with laughter.

xoxo,

AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: July 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Tripped Up by Deja Vu

Hmm, well things had to get out somehow! I'll bet the makeup will be epic! So, not Mike Newton...

Author's Response:

Yes, they had to come out somehow, that's for sure! don't discount him yet... Just because Bella sees sure, doens't mean she is ;)

 

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“Now that I understand your feelings, we’ll wait to tell everyone,” I told her, realizing that her reasoning was sound. “If it makes you more comfortable to wait, then we’ll wait. I’m sorry for thinking you had another reason behind the idea. I’ll give you the time you need if you can be patient with me as I try to overcome my own issues.”

“Only if you’re sure, Edward,” she said, her eyebrows raised and pulled together. “I don’t want this to be the source of anymore discord between us.”

“It won’t be,” I assured her. “Now that I understand why you wanted to wait, I can see your point.” Feeling the need to show her with more than words of how happy I was that we had been able to discuss our feelings with each other, I leaned in for a kiss.

Before my lips could make contact though, Bella turned her head away from me and pulled herself out of my arms. “I’m sorry. I know we talked about everything, but I’m still just kind of ... reeling, you know?” It physically pained me when she started for the door, and she must have sensed this because she turned to me. “I’m just going for a walk. I need some time to think about everything. I’ll stay on the grounds. I promise.”

Even though I didn’t want her to go anywhere, I nodded, hoping to show her a little of that trust that I seemed to have been lacking earlier. “Okay. I’ll be here.” Just as she moved for the hall again, I called out to her. “Bella?” She turned back, meeting my nervous-as-fuck stare. “Are we okay?”

The right side of her mouth turned up and she nodded. “We will be...”

xoxo,
AG1981

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: July 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Unable to Let Go

No! It's only their first fight out of a lifetime of them! If she leaves now, they will never learn to work things out together! She needs to stay with Edward and become a team!

Author's Response:

Exactly! Glad to see you're paying attention! :)

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“For how long?” Edward asked, bringing my attention back to him. I watched as he looked at me painfully.

 

“Oh... Um, I don’t know. I’m guessing a couple of days?” Edward’s eyes dropped from mine and he nodded solemnly. “I’m not though... Going anywhere, that is...” That got him to look back at me. “I can’t. Not after everythi—”

 

Before I got the chance to even finish, Edward interrupted, sounding unsure in his own conviction. “Maybe he’s right?”

 

I quickly shook my head. “No,” I told him adamantly. “He’s not. Edward, we just made a huge breakthrough in our relationship and I’m not going to risk taking four giant leaps back over something like running away.”

 

“Bella, I know I can trust you,” he whispered softly.

 

xoxo,

AG1981

 

 




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