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Penname: snowgood [ Contact]
Real name: Linda
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Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Summary: A tale about a hockey-playing boy who loves his girl. This is Edward's story from Major Misconduct.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 185715
[Report This] Published: January 25, 2011 Updated: July 05, 2011
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Delay Of Game
Well, at least some of it was pleasant. Though I imagine that the times that were good for him were the worst ones for those who love him!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Gong Show
A very cute glimpse into Edward's family life! And Bella hasn't gone running and screaming yet!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Wrap Around
Just as hot from his POV!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Breakaway
Finally! It's so amusing to see this from the other perspective! Can't wait to see how he develops his confidence in them!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Man Advantage
Well, at least he is being honest about he feels about her! Whether he means to or not!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 16, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Shutdown
That was so, so sweet! He's such a cross between a romantic and a typical, horny teenaged boy!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Face Wash
I think they both died little deaths there! Can't wait to see the save!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Sauce
I can't wait for school! Whoever would say that unless you got to see Edward! And kiss on him whenever you want!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Odd Man Rush
Boy, he is good at dragging his ass isn't he? Can't back out now, Alice will eat him for breakfast!
Author's Response: he is dragging, the poor guy is just not used to feeling insecure! He's moving in the right direction now, though.
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Changing On The Fly
Well, I think Bella is a little bit possessive! With a man like that, who wouldn't be!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Chippy
The bastard! I'm sure he has no idea how Bella will react!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Dangler
And all this time she thought he held all the power! He could have moved so much quicker had he known!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Apple
Baby steps! Good to see he's in his own torture chamber!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Flow
And I keep thinking that if we made a POV of my husband when we first started dating it would probably read, how fast can I get her pants off, rather than how much he wanted to be what I needed!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 29, 2011
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Ringing The Pipe
That was a lot of suckage right there! The pain was palpable and the confusion frustrating! Good job on emoting!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 19, 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Spin-O-Rama
I like that Bella's presence doesn't throw him off his game! Now, will he bring that first kiss to life?
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Filthy
Oh, I just love that he's got it all planned out!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Grinder
I'm with Edward here, I'd obsess over it all night too! It's going to be a long night!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Neutral Zone
Yay! I'm so excited to read this and see how Edward's brain works!
Author's Response: Thank you! He is so much fun to write!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Poke Check
I love Edward's reasoning here! She must not hate me because she accidentally touched my dick, and a girl who hates you wouldn't do that! Well, whatever it takes, right?
Author's Response: Haha - such a teenage boy, right? Thanks!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 16, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Icing
Aww, he really is sweet! If he only knew exactly what she was thinking!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Scramble
It's like he's being sucked into the Bella vortex! And he's aggravated when he keeps getting pulled back!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Light The Lamp
Oh remember what it was like to kiss! And to have to hide from the parents!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Undressing
Well, he did the responsible thing and laid everything out for her. It didn't seem to put a damper on things!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 07, 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Rocked
That was so cute! I imagine a lot of girls probably find out by text message these days!
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