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The Greatest Gift by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 213]
Summary:

Edward Cullen has the plane ride of his life when a mysterious flight companion changes his life in the blink of an eye. Edward will need the help of his wife, Isabella, to right the wrongs of his past before it's too late.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 248622
[Report This] Published: December 08, 2010 Updated: June 08, 2011


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Hmm, so Nonna seems to have an idea about something! Let's hope Edward listens, like he says, it could be crucial! And their chemistry, off the charts!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Edward is matching the class of his wife, and he was gracious towards Anna. I wouldn't have liked to see Bella and Anna have words, Anna is inconsequential to their lives. She can't hurt them now!

Author's Response:

Hi again!
 
Judging from the reviews I got for the last chapter, most of you were pleasantly surprised with the way everything played out. I can't tell you how happy I am that you all understood where I was coming from and why it was necessary to do things the way I did. As I said, Edward has had it pretty damn easy in terms of being forgiven and it was his turn to offer that same second chance to someone else. Anna will never be like Isabella, but she deserved a chance to change her life for the better just like Edward.
 
Next chapter...I have a feeling everyone will be VERY happy with the way things play out in regards to Vincent. I can't wait to hear what you all think about it! I have a few outtakes in mind that I'll be posting I hope soon. There have been a few comments on the discussion board asking for more of Alec and Marcus (and after Chp 19 I have a feeling there will be even more!) so I would like to do that as well as a few others. Let me know if you have any suggestions on things you'd like to see.
 
Check out the discussion board if you haven't already, please?! There have been some great questions that I've answered and you can leave me any, anytime, and I'll answer them. I'll be on there Monday night again, 8pm cst, so come find me and ask away!
 
www(.)les16(.)proboards(.)com

In case you haven't heard, I've submitted an outtake to the Fandoms4Floods fundraiser. Donations began being accepted yesterday. My outtake is from the honeymoon and if you look on the TGG blog under banners, you will see the absolutely beautiful banner lizzylilyrose made for it. I love it so much so I hope you'll take a look at it. The list of authors contributing to this very worthy cause is huge and the minimum donation is only $5. The link to donate and for more information is on the blog. Please consider donating!!
 
Don't forget about the outtake I've posted that went between Chapters 17 and 18. I hope you all enjoyed the extended POV's from some of the other people in the story and the brief glimpse into a young Emmett and Edward. The link is on my profile and the title the outtakes are posted under is: The Greatest Gift: Outtakes and Deleted Scenes. As I've said, I already have a long list I'm planning on doing, but if you have things you'd like to see, let me know.

Thanks to all of you who voted on Teh Lemonadestand Blog (Gah, I always want to correct that spelling!) TGG is one of the featured stories for the week and I appreciate the support so much!

Thank you, from the bottom of my heart, and like always, for the incredible support and encouragement you give me week in and week out. Your reviews, PM's, emails and messages on Twitter mean more than you can know. I read them over and over again and I smile each and every time. I've gotten to know so many of you and it's been an incredible experience meeting you all and hearing from you week after week. This story is a leap of faith, I know that, and I can't tell you what it means to me that you've trusted me enough to take this journey with me. It will be worth it in the end, promise!

 

Look for me on Twitter, I am finding myself spending more and more time on there! @les_sh_16


If you're not on Twitter but are on gtalk, hell, find me there, too! Me and my girls are always on there...erinsharpe.16(@)gmail(.)com. Friend me and I'll accept!

 

Remember to email me if you're missing a bonus scene, from yours, and I'll send it to you.

 

Okay, here is Isabella. I'd love to hear what you think of it.

 

See you Sunday. I'm nervous and excited about Chp 19, EEEK!!!

 

Hugs and Much Love,

Erin~

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TGG Bonus Scene #12~ Chapter 18

 

Isabella exited the bathroom and immediately looked for Edward. Not finding him where she thought he'd be, she made her way to their group of friends and family figuring he'd be there. As she approached, she could hear a few murmurs and noticed Alice and Alec looking off to the right and exchange a worried glance.

 

When she looked in that direction and found Edward and Anna sitting together and facing one another for what looked like a very private conversation, she turned back toward her friends and smiled...after rolling her eyes.

 

"Your eyes are going to stay that way, Alice, if you don't stop staring...not to mention you look like a fish with your mouth hanging open," she said as she stepped into the circle where everyone was standing.

 

"Ali, sugar, I told you that." Jasper laughed at his wife and reached up and pressed on her chin to close her mouth. "You're way too beautiful to stand around looking like a fish," he teased and kissed her on her now closed mouth.

 

"But...Bella...didn't you?" she started to question then snapped her mouth shut.

 

It really wasn't any of her business but she was shocked at how calm...and confident her friend appeared. She knew if she saw Jasper sitting and having what appeared to be a very intimate conversation with an ex...and an ex he'd lived with for two years no less, there was no way in hell she'd behave the same as her friend.

 

"Yes, I see them. What do you want me to do, march over there with my hands on my hips and demand to know what's going on? I don't think so, Alice. I trust Edward, completely, and if he has something he needs to talk with Anna about, then I'm sure he'll tell me what it is...later," Isabella answered her friend.

 

Alice spluttered in response to her and everyone in the group laughed at her. "Sugar, let's go get another drink," Jasper said sweetly and gave Bella a wink before turning his overly excitable wife toward the bar.

 

Rose shook her head at her friend. She adored Alice, but sometimes she was like an annoying puppy, always into everything. Once it seemed like there would be no major drama, not that she expected any from Bella anyway, the guys all picked their conversation back up again. She noticed Bella smile at Edward...and Anna and sighed. The world would be a much better place if more people acted like her sister-in-law, no question about it.

 

"So, you really don't mind Edward and Miss Skankalicious having a conversation without you?" Rose asked her.

 

Isabella chuckled and rolled her eyes at her blunt as ever sister-in-law. "No, Rose, I don't. Like I said, I trust Edward, so there isn't anything for me to worry about. I mean he's sitting less than a hundred feet from me in a roomful of people so I highly doubt it's anything more than healing some old wounds."

 

In fact, she was positive she was right, especially when she glanced back at Edward and Anna and noticed both of them looked infinitely more relieved than they had at the beginning of the night.

 

"I take it, judging from the fact you haven't scratched her eyes out, Edward told you about her?" Rose questioned a bit hesitantly.

 

Isabella nodded her head and said, "Yes, thankfully for my husband, we talked about her last night."

 

"You didn't know about her before?" Rose immediately asked and couldn't help the snarl that accompanied her question.

 

Edward really could be such a fool sometimes.

 

Isabella sighed and shook her head. "No, I didn't. In all defense of Edward, I've never pushed for many answers either about his past or what happened before me. That's as much my fault as it is his," she admitted.

 

Rose gasped and then quickly tried to cover it up hoping Isabella didn't hear, but it didn't work.

 

"I know, Rose. I have no doubt that knowing what she did to him and how their...relationship for lack of a better word...ended would certainly have helped me understand him better," she said quietly.

 

"He's always been so different with you, Bella, than he has with anyone else. I don't just mean other women either, though there haven't ever been many of those. Since I've known him, besides Anna and Sophie, there wasn't anyone but you," Rose told her. "You have to know, and judging from your reaction to seeing the two of them together, I'm sure you do, how badly he was hurt after he found Anna and Vincent together. I know that they were together only to keep William off his back and it doesn't take a genius to figure out what Anna was after, but even someone like Edward, or like he used to be, has to be hurt and angry at being treated the way he was."

 

Rose sighed again. There were times she felt incredibly guilty because she was extremely grateful that William had set his sights on Edward as the chosen one to run Cullen Publishing. She would have detested it if Emmett had been put under the same pressure and scrutiny as Edward had been.

 

"I'm sorry, Bella," Rose said quietly.

 

"Whatever for, Rose? It's not your fault he didn't tell me and I never asked any of you about his past, not that I ever would anyway. Whatever he wants me to know, he'll tell me. He's sharing more all the time and it's only a matter of time before he tells me everything," Isabella answered and laid her hand on Rose's arm.

 

"That's really great to hear, but that's not really what I'm sorry about. I just realized how grateful I am that William chose Edward over Emmett and that makes me sound like a selfish bitch...though we both know that's not that big of a stretch," she said with a grin. "Seriously though, William did a real number on Edward, everyone could see that. As much as I hate to admit this, we all just sort of sat back and let it happen. Carlisle, Esme, Emmett, me, Jasper...each of us just let William do his thing. Me because I didn't want it to be Emmett; Emmett for the same reason, and Carlisle and Esme...who the hell knows. Poor Jasper was the only one that even tried to do anything about all the pressure William was putting on Edward, but even he could only do so much."

 

Isabella closed her eyes to try to keep the thoughts of her poor broken husband at bay. She knew she and Edward were closer than ever and she knew it was only a matter of time before he shared everything with her...or at least it better be. The time was quickly approaching, she realized, that it would become necessary to press him for answers. He owed it to her...and to the rest of the family as well. As disappointed and yes, even angry, as she was at all of them for not doing more to help Edward, it was way past time to lay the past to rest.

 

"So much unnecessary hurt and anger," Isabella said with a sad shake of her head.

 

She felt her skin tingle and knew Edward was near and sighed when she felt his lips on her neck. When she turned around and looked at him and could see no trace of anger or pain, she smiled at him. As long as he was okay, nothing else mattered.

 

Rose watched the two of them and felt Emmett wrap his arm around her shoulders. "We're so lucky to have her, you know? She's going to put this family back together."

 

"I sure hope so, babe," Emmett answered quietly.

 

Rose smiled knowingly at him and said, "I have no doubt; it's about damn time, too."

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Well, I'm starting to think Vincent is going to be a reason that Edward's life is in danger, and that either his newly found forgiving attitude will save him, or Isabella will. At least I hope someone will!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wow! Edward is getting so deep and thinking about how to set him and Bella up for a happy ever after, no matter what! Let's hope Gideon has things up his sleeve!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

That was a very touching chapter and makes me long for the chaos and bliss of having a lot of loved ones at the house! Nicely done!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

What a great story, I love how you rounded it out by showing how everyone is still connected! Can't wait to start the next one!

 
Summary:

What if Esme Cullen sent out an annual holiday card?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 588
[Report This] Published: December 10, 2010 Updated: December 15, 2010


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hahaha! That would be a keeper! Love the parts about Carlisle and Bree, as well as the boyfriend!

 
Summary:

Winner "Judges' Choice" in The Scene Stealers Contest-2010.

Edward didn't believe Bella's reasons for going through with their wedding plans so easily. Can Bella convince him that waiting to do things properly is what she really wants?  BPOV; AU Eclipse-Chapter 27.

Judges Choice

Sydney Alice


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8211
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2010 Updated: December 19, 2010


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: "I Don't Believe You"

That wa wonderful! There were so many sigh moments in there! And you really kept to canon for both of their personalities. Edward remained committed to showing her that he desired her because he loved everything about her, and Bella was able to convey that was the same for her. Very nice!

 
Summary:

In a make-shift chapel, in a city registry office, Bella Swan is about to make a promise.  Or is she?

 


Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3120
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2010 Updated: December 16, 2010


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really did love that! I always wondered why Edward didn't recite the vows to Bella privately, between them and God with no fanfare or audience. It would have bound them in a way acceptable to them both! So, fantasy come true!

Author's Response:

Thank you somuch - glad you enjoyed.

 
Colliding With Fate by Pbroken Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 215]
Summary:

Shy Isabella and dirty, playboy Edward find themselves fighting against fate when they become neighbors after a one night stand. Edward's got problems, and Isabella can't stop thinking about him. How long can they deny what is surely meant to be? AU/AH

A big thank you to Lonely-Soldier from fanfiction.net for the amazing banner.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 60461
[Report This] Published: December 16, 2010 Updated: December 17, 2012


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: August 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Fear Woman When She Loves

I hope they get there in time for him to have an epiphany!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Dirty to Survive

So, Edward is a highly functioning PTSD with sex as his coping mechanism. I can't wait to see how this goes. Does he pursue her, or stay away? Will she figure out somethings wrong, or will she just see the surface Edward?

Author's Response:

You are an observant one, young grasshopper. =D I'm excited to see what you'll have to say about future chapters. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!- ♥Pbroken

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Tempting Fate

So...wow. ! Mile a minute thoughts here! So, what's wrong with Edward? No smirking and eyebrow raising? He's taken off guard, did he think he could just get her out of his system and now he's going to be reminded daily of their steamy night? And what about Bella, is she going to feel like Alice and Rose's charity case or pawn? Can't wait to see what happens! Bring it!

Author's Response:

Aw! I can already tell that I'm going to love reading your reviews. =D I love it when someone has a lot of questions. What's wrong with Edward? Well, that's a secret that you'll find out later. As for Bella, she's actually pretty taken with Alice and Rose, even if she is still shy as hell around them, so she doesn't really view their support as charity. That and I'm sure, she's a little too busy thinking about Edward to consider anything else at the moment. Lol Can't say I blame her. =D

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!- ♥Pbroken

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Solving You, Piece by Piece

Oh, and for a moment there I thought, could she really not remember that!!! She should have filmed it!

Author's Response:

LOL No, she didn't forget. She was just really drunk, but it came back to her eventually. That would be terribly evil of me to make her forget. And hell yeah, she should have filmed it. If only there was a way that she could have filmed it and we magically all got copies...I'd probably have a heart attack and die. At least I'd die happy. Lol

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!- ♥Pbroken

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: July 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Hell and Something Better

Well, it's kinda good.  He wants to face his demons, right?

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: When You Wish Upon a Star

It really is the most magical place on earth. At any age!

Author's Response:

"It really is the most magical place on earth. At any age!"-- I could not agree more. Even my husband enjoyed our honeymoon in Disney World. Although, he did not like Animal Kingdom, which is why we got in our first married argument as we waited for the shuttle back to our hotel. Then again, most people don't like Animal Kingdom all that much, which is why we did that park our first day. Anyway, he loved the rest of the parks and whenever he talks about our honeymoon the smile on his face is almost as big as the smile on mine. Disney is amazing! =D

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!- ♥Pbroken

P.S. Sorry for the delay on replying. RL has been kicking my ass.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Making Sour Lemonade

I definitely feel the need for a shower, that was dirty!

Author's Response:

Great! That's exactly what I was going for. =D Now imagine how I must feel with Dirty Edward running through my head all the time, a shower doesn't do it for me, I need to be hosed down. Lol

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!- ♥Pbroken

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Like An Animal

I don't know if it's implied, but did he forget to use a condom in his animal lust frenzy? And will he treat her like dirt in the morning, or regret his roughness the night before?

Author's Response:

"I don't know if it's implied, but did he forget to use a condom in his animal lust frenzy?"-- No, he didn't use a condom, but he's mentioned before that Bella is the only one he's ever been with without a condom and she said in chapter one that she's on birth control.

"And will he treat her like dirt in the morning, or regret his roughness the night before?"-- He actually doesn't really do either of those things. Oh, and Bella won't be covered in bruises or bite marks, at least not any that Bella mentions or Edward sees so regretting the roughness won't be an issue.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!- ♥Pbroken

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Nobody's Perfect

Love this story too!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: The First Step to a New Ending

LOL!  Was sitting at the breakfast table with the kids while reading that! Awkward!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Capable of Change

I totally get the chalk! Ugh! So, with Bella avoiding Edward, she thinks she's dousing her longing for him. I think it's doing the opposite, and I think that's ditto for him too!

Author's Response:

Glad I'm not the only one bothered by weird things. The chalk was sucky because whenever I was called on in elementary school to do a problem I would have to grab a tissue in order to hold the chalk and of course the kids would always look at me funny for it.

As for Bella and Edward, yeah, they're both kind of playing the denial game. This story's just one long denial with some really tough obstacles thrown in the mix. Lol

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!- ♥Pbroken

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Speak to Me

Aw, what is Edward going to say when he finds out how much Bella wants to be with him? Will he sing RP's Never Think?

Author's Response:

"Aw, what is Edward going to say when he finds out how much Bella wants to be with him?"-- You'll have to wait and see how that goes. I can tell you that things start to go really crazy as the story works its way forward.

"Will he sing RP's Never Think?"-- Nope, so far RP's songs haven't found their way into my fanfiction's yet. Maybe someday.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!- ♥Pbroken

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Stupid Is As Stupid Does

Maybe Bella ought to fight fire with fire! Tell him she wants to *uck him back a few times. You know, just so he knows what it feels like to have it done to him! Okay, so maybe that won't work...

Author's Response:

"Maybe Bella ought to fight fire with fire! Tell him she wants to *uck him back a few times. You know, just so he knows what it feels like to have it done to him! Okay, so maybe that won't work..."-- Lol I like how your mind works. If it was me in Bella's place, I'd do it! =D Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!- ♥Pbroken

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Conducting the Train to Disaster

Ah, but it looks as though Edward is starting to melt around the edges! So, can't wait to see how he reacts to this!

Author's Response:

"Ah, but it looks as though Edward is starting to melt around the edges! So, can't wait to see how he reacts to this!"-- Well, right after I'm doing replying to reviews, I'm going to start editing the new chapter so you shouldn't have to wait too long to found out how he reacts. I'd say he's more starting to crumble than melt though. Things are going to get intense next chapter.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!- ♥Pbroken

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: The Untold Story

Well, I almost thought that Bella was going to make some type of breakthrough with him when she stopped him from leaving the first time, but she let him go after he pulled his heart out. Maybe she should follow up with him sooner rather than later? I'd be worried that he'd harm himself! Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Looking for Answers

Oh boy! That's f'd up! I'm curious to see what is going to change for Edward to finally want to get better?

 




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