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Penname: snowgood [ Contact]
Real name: Linda
Status: Member
Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Summary: 
The first few months after the change were always the most difficult. Instincts rule over rationality. Since raging thirst is never far from a newborn’s mind, it often makes for careless choices.
The girl would need supervision. A patient teacher to guide her and keep her out of trouble. I didn’t just feel obligated to fill this role, I yearned to fill it.
*Nominated for a Vampies Award, in the category: Bloody Newborn - best characterization of a newborn vampire. (It didn't win, but it was an honor being nominated. Thank you.)
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 79936
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2010 Updated: October 14, 2011
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Oh, please continue! I haven't read everything out there, but I have read a lot and this storyline sounds very promising, exciting, and fresh! Keep going! I love that there is already a dialogue between the Cullens and the wolves, and that Bella is already cared for!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
It's very hard to know something and want to share something with someone who isn't ready. Not to mention not rational at times! So, maybe Edward is taking risks because he knows instinctually what will help?
Author's Response: :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
I hope he tells her he was jealous! She may not need to know that he is in everlasting, undying, all-consuming love with her, but jealous would be a good stroke of her ego!
Author's Response: :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
I really thought this chapter flowed well. I loved Emmett's assessment of Edward being the triple threat since he can access everyone's abilities! If only he had a better read on Bella! He seems to be doing alright with her, especially when he gives in to his own instincts!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you think so. :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
Oh please don't flounce! This story is really good, and I love that Edward is just getting an idea of what would have happened if he met human Bella! Keep going! Please?
Author's Response: I won't be flouncing, don't worry.
Thank you for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
Oh, I bet Emmett is never going to live this down! It should be plain to Edward by now just how much he means to Bella, even if she doesn't know it. Jacob is clearly not a threat! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: :D
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
Oh Jana, you have us completely enthralled! I especially like how Edward is trying to explain to Bella how much he feels for her, without telling her anything! I think she's starting to figure things out already! As for twitter, I'm embarrassed to say I don't know anything about how to do it! You are way more current with the tech stuff than me, even if you are mostly talking to yourself! Though I'm sure that's not true...
Author's Response: Oh yay! I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story!
Trust me, I sound more 'current' than I am. You should have seen me trying to figure out FaceBook! I started crying, and then I had to give my sister my password so that she could get in and fix stuff for me! :D
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 24, 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
That was really an awesome chapter! You have pegged the emotions exquisitely! And I'm glad that things are better for you!
Author's Response: Glad that you liked it!
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22
Bella is quite headstrong! She was going to get her way, using any kind of logic she could! So glad they finally mated!
Author's Response: LOL, yeah. :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: September 10, 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
I'm glad things are getting better for you, it was great to be able to read a new chapter! Poor Bella and Edward! Always getting those good moments interrupted!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Summary:
Bella has just moved to Seattle looking for a new start. She starts working two jobs, making friends and flirting with guys. Too bad the one she’s really interested seems out of her reach.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 10074
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2010 Updated: January 20, 2011
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Wide Open Spaces
Oh, I have a new love! This story. Bring it on, I'm all for the light!
Author's Response: Thank you! You totally rock.
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Eight Days a Week
Well so far this story is so much fun I think I might move to Forks myself! I love how Bella is meeting really nice people. And even one that is grouchy! I'm glad to see that she hasn't done the awkward and dumped a pitcher on him yet!
Author's Response: LoL - thanks. But she moved to Seattle, though.
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Eight Days a Week
Seattle! Right, I meant that! I mean Forks probably doesn't even have a bar AND a coffee shop!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Hello
So Mr. Grumpy has another, softer side to him! Okay, it kind of comes with his violating her privacy but still! Is he confident enough to talk to her? Or will his past behavior chase her away before he can say hello?
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 20, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Everything You Want
Hot old guys aren't so bad! I'm glad Esme gave her the 411. Too bad she missed out on a real date with a different sort of perv!
Summary: 
Every one else sees a washed up never-was who peaked in high school. Edward sees his life as over before it began. When she comes home, how far will Bella have to go to reach him? Will she be strong enough to face rock-bottom with him, or decide that love is not enough for two, when only one is willing to try.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 19824
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2010 Updated: June 22, 2012
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 26, 2012
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Well, I think he now definitely has his motivation for life again! Can't wait to see how much these two will inspire each other! Author's Response: Love and friendship are great motivators. In the long-run, though, he's going to need to do it for himself.
Thanks for sticking around!
~A
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Two things: I love the concept of the story, and I'm really excited to see it progress!
I didn't see any mistakes in your writing, though I'm not a perfect grammarian!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am so pleased that you like the concept. I was worried that I'd be stoned to death for making Edward less than perfection.
I'll have to add thanks to Casket4MyTears for being kind enough to clean up my mistakes. If you didn't see any, it's because she caught them.
I am excited to hear what you think as the story continues.
~A
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 14, 2012
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Now, he's going to send it, right? Author's Response: He'll send it and we'll get to see more in Chapter 10.
Thank you!
~A
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
So, they have a past. And it seems as if it meant a lot to both of them, but maybe neither would or could admit how much at the time? Good for Bella for realizing that Edward is hiding behind false bravado and insecurity!
Author's Response: Bella's going to have a lot of work to do. Stay tuned. The next chapter is coming soon.
Annie
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 24, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Oh good! I was really hoping you weren't going to give this up! I loved the story of old Edward! Let's see if they can find a little of him still!
Author's Response: Promise, cross my heart, and all that stuff - I will NOT give this up. SqueakyZorro really helped take this from a haphazard idea and line it into an outline. Updates will go back to a weekly schedule. So, thank you for sticking with the story!
Old Edward is in there and I have two chapters to post to get everyone caught up. A few answers are coming!
~Annie
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
He is so afraid of letting anyone in! Tanya must have done a number on him! He has fond memories of Bella, he doesn't trust that she could see him differently then when they were in high school. I can't wait for their walk!
Author's Response: Edward has hit bottom and can't see any perspective other than his own. A true pitfall of having depression and being isolated. Bella has her work cut out for her!
Thanks for reading!
~A
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
So, I'm guessing Bella doesn't know about all of this. What will he tell her? Will he tell her about Tanya? He was pretty scared to hear about her dating history, will he be kind to her as he relays his?
Author's Response: Bella doesn't know what happened with Edward aside from him bringing home a girl once.
Thanks for reading!
~Annie
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 18, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
He is very thinned skinned against insults, and very thick skinned against hope and help. Bella is going to need to get past that somehow, while keeping herself intact!
Author's Response: Maybe Bella will skin his ass for being down on himself and it'll grow back the right way... maybe not. There is a lot they have to work on both on their own and together.
As always, thank you for reading.. Snow? Good? Ms. Good?
~Annie
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 23, 2012
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
As always, I enjoyed this chapter, story- keep going! The parental thing is going to be awesome! So, Bella and Edward need to start a successful business venture together. Show the world how smart they are, and of course, because they trust each other implicitly! Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I seem to be having difficulty with getting the chapters posted - I submitted this one four weeks ago. Stick with me, and we'll get through it!
Thanks for reading and for reviewing!
~Annie
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 29, 2012
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Glad to see this story back! Can't wait for another update! Smart Charlie! Author's Response: I just love Charlie and think a man who made it to Cheif of Police probably has more on that ball than being a goofy, awkward guy.
Thanks for sticking with the story,
~A
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