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Pen Pals by wmr1601 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 767]
Summary: Feature

 

Bella and Edward have been pen pals (the traditional kind, pen and paper stuff) for over a decade, but they never met for reasons even they didn’t know. After fourteen years of “courting through the postal service” and not realizing it, Bella gets engaged to Emmett, a fellow lawyer at the prestigious firm of Ateara, Call, and Uley. They move fast, and a wedding is set for a mere four months after they get engaged. Bella invites Edward to the wedding, wanting to finally meet her longtime friend, and when things go sour the night of the rehearsal dinner, Bella, in her shock, ends up in Edward’s arms. And this is all just the tip of the iceberg for these two…

Rated NC-17 for mature sexual content. Little to no bad language.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 239223
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2010 Updated: August 27, 2011


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Still Writing After All These Years

So, mama Esme put the little seed into his head about Bella. Too bad it might've been too late!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Beginning of the End

So, now I'm wondering if Emmett's over reaction had something to do with a past love? Namely Rose? Hmmm, at least Bella's subconscious is working. Now will Edward be brave enough to stick up for what he wrote? Or will he backtrack?

Author's Response:

Only time will tell... Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: More than Friends

So, Edward's friends and family officially feel sorry for him and syne even think he's a little crazy for feeling that way about someone he never met! I wonder what Jasper's position will be now that he's met her? And what about Bella? Is she having second thoughts? Cold feet?

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Catalyst

I'm really conflicted about Emmett. On the one hand, what a jerk for waiting until the very last second, family and friends have flown in and even rehearsal has gone through! And Cheating on her with her best friend is reprehensible! Then I think, thank God he didn't go through with it and ruin and complicate her life even more! As for Rose, there are no words. I could never be friends with her again. She could have at least tried to talk to Bella when Emmett first approached her instead of going behind her back! Something like, "hey, I don't think Emmett's the man for you, he's been sending me some signals that he's interested in me. Not like the kind of guy who's off the market!". At least that would've started a conversation!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Definitions

I guess Bella is definitely going to be dealing with a lot of awkwardness and Edward is bound to get defensive. But if they both are sure and ready to be with one another, then it's no ones business but their own!

Author's Response:

I completely agree with you! They are grown-ups and able to make their own decisions. Thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Forgotten Spaghetti

Oh, she is the luckiest girl! At least she realizes it! I don't know if withholding physical love will be the catalyst for gaining real love, but they do need to spend time learning each other!

Author's Response:

It really was an important step in their relationship, I agree. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The First Time

Well, stranger things have happened! Maybe it's just another sign that they should be together!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Changes

That was so sweet of Edward! And now Bella definitely has more than one reason to move on from Emmett. I'd be surprised if it affects her at all now!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Going Home

So, given the due date, no backward counting?

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Charlie and Renee

That definitely went better than expected! I can understand Charlie's trepidation, you always feel that need to shelter your children, even when they have the right to make their own decisions and mistakes. But now he has to trust in Edward to take up the role of protector and provider as well as partner.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Together Again

I'm glad Edward is finally getting some! He truly deserves it!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Forgiveness

Well, I think she had to forgive Alice. It wasn't done maliciously and even though she was angry, it's not something that she wouldn't have told everyone eventually anyway! Can't wait to see how the move goes!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: An Unhappy Halloween

What an annoying evening! Let's hope Edward can make the end of the evening memorable! Those girls need lessons in tact and conceding!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Piano Concerto Number 23

So, who is Edward worried about? This baby should be fine, this he knows. Though it is sudden, these things are usually delayed ad nauseum and you would think they would need time to prepare their position... Hmmm

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Unnecessary Guilt

Huh! I honestly thought that Emmett would be relieved that he wasn't and it would be a win-win for everyone! Just goes to show, you never know! I think that Edward should make his move soon on making the family official. It seems to be getting to where more and more situations are just hilighting that fact!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Letting Go

Well, rosealie certainly owes Bella an apology and then some! Glad that they are finally together again!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Thanksgiving in Forks

Uh oh! What is going on with Bella! It's not labor related yet, because that doesn't make you pass out! So, high blood pressure?

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Not Quite Family

That would have been scarier if it happened somewhere without her parents! Glad that there is a fire in him now, though he could have just lied!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Nesting

Finally! Well, I'm glad he did it first, now she'll know that he's wanted her all along!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Surprise!

Aww, she's going to love it! She will know how much he wants it to then!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: July 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Today Was a Fairytale

That was like a fairy tale! Let's hope the honeymoon is magical!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: July 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: The Fairytale Continues

Kind of makes me want to smack my hubby on the back of the head when I read things like this!

Author's Response:

LOL!! Thanks for reading :).

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: July 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: Just the Two of Us

I know that they feel that private time is over, but they have lots of willing baby sitters! They can sneak away here and there!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: August 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: Amends

Aww! So it's nice to see how things work out for them! I love that they are so solid with each other and that they started as friends first!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: August 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Outtake: Blast from the Past

That was cute! I love that idea!

 




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