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Real name: Linda
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Summary:  Vampire Edward meets human Bella when she is being attacked in a dark alley. Things get ugly and Edward is forced to take her to his house to save her.Not all great love stories start once upon a time and far far away; some begin down dark alleys.
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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Word count: 45321
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2010 Updated: February 21, 2011
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 21: The past and other things we can't escape
Oh, how could you leave us like that! First you cock blocked, then you saddened, and now you terrify! And Edward was being so sexy with the other things he was thinking about...
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Tempers and other things you can't control
Oh a big Happy Birthday! So, the big bad vampire is feeling a little off base! He tried to right his world by alienating Bella so that she would keep away from him. Looks like it didn't work!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Vampires and other things that suck
That was very entertaining, I grinned pretty much throughout! And I get Bella's que sera attitude, she has had too many things taken out of her control, why not just go with it!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 14, 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Fairytales and other wake up calls
And the new Bella just sent a scary bitch vampire running for the hills! She may be ready to take on the Volturi soon!
Author's Response: Hehe. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Sandwiches and other things to make
Hmm, seems to me that no one ever turned Edward's happy button on. No wonder he's confused about what he's feeling!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 22: Ever after and other things at stake
Oh no! I'm looking forward to the epilogue, but I'm really hoping for a sequel! These two didn't even get to have a romance yet! And of course, James can't get away! Let's hope our reviews are addicting enough to keep you writing!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Zombies and Other Attractive Strangers
Well, you know she's okay if she's able to joke! I'll bet Edward is getting quite the kick out of her!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Friends and other enimies
That was, bar none, the BEST dialogue between Rose and Edward ever written! I can now see why Emmett puts up with her!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: September 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Dark Alleys and Other Love Stories
I guess one moment can make confetti of your book of plans! I like the edge to this, can't wait to see what he thinks of his predicament!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: White Knights and Other Dragons
Selfish bastard. It's all about what he wants/needs, isn't it?
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Hunger and other things we have in common
Good, I don't want spoilers! What I want is for Bella to completely wrap that badass vampire around her pinky finger! I think she on her way!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Dead people and other uninvited guests
Oh Bella! Maybe she can tell Edward that James told her that they had to kiss! Well, it could be worth a shot! She cracks me up, and I would have hugged him too!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Birthday gifts and other painful reminders
Hey, just keep on, keeping on! I totally got what was going on from the get go! Why wouldn't he be confused! As far as he's concerned he hasn't got a redeemable quality attached to him. So, a) why the he'll hasn't Bella not only been cowering in the corner when he enters the room, but she actually talks and touches him! And B) why does he sort of like it and or care? Can't wait for him to sort it all out!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Rules and other things that can be broken
I would have to say that Edward's comment to Bella about her being irreplaceable was very telling and very sweet. Had she thought more of it than a platitude. Edward, on the other hand, is reminded how unfulfilled his life is with the lamp comment. He thinks too much. These people need to meld and become the perfect couple!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Men with resources and other ways to die
Well now, if she was just made to disappear, maybe she's made to be changed for Edward! There's a song by Reliant K called I Don't Need A Soul, self explanatory!
Author's Response: Good call!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Lucky Charms and other unfortunate talks
The problem with these two is communication. See, Edward admits he's socially inept and tries for honesty, then Bella doesn't tell him how he makes her feel. They both KNOW that they are leaving things unsaid, but would rather keep walking around the elephant in the room. Damn elephant!
Author's Response: I know! Damn elephant!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Falling and other things to fear
About the iPhone, I'm not sure if it's the same, but I had problems reviewing with my iPad and some kind soul at the site told me to go into safari settings and turn off java script. That worked, but to get to new chapters you have to use the table of contents. Hope that helps! As for the chapter, I just love playful Edward and I'm guessing Bella does too! She hasn't freaked out on him yet, so he just offer her a morning kiss, in bed!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Why We're Here and Other Tragedies
So, did Edward listen in on Rose's interrogation? Will he admit to wanting to eat her, or even worse...wanting to hold her hand for comfort? Will he be able to control his manly urges while she is in that dress? !!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Revelations and other things to run from
Well, that sucks! Or is it opportunity? Maybe Edward can rid himself of James? Or will Edward save James and have him in his debt? Or maybe he should just blend into the wallpaper?
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Life or death and other decisions
Oh boy! On the one hand, James owes him big. On the other, if he finds that Bella is still alive he can trade some info to save his butt again. Edward is probably pulling out his unruly locks and Rose is wondering if Bella hit her head when they dragged her out of the building. Can't wait to see the reactions!
Author's Response: Guessing James won't care much about owing Edward. He's pretty much in it for himself.
Thanks! :)
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Together and other things we should be
Poor Edward! First he has to distract himself from creeping in Bella's room and then he has to go on his knees to ask for an evening with her! I'll bet she was secretly wishing for him to go up to her room, and totally psyched about the date! Now, I do hope he takes her dancing, and steals a kiss on the dip!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 31, 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Confess and other things you should do
Aww, in the end he threw all the witty banter out the window! I'm glad, because while I was reading this chapter, I was thinking the same thing. How could they be seen in public in so many places if she's supposed to be dead? Not many people around to care. So I'm glad that he told her!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue: The end and other beginnings
Well, James got what he deserved! Great story, too bad Edward and Bella never had that second date!
Summary:
All Human.
Wyoming Territory, 1868
The roving bandit Cullen has many secrets about his past life and a dangerous career of choice, yet Isabella feels like she knows him. Behind his dark eyes lies a secret that Isabella fears changed the man forever. In the rough American West jealousy, betrayal, deceit and death prospers along with the settlers…
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 23346
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2010 Updated: May 09, 2011
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Life changes in an instant! How will he handle his new reality?
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Man-a-hanging
I think maybe he will be struggling a bit more with his conscience now! And will he find out what Bella meant about her not having an easy life?
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