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Penname: snowgood [Contact]
Real name: Linda
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Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Reviews by snowgood
 
Summary:

There's a dusty old bookstore in Seattle where the proprietor keeps odd hours and knows the location of every book in his stock.  What surprises hide in its stacks?

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: Yes Word count: 122523
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2010 Updated: February 01, 2012


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Well,if Edward is anywhere within hearing/listening distance he is both raging jealous and holding his dead heart in his hands! Time to deliver a pizza!

Author's Response:

I can just see Edward in a Domino's uniform, showing up at the door with a pepperoni and extra cheese.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

And she didn't even have to google it! So, will she confront him, or sell the apartment? I suppose that would cut the story quite short!

Author's Response:

Yeah, and it wouldn't be any fun for us either. :)

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: September 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

Yikes! I somehow don't think that Jacob is going to be reasoned with! And now Edward has to explain the mate thing! Should he do it with two fingers or three? LOL, I'm sure Bella will be amenable to either!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Edward may never be the same again! In fact, he may rip his arm off daily to get off daily! Personally, I always imagined Edward's cum to taste like mint chip ice cream, but obviously that's because I'm way more realistic than you! Thank you for the smut! And, And With Thee Fade Away is one of my favorite stories and has one of my favorite lines, but I won't spoil it if you haven't gotten to it yet! (it has to do with the word boinking!)

Author's Response:

It's chock full of the lines, isn't it?  I tried to nominate it for "best line" in some award site, but I couldn't choose just one.

 

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

Damn! I wanted to see Edward eat! No, that would be mean, Bella can save that for when she's annoyed with him! Glad to get another chapter!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

It's a good thing I wasn't Bella in this scene because I would have had my legs in the air screaming "You had me at Neruda!"! He was smooth as ice as he declared his intentions to not exist without her and Bella didn't even question it! So, what's causing this pattern-vamp, dog, or other?

Author's Response:

That is the million dollar question...

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

That was sort of painful for both of them! Changing her sounds very attractive after the pictures he was painting!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Yes of course we hate Jacob, but Edward hates him too so that's justification! Haha, lots of impassioned reviews against the mongrel, eh? Let's see, there's mutt, son of a bitch (literally!), and mongrel. After that, I'm stumped! So, let's hope that when Edward says he's going to fight, it means turn on the charm and sex appeal! Not to Jacob, of course!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

Mom always said don't play ball in the house! Oh wait, that's when a lamp breaks! So, what will they ever do now?!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

I hope you're on the mend now! A friend of mine is going through a similar thing for a benign tumor pressing against the optic nerve, and it does, indeed, suck. Great to see another chapter and that you are feeling up to writing again!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

It was as if Edward's body had one thing in mind, while his thoughts were fighting in two directions. Clearly, Bella was into it! So, he tells her he warned her, and she doesn't shout "about what!". And I don't really think he was there to visit Bella, though just what is going on with that strange couple? Can't wait to find out!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

Hmm, what will papa Swan think of Edward? And how many more will phase with the influx of vampires to the area?

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37

Oh my god! Do you think I could come up with a coherent thought after that? The scent of Bella's blood has driven Edward to temporary? insanity! I'm surprised she didn't expire this time, if he takes her sans condom she won't make it! Though she's probably going to beg him for it anyway!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44

Don't you just love a completely overwhelmed Edward and patient Bella? Shouting out words during sex, "you're like a furnace!". Too funny!

Author's Response:

Hahahaha

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

I think Bella is having a crappy day. My first clue was her very poorly planned visit to the bookstore to confront a vampire. Then she freaked out. Then she got confused about whether to be horny or annoyed. Now she's more concerned with how Edward knows where she lives than the fact that she just witnessed a fight between mythological creatures. I'm pretty sure a brandy would do about now. At least, I am going to have one. I'm not sure if I rec'd this to you or not, but try And With Thee Fade Away by Derdriu oFaolain on ff.net.

Author's Response:

LoL.  I really like your DL on the situation.  I will check out your rec...is that name for real?  Way Irish.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: September 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

Whoa! So much going on here! A lovers quarrel that leads to a one sided declaration of love, followed by no loving touches, topped off with a deadly love of blood! I have faith though! I think?

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

I love that you ended with a letter!  Did you plan that from the beginning?  It was a brilliant way to show the outcome of their plane crash!  As for feisty annoyed Bella..very fun!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40

I read those books so long ago, I think I might have to revisit them! Poor Esme, she's settling her affairs and looking to end her existence. She needs a spark!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

That was the best confrontation ever! Like an episode of The Munsters, where everyone is a monster but confused as to why people are freaked out by them!

Author's Response:

LoL - I like that comparison.  Someone should do a fic of the Cullens as the Munsters.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: September 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I won't comment on my reading habits, but I'll comment on this chapter. I like the way you have pictured the layout of the books. I can only imagine Edward cataloguing the books, throughout the years first in a private library, then in the shop. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

All in all, I think he's taken the Cullen invasion rather well. So we can't blame him for getting a little ram my with Jasper! As for Bella, she sure is taking her time trying to figure out what to do! She seems pretty damn sure that these poems are from Edward. And while she seems totally annoyed by her oh so satisfying dreams, she's totally enjoying them too! So, does Edward need to be patient and keep on his course, or does he need to up his game and force her into some action? Can't wait to find out!

Author's Response:

Bella's getting geared up to force the issue...

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38

So, it's really good to know that Esme wasn't suicidal! Now, is Charlie going to know something is up? Will he fall for Esme? Can't wait!

Author's Response:

LoL - that would be good.  I wonder if anyone's ever done a Charlie/Esme vampfic. :)

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: September 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Very interesting! Can't wait to read more!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: September 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I kept wondering about that book! I may take a look at it! Seems like our poor Edward has a bit of a sweet tooth!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: September 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I would say that Bella is very brave! Even if it were a mere mortal in the store, being quite alone with a man you don't know, effectively cornered and asking him out takes guts! Can't wait to see what is the story with the family! Writing letters instead of using cell phones!

 




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