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Penname: snowgood [Contact]
Real name: Linda
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Summary:

 

Not all is as it seems when the Edwards from two different universes find a journal that can bridge the gap between them. Things become even stranger when the reality of one universe starts to bleed into the other, since in one universe vampires exist, and in the other universe, they do not.

Until now.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 79576
[Report This] Published: April 22, 2010 Updated: November 22, 2010


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Ack! Isn't it usually the female in stories that make all the dumb choices and need to be saved! I want to put both Edward's over my knee right now and give them a good spanking! As for Charlie, that's going to have to make Isabella move to Florida...or become a vampire. So just !?!!$&!!!, way to make the heart rate spike FantasyMother!

Author's Response:

*hands out Zanex*

My characters always try to never act predictably ;-)

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Whoa! So, I'm guessing that destroying the book and almost simultaneously destroying both Edwards puts the universe back into perspective? And just whoa!

Author's Response:

Uh...hmmm.

Read the epi ;-)

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue

Well, EAM certainly had an unexpected ending! Though I suppose with his decision to become fully adult, he was happy and ready for it! Great little story, I'm left wanting more, which is always a good thing!

Author's Response:

I'm so happy I pulled this off.  I had been playing with the idea for months and just wasn't sure how to present it so it was understandable.  One day the format hit me, I started writing, and before I showed it to anyone I just posted. 

It became a tradition. LOL  And, thank you for your support!

 

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Future-Take

What a treat! And what an interesting scenario, of course, now I'm even more intrigued! Lol!

 
Summary:

AU/AH: Chicago, 1924. Bella is raised in an ultra conservative home. She married Edward Masen, but he is afraid that she will never really love him. It's Edward's 23rd birthday and Bella has a surprise for him . . . what might it be?


Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4987
[Report This] Published: April 23, 2010 Updated: April 25, 2010


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Well, I'm glad that Edward got his finest wish!  And Bella seems just as fulfilled!  I think this story would have alot of potential if you expanded it!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I do plan to expand it. I have the first chapter written and am hoping to post within the next couple of weeks. So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing! ~Jen

 
15 Step by Jenny Jerkface Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 225]
Summary:

17-year old Bella Swan moves to Forks after being abandoned by her mother. With music as her only friend and a penchant for trouble, Bella just wants to be left alone. Unfortunately, her behavior attracts the attention of hot tempered Edward Cullen.

(Thanks Readergoof for the banner!)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 72747
[Report This] Published: April 26, 2010 Updated: January 07, 2011


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: 10 lb. Moustache

So, she's going to leave him before he goes to college and leaves her? Is this self preservation or imposed protection?

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Lightsabre Cocksucking Blues

I really like how you have Bella connecting with people via her music, while she used it soley as an insulator in the past. Bella's little taste of pain/pleasure is giving her glimpses of the things she is going to need. Hmm, boundaries? I hope she makes a few new friends, she's going to need them when James comes around!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment!! Music is really the only way that Bella knows how to communicate. She's wrapped herself up into it so much that in some ways, by sharing it, she's giving not only a little piece of her wall away, but her soul sa well.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

It's nice that she has made some realizations about herself, but even nicer that she threw Edward a bone. Poor guy, it must be scary as hell for him to have such strong feelings for someone, and then think that they are unreturned. It's not exactly as if Bella meant to put off that vibe, more like she just didn't really notice.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: I Feel it All

That was not only sexy and hot, but so incredibly sweet and poignant too. For Edward to pay so much attention to her that she admits he knows things about her that she doesn't even think of, and then for him to practically plead for her returned affection was so biitersweet. Will she realize that if she wants to be the one for him all she has to do is act on her desire? In a way, she seems to let fate and other circumstances take control, instead of being her own force of nature. Though, I think she's slowly waking up to that fact!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Wrecking Ball

I actually find them both likeable.  Nobody is perfect, everybody has a cross to bear and has to figure out how to bear it.  The best we can do is find someone or someones who help you get through things.  It seems as though Edward has decided he wants to be that someone.  And maybe now Bella will let him.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Roads

How lovely to be that woman's child!  No therapy needed for her in the future!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Forty Six & 2

Well, I don't know who actually has the upper hand right now.  But I think it's going to be interesting!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Caution (is a word I can't understand)

As much as Bella is pushing away, she's drawing him in.  I don't think that Bella is going to heed Charlie's advice for too much longer!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: The World at Large

Well, I think Bella is going to have a really hard time sticking to her plans.  Just noticing how beautiful Edward is and getting kissed, held, and protected by him all in one day would do that!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Lovecats

Ah, that brings back some memories....  Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Magic Trick

And as much as we don't want to, we always seek approval and acceptance!  Bella is going to struggle with Renee's rejection all her life, Charlie doesn't understand her, or teenagers in general, and Edward is the only person who is in her corner.  I hope she tells him everything!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: No One's Ever Gonna Love You

This is going to sound awful to admit, but I really get Bella.  When I was about her age in this fic, I had some really tumultuous emotional things I was dealing with and no one who could really understand it.  One minute you're furious, the next you're depressed and weepy.  Then you find minutes or pockets of elation when the things you think you desire come through. 

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: July 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Run, Devil, Run

Now, what is up with the dark expressions and the possesive tendencies of Edward? Is he going to end up being poison for Bella? It sucks that Bella has had to deal with Renee all this time, but knowing that Charlie loves her has to give her a new hope. Maybe they can make a family together.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Who Are You?

Now maybe Bella will understand some of the connection that Edward feels for her. I'm hoping her heart breaks open for him when he tells her his story.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Whalebones

I'm glad that Edward called her on her flippancy even if it was a rather intimidating moment. And I'm glad she realized just how awful it was. They both need someone to trust and feel safe with.

 
Summary:

"Looking back on the situation, I should have taken it as a sign that the first thing I noticed was the woman in the doorway, not the gun she had pointed at my head." AH/OOC

More Ways Than One

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1924
[Report This] Published: April 26, 2010 Updated: April 26, 2010


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, I know that I would let him in!  What's the worst that could happen?  Don't answer that!



Author's Response:

I know I would too. LOL

The worst that could happen, well....oh, well you're right. I shouldn't answer that, yet...

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Summary:

An abused girl and a mysterious "business" man meet a bus station, a trip to seattle, relationships are born, walls are broken, but always with a bang! Would he be able to bring her up or will the "business" bring them both down. AH/AU/OOC

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Modern Bandits & Neglected Dreamers


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 87420
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2010 Updated: July 10, 2011


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: 9. Jealousy, Surprises, and Amendment, Part 1

Well, Edward does need to stop hiding in his room, maybe Jake is the push he needs to talk to Bella!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: 8. Mixing Business with Pleasure

Oh no she didn't! Bella may just get her chance to take out her sister!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: 4. Starting On Shaky Ground

Alice is still scary! I think Bella should move into Edward's room!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: 17. Operation: Bomb Boy

What? Who? Where's Edward? Post soon!

 




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