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Real name: Linda
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Guardian by ChampagneAnyone Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 345]
Summary:

What if you met the love of your life as a child? Would he ever admit his love of you as a woman? Would you ever let him go?

Plot: Orphaned at 8, Bella Swan is placed in the care of her godmother, Esme Cullen. Heiress to Cullen Swan Enterprises, Bella grows up hero worshipping 17 year old joint heir, pseudo step brother and self appointed guardian Edward.  


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 43324
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2010 Updated: July 23, 2010


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Frozen

I can see why she would attach herself to him and love him.  He saved her and comforted her on the worst day of her life.  Where's Alice?

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Warmth

I can't tell if Edward is a saint at this point or what, but that is a very loving and patient teenage boy-who is obviously in demand with the ladies!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4:Heat

Well Edward doesn't like Bella being all grown up on the one hand.  And seems to like it very much on the other.  I can't wait to see his reaction to Bella's answer!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Flicker

Darn!  I can't see it either.  Repost?  Or are you posted anywhere else?

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Flicker

Well really!  I'm glad I'm finally able to read this.  I'm apalled at Edward's reaction.  What he needs to do is apologize profusely for the things he did if he is so disgusted with himself.  Not scream and rant and reject Bella.  Not that she'll take to the apology either, but....

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Flight

Whoa!  That's what you get when you wear a power suit!  And she should have clued in that he had already started to undress!  Hot!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7:Evade

Oh, I am so confused!  Does Edward want Bella for good or for bad?  If he's already in a relationship with Tanya, what is he doing-manipulation of someone!  I'm glad Bella ran away-she's pretty smart for a teenager.  I can't wait to see what happens next, though I may be reading with one eye closed!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Turn

So what is going on?  Corporate blackmail?  The company in financial distress?  Edward seems to be completely conflicted with the way things have been "directed".  Will they really talk?  Does he even know that Bella is still a virgin?

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Fracture

Well it certainly seems that he doesn't know what he wants.  Or that he is hiding something.  Bella needs a better protector!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: July 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Favour

You know, if he just would have taken her already than alot of this would have been moot! Edward is keeping too many secrets and has shattered Bella's trust. She can't even revel in his truths. That he wants her and only her and has for the last 4 months. Carlisle is getting increasingly suspect. When will Bella see who is really manipulating the scenes here?

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: July 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11:Plight

Ouch! Edward is furious, but that's what you get when you say trust me and give zero details!

 
Summary:

So, Um...Yeah, I Lied Banner

Synopsis: After Bella’s encounter with James, her injuries are too severe & Edward is forced to change her into a vampire. Upon waking, she realizes that he has been less than truthful about just what it means to be one of the undead. Twilight AU, Very OOC, Spoof


Categories: Crackfic, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4570
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2010 Updated: March 13, 2010


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Truth About Edward

Life in the bizzarro universe!  I'd love to see Bella's revenge!



Author's Response:

snowgood,

:) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Ah, what can I say, life is good in B-U!  I've had some requests to continue this, but I'm not sure if I will or not.  But I could definitely see Edward doing penance over the carcass of a drained elk or something! LOL!

Shay

 
Lost in the Woods by msqt76us Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

While hiking Edward stumbles upon a strange sight; a girl huddled against a tree. They're far from the hiking trails and she looks as though she's been crouched there for some time. The girl, Bella Swan, doesn't want to talk about her experience in the woods but the pieces are falling into place. From there the quest to learn the secrets of this beautiful, haunted girl begins.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1497
[Report This] Published: March 21, 2010 Updated: April 02, 2010


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So, what does everyone know that Edward doesn't?  Is it something to do with Edward's personality?  Does he obsess much?  Or do they think it's something to do with the girl?  They seem to have put Edward on the defensive already though!



Author's Response:

It's just a little too early to tell. It all depends on which way I take the family, human or vamp, and I just haven't made up my mind yet... What do you think?

 
My Never by AMayes Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a known troublemaker from the wrong side of the tracks. The object of his secret affections, Isabella Swan, is a girl far out of his grasp. One afternoon a smile changes everything...

My Never


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 9182
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2010 Updated: May 12, 2010


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooh, I likey!  Will he bring her to the darkside, or will she show him the light?  Can't wait to read more!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I got chills....   You know, the song from Grease!  Glad you put out chapter 2, I'm looking forward to more.  Bella has a little bad girl in her!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What luck that Edward found the journal!  I certainly hope that Bella decides it's worth a bit of upset in the home to get to know Edward.  She could be saving his life!

 
Summary:

Bella's back hurts, can her new roommate Edward, the chiropractor help her? Will they behave?

 Or are they naughty to the bone?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 37531
[Report This] Published: March 30, 2010 Updated: September 02, 2011


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Win-win!  I wonder just how many creative moves the chiropractor can come up with!



Author's Response:

Oh he has a few ;)

Thanks for the review

 

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Seriously? What's not to like? We all want to read the smut! Don't let the nasties get you down, they take themselves way too seriously! Just delete their comments and forget them! And Thank You for entertaining me!

Author's Response:

*sigh* I wish reviews had a "love" button. Your review made me smile. You're too kind. Thank you soo much.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: July 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well, the morning was certainly fun! I think Edward should take extra care of Bella in the shower, after roughing her back up against the headboard like that! Hope you are feeling better. It's no fun being sick in the summer!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Two naked people in the dark.  What could possibly happen?  I mean it's not like Edward's penis wears a head lamp, right?  Heehee.  Can't wait!



Author's Response:

LMAO! Touche'  thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I give them 20 minutes after the door shuts.  Someone will have an orgasm.  I'm not saying how....



Author's Response:

Bahahahaha your hilarious! I like you.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

If only Edward would have shown up at 7:15!  I mean they could have done alot more with an extra 15 minutes!



Author's Response:

LOL ya think? Damn Emmett and his cockblock skills!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I think Bella and Edward should make a secret pact to get it on and pretend to be just friends in front of everyone else.  I mean, their friends, though meaning well, are just a bit too nosy when it comes to their sex lives!



Author's Response:

LOL! Trickery and deceipt? We shall see *EVIL LAUGH* thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Okay, game, set and match! Who's going to spill the beans first?

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh my god, I need a shower!  That was so dirty and hot.  Why did I read this at dinner time far, far away from when the kiddies will be asleep?



Author's Response:

LMAO! Erm... do you need some alone time? Thanks for reviewing bb!

 




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